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1、.Writing.Writing（批驳分析类）（批驳分析类）写作模式写作模式参考范文参考范文What Attitude Should We Take to Sth.1.1.社会上对某事物的错误观念社会上对某事物的错误观念2.2.分析批驳其错误所在分析批驳其错误所在3.3.给出如何看待该事物的建议给出如何看待该事物的建议.Writing.Writing（划线部分可替换）（划线部分可替换）下一页下一页上一页上一页写作模式（批驳分析类）写作模式（批驳分析类）1)With the arrival/birth of,sth.is becoming more and more in our life.2)

2、Hit/Affected with this trend,some/many people come to believe/contend that.(错误观念错误观念)3)But their viewpoint/belief could not arouse any echo in my mind.(作者的立场作者的立场)4)It is true that sth.is a key ingredient in ones(让步法分析让步法分析)5)On any scale of,in fact,there is almost nothing heavier than sth.6)If we s

3、ee sth.in its true colors,however,it isBack.Writing.Writing（划线部分可替换）（划线部分可替换）下一页下一页上一页上一页nothing but(批驳分析批驳分析I)I)7).(进一步阐述进一步阐述)8)And moreover,laying any undue stress on sth.may lead one to,as can be easily seen in the cases of(批驳分析批驳分析IIII)9)Therefore,it is necessary to take a correct attitude towa

4、rds sth.10)On the one hand,(正确看法正确看法I)I)11)On the other,.(正确看法正确看法IIII)12)In sum,sth.means but not to our life.(结论句结论句)Back.Writing.WritingBack What Attitude Should We Take to Money1.社会上对金钱的错误观念。社会上对金钱的错误观念。2.分析批驳其错误所在。分析批驳其错误所在。3.给出如何正确看待金钱的建议。给出如何正确看待金钱的建议。下一页下一页上一页上一页 1)With the arrival of market

5、-based economy,money is becoming more and more important in our life.2)Hit with this trend,many people come to believe that money is above everything else in their life.3)But their belief could not arouse any echo in my mind.4)It is true that money is a key ingredient in ones struggle towards happin

6、ess,without.Writing.WritingReference model:What Attitude Should We Take to Money下一页下一页上一页上一页Backwhich,for example,there would be no way to go to college or form a family.5)On any scale of ones daily worry,in fact,there is almost nothing heavier than money.6)If we see it in its true colors,however,mo

7、ney is nothing but a means to an end.7)Money can buy us food,but not appetite;medicine,but not health;diplomas,but not knowledge;and days of joy,but not the whole life of happiness.8)And moreover,laying any undue stress on money may lead one to stop at nothing in making it,as.Writing.Writing上一页上一页下一

8、页下一页Backcan be easily seen in the cases of most corrupt officials.9)Therefore,it is necessary to take a correct attitude towards money.10)On the one hand,money is vital to our daily life,in which case,it is wise of you to spend not where you may save.11)On the other,money is something to be plowed i

9、nto something more important,so it is better to spare not where you must spend.12)In sum,money means something but not everything to our life.Writing.Writing上一页上一页THE ENDTHE END.Writing.Writing（分析建议类）（分析建议类）写作模式写作模式参考范文参考范文Effects of Sth.On Sb./Sth.Else1.1.分析某事物的正面效应分析某事物的正面效应2.2.分析某事物的负面效应分析某事物的负面效

10、应3.3.给出怎样对待该事物的建议给出怎样对待该事物的建议.Writing.Writing（划线部分可替换）（划线部分可替换）下一页下一页写作模式（分析建议类）写作模式（分析建议类）1)As is known to all,sth.does bring a lot of benefits to sb./sth.else.2)First,it can greatly strengthen,thereby changing for the better.(正面分析正面分析I)I)3)Besides,it can make/render sb./sth.else better able to(正面分

11、析正面分析II)II)4)And best of all,it can help sb.(正面分析正面分析III)III)5）But all the above does not mean/follow that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects sth.brings about.6）If,as a successionBack.Writing.Writing（划线部分可替换）（划线部分可替换）下一页下一页上一页上一页of scientific studies reveals/implies/suggests,there are m

12、ore chances that(负面分析负面分析I)I)7)In addition,the more.,the worse.(负面分析负面分析II)II)8)And worst of all,(负面分析负面分析III)III)9)Therefore,a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of sth.10)On the one hand,(建议建议I)I)11)On the other,.(建议建议II)II)12)In sum,sth.can do sb./sth.else good or harm,all dependi

13、ng on (结论句结论句)Back1.分析体育锻炼给我们带来的益处。分析体育锻炼给我们带来的益处。2.分析体育锻炼给我们带来的坏处。分析体育锻炼给我们带来的坏处。3.给出如何参加体育锻炼的建议。给出如何参加体育锻炼的建议。.Writing.Writing The Effects of Exercise on Our Health下一页下一页上一页上一页Back 1)As is known to all,exercise does bring a lot of benefits to our health.2)First,it can greatly strengthen our hearts

14、,lungs,bones and muscles,thereby changing our whole health for the better.3)Besides,it can make our brains better able to react to what is going on around us.4)And best of all,it can help us breed optimism about our tough life.Writing.WritingReference model:The Effects of Exercise on Our Health下一页下一

15、页上一页上一页Back 5)But all the above does not mean that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects exercise brings about.6)If you are normally inactive and then,contrary to your usual habit,start a program of undue exercise,as a succession of scientific studies reveals,there are more chances that yo

16、u have yourself injured.7)In addition,the more exercise those on a fat-reducing diet take,the more loss of iron they will suffer and the worse their health will get.8)And.Writing.Writing上一页上一页下一页下一页Backworst of all,continual as well as excessive exercise can result in sudden death.9)Therefore,a scie

17、ntific approach must be adopted to the problem of exercise.10)On the one hand,our physical exercise must be based on both progressiveness and regularity.11)On the other,we must go in for physical exercise according to local as well as health conditions of our own.12)In sum,exercise can do us good or

18、 harm,all depending on how we make use of it.Writing.Writing上一页上一页THE ENDTHE ENDMy Way of Seeing Something1.人们从不同的角度看待某一事物人们从不同的角度看待某一事物2.我的看法是我的看法是(说明理说明理由由)(理由陈述类理由陈述类).Writing.Writing写作模式写作模式参考范文参考范文.Writing.Writing（划线部分可替换）（划线部分可替换）下一页下一页写作模式（理由陈述类）写作模式（理由陈述类）1)Something may be many things to ma

19、ny people.2)Some may see it as while others may view it as(人们的人们的看法举例看法举例)3)As far as I am concerned,however,I would prefer to value it as (我的看法我的看法)(Para.I)Back.Writing.Writing（划线部分可替换）（划线部分可替换）下一页下一页上一页上一页 4)My insight into sth.(My outlook on sth./My understanding of sth.)is bound up with three ma

20、jor factors.5)Primarily,sth.is so that(理由理由I)I)6)(进一步阐进一步阐述述)7)Secondly,sth.is also (理由理由II)II)8).(进一步阐述进一步阐述)9)And most of all,(理理由由III)III)10)(进一步阐述进一步阐述)(Para.II)Back.Writing.Writing（划线部分可替换）（划线部分可替换）下一页下一页上一页上一页 11)I have(not)much freedom/option in this matter,but I have never found any other wa

21、y of seeing sth.more reasonable and acceptable than mine.12)Thus,I will leave no stone unturned during the course of in order to pave the way for.(Para.III)Back.Writing.Writing My Way of Seeing Life 1.人们从不同的角度看待人生人们从不同的角度看待人生 2.我所推崇的看法是我所推崇的看法是(说明理由说明理由)下一页下一页上一页上一页Back.Writing.Writing My Way of See

22、ing Life下一页下一页上一页上一页 1)Life may be many things to many people.2)Some may see it as building up as much material wealth as possible while others may view it as enjoying to the fullest the pleasures each day offers.3)As far as I am concerned,however,I would prefer to value it as my sole chance to enri

23、ch myself with knowledge first,then to serve the society with all my heart,and finally to leave the world without any regrets.Back.Writing.Writing上一页上一页下一页下一页 4)My outlook on life is bound up with three major factors.5)Primarily,life is so wondrous that I am eager to explore it.6)Set your heart on a

24、 mystery and you can find something new;attach more of your mind to a challenge and you can get a sense of success,all of which,however,depends on how much knowledge you have equipped yourself with first.7)Secondly,life is also short to any Back.Writing.Writing上一页上一页下一页下一页individual like me.8)The fl

25、ower you have just kissed for the first time is now fading away while the love from others you have come to cherish more is already on the wane.9)And most of all,both wondrousness and shortness of life push me to seize every golden minute and every golden chance.10)Once I idle away the time I am sup

26、posed to grasp to study or work for the people,there will be no more hope of making up for it.Back.Writing.Writing上一页上一页THE ENDTHE END 11)I have much option in this matter,but I have never found any other way of seeing life more reasonable and acceptable than mine.12)Thus,I will leave no stone untur

27、ned during the course of my college studies in order to pave the way for my meaningful and colorful life.Writing Writing（原因分析类）（原因分析类）写作模式写作模式参考范文参考范文What Causes Something New1.1.近几年在社会上出现了近几年在社会上出现了2.2.导致该现象的原因导致该现象的原因3.3.分析该现象的社会影响分析该现象的社会影响写作模式写作模式（原因分析类）（原因分析类）Para.1:1)Believe it or not/Like it

28、or not,these years have witnessed a boom in/a popularity(resurgence/worsening/crisis/decline/growth/revival/spread)ofin our society/on the Chinese campus.2)According to,people,especially college students,are showing more and more interest in 3)To get a better sense of it,it is necessary for us to fi

29、nd out its causes.(划线部分可被替换划线部分可被替换)Back下一页下一页Para.2:4)A closer analysis/study/observation of the phenomenon can find that three main factors are well worth our concern/should call for more of our concern.5)In the first place,it is the product of,for which(原因原因I)6)In the second,it is seen,among,as a

30、n ideal way of,since(原因原因II)7)And above all,it is an inevitable result of(原因原因III)8)While,in fact,(划线部分可被替换划线部分可被替换).Writing WritingBack下一页下一页上一页上一页Para.3:9)The effects of this change on our social/college life are positive/negative/a mixed one.10)On the one hand,.(分析分析I)11)On the other,.(分析分析II)12)

31、With more and moreadded/attached to the trend,I am fully convinced/I am deeply worried,it will certainly /is bound toin the time to come.(划线部分可被替换划线部分可被替换).Writing WritingBack下一页下一页上一页上一页.Writing WritingBack下一页下一页上一页上一页What Causes a Boom in Celebrating Foreign Festivals1.1.近几年大学校园出现了近几年大学校园出现了 一股过洋节

32、热。一股过洋节热。2.2.阐明导致该现象的原因阐明导致该现象的原因。3.3.分析该现象的社会影响。分析该现象的社会影响。Para.1:1)Believe it or not,these years have witnessed a boom in celebrating foreign festivals on the Chinese campus.2)According to an official report/survey,young people,especially college students,are showing more and more interest in such

33、 festivals as Valentines Day,April Fools Day,Thanksgiving Day and Christmas Day.3)To get a better sense of the boom,it is necessary for us to find out its causes.Writing WritingBack下一页下一页上一页上一页Para.2:4)A closer analysis of the phenomenon can find that three main factors are well worth our concern.5)

34、In the first place,it is the product of students seeking after individuality and novelty,for which the college campus offers an ideal climate.(原因原因I)6)In the second,it is seen,among the students,as an ideal way of freeing themselves from stress for the time being,since most college students,single c

35、hild of each family,are.Writing WritingBack下一页下一页上一页上一页subjected to the unprecedented pressures from all sides although they enjoy the abundance of material wealth.(原因原因II)7)And above all,it is an inevitable result of more and more exchanges between Western and Eastern cultures.(原因原因III)8)While the

36、Chinese watch their children thirst for the joy derived from foreign festivals,in fact,the Americans are discussing whether or not to list the Chinese Spring Festival among their official holidays.Writing WritingBack下一页下一页上一页上一页Para.3:9)The effects of this change on our college life are positive.10)

37、On the one hand,it has created more chances for students to gain a better insight into other cultures.(分析分析I)11)On the other,it has enriched the college life,thus making the campus a more pleasant place to live on.(分析分析II)12)With more and more health and color added to the trend,I firmly believe,it

38、will certainly bring more benefits to our campus life in the time to come.Writing Writing上一页上一页THE ENDTHE END.Writing Writing（各抒己见类）（各抒己见类）写作模式写作模式参考范文参考范文Views on Something1.1.有人认为该事物有人认为该事物 2.2.理由是理由是 2.2.也有人认为该事物也有人认为该事物3.3.我的看法我的看法.Writing Writing（划线部分可替换）（划线部分可替换）写作模式（各抒己见类）写作模式（各抒己见类）1)Almost

39、everyone would agree that the birth/appearance/arrival/development of sth.2)But this agreement ceases to exist just when it comes to(议论的主题议论的主题)(Para.I)Back下一页下一页.Writing Writing（划线部分可替换）（划线部分可替换）3)Many/Some people contend/believe/argue that(一方观点一方观点)4)They base their contention/belief/argument on t

40、he grounds that(理由理由I)5）Besides,as they often point out,.(理由理由II)6）Yet others react to the issue/matter the other way around and hold/assert that the opposite is just reasonable/more acceptable.(另一方观点另一方观点)7)From their angle of view,(理由理由I)8)And even worse,as they claim,(理由理由II)(Para.II)Back上一页上一页下一

41、页下一页.Writing Writing（划线部分可替换）（划线部分可替换）9)I am of/adhere to/stick to the opinion/view/truth that anything new,including,can bring human society fortunes/merits/advantages or misfortunes/demerits/disadvantages,all depending on.(我的看法我的看法)10)On the one hand,(理由理由I)11)But on the other,.(理由理由II)12)In short

42、,the key/solution to the problem is always controlled in (结论句结论句)Back上一页上一页下一页下一页.Writing Writing Views on Cloning 1.有人认为克隆技术的应用利大于弊，有人认为克隆技术的应用利大于弊，理由是理由是 2.也有人认为弊大于利，也有人认为弊大于利，3.我的看法。我的看法。Back上一页上一页下一页下一页 1)Almost everyone would agree that the birth of Dolly,as the first clone of an adult animal,h

43、as opened a new way of seeing the creation of life for the world.2)But this agreement ceases to exist just when it comes to whether cloning will bring fortunes or misfortunes to human society.Writing WritingReference model:Views on CloningBack上一页上一页下一页下一页 3)Many contend that the merits of cloning wi

44、ll outrun its demerits.4)They base their contention on the grounds that cloning is the most effective method of saving the rare wild lives from dying out.5)Besides,as they also point out,cloning can help provide better ways to treat some serious or deadly sicknesses,such as diabetes,and Parkinsons d

45、isease.6)Yet others react to the issue the other way around and hold that the opposite.Writing WritingBack上一页上一页下一页下一页is just reasonable.7)From their angle of view,cloning will threaten the ecological balance by destroying the natural reproduction through the enjoyment of sexual love between the mal

46、e and the female.8)And even worse,as they reveal,cloning will bring greater disasters to human society if it is used in creation of individuals with extreme genetic qualities,like terrorists,desperate scoundrels,and war manias.Writing WritingBack上一页上一页下一页下一页 9)I stick to the opinion that anything ne

47、w,including cloning,can bring human society fortunes or misfortunes,all depending on how it is exploited.10)On the one hand,it will be an inestimable blessing to the human world if it is applied to reproduction of best dairy cows or other choice domestic poultries.11)But on the other hand,it will form a big threat to human society once it is abused in copying those hostile toward humanity.12)In short,the solution to the problem is always within mans reach.Writing WritingTHE ENDTHE END上一页上一页