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1、 高三英语写作专题复习高三英语写作专题复习 (一一)English writing, Senior ThreeEnglish writing, Senior Three 【写作】利用所给的材料【写作】利用所给的材料,尽尽可能地运用一些高级词汇、可可能地运用一些高级词汇、可以适当地运用一些复合句，关以适当地运用一些复合句，关键是要表达准确到位。键是要表达准确到位。Part one:综述应注意下列几个问题：应注意下列几个问题：一一, 注重写作教学的基本训练阶段注重写作教学的基本训练阶段 (1) SV；(2) SVO；(3) SVOO；(4) SVP；(5) SVOC。 ( 1 ) SV；They

2、are dancing _madly/wildly( 2 ) SVO；He _visited many famous museums.also( 3 ) SVOO；He gave her some chips(4 ) SVP；His knowledge of English remains very weak.( 5 ) SVOC。He left the boy standing by the counter.We should keep the classroom clean and tidy.1. 避免中文式英语避免中文式英语(1) 开车开车(2) 开锁开锁(3) 开心开心(4)开收音机开

3、收音机(5)（水）开了（水）开了(6) 开后门开后门(7)开设选修课开设选修课(8) 强行把门打开强行把门打开drive a car/a bus /a taxiopen the lock/turn the key in the lockfeel happy/excited/amused/pleasedturn on the radioThe water is boilingtry the back door offer optional courses force the door open2. 副词、形容词的灵活运用使副词、形容词的灵活运用使句子更地道句子更地道1. You have don

4、e the job_.very/pretty well2.We waited for the bus _.impatiently/patiently 3.The man felt _ashameda bit/sort of4.You can never be careful enough You can never be _careful too5. You did _ carry my books. more than化难为易，避免生硬翻译(1) 前天下了一场前天下了一场大大雨雨It rained _ the day before yesterday.There was a _ rain t

5、he day before yesterday(2)前天刮前天刮大大风。风。The wind blew _the day before yesterday heavilyheavystrongly 如何写好高考英语作文？如何写好高考英语作文？ 多种方法助你得高分多种方法助你得高分 以前英语作文评分依据是根据要点和语言准确以前英语作文评分依据是根据要点和语言准确度而定，但近几年要求度而定，但近几年要求“使用较多语法结构和词使用较多语法结构和词汇汇”，因此要想得高分，除了要点和语言准确度，因此要想得高分，除了要点和语言准确度以外，还必须在较复杂的句子结构或较高级的词以外，还必须在较复杂的句子结构或

6、较高级的词汇上有所表现。句式单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪汇上有所表现。句式单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分，相反怕无任何错误也不可能得高分，相反“有些错误，有些错误，但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”，给分档次仍在最高档给分档次仍在最高档(2125分分) 1.We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.2.Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there togeth

7、er.3.The young man could not help crying when he heard the bad news.4.Hearing the bad news， the young man could not help crying.1.改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。或用分词做状语等。2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强

8、调句、主从复合句、分词活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。状语等。 a.My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely. b.My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely. 强调句强调句 a.We had to stand there to catch the offender.b.What we had to do was (to) stand

9、 there， trying to catch the offender.c.What China has achieved in recent years is known through the world. d. China is no longer what it used to be. 由由what等引导的从句，此处的等引导的从句，此处的what相当相当于中文的于中文的“所所”，有很大的概括力，有很大的概括力.由由with或或without引导的短语引导的短语,如如: Hesatinachairwithanewspaperinthehand. 分词短语。如分词短语。如: Satisf

10、ied with the result， He decided to go on with a new experiment. 倒装句。如倒装句。如: a.Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.b.NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm. 省略句。如省略句。如 a. If so， victory will be ours. b. You can make some changes wherever necessary. 3. 通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力性和表现力。 a. We had

11、a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.b. After a short rest， we had great fun singing and dancing， telling jokes and playing chess 4.学会使用过渡词。如: (1)递进递进 then(然后然后), besides(还有还有)，furthermore(而且而且)， moreover(此外此外) (2) 转折转折: however(然而然而)，but (但但 是是)， on the country(相反相反)， aft

12、er all (毕竟毕竟) (3)总结总结: finally(最后最后)， at last(最后最后), in brief(总之总之)， in conclusion(最后最后 )(4)强调强调: indeed(确实确实) , certainly(一一定定 )， surely(确定确定)，above all(尤其尤其) (5)对比对比: in the same way(同样地同样地) , just as (正正如如), on the one handon the other hand(一方面一方面另一方面另一方面) 5. 注意使用不同长度的句子。注意使用不同长度的句子。 对于对于“较复杂的词汇较

13、复杂的词汇”，可以从以下几个方，可以从以下几个方面面 着手。着手。 (1)注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。如注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。如:a.A new railway is being built in my hometown. b.A new railway is under construction in my hometown. (2)使用一些很有使用一些很有“洋味洋味”的单词。如的单词。如: A. Thank you for sharing the time with us. B. The way he views the world is very

14、 practical. (3)避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如: a. I like reading while my brother likes watching television. b. I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television. 解题步骤和方法指导1.认真审题认真审题,明确要求。明确要求。2.紧扣文意紧扣文意,组织要点。组织要点。3.选词造句选词造句,准确表达。准确表达。4.整理成篇整理成篇,注意行文连贯。注意行文连贯。5.合理安排时间合理安排时间,认真检查复核。认真检查复核。二、

15、注重写作训练的规范化二、注重写作训练的规范化构思构思(题目题目)；写提纲写提纲(理顺思想的逻辑关系理顺思想的逻辑关系)；起草起草(打草稿打草稿)；校订校订(检查错误，重新安排内容检查错误，重新安排内容)； 修改修改(定稿定稿)请根据漫画请根据漫画,以以“What Will the Child Become?” 为标题为标题, 写一篇短文写一篇短文. 要求要求: 1.词数约词数约100个个,不包括已给出的开不包括已给出的开 头部分头部分. 2. 内容要包括对本漫画画面的描述以及你内容要包括对本漫画画面的描述以及你自己对这一现象的看法自己对这一现象的看法.提示提示: 电子琴电子琴 electron

16、ic piano 画板画板 drawing board What Will the Child Become ? Look at this picture. Here is a family of five该题要表达的内容是：1.小孩正骑在他爸爸身上小孩正骑在他爸爸身上,看上去多像一个看上去多像一个神气的国王啊神气的国王啊!2.爷爷正撑着伞爷爷正撑着伞,并且为他扇扇子并且为他扇扇子;3.妈妈背着书包及其他东西妈妈背着书包及其他东西;4.奶奶正提着电子琴奶奶正提着电子琴,背着画板背着画板;5.这个孩子将来成为什么样的人这个孩子将来成为什么样的人? 作出评作出评 论论 Look at this p

17、icture. Here is a family of five. The only child is riding his “horse”-his father. What a proud “king” he looks! His grandfather is holding an umbrella over him and cooling him with a fan.His mother is carrying his schoolbag and lots of other things for him. What is his grandmother doing behind ? Sh

18、e is working hard carrying an electronic piano and and a drawing board. But what will the child become in the future ? Hell think of himself more important than anyone else. Hell be able to do anything without help. Hell become no good for the world. What Will the Child Become? 小小 结结注意选词注意选词巧用转折词，总括

19、词注意使用“变通表达法”熟练运用书写技巧高高 考考 英英 语语 作作 文文 “六步法六步法”教学教学 Part two: Step1 仔细审题 Step2. 理清要点 Step3. 译写单句 Step4. 连句成篇 Step5. 检查润色 Step6. 定稿誊写高考英语作文高考英语作文“六步法六步法”教学教学范例1题目：Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for years. One morning Mr. Smith called at Mr. Greens. The following is their conversation. S:

20、 Good morning.G: Good morning.S: I havent seen your son Tom for a long time. Has he made great achievements?G: Oh, I dont know if he is successful, but I know that he has drawn the governments attention and the police are searching for him. 分析：题目不难，但要完成两件事情：一是要把要点表达清楚，要传神、达意；二是要把直接引语转换成间接引语。 要求： 1、用

21、间接引语描述如上 幽默故事。 2、词数为80100。第一步：仔细审题 情景提供的方式是对话，题材是故事。内容是两个邻居之间的一段幽默对话，涉及到的词汇有：used to ，call on，hesitate，make achievements，etc, 涉及的句子有简单句、并列句、和复合句。词数为80100。第二步：理清要点 本文是一篇记序文，发生的时间是一天下午，地点是本文是一篇记序文，发生的时间是一天下午，地点是Mr.Green家家,人物有人物有Mr.Smith和和Mr.Green，事件是谈论事件是谈论Mr.Green的儿子，故事以的儿子，故事以Mr. Green一段幽默的话结尾。所以，一段

22、幽默的话结尾。所以，本文要点如下：本文要点如下： 1、Mr. Smith和和Mr.Green是曾是多年的邻居。是曾是多年的邻居。 2、一天上午，、一天上午，Mr.Smith去去Mr.Green家拜访。家拜访。 3、他们互致问候早上好。、他们互致问候早上好。 4、Mr. Smith说他已说他已多年不见多年不见Mr.Green的儿子的儿子Tom了，相了，相知到他是否已取得了很大的成就。知到他是否已取得了很大的成就。 5、Mr.Smith踌躇了一会儿，说不知道儿子是否取得成就，踌躇了一会儿，说不知道儿子是否取得成就，但政府很重视他，警察也在全国各地找他。但政府很重视他，警察也在全国各地找他。.第三步

23、：译写单句1.Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years.2.One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house.3.They said good morning to each other.4.Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years. He asked if he had made great achievements.5.Mr.Green hesitate

24、d for a moment. He said he did not know if made any achievements. He said he knew that the government said that his son was very important. The police were after him everywhere in the country.第四步：连句成篇 Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Gre

25、en at his house.They said “good morning” to each other.Then Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years. He asked if he had made great achievements.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. He said he did not know if made any achievements. He said he only knew that the government

26、 said that his son was very important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.第五步：检查润色Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house. First, they greeted each other ( said “good morning” to each other),then they tal

27、ked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years and wondered (. He asked) if he had made great achievements.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if made any achievements, but he said he only knew that the government thou

28、ght (said) that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.第六步：定稿誊写 Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr. Green at his house. First,

29、they greeted morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr. Green at his house. First, they greeted each other,then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said each other,then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years and wondered that h

30、e had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years and wondered if he had made great achievements. Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then if he had made great achievements. Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if made any achievements, but he said he only knew he said he did

31、 not know if made any achievements, but he said he only knew that the government thoughtthat the government thought that his son was “very” important, for the that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.police were after him everywhere in the country.第六

32、步：定稿誊写 Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr. Green at his house. First, they One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr. Green at his house. First, they greeted each other,then they talked

33、 about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. greeted each other,then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years and wondered if he had made great achievements. Mr.Green years and wond

34、ered if he had made great achievements. Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if made any hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if made any achievements, but he said he only knew that the government thoughtachievements, but he said he only knew that the governm

35、ent thought that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.everywhere in the country.范例2 题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香港的短文，字数港的短文，字数100字左右。字左右。 香港位于中国的东南部，面积香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，平方公

36、里，人口人口600多万，被称为多万，被称为“东方明珠东方明珠”。1842年鸦年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。更美好。 参考词汇：明珠参考词汇：明珠 pearl，鸦片鸦片 opium。第一步：仔细审题本文属说明性文章。第二步：理清要点1、香港的地理位置、面积和人口。2、鸦片战争后香港的处境。3、1997年她回到祖国的怀抱。4、其前景会更美好。第三步：译写单句1. Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her ar

37、ea is 1,045k. Her population is more than 6 million.2. She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War.3. In 1997, she returned to motherland.4. Her future is very beautiful.第四步：连句成篇 Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k and (. Her) population is more than 6 million. She

38、was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War.In 1997, she returned to motherland and (. Her) future is very beautiful.第五步：检查润色1 Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of( Her area is)1,045k and (. Her) has a population of more than 6 million ( population is more than 6 million

39、). She is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842,She was given up to Britain by the then Chinese government after the 1842 Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong lived a hard life . In 1997, she returned to motherland and the people of Hong Kong are and will be working hard to make her more

40、beautiful. 第五步：检查润色1之后的文章 Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million. She is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842,She was given up to Britain by the then Chinese government after the 1842 Opium War, and the people in Hong

41、Kong lived a hard life . In 1997, she returned to motherland and the people of Hong Kong are and will be working hard to make her more beautiful.第五步：检查润色2 Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million and(. She) is well-known as “the P

42、earl of the East”. In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain ( She was given up to Britain by the then Chinese government) after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot ( lived a hard life) . After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997 ( In

43、1997, she returned to motherland and the people of Hong Kong are and), the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard ( will be working hard) to make her more beautiful. Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and

44、 has a population of more than 6 million and is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot . After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong

45、Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to make her more beautiful.第五步：检查润色2之后的文章第六步：定稿誊写 Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million and is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 18

46、42, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot . After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to m

47、ake her more beautiful.第六步：定稿誊写 Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million and is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, and the pe

48、ople in Hong Kong suffered a lot . After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to make her more beautiful.Homework: 请以记者的身份,根据案件登记卡所提供的情况，用英语写一篇新闻报导稿。字数：100词左右。INFORMATION ABOUT THE CASETIM

49、E4:55 p.m. yesterday, just before the class time.PLACE bank in the Park StreetWEATHERraining hard ,little trafficHappens: Two young men with mask rushed in, threatened the clerk with gun,put the money in the bags,rushed out and droved away with about 20,000 dollars. Nobody was killed or wounded. The

50、 police are searching for the robbers.Possible version: Yesterday afternoon, a robbery happened in a bank in the Park Street. According to the witnesses statements, it was five minutes to 5:00 pm, just before the closing time of the bank. And it was raining heavily, with little traffic on the road o