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1、Read the passageand find out information about each ParaPara 2 location,facilitiesPara 3 timetable Para 4 after-school activitiesnaddtion:also another thing,as well asnExample:for example,such asnConclusion:in conclusionnContrast:but,howevernPurpose:so thatnHow to write your ideal schoollocationfaci

2、litiestimetableSchoolAfrer-school activities基础写作技巧指导基础写作技巧指导Suppose you are a guide to describe a place to tourists,what subjects(主题）主题）will you introduce?Possible subjects：1.介绍地理位置（介绍地理位置（Location）be located in.be situated inlie in stands at the foot of/on the top of坐落于坐落于脚下脚下/顶部顶部Be surrounded by被

3、被围绕着围绕着On the left/right 常用词语常用词语 1.1.日本在中国的东方。日本在中国的东方。2.2.这房子朝南。这房子朝南。3.3.新教学坐落在学校的中央。新教学坐落在学校的中央。翻译翻译Japan is/lies to the east of China.The house faces(to)the south.The new teaching building lies in the center of the school.4.4.中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大的国家之一。的国家之一。China,located/lying in the

4、east of Asia,is one of largest countries in the world.2.介绍人口（介绍人口（Population）:has a population of,（a city）with a population of北京是中国的首都，是一个有北京是中国的首都，是一个有12001200多万人多万人口的大城市。（用一句话）口的大城市。（用一句话）Beijing,the capital of China,is a large city with a population of over 12,000,000.3.介绍面积（介绍面积（Area）has/covers

5、an area ofsquare kilometers（a city）with an area ofsquare kilometers它是一个面积它是一个面积100100多平方公里城镇。多平方公里城镇。Its a town with an area of over 100 square kilometers4.介绍历史（介绍历史（History）:has a long history(of years)with a long history(of years)历史悠久历史悠久它是一个具有悠久历史的现代化城市。它是一个具有悠久历史的现代化城市。It is a modern city with a

6、 long history.5.介绍交通、天气（介绍交通、天气（Transportation）take a bus,a train or a plane togo to by bus/train/planeTransportation is convenient（a city）has convenient transportation with both on land and waterThe weather is neither hot nor cold.The average temperature is .经济迅速发展经济迅速发展economy has been developing

7、rapidly多次进入全国经济十强城市多次进入全国经济十强城市has been listed among the top ten strongest cities in economy several times6、介绍经济（、介绍经济（economy）7.7.名胜古迹及工农业名胜古迹及工农业有很多名胜古迹：有很多名胜古迹：There are many places of interest/historical spots承德是全国承德是全国24个历史文化名城之一，也是个历史文化名城之一，也是44个风景名胜个风景名胜之一。之一。Chengde City is not only one of t

8、he well-known 24 historical and cultural cities but also one of the 44 major scenic spots in China.It is well known for/asbe rich in,which sell both at home and abroad一些其它表达方式：一些其它表达方式：发生了很大变化发生了很大变化great changes have taken place since海岸线总长海岸线总长公里公里Its coastline has a total length of kilometers.基础写作

9、-情景说明西山镇依山傍水。过去，这里的人们生活极其贫困。西山镇依山傍水。过去，这里的人们生活极其贫困。解放后人们的生活在各方面都发生了很大的变化。解放后人们的生活在各方面都发生了很大的变化。人口人口约约10万万面积面积约约126平方公里平方公里地理概括地理概括坐落在粤北一山脚下，面临一条坐落在粤北一山脚下，面临一条大河，新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校大河，新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校教育状况教育状况解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以上解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以上学，现在有学，现在有10所学校，每个孩子都可以上学；所学校，每个孩子都可以上学；生活状况生活状况人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看

10、电影、跳舞、人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳舞、参加体育活动等参加体育活动等写作要求：写作要求：1.1.短文标题自拟短文标题自拟2 2必须使用个句子介绍全部所给的内必须使用个句子介绍全部所给的内容；容；3 3将个句子组织成连贯的短文将个句子组织成连贯的短文title if necessary(标题）标题）tense and voice（时态和语态）时态和语态）person（人称）人称）style（文章题材）文章题材）the important points（要点要全）（要点要全）1.How to analyze the directions(审题审题)?Great Changes in X

11、ishan Town一般现在、一般过去、现在完成时一般现在、一般过去、现在完成时第三人称第三人称应用文应用文List the important points out:解放后人们的生活发生了很大的变化。解放后人们的生活发生了很大的变化。西山镇的人口约西山镇的人口约1010万；万；Since liberation great changes have taken place in peoples lifeXishan town has a population of aboutThe population of Xishan town is about 100,000.面积约面积约126126平

12、方公里平方公里nIt covers/has an area of about126 square kilometers.nThe size of it is about 126 square kilometers.坐落在粤北一座山脚下，面临一条大河坐落在粤北一座山脚下，面临一条大河nXishan town is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong Province and faces a big river.nXishan town is located/stands at the foot of a mountain of

13、 North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river.新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校nMany factories,shops,hospitals and schools have been built/set up.解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以上学。解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以上学。现在有现在有1010所学校，每个孩子都可以上学；所学校，每个孩子都可以上学；人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳舞、参人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳舞、参加体育活动等加体育活动等Now ther

14、e are 10 schools and every child can go to school.Before liberation there was only one school for children from wealthy families.After work people go shopping,see films,go dancing and have sports.用个句子介绍全部所给的内容；用个句子介绍全部所给的内容；用适当的连接词或在必要的地方改变句子用适当的连接词或在必要的地方改变句子结构将个句子组织成连贯的短文结构将个句子组织成连贯的短文n1.Xishan to

15、wn is a small town,_ is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river.whichLets try!2.Xishan town has a population of about 100,000 _ covers an area of about 126 square kilometers.Xishan town,_ an area of about 126 square kilometers,has a populati

16、on of.Xishan town covers an area of about 126 square kilometers_100,000.andcoveringwith a population of多种表达法灵活表达多种表达法灵活表达3.Before liberation,people there lived a hard life _ since liberation great changes have taken place_ many factories,shops,hospitals and schools have been built.butand now4.Before

17、 liberation there was only one school for children from wealthy families_ now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school.5.After work people go shopping,see films,go dancing and have sports.butLets share!Lets share!One possible version:1.Xishan town is a small town,which is located at the

18、 foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river.It has a population of about 100,000 and covers an area of about 126 square kilometers.Before liberation,people there lived a hard life but great changes have taken place since liberation and now many factories,shop

19、s,hospitals and schools have been built.The school education has also improved,for example,before liberation there was only one school for children from wealthy families,but now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school.After work people go shopping,see films,go dancing and have sports.南

20、极洲世界上最寒冷的地方，南极洲世界上最寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆盖常年有冰雪覆盖 Antarctica,is the coldest continent in the world.Antarctica,is covered with cold thick ice and deep snow all year round.1.使用定语从句或同位语优化句子表达使用定语从句或同位语优化句子表达which is covered with coldthick ice and deep snow all（the)year round,the coldest continent in the world,*语

21、法，句法高分语法，句法高分tips 夏天几乎不下雨，夏天几乎不下雨，但一下起来但一下起来就很大。就很大。It hardly ever rain in summer _it rains heavily.2.运用非谓语动词和运用非谓语动词和with结构优化句子表达结构优化句子表达我的家乡位于中国广东，我的家乡位于中国广东，毗邻香港毗邻香港My hometown,_ is located in Guangdong Province of China.but whenever it does,neighboring Hong Kong,使用状语从句优化句子表达使用状语从句优化句子表达你的一位网友向你了

22、解你的家乡广州,请根据以下提示介绍广州.n1.广州地处广东省中部,面积7434.4平方公里,人口约1000万,是广东的省会,是一座有两千二百多年文明的历史的古城。n2.1982年，广州被选定为全国首批历史名城之一。n3.广州一年四季如春，繁花似锦，故有“花城”之美育。n4.广州正以迷人的风采迎接来自四面八方的海外游客。审题初稿n文章体裁文章体裁n中心人称中心人称n主体时态主体时态n语言表达语言表达n句子分配句子分配n文章连贯文章连贯n修饰润色修饰润色n说明文n第三人称n一般现在时濒临中国南海，毗邻香港和澳门 nGuangzhou is on the South China Sea.nHong

23、Kong is to the southeast of Guangzhou.nMacau is to the south of Guangzhou.Guangzhou,with the history of 2800years,is known as“the flower city”,which is the birth place of“the silk roadon sea”in ancient China.It has a population of 10 millionand the area of 7434.4 square kilometers.Guangzhou lies on the south China sea,withHongKong to the Southeast and Macao to the South.It is rich intravelling resources,such as the famous“eight scenery of YangCheng”.Tourists from home and abroad areattracted to Guangzhou by its beautiful scenery.