第四章写作课.ppt

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1、 第四章第四章 日常活动日常活动 课文复习与书面表达课文复习与书面表达1.1.复习相关语篇，分析语篇结构，记住有关日常复习相关语篇，分析语篇结构，记住有关日常活动话题的活动话题的话题句话题句和和功能句功能句。2.2.能运用所学知识进行相关话题的能运用所学知识进行相关话题的书面表达书面表达。学习目标学习目标家务、学习家务、学习Daily activities课余生活课余生活get up/get dressed/take a showereat breakfast/lunch/dinnergo to school/workgo home/go to bedplay sports/play bask

2、etball.play the piano/guitar.go to the movies/watch TVlisten to music/take sb.for a walkdo chores/do the dishessweep the floor/make ones beddo homework/read bookshave a test生活起居生活起居课文重温（动词应用课文重温（动词应用）认真阅读下面的文章，用括号内所给动词认真阅读下面的文章，用括号内所给动词的适当形式填空，必要时可加助动词或情的适当形式填空，必要时可加助动词或情态动词。态动词。Ive never been late

3、for school,but yesterday I 1_(come)very close.My alarm clock 2_(not go)off,and by the time I 3 _(wake)up,my father had already gone into the bathroom and I had to wait for him 4 _(come)out.I had to really rush.I took a quick shower,had some breakfast,and then 5 _(run)off to the bus stop.Unfortunatel

4、y,by the time I 6_(get)there,the bus had already left.I started 7_(walk),but I knew I 8 _(not get)to school on time.Luckily,my friend Tony and his dad came by in his dads car and they 9 _(give)me a ride.When I got to school,the final bell 10_(ring).I only just made it to my class.camedidnt gowoketo

5、comerangotwalkingcouldnt getgavewas ringingIve never been late for school,but yesterday I 1came(come)very close.My alarm clock 2didnt go(not go)off,and by the time I 3 woke(wake)up,my father had already gone into the bathroom and I had to wait for him 4 to come(come)out.I had to really rush.I took a

6、 quick shower,had some breakfast,and then 5 ran(run)off to the bus stop.Unfortunately,by the time I 6 got(get)there,the bus had already left.I started 7walking(walk),but I knew I 8 couldnt get(not get)to school on time.Luckily,my friend Tony and his dad came by in his dads car and they 9 gave(give)m

7、e a ride.When I got to school,the final bell 10 was ringing(ring).I only just made it to my class.一般过去时的否定形式一般过去时的否定形式不定式表示目的我知道我我知道我不可能不可能按时到按时到校，需加情态动词校，需加情态动词Scotts dayScott works very long hours.He usually gets upat 17:00.He brushes his teeth and has a shower.Then he eats his breakfast.What a fu

8、nny time to eat breakfast!After breakfast he plays his guitar,then he goes to work.To get to work,he takes the number 17 bus to a hotel.The bus usually takes him to work at 19:15.He works all night.People love to listen to him!He gets home at 7:00,and he watches morning TV.He goes to bed at 8:30.Can

9、 you think what his job is?Scott works very long hours.He usually gets upat 17:00.He brushes his teeth and has a shower.Then he eats his breakfast.What a funny time to eat breakfast!After breakfast he plays his guitar,then he goes to work.To get to work,he takes the number 17 bus to a hotel.The bus

10、usually takes him to work at 19:15.He works all night.People love to listen to him!He gets home at 7:00,and he watches morning TV.He goes to bed at 8:30.Can you think what his job is?短文是按照短文是按照_顺序，使用顺序，使用_时态时态进行描写的。进行描写的。时间时间一般现在一般现在Scotts dayScott works very long hours.He usually gets upat 17:00.He

11、 brushes his teeth and has a shower.Then he eats his breakfast.What a funny time to eat breakfast!After breakfast he plays his guitar,then he goes to work.To get to work,he takes the number 17 bus to a hotel.The bus usually takes him to work at 19:15.He works all night.People love to listen to him!H

12、e gets home at 7:00,and he watches morning TV.He goes to bed at 8:30.Can you think what his job is?Circle Scotts daily activitiesScott works very long hours.He usually gets upat 17:00.He brushes his teeth and has a shower.Then he eats his breakfast.What a funny time to eat breakfast!After breakfast

13、he plays his guitar,then he goes to work.To get to work,he takes the number 17 bus to a hotel.The bus usually takes him to work at 19:15.He works all night.People love to listen to him!He gets home at 7:00,and he watches morning TV.He goes to bed at 8:30.Can you think what his job is?Circle Scotts d

14、aily activitiesScott works very long hours.1.He usually gets up at 17:00.2.He brushes his teeth and has a shower.Then he eats his breakfast.3.After breakfast he plays his guitar,then he goes to work.4.To get to work,he takes the number 17 bus to a hotel.5.He works all night.6.He gets home at 7:00,an

15、d he watches morning TV.7.He goes to bed at 8:30.activitiestopic sentenceScott works very long hours1.He usually gets up at 17:00.2.He brushes his teeth and has a shower.Then he eats his breakfast.3.After breakfast he plays his guitar,then he goes to work.4.To get to work,he takes the number 17 bus

16、to a hotel.5.He works all night.6.He gets home at 7:00,and he watches morning TV.7.He goes to bed at 8:30.activitiestopic sentence以以My dayMy day为题目描述自己一天的活动为题目描述自己一天的活动要求：要求：1.1.按时间顺序按时间顺序 2.2.可以尝试使用关连词可以尝试使用关连词 I am very busy every day.I have to get up before 6 a.m.in order to get to school on time

17、.At school,I study hard.Also,I help my classmates with their schoolwork.I can get on well with my teachers and classmates.At home,I help my parents do chores.For example,I sweep the floor,make my bed and take out the trash.Besides,I look after my little pet dog.Sometimes,I take him for a walk.I cant

18、 watch TV or surf the internet for so long because I have to finish doing my homework on time.I usually go to bed at half past ten.I think I have a healthy and active lifestyle.My day你能找出哪些关联词？你能找出哪些关联词？I am very busy every day.I have to get up before 6 a.m.in order to get to school on time.At schoo

19、l,I study hard.Also,I help my classmates with their schoolwork.I can get on well with my teachers and classmates.At home,I help my parents do chores.For example,I sweep the floor,make my bed and take out the trash.Besides,I look after my little pet dog.Sometimes,I take him for a walk.I cant watch TV

20、 or surf the internet for so long because I have to finish doing my homework on time.I usually go to bed at half past ten.I think I have a healthy and active lifestyle.My day关联词的使用使文章更流畅。关联词的使用使文章更流畅。I am very busy every day.I have to get up before 6 a.m.in order to get to school on time.At school,I

21、 study hard.Also,I help my classmates with their schoolwork.So I can get on well with my teachers and classmates.After school,I help my parents do chores.For example,I sweep the floor,make my bed and take out the trash.Besides,I look after my little pet dog.Sometimes,I take him for a walk.I cant wat

22、ch TV or surf the internet for so long because I have to finish doing my homework on time.I usually go to bed at half past ten.I think I have a healthy and active lifestyle.My day优点：优点：1.使用了关联词；使用了关联词；2.使用了使用了_的结构的结构主题句总总分分总总 I am very busy every day.I have to get up before 6 a.m.in order to get to

23、school on time.At school,I study hard.Also,I help my classmates with their schoolwork.So I can get on well with my teachers and classmates.After school,I help my parents do chores.For example,I sweep the floor,make my bed and take out the trash.Besides,I look after my little pet dog.Sometimes,I take

24、 him for a walk.I cant watch TV or surf the internet for so long because I have to finish doing my homework on time.I usually go to bed at half past ten.I think I have a healthy and active lifestyle.My day I am very busy every day.I have to get up before 6 a.m.in order to get to school on time.At sc

25、hool,I study hard.Also,I help my classmates with their schoolwork.So I can get on well with my teachers and classmates.After school,I help my parents do chores.For example,I sweep the floor,make my bed and take out the trash.Besides,I look after my little pet dog.Sometimes,I take him for a walk.I ca

26、nt watch TV or surf the internet for so long because I have to finish doing my homework on time.I usually go to bed at half past ten.I think I have a healthy and active lifestyle.My day1.我也帮助我的同学们学习功课。我也帮助我的同学们学习功课。1.Also,I help my classmates with their schoolwork.2.放学后我帮父母做家务，例如扫地、整理床铺和放学后我帮父母做家务，例

27、如扫地、整理床铺和 倒垃圾。倒垃圾。2.After school,I help my parents do chores.For example,I sweep the floor,make my bed and take out the trash.3.除此之外，我还照料我的宠物狗。除此之外，我还照料我的宠物狗。3.Besides,I look after my little pet dog.4.我认为我有健康、积极的生活方式。我认为我有健康、积极的生活方式。4.I think I have a healthy and active lifestyle.假设你是假设你是Tony，你的笔友，你

28、的笔友Jack想了解你与家人的日常活想了解你与家人的日常活动，包括动，包括生活起居、做家务生活起居、做家务等情况，并适当发表等情况，并适当发表自己的自己的看法看法。要求要求:80-100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：参考词汇：get up,get dressed,go to school,go to work,go to bed,do the dishes,sweep the floor,make ones bed,play sports,take care of 等。等。Dear Jack,Thanks for your last lett

29、er.Id like to share our dailyactivities with you._How about your daily activities?Please write to me soon.Tony写作点拨写作点拨4 4、谋篇布局、谋篇布局2.2.正文正文:5.5.修改互批（注意书写）修改互批（注意书写）1.1.主题句主题句按时间顺序按时间顺序恰当使用关联词恰当使用关联词1 1、确定话题：、确定话题：2 2、确定时态、确定时态:3 3、细读要求：、细读要求：日常活动日常活动一般现在时一般现在时1.1.人称：人称：2.2.内容：要点齐全内容：要点齐全，可以适当扩展；，可以适

30、当扩展；3.3.字数：字数：80-10080-100左右。左右。3.3.表达感受表达感受第一人称与第三人称；第一人称与第三人称；分层：分层：A：争取写出一档作文；：争取写出一档作文；B：尽量完成写作要求；：尽量完成写作要求；C：能够写出几个相关的句子。：能够写出几个相关的句子。Dear Jack,Thanks for your last letter.Id like to share our daily life with you.We are very busy every day.At 6 oclock in the morning,my mother gets up and makes

31、breakfast for us.Then my father and I take turns to get dressed.After breakfast,we leave home together.We work hard all day.Thanks to my mother,she goes home to make supper for us at about 5:30.After dinner,I help Mom do the dishes and take out the trash.Its time for them to go out for a walk.My parents like reading books or surfing the Internet in the evening.I dont go to bed until I finish my homework.Although we are busy,we are happy.Its helpful to have a healthy and active lifestyle.How about your daily life?Please write to me soon.TonyThank you!