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1、Writing-An email about a journeyLearning Aims（学习目标）Learn how to write an email about a journey.1. Practice writing one.（重:点难点）目标一目标一写作要领技法指导本单元的写作目标是写一篇关于旅行的邮件，也就是对一次出行、游览、参观等的记录。 这类文章一般分为三局部：第一局部介绍自己游览或参观的地点。第二局部写自己的游览经 历，也是文章的重点。第三局部往往以向朋友发出邀请来结束全文。在介绍游览经历时，一 般按游览的先后顺序写，由先而后依次记述游览过程中所见到的景物。另外要选取自己

2、印象 最深刻的或最有特色的景物，作较为详细的描写。最后可以加上自己的感受，做到既有所见 所闻，又有所思所感，深化写作主题。常用表达Id like to share one of the most fascinating experiences with you.1. T m glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.2. Last week/inonth/year, I paid a visit to., which is fam

3、ous for.3. It lies/is located/situated in.4. The scenery is so beautiful that it takes the tourists breath away.5. Wherever you go there are plenty of activities to choose from.6. 1( has become one of the most popular tourist attractions in the world.7. We were all exhausted, but our trip to.was rea

4、lly unforgettable.目标二写作实践分步演练假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom写信询问你的一次难忘的旅游经历。请你用英语给 他回一封邮件，要点包括：1 .旅游过程；2 .你的感受。注意:1 .词数80左右；2 .开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。参考词汇：大佛 the Giant Stone Buddha 第一步审题谋篇K审题X写作时应注意以下几点：1 .确定文体：这是一篇电子邮件，向朋友介绍一次难忘的旅游经历。2 .主体时态：以一般过去时为主。景物描写用一般现在时。3 .主体人称：人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。工谋篇第一段：开门见山，介绍本次旅行的时间、地点、人员及交通方式等

5、。第二段：自己的游览经历，注意详略得当。第三段：总结全文，发出邀请。第二步遣词造句K核心词汇1 .使十分惊讶astonish.字面上；真正地literally2 .巨大的：非常严重:的massive.顶峰；山峰peak3 .令人惊叹的；可怕的；很好的awesome.景色 scenery4 . 让人惊叹 take sb. s breath away.在黄昏at dusk5 .令人愉快的；友好的Dleasani.一定会 be bound toK连词成句1.七月七日，我和父母乘车去了四川乐山，一个以大佛闻名的地方。On July 7, my parents and I look a bus to L

6、eshan, Sichuan Province.Leshan isamousor the Giani Slone Buddha.1 .我们吃惊地发现大佛真的很大。We were astonished to findhat the Buddha is literally massive.2 .当我抬头看到巨大的佛头，低头看到巨大的佛脚时，我感到自己是多么渺小。When I looked ud a【ihe large head and down at the large feet, I feh I was so small.3 .第二天，我们登上了峨眉山山顶，山上的美景让我们惊叹。The next

7、 day, wc climbed to the peak of Mount Emci.Thc awesome and spectacular scenery on the mountain took our breath away.4 .在黄昏时刻，我们返程。At dusk, wc made our wav back.5 .我们都非常累，但是我们去乐山的旅程真的既难忘又使人愉快。We were all tired, but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable and pleasant.6 .如果再给我一次机会，我一定会再来游览乐山。I am

8、given another chance, I am bound lo pay a visil io Leshan again. 第三步句式升级.用非限制性定语从句改写句1On July 7, my Darenls and I look a bus lo Leshan, Sichuan Province, which is famousor【he Giam Stone Buddha.1 .用现在分词短语作状语改写句3Looking up al (he large head and down al【he large feel, felt I was so small.2 .把句4改成以关系副词引

9、导的定语从句The next day, wc climbed to the peak of Mount Emci, wherehe awesome and SDectacular scenery took our breath away.3 .用done作状语改写句7Given another chance, I am bound lo pay a visit to Leshan again.第四步组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语 短文。【参考范文】Dear Tom，1 m glad to share a truly fascinating

10、travel experience that 1 had during my last summer holiday with you.On July 7, my parents and I took a bus to Leshan, Sichuan Province, which is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha.We were astonished to find the Buddha is literally massive.Looking up at the large head and down at the large feet, I fel

11、t I was so small.The next day, we climbed to the peak of Mount Emei, where the awesome and spectacular scenery took our breath away.At dusk, we made our way back.We were all tired but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable and pleasani.Given another chance I am bound to pay a visit to Leshan again.I m looking forward to going to Leshan with you next time.Yours,Li Hua