高考读后续写课件-2024届高三英语二轮专题.pptx

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1、从历年高考的读后续写话题中可以看出人人和和动动物物的话题备受命题者青睐。试题文本一般从两个角度展开，一个就是人人和和动动物物和和谐谐相相处处,要么是人类帮助动物解决问题，要么是动物帮助人类解决问题;另外一个就是，人类与动物产生冲突人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，后来向别人求助，之后成功脱险的故事。例如:人狼大战:骑车旅途遭遇狼wolf追赶，脱险经历(2017年6月浙江高考);人熊大战:北极探险者给北极熊拍照，遭遇polarbear追赶的惊险经历(2020年6月浙江高考);父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴，帮其摆脱弧独；套路一：可爱型动物故事情节可

2、爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。套路三：主题升华设计可爱型动物主题：陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。凶猛型动物主题：难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。故事内容一定要故事内容一定要正能正能量量，弘弘扬扬社会主社会主义义核核心价心价值观值观。如迷路了。如迷路了但最但最终终一定回到了家；一定回到了家；失失败败了或遇到困了或遇到困难难了，了，但最但最终终一定成功了；一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定吵架了但最后一定是是言言归

3、于好，于好，和睦相和睦相处处；犯犯错了，最后一定会了，最后一定会改改过自新，重新做人；自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，之以法，等等等等。02正能量原正能量原则01原文一致原原文一致原则内容要内容要前后前后衔接接，上下上下连贯,语言表达言表达风格格一致一致。03曲折性原曲折性原则凡是故事都凡是故事都应有有跌宕起跌宕起伏伏，其中人，其中人物会遇到困物会遇到困难或或问题，但但最最终能解能解决决。三个原则Part01读懂大意，理清脉络主主要要是是根根据据记叙叙文文的的六六要要素素弄弄清清文文章章大大意意，特特别要要弄弄清清故故事事的的人人物物，时态(通通常常是是一一般般过去

4、去时)，事事件件(故故事事的的起起因因和和经过)，语言言特特色色(以以便便在在续写写时语言言特特色色前前后后一一致致，保保持持不不变)，等等。，等等。人物人物时态和事件和事件 语言特色不要言特色不要变Part02细读首句，构思框架由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架。两段首句定一框两段首句定一框第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。二框二首正能量二框二首正能量Part03增加细节，开始写作在已定框架范围内，依据情节发展和生活常识，推断故事中人物所见、所闻、所思、所想、所说、所做、所感、所反应八方面给每段增加5至8个具体细节，我们称之为叫“58细节添加法”。Itwasaplea

5、santSundayasJohnwanderedthegardenofhisuncleshouse.HisparentshadgonetoDelhi.“Yourfinalexaminationisjustafewmonthsaway.”Johnsfatherhadsaid.“WewantyoutostaywithUncleTim,completeyourexamsandjoinusinDelhi.”UncleTimwasJohnsfatherscousin.HehadalittledogcalledOliver.FromthefirstdayJohnrealizedthatOliverwasu

6、nhappyinthehouse.Hewasnotgivenhismealsontime,norwashetakenforawalk.Oliverwasshoutedatandabusedallday.“YouruncleboughtOliversothatthedogcouldprotecthishousefromthievesbutactuallyhedoesntlovehim”,thegardenertoldJohnoneday.Johnfeltsad.AtnighthecouldhearOliverwhimperinginthecold.“Whydontyoumakeacoatfory

7、ourpet?”Johnpausedandsaid,“Hefeelscold”.Hisuncleanswered,“Ihavemuchbetterthingstodo”.OnedayJohnwentoutforawalkwithOliver,whenafiercestormstarted.Johnrantotakeshelterinasweetshop.ItwasonlyafterafewminutesthatherealizedthatOliverwasnotwithhim.“Thestormseparatedus”,Johnwassad,tellinghisuncle.“Isearched

8、theentireplacewiththehelpofthesweetshopownerbutIcouldntfindhim.”Johnsunclepostedanadvertisementinthepaper.AfterallhehadspentalotofmoneybuyingOliveranddidnotwanttolosehim.Itwasahalf-hourridebybus.ThemiddleagedladywhogreetedOliverwasamotherlysortofawoman.SheandherhusbandhadansweredJohnsunclesadvertise

9、mentinthepaper.SinceJohnsunclewasoutonanofficialtour,Johnhadbeensenttocheckonthedog.“Heisasleep,”theladysaid.“Comeandhavealook,welovehimsomuchthatheisjustlikeourdeaddog,Sheela.”Paragraph1:Johnlookedatthedog.YesitwasOliver._Paragraph2:“Iamsorrytohavebotheredyou,butthisisnotourOliver.”_本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了约

10、翰的叔叔有一只名为奥利弗的狗，但是叔叔并不爱奥利弗，某天约翰和奥利弗出去散步时，奥利弗走丢了，一位中年妇女捡到了，约翰出于好心，谎称那只狗不是奥利弗，女士就可以收留它了。由第一段首句内容”约翰看着那只狗。是的，是奥利弗。可知，第一段可描写约翰改变主意的原因约翰改变主意的原因以及这这家人对于这只狗的看法家人对于这只狗的看法。由第二段首句内容“很抱歉打扰你，但这不是我们的奥利弗。”可知，第二段可描写约翰说不是他家的狗后，女士的反应女士的反应以及约翰的内心感受约翰的内心感受。续写线索:约翰认出奥利弗奥利弗成为女士家的一员约翰否认这是奥利弗女士如释重负约翰感悟Shesatnexttome,smilin

11、g,relievedthatIwasallright.Sureenough,mybrotherwascriticizedbymumforhislackofsafetyawareness.Samjuststoodthere,smiling,gladthathecouldwholeheartedlysupporthisfriendwhenhewasintrouble.Allthistookonlyafewminutes,butBettywouldneverforgetthefrighteningexperience.Manyyearshavepassed,butIwillneverforgetth

12、elessonArthurtaughtme:Lifeismeaningfulwhenyoucangiveahandtothoseintrouble.Whatahungrybear!Afterwereturnedhomesafeandsound,werealizedthatsomethingshouldbedoneforbears.Themomentwepulledourselvesoutofthedilemma,Wefeltrelieved.Whatanarrowescape!IhuggedJoetightly,happinessandlovewellingupinsideme.Itseeme

13、dasifthisonesingleactofkindnesshadenergizedusagainandremindedusofwhatlifewasallabout.Johnlookedatthedog.YesitwasOliver.Hebentdownandgentlypartedthefurontheneck.Theidentifyingwhitespotwasthere.Theladywasspeakingwhenherhusbandcamein.“Inafewdayshehasbecomeapartofthefamily.EversinceSheela,ourdogdied,wed

14、ecidednottokeepanypetsandthensuddenly.”hervoicequivered.“Whenyouruncleputintheadvertisement,foramomentwethoughtofnotreplying”,thegentlemansaid.“Mywifehasbecomeattachedtothedoginthesefewdays.”“Iamsorrytohavebotheredyou,butthisisnotourOliver.”Therewasacryofrelieffromthelady.Johnwouldhavetolietohisuncl

15、ethatthedogwasnotOliverbutinreturnOliverwouldgetalifeoflove,careandcompanionship.Hewouldbesafefromalifeofmiseryinhisuncleshouse.Johnknewhehadtakentherightdecision.经典错误表达有误+情节有误(李东晓)Johnlookedatthedog.YesitwasOliver.Amazedbythissceneandtouchedbythem,theynotonlyprotectedOliver，butalsogaveashelterforit

16、.SocuriouswasJohnthathecouldnthelpaskingmoreinformationaboutit.Theycouplesresponded“Thoughheisanadorabledogadoptedbyusforsomedays,weregardedhimasamemberofourfamily.”Hebroughthappinesstousinourdailyroutine.Theyoncehadadogdiedforuncertainty.Johnperceivedthattheireyesweretwinkedwithtears.Withasuddenins

17、piration,Johndecidedtotellalietothemdeterminedly.Iamsorrytohavebotheredyou,butthisisnotourOliver.”Johnsaidtowomanwithadisappointedexpressiononhisface,onlytomakethewomanbelievehim.AlthoughheissimilartomyOliver,butinfact,heisnot.Afterhearingthis,thewomanseyebecametwinkled.Butatthenextmoment,shesaidinaserioustongue“Itisapitythatheisnotyouroliver.ButImgreatlyconvincedthatyouwillfindyouroliversoonerorlater.Afterwards,thewomanleftaftergivingwishestoJohn.Johnhadnoalternativebuttotellalietohisuncle,buthefeltrelievedduetothefactthatOliverwasgivenabetterplacetolivein.