高考英语作文指导.ppt

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1、English Writing(1)Shen Qi高考英语作文考查语言的能力范围高考英语作文考查语言的能力范围：从历年来看，其考查学生语言运用能力的从历年来看，其考查学生语言运用能力的范围主要体现在以下三方面：范围主要体现在以下三方面：1.所表达的语言内容是否切题。所表达的语言内容是否切题。2.语言表达是否通顺、流畅，是否存在翻语言表达是否通顺、流畅，是否存在翻译的痕迹和中国式英语。译的痕迹和中国式英语。3.句法、结构、语法（包括：时态、语态，单句法、结构、语法（包括：时态、语态，单复数，各类从句，介词等）是否正确。文中使复数，各类从句，介词等）是否正确。文中使用的词汇是否贴切、精炼、或单一、

2、重复用的词汇是否贴切、精炼、或单一、重复。高考作文评分标准：高考作文评分标准：1）内容）内容 10分分 2）语言）语言 10分分 3）组织结构为）组织结构为5分。分。所以内容贴切，语言流畅，组织结构层次所以内容贴切，语言流畅，组织结构层次感清楚，句子与句子之间，段落与段落之感清楚，句子与句子之间，段落与段落之间自然衔接的文章就能得高分。间自然衔接的文章就能得高分。学生存在的问题学生存在的问题1.审题能力差易偏离主题审题能力差易偏离主题2.材料分析不够，要点遗漏材料分析不够，要点遗漏3.语言运用能力差，不符合英语习惯语言运用能力差，不符合英语习惯4.行文不流畅，不能有效地衔接行文不流畅，不能有效

3、地衔接高分策略：遣词，造句，谋篇高分策略：遣词，造句，谋篇遣词的原则：使用高等级词汇及短语遣词的原则：使用高等级词汇及短语,如如果仅仅记住几个简单基础的词汇果仅仅记住几个简单基础的词汇,而且一味而且一味的重复低水平的英语知识点的重复低水平的英语知识点,还远远没有达还远远没有达到大学的入学要求。这就要求考生在平时到大学的入学要求。这就要求考生在平时的训练和考试当中，有意识的强化的训练和考试当中，有意识的强化“复杂，复杂，高级高级”这两个概念，使自己的作文能力区这两个概念，使自己的作文能力区别于普通学生的作文，使自己一下子就站别于普通学生的作文，使自己一下子就站在一个比别人高的位置上，充分显示自己

4、在一个比别人高的位置上，充分显示自己的实力。的实力。造句的原则：句式多变，语法活用，造句的原则：句式多变，语法活用，句子是表达一个完整意思的最小当位，句子是表达一个完整意思的最小当位，所以造句能力在英文写作中是非常重要所以造句能力在英文写作中是非常重要的。好的英语句子能够生动，形象，准的。好的英语句子能够生动，形象，准确的表达内容。要想写出漂亮的书面表确的表达内容。要想写出漂亮的书面表达，必须从写好句子开始。达，必须从写好句子开始。写好句子的方法一：合并句子写好句子的方法一：合并句子 It was early in the morning.Mr.Smith was in his garden.

5、He was watering flowers.Early in the morning,Mr.Smith was watering flowers in his garden.写好句子的方法二：改写句子写好句子的方法二：改写句子 1)Mr.Green is a tall man,who wears a pair of thick glasses.(改成介改成介词短语做伴随状语词短语做伴随状语)Mr.Green is a tall man with a pair of thick glasses.2)The ice on the lake is too thin for us to skate

6、 on.(使用使用sothat结构改写句子结构改写句子)The ice on the lake is so thin that we cant skate on it.练习方法三：一句多译练习方法三：一句多译 I spent 300 yuan on the book.I paid 300 yuan for the book.The price of the book is 300 yuan It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book.The book cost me 300 yuan.我不懂什么英语，李明也不懂。我不懂什么英语，李明也不懂。I dont know a

7、ny English,nor does Li Ming.I hardly know any English,nor/neither does Li Ming.I hardly know any English,no more does Li Ming.I hardly know any English,so it is with Li Ming.I know no more English than Li Ming does.I know as little English as Li Ming does.一到家，我就把所见到的一切都记了下一到家，我就把所见到的一切都记了下来。来。On/Upo

8、n arriving home,I wrote downeverything I had seen.As soon as I arrived home,I wrote As soon as I arrived home,I wrote down everything I had seen.down everything I had seen.As soon as I arrived home,I As soon as I arrived home,I wrote down everything I had wrote down everything I had seen.seen.The in

9、stant I arrived home,I wrote down everything I had seen.No sooner had I arrived home thanI wrote down everything I had seen 昨天下午他才来昨天下午他才来 He came here yesterday afternoon.He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon.Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.It was yesterday afternoon that he a

10、rrived here.It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here.谋篇的原则谋篇的原则：满分作文都有个共性满分作文都有个共性,就是有效地使就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。文章的构紧凑。文章的连贯性连贯性和和紧凑感紧凑感是是很重要的。句子作为最小的表达意很重要的。句子作为最小的表达意思的语言当位思的语言当位,如果只是被随意的整如果只是被随意的整合，是无法达到有效表达的目的。合，是无法达到有效表达的目的。常见的句子之间的连接手段有：常见的句子之间的连接手段有：使用代词指代上一句中的名

11、词使用代词指代上一句中的名词 重复使用上一句中的词重复使用上一句中的词 使用连接词使用连接词 使用平行结构使用平行结构 高考大纲中常用的连接词高考大纲中常用的连接词:表并列补充关系的表并列补充关系的:what is more,besides,also,as well,moreover,furthermore,in addition,表因果关系的表因果关系的:since,as,because(of),for,so,thus,therefore,as a result,so that,表条件关系的表条件关系的:if,on the condition(that),as long as,unless,

12、or else,表转折对比关系的表转折对比关系的:but,however,yet,instead,on the other hand,on the contrary,although,different from,in contrast to,despite,in spite of,whereas,unlike,nevertheless,not onlybut also,herethere,years agotoday,thisthat,the formerthe latter,thennow,the firstwhereas the second,oncenow,on one handon

13、the other hand,some,others 表时间关系的表时间关系的:when,after,before,until,as soon as,later,afterwards,soon,lately,recently,since,from then on,eventually,in the meantime,then,suddenly,at the same time,next,early this morning/year/century,after an interval,now,after,presently,later,afterward,somewhat later,fina

14、lly,at last,all of a sudden,表换一种方式表达表换一种方式表达:in other words,that is to say,to put it another way,表进行举例说明表进行举例说明:for instance,for example,like,such as,表陈述事实表陈述事实:in fact,actually,as a matter of fact,to tell you the truth 表特定的顺序关系表特定的顺序关系:above all,first of all,firstly,secondlynext,finally,in the end,

15、at last 表总结表总结:on the whole,in short,all in all,at last,in a word范文范文假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫，一直通过有关网站关注三假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫，一直通过有关网站关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳苏琳”和她的和她的母亲母亲“白云白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：动物园工作人员写一封信：1.自我介绍；自我介绍；2.祝贺苏琳生日；祝贺苏琳生日；3.感谢工作人员；感谢工作人员；4.索取苏琳三岁生日照。索取苏琳三岁生

16、日照。注意；注意；1.词数词数120-150左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。开头语已为你写好。Dear Sir/Madam,Yours truly,Li HuaDear Sir/Madam,Greetings from China!Im Li Hua,a student in Sichuan.Ive been a panda lover since I was a child.About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to he

17、r daughter Sulin and Ive been watching her grow on your website.Now shes going to be three.Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work,because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way,could I have a photo of S

18、ulin taken on her third birthday?Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly,Li HuaDear Sir/Madam,My name is Li Hua,and Im a middle school student from Shanghai.I have loved pandas deeply since my childhood.Im delighted to learn that Sulin was born at your zoo and Ive been learning everything about h

19、er and her mother Baiyun from your website for about three years.Now she will be three years old.I want to wish her a happy birthday and give my thanks to you for your hard work,without which Sulin and her parents wouldnt live a happy life in the US now.Id like to have a picture of Sulin,which is ta

20、ken on her birthday.Could you help me?Im looking forward to your early reply.Thanks a lot.Yours truly Li HuaHomework:Directions:Write an English composition in120-150 words according to the instructionsgiven below in Chinese.假定你是李华。假定你是李华。你购买了一部某外国公司你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，有质量问题。请你写一生产的手机，有质量问题。请你写一封信，要求该公司更换。封信，要求该公司更换。