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1、1.He had a good health./His health is very well.2.He is a chemical doctor.3.During he was in Shanghai University studying chemistry,Please correct the mistakes in the following sentences:He is in good health./He is healthy/He has a strong body.He is a doctor of chemistry.When he was in Shanghai4.He

2、was studying in Jiazhou university since 1996.5.After graduated from middle school,he entered Shanghai University.He has studied in California University since 1996.After graduating/Having graduated from middle school,he entered Shanghai University.6.He will come back homeland at early Summer next y

3、ear.7.I take pleasure in recommending my friend,which named Ouyang Heng,is now studying in California University.He will come back/return to his homeland/motherland early next summer.my friend,Ouyang Heng,who is now studying in California University.1.In 1992,he graduated from No.4 High School and t

4、hen entered Shanghai University to study chemistry.After 4 years of hard work there,he went to the US for further study.2.In 1992,he was admitted to Shanghai University as a chemistry student.At 21,he left for California to receive further education.Enjoy it!3.Because of 4 years of hard work,he can

5、go to the US for further study.4.After graduating from LuXun elementary school,he went on studying in Shanghai No4 Middle School where he was good at maths5.He took great interest in literature.As a middle school student he was good at mathematics1990 20021990 2002年高考书面表达题回顾年高考书面表达题回顾体体 裁裁 内内 容容 历年书

6、面表达历年书面表达 应用文应用文 书书 信（便条）信（便条）通通 知（口头书面）知（口头书面）记叙文记叙文介介 绍绍人人 物物事事 件件日日 记记故事或经历故事或经历95,99,2001 20029491,96200092,9893，97 怎怎样才算是一篇好的才算是一篇好的书面表达呢？除了面表达呢？除了要点齐全要点齐全句子正确句子正确外，外，还有两个有两个非常关键之非常关键之处。首先是处。首先是行文连贯行文连贯，运用恰当的连接词使，运用恰当的连接词使文章结构严密具有较强的逻辑性，上下文连文章结构严密具有较强的逻辑性，上下文连贯。贯。其次，考生应该其次，考生应该从用词造句角度多下工从用词造句角度

7、多下工夫夫。从词语上，尽可能运用已经学过的而且。从词语上，尽可能运用已经学过的而且比较熟悉的词组、短语或成语；从句式上，比较熟悉的词组、短语或成语；从句式上，力求变换各种句式；尝试用多种方法翻译，力求变换各种句式；尝试用多种方法翻译，然后找出一个最佳表达。然后找出一个最佳表达。书面表达注意事项书面表达注意事项1.适当运用过渡词语适当运用过渡词语、从句和关联词：、从句和关联词：and,but,so,however,therefore,them,thus,after a while,suddenly,at last,as a result,in fact 等等,使句子使句子 更为流畅。更为流畅。T

8、he police searched everywhere.The missing boy could not be found.His dog could not be found.Although the police searched everywhere,neither the missing boy nor his dog could be found.Chaplin directed a large number of films.Most of them were silent.Fares have increased.The railway company is still l

9、osing money.The employees have demanded higher wages.Chaplin directed a large number of films,most of which were silent.In spite of the fact that fares have increased,the railway company is still losing money because the employees have demanded higher wages.Titanic sailed for New York from Southampt

10、on on April 10th,1912.She was carrying 1316 passengers and a crew of 891.She was the largest ship that had ever been built.She was regarded as unsinkable.Titanic sailed for New York from Southampton on April 10th,1912,carrying 1316 passengers and a crew of 891.At that time,she was not only the large

11、st ship that had ever been built but was regarded as unsinkable.2.学会用不同的句式表达同样的意思，避免自学会用不同的句式表达同样的意思，避免自己不熟悉的词汇和句型。己不熟悉的词汇和句型。1）两天后他就要过生日了。）两天后他就要过生日了。His birthday is two days away.His birthday is in two days.His birthday is in two days time.It will be two days before he celebrates his birthday.2）我碰

12、巧遇见他的叔叔。）我碰巧遇见他的叔叔。I happened to meet his uncle.I chanced to see his uncle.I met with his uncle.I came across his uncle.I ran across his uncle.It(so)happened that I saw his uncle.3)他昨天下午他昨天下午5点才来到这里。点才来到这里。He came here at 5 pm.yesterday.He did not come here until 5 pm.yesterday.Not until/till 5 pm.d

13、id he come here yesterday.It was not until/till 5 pm.that he came here yesterday.1.I like sports.I like music,too.2.I like sports,and music _ _.I like sports _ _ _ music.I like _ _ sports _ _ music.2.They left India in May.They went to Sydney._ _ India in May,they went to._ _ India in May,they went

14、to _ _ _ India in May,they went to.as wellas well asnot only but also After leaving Having leftAfter they left3.As soon as they arrived at the farm,they were welcomed by the farmers._ _ at the farm,they were welcomed by the farmers._ _they arrived at the farm,they were welcomed by the farmers._ they

15、 arrived at the farm,they were welcomed by the farmers._ had they arrived at the farm _ they were welcomed by the farmers.On arrivingThe momentImmediatelyHardly when4.She is so weak that she cant lift the leather suitcase.She is _ _ _ _that she cant lift the leather suitcase.She is _ _ _ _that she c

16、ant lift the leather suitcase.She is _ weak _ lift the leather suitcase.She is _ _ enough _ _ the leather suitcase.so weak a girlsuch a weak girltoo tonot strong to lift5.She had to give up teaching because she was in poor health.She had to give up teaching_ _ _ _ _._ _ why she had to give up teachi

17、ng _ _ she was in poor health.She was in poor health._ _ she had to give up teaching.because ofher poor healthThe reasonwas thatThats why3.留心汉英表达差异留心汉英表达差异,避免中式英语。避免中式英语。1)父母对我们期望很高。父母对我们期望很高。2)高考高考3)二班在篮球比赛中赢了一班。二班在篮球比赛中赢了一班。Our parents expect much of us.college entrance examination/testClass Two b

18、eat/defeated Class One in the basketball match.4)体育用品齐全。体育用品齐全。The PE tools are full.5)他健壮如牛。他健壮如牛。He is as strong as a cow.6)只有一间危房作教室。只有一间危房作教室。There was only a danger room as the classroom.all kinds of sports equipment are provided.He is strong like a horse(as strong as a horse).The only dangerou

19、s room had to be used as a classroom.（以（以2000年高考题为例）年高考题为例）假设你是李华，在美国探亲。假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年年2月月8日清晨，你日清晨，你目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。请根据下列图画写出所见情况。请根据下列图画写出报告报告。Picture 1:an old man walked out of the park.Picture 2:a car turned right and ran towards him.Picture 3:the car kno

20、cked down the old man.Picture 4:the driver drove away.What is each picture about?Please write it down using one simple sentence.It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8,2000.I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the City Park on the other side of the street.I

21、 saw a yellow car drive up third Street and make a right turn into Park Road.The car hit the man while he was crossing the road.He fell with a cry.The car didnt stop but drove off at great speed heading west.I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864.Right at that moment,T

22、o my surprise/Whats worse,Before we realized it,It was on the morning of Feb 8th,2000 that the accident happened.When I was walking along the Park Road,I saw an old man stepping out of the City Park.At 7:15 AM on Feb,8th,2000,I was heading east down the Park Road.An old man was on the other side of

23、the road outside the gate of the City Park.He was about to cross the street.At 7：15 on the morning of Feb.8.2000，I was footing eastward along the Park Road when I noticed an old man coming out of the City Park and was trying to cross the street.Suddenly a car was running fast along the 3 rd Street w

24、hen it was turning west.At the same time the old man walked there.Suddenly,a yellow car,which had come down the 3rd Street,turned sharply right at the corner into the Park Road.He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing.The car was so fast t

25、hat the old man even didnt have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.The driver couldnt stop her car and the old man was knocked down.It was driving so fast that neither the driver nor the old man was able to react effectively.I thought the driver would stop to help but she didnt.Instead,s

26、he just drove off,leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain.Fortunately,I noted down the plate number of the yellow car:AC864.But the woman driver escaped,leaving the man lying on the road.I ran to him and saw that the car was yellow and its number was AC864.Regretfully,the woman driver did not stop to look after him but fled as quickly as possible.Rushing forward,I managed to take down the plate number,which was AC864.