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1、英语写作的策略英语写作的策略英语写作的策略英语写作的策略1 12 23 34 4英语写作归类英语写作归类英语写作归类英语写作归类英语写作技巧及如何评分英语写作技巧及如何评分英语写作技巧及如何评分英语写作技巧及如何评分英语写作范例英语写作范例英语写作范例英语写作范例主要内容主要内容主要内容主要内容写作策略写作策略A.A.审好标题，仔细推敲提纲思路，确定提纲所隐审好标题，仔细推敲提纲思路，确定提纲所隐含的文章主题，不要遗漏甚至违背提纲规范的文含的文章主题，不要遗漏甚至违背提纲规范的文章要求。章要求。B.B.充分利用提纲信息写好每段的主题句，主题句充分利用提纲信息写好每段的主题句，主题句应紧扣主题。

2、应紧扣主题。C.C.根据标题、提纲和主题句选择与其关系最密切、根据标题、提纲和主题句选择与其关系最密切、最具说服力且最容易表达的最具说服力且最容易表达的 细节。例子等，围细节。例子等，围绕主题句进行扩展。绕主题句进行扩展。写作归类写作归类1.1.日常活动、主要工作、社交生活日常活动、主要工作、社交生活 2.2.童年的梦想、目前的情况、对未来的希望童年的梦想、目前的情况、对未来的希望 3.3.事件发生的时间和地点、人物、事件的经事件发生的时间和地点、人物、事件的经 过过 4.4.自主学习与远程教育、自主学习与合作学习、自主学习与远程教育、自主学习与合作学习、你自己的学习情况你自己的学习情况 5.

3、5.有一种观点认为：城市生活比乡村生活好、你有一种观点认为：城市生活比乡村生活好、你对这种观点的看法、你的结论对这种观点的看法、你的结论 写作归类写作归类6.6.保持身体健康的重要性、方法、意义保持身体健康的重要性、方法、意义 7.7.最喜欢的交通方式、理由、结论最喜欢的交通方式、理由、结论 8.8.你家的位置、房间的功能、表达对家具条件的你家的位置、房间的功能、表达对家具条件的态度态度 9.9.喜欢的电视节目、理由、结论喜欢的电视节目、理由、结论 10.10.理想的工作是什么、理由、如何实现理想理想的工作是什么、理由、如何实现理想 作文应试九大技巧作文应试九大技巧如何谴词如何谴词 词汇是语言

4、的最小单位，准确恰当的词汇使词汇是语言的最小单位，准确恰当的词汇使用是写好一篇英语文章的关键。用是写好一篇英语文章的关键。如何造句如何造句 句子是文章思想表达的基本单位，写好句子句子是文章思想表达的基本单位，写好句子是写作的基本功，必须多加练习。是写作的基本功，必须多加练习。如何写段落如何写段落 段落是文章的组成要件，它本身又是一组围段落是文章的组成要件，它本身又是一组围绕并发展段落主题的意义密切关联的句子所组成绕并发展段落主题的意义密切关联的句子所组成的整体。一个段落表达一个完整的主题。的整体。一个段落表达一个完整的主题。如何谋篇布局如何谋篇布局 所谓三段十二句作文法是指一篇作文一般由所谓三

5、段十二句作文法是指一篇作文一般由三段共十二句话组成，即开头段（三段共十二句话组成，即开头段（2-32-3句）、中句）、中间段（间段（6-86-8句）和结尾段（句）和结尾段（2-32-3句）。句）。如何审题如何审题 审题是写好作文至关重要的第一步，必须慎审题是写好作文至关重要的第一步，必须慎重对待。重对待。如何构思如何构思 在通过审题能清题目要求之后，需要构思的在通过审题能清题目要求之后，需要构思的过程来对如何按照要求形成文章做一个通盘的考过程来对如何按照要求形成文章做一个通盘的考虑。虑。如何写提纲如何写提纲 写提纲的时间可控制在写提纲的时间可控制在5分钟左右分钟左右检查修改检查修改 完成正文写

6、作后，若有时间，应对文章进行完成正文写作后，若有时间，应对文章进行仔细检查与修改。仔细检查与修改。时间分配时间分配 可根据个人情况而定可根据个人情况而定评分原则评分原则1.1.考试作文题采用总体评分方法。阅卷人员就总的考试作文题采用总体评分方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣印象给出奖励分，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。分。2.2.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达

7、。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言英语清楚而适切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。评分标准评分标准13-1513-15切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。10-12-10-12-切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，但有少量语言切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，但有少量语言错误。错误。7-97-9基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强基

8、本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。4-64-6基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。严重语言错误。1-31-3条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。均有错误，且多数为严重错误。My Family There are five people in my family.Father,mother,brother,sister and I.My fater is a

9、 worker,he worked very hard.My mother is 60 years old.She is a teacher in 113 middle school.My brother is football player.He often plays the match with his team in Beijing.My sister is a student.She study very well.She always help her classmate to study English.I worked in bank of China.I love this

10、job.I belive I can do better in very day.My family is a lovely family.I love every one in my Family.写作范例My Ideal Job People have different ideal jobs.Some want to be doctors,some want to be teachers,and some want to be engineers.My ideal job is teaching.Firstly,I like children very much.I would like

11、 to sing,to dance,and to play with them.Secondly,a teacher has two vacations each year.I can enjoy myself during the summer and winter holidays.Finally,I want to teach the students all that I know and help them to develop their potential so that they can work better for our country in the future.In

12、order to be a good teacher,I will study hard not only in class,but also in daily life.I will train my patience,improve my handwriting,and enlarge my knowledge In a word,I will study harder than ever to prepare for my future teaching job.How to Keep Healthy Nowadays more and more people are concerned

13、 about their health,but how to keep healthy?First,it is necessary to take some exercise every day.Research shows that getting plenty of exercise makes the heart beat faster and the lungs work harder.Second,eat more fruits,vegetables and less meat.Third,getting rid of bad habits like smoking and drin

14、king is also an important way to keep healthy.Smoking and alcohol drinking injure ones health a great deal,and therefore should be given up.How to Keep Fit It is obvious that we should keep fit.On one hand,good health enables you to work more attentively and enjoy your life.On the other hand,poor he

15、alth will deprive you of the right to have a good time and you may lose many chances to enjoy yourself.There are many remarkable ways to keep your health.First of all,we should exercise everyday.We can get up a little earlier in the morning to have a jog in the garden.We can also have a walk after s

16、upper.They are very helpful to our health.Whats more,we have to give up bad habits that are harmful to our health,such as smoking.Thirdly,we have to go on a diet sometimes or to have meals more regularly.Personally,I think health is of great importance to us.So we will develop good habits to keep ou

17、rselves healthy.My Plan for the Spring Festival Spring Festival is the most important festival for Chinese people.Many people will prepare many things for the Spring Festival.Now this is my plan for the Spring Festival.First,I will visit my friends and my relatives.Second,I will make a big snow man

18、with my daughter/son and my wife/husband/friend.Third,I will stay with my parents,because I have no more time to stay with them when I am at work.This is my plan for the spring festival.I hope all of you have a good time in the Spring Festival.My Travel Plan选择一个你想旅游的地点，并安排旅行计划。你应包括下列内容：选择一个你想旅游的地点，并

19、安排旅行计划。你应包括下列内容：1.1.说明你想旅游的地点；说明你想旅游的地点；2.2.说明你为什么选择这个地点；说明你为什么选择这个地点；3.3.描述你的旅行计划。描述你的旅行计划。Dear Amy,I plan to make a journey to Jiu Zhaigou in Sichuan province.Its a beautiful place with fresh air,beautiful natural scenery like waterfall,lake and high mountains.Because many films and TV series have

20、 been made there,it is very famous.Whats more,I am very busy and exhausted this year,so I want to go for a relaxation.I plan to stay there for a week and travel with a tour group.I believe I will enjoy myself there.Regards Yours ever TimMy Dream My dream is to be an English teacher one day.Firstly,I

21、 like children very much.I would like to sing,to dance,and to play with them.Secondly,a teacher has two vacations each year.I can enjoy myself during the summer and winter holidays.Finally,I want to teach the students all I know and help them to explore their potential so that they can work better f

22、or our country in the future.In order to be a good teacher,I will train my patience,improve my handwriting,and enrich my knowledge.In a word,I will study harder than ever to prepare for my future teaching job.City Life or Country Life Some people believe that city life is better than country life.I

23、dont agree with this.City life can be convenient to us in many aspects.For example,you can move around easily,shopping can be more fun in a big shopping mall and you can enjoy a more colorful nightlife.But there are also many disadvantages.It is much nosier than in the country.Air pollution is more

24、serious.It is not easy to park your car.It costs more to live in city.To name but a few is enough.Therefore,I prefer country life.My Favorite Means of Transportation In a modern city,there are many means of transportation,such as subway,taxi,bus and so on.But my favorite means of transportation is b

25、y bike.First,riding a bike is good for keeping healthy.I spend one hour riding a bike to my office on my working day,and I think it is a good form of physical exercise.Secondly,it is money-saving.Recently,the private car drivers always complain the price of gas is higher and higher,but if you ride a

26、 bike,it will cost you nothing.Thirdly,it is beneficial for protecting the environment,so it is a“green”form of transportation.Therefore,although it has some disadvantages,I like riding a bike best.On Self-study Autonomous learning is an important learning style in distance education.It is an essent

27、ial skill for distance learners because they study alone most of the time.They do not meet their tutors or classmates very often.However,distance learners can learn a lot from each other.So autonomous learning and collaborative learning go hand in hand.I am a distance learner.I have to do most learn

28、ing tasks by myself.Meanwhile we have group activities every two weeks to complete some learning tasks or share experiences.I have found both forms of learning very helpful.英语作文范例作文1（日常活动、主要工作、社交生活）Dear Bob,Ill tell you something above my daily life in this email and hope you will find it interestin

29、g.I usually get up early and go to work at 8 o clock.I have lunch in the office.And I come back home at six.As a secretary,I deal with phone calls,emails and faxes during work hours.I also do the paper work for the manager.After work,I like to do shopping with friends or watch TV at home.Sometimes,I

30、 also like to chat on the Internet.Best regards,英语作文范例作文2（童年的梦想、目前的情况、对未来的希望）Dear Jennifer,Thank you for telling me about yourself.Id like to let you know more about me too.As a child,I wanted to be a detective.I thought a detective was really great because he could solve criminal cases to do justic

31、e.But my dream never came true.Im now a librarian,dealing with books every day.The work is nothing thrilling,but I like it.Since there are more and more electronic materials,I hope that we have an e-library built soon.Looking forward to hearing from you again.Best wishes,Lan英语作文范例作文3（事件发生的时间和地点、人物、事

32、件的经过）One day last week,a girl parked her car outside a fashion house.As soon as she was inside,two men opened the car door,started the engine and drove away in just one minute.There was a police patrol car nearby.So the girl got in the police car and they drove in the direction where the thieves esc

33、aped.Twenty minutes later,they found the car waiting at a busy crossroad for the traffic lights to turn green.Needless to say,the car thieves were caught red-handed.英语作文范例作文4（自主学习与远程教育、自主学习与合作学习、你自己的学习情况）Autonomous learning is an important learning style in distance education.It is an essential skil

34、l for distance learners because they study alone most of the time.They do not meet their tutors or classmates very often.However,distance learners can learn a lot from each other.So autonomous learning and collaborative learning go hand in hand.I am a distance learner.I have to do most learning task

35、s by myself.Meanwhile we have group activities every two weeks to complete some learning tasks or share experiences.I have found both forms of learning very helpful.英语作文范例作文5（有一种观点认为：城市生活比乡村生活好、你对这种观点的看法、你的结论）Some people believe that town life is better than country life.I dont agree with this.Town

36、life can be convenient to us in many aspects.For example,you can move around easily,shopping can be more fun in a big shopping mall and you can enjoy a more colorful nightlife.But there are also many disadvantages.It is much nosier than in the country.Air pollution is more serious.It is not easy to

37、park your car.It costs more to live in town.To name but a few is enough.Therefore,I prefer country life.英语作文范例作文6（保持身体健康的重要性、方法、意义）Nowadays,more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy.Without a healthy body,we can do nothing.For me,there main ways to keep healthy.First,it necessary t

38、o keep a balanced diet,which is the basis of good health.It is better for us to have more fruit and exercises everyday.Secondly,it is important to take regular exercises,such as swimming,jogging and so on.Last but not least,it is essential to keep in a good mood.Relaxation and entertainment are ways

39、 to renew our spirits and release our stress.When we make healthy habits a part of our everyday life,we are bound to keep healthy.英语作文范例作文7（最喜欢的交通方式、理由、结论）In a modern city,there are many means of transportation,such as subway,taxi,bus and so on.But my favorite means of transportation is by bike.Firs

40、t,riding a bike is good for keeping healthy.I spend one hour riding a bike to my office on my working day,and I think it is a good form of physical exercise.Secondly,it is money-saving.Recently,the private car drivers always complain the price of gas is higher and higher,but if you ride a bike,it wi

41、ll cost you nothing.Thirdly,it is beneficial for protecting the environment,so it is a“green”form of transportation.Therefore,although it has some disadvantages,I like riding a bike best.英语作文范例作文8（你家的位置、房间的功能、表达对家具条件的态度）My home is a newly-built house in the north of the city.We have three rooms in a

42、ddition to the kitchen and bathroom.The first room is the main room or living room.It is for having meals,relaxing,reading,watching television and so on.It is the busiest room in the house.The second room is my daughters bedroom.She sleeps and dresses there.The third room belongs to my wife and me.I

43、t seems quite spacious because we have little furniture.We sleep,prepare lessons and generally relax there.I think home is cozy and I like my home.英语作文范例作文9（喜欢的电视节目、理由、结论）CCTV today offers a great variety of programmers to meet different need and tastes.For example,the weather forecast,serials,films

44、,sports and so on.My favorite TV programmers,however,is the news.There are several points that are worth mentioning.For one thing,it covers news about important events both at home and abroad.Besides the news it provides is timely and reliable.Finally,it broadcasts in the evening during the so-calle

45、d“golden time”.It saves me much time reading through news-papers for current affairs.In short,watching the news on CCTV has become part of my daily life.英语作文范例作文10（理想的工作是什么、理由、如何实现理想）Everybody has his dream for his career in the future.He or she might want to be a teacher,a doctor,a scientist,a spor

46、tsperson and so on.To tell you the truth,my ideal job is in business.The idea came into being when I was a child.With the development of market economy,there are many prosperous opportunities in business.I like reading stories about some successful businessmen such as Bill Gates,Li Jiacheng,etc.I believe I will be a man like them some day.Now,I am majoring in Computering.I must study hard to get myself qualified for my future job.