2019年度中考.英语示例作文评分标准.doc

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1、英语作文评分标准英语作文评分标准评分原则评分原则：1. 总分 15 分，按 5 个档次给分。中档属于第三档（7-9 分）。 2. 评分时，先跟据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要 求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3. 总词数不足的，可在本题总得分中扣去 1 分。 4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和正确 性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。各要素的权重大体为：卷面书写（1 分），内容 9 分（其中要点 5 分，语意连贯 4 分），语法结构、单词拼写、 标点（4 分），词数（1 分）。 5. 拼写与标点符号是语言正确性的一个方面，评分时应视其

2、对交际的影响程度 予以考虑。【各档次的给分范围和要求各档次的给分范围和要求】第一档（13-15 分）：写出全部内容要点，语句流畅。基本无语法和词汇方面 的错误，少数错误主要是由于较高级词汇或复杂结构所致。词数达到要求。基 本无单词拼写及标点错误。 第二档（10-12 分）：写出大部分要点类容。语句较流畅。有少量语法和词汇 方面的错误，但不影响理解。有少量单词拼写及标点错误。 第三档（7-9 分）：写出部分要点。语句基本通顺。有一些语法和词汇错误， 有少量单词及标点错误。 第四档（4-6 分）：写出少量内容要点，语句不通顺。语法、词汇、单词拼写、 标点错误较多。只有少量句子表达正确。 第五档（0

3、-3 分）：基本上没有写出内容要点，语法、词汇、单词拼写错误较 多。基本上没有通顺的句子。只写出一些单词，不知所云。 【说明说明】 1、要点可用不同方式表达。 2、对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。 凡不写任何内容，抄袭、所写内容无法看清者一律给 0 分。2016 河南中考英语作文预测河南中考英语作文预测 (一）一） 1 每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程，从幼稚走向成熟，从逆境走向成功。每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程，从幼稚走向成熟，从逆境走向成功。 请你用英语写一篇请你用英语写一篇 80 词以上的短文，谈谈你在成长过程中所经历的最大的一次词以上的短文，谈谈你在成长过程中所经历的最大的一次 蜕变。内

4、容要求：蜕变。内容要求：1.变化前后分别是什么样子的？变化前后分别是什么样子的？2.促成你转变的主要原因是什促成你转变的主要原因是什 么？么？3.你为变化而付出了怎样的努力？注意：短文中不允许出现与考生本人相你为变化而付出了怎样的努力？注意：短文中不允许出现与考生本人相 关的真实姓名和校名等信息。关的真实姓名和校名等信息。I used to be a naughty boy and my mother used to be angry with me. Now Id like to say Ive changed a lot. In fact, It is because of my moth

5、ers diaries.One day I saw my mothers diary book by accident while I was looking for my notebook. I was surprised and began to read my mothers diaries. In her diaries, she showed her deep love for me. She also expressed her disappointment when I made mistakes. She said she loved me so much and she be

6、lieved I could be a good boy. I couldnt help crying after reading my mothers diaries.Since that day, I have changed a lot. I work hard and share some housework. I ll try to understand my mothers feelings. 2 .最近，你们班就最近，你们班就“幸福是什么幸福是什么”进行了一次讨论，学生们发表了自己的看法，进行了一次讨论，学生们发表了自己的看法， 他们认为：他们认为：1. 认真学习是幸福，父母总是

7、关心他们的生活与健康，是幸福认真学习是幸福，父母总是关心他们的生活与健康，是幸福 2. 有有 时当他们做错了事，周围的人会帮助他们改正，他们感到幸福。时当他们做错了事，周围的人会帮助他们改正，他们感到幸福。3. 你同意同学你同意同学 们的看法，你认为当你做们的看法，你认为当你做你也会感到幸福。要求：你也会感到幸福。要求：第三要点的内容需用第三要点的内容需用 三到四句话展开合理想象，进行适当发挥；三到四句话展开合理想象，进行适当发挥；词数词数 80 左右，开头与结尾已给出，左右，开头与结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。不计入总词数。 Happiness is for everyone. Some st

8、udents think happiness comes from studying hard at their lessons. Their parents are always taking good care of their life and their health. They feel happy.Some students say when they do something wrong, people around them will help them to correct it. They believe this is happiness. I agree with th

9、em. I love my friends congratulating me when I enjoy success. When I do something kind to others, like congratulating them, I feel happy, too.When we think of these things, we realize that happiness is all around us. 3. “安全你我他，幸福千万家安全你我他，幸福千万家”，关爱生命，确保平安，让我们的生活更加幸，关爱生命，确保平安，让我们的生活更加幸 福安康。请以福安康。请以“Ke

10、eping safe_ (at home/ at school /on the road)为题写为题写 一篇一篇 80 词左右的英语短文。词左右的英语短文。 要求：补全标题：条理清晰，语言流畅；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。内容要求：补全标题：条理清晰，语言流畅；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。内容 包括：包括： (1) Is it important to keep safe.?(2) Why do you think so?, (3)How can you besafe.? Keeping safe at school Its important for us to keep safe at s

11、chool and it will make us study better and live m ore happily. In order to keep safe at school, we must do like these.First, be in order when we are going upst airs or downstairs. Second, make sure to be safe when we are doing sports. Try not to be hurt. Third, know about some knowledge of safety. I

12、ts helpful to us.If we follow the advice, well make ourselves safe at school. 4. 醉酒驾车，已经成为严重的社会问题，越来越受到人们的关注，根据下面提醉酒驾车，已经成为严重的社会问题，越来越受到人们的关注，根据下面提 示，写一篇示，写一篇 80 词左右的短文，谈谈你的看法。词左右的短文，谈谈你的看法。 现现 象象许多人不遵守交通规则，仍酒后驾车，对自己和他人的安全不负责任许多人不遵守交通规则，仍酒后驾车，对自己和他人的安全不负责任后后 果果因为酒后驾车，给自己和他人和很多家庭带来伤害因为酒后驾车，给自己和他人和很多家

13、庭带来伤害建建 议议为了自己和他人的安全，呼吁司机不要酒后驾车，呼吁更多严格的规则为了自己和他人的安全，呼吁司机不要酒后驾车，呼吁更多严格的规则 和制度出台和制度出台 提示词：酒后驾车提示词：酒后驾车 drunk driving 不负责的不负责的 irresponsible 交通事故交通事故traffic accident 对对造成伤害造成伤害 do harm toEveryone should obey the traffic rules. Yet there are still many people drunk driving.Its irresponsible(不负责任的) not o

14、nly to the drivers themselves but also the others. Many drivers drive very fast in the street, or even in the crowded traffic while they are drunk. Drunk drivers caused a lot of accidents. Thousands of people were killed and many more were injured every year. In order to keep the public safe, we sho

15、uldntdrunk drive. We must obey the traffic rules. If you drink too much, you shouldnt drive by yourself. Youd better take a taxi or ask others for help. The government is supposed to make more serious rules and laws as soon as possible. 5. Keep HealthyEvery one wants to keep healthy today, especiall

16、y our students. But we dont pay attention to our health. Some of them go to school without breakfast in the mornin g. Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day, especially at weekends. Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke. It is important for us to have good habits. We

17、 should eat breakfast every morning. We can watch TV or play games for a short time, then have a rest. We also can take part in some clubs. I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy. 6. 以以“I want to do something for my school（我想为学校做一件事）（我想为学校做一件事） ” 为题写为题写 篇不少于篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。个词的短文，标点符号不占

18、格。 ） （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓 名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ） I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I dont think so. Our teacher said, “School is your home, you should keep it clean. “But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have

19、never told my classmates to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We wi

20、ll make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple? 7. 全国实施公共场所禁烟规定，针对这一话题，某中学对该校学生的吸烟情况全国实施公共场所禁烟规定，针对这一话题，某中学对该校学生的吸烟情况 进行了一次调查，结果如图所示。请就此话题用英语写一篇短文。进行了一次调查，结果如图所示。请就此话题用英语写一篇短文。 要求：要求：1. 对调查结果进行描述；对调查结果进行描述；2表明自己的看法并提出建议；表明自己的看法并提出建议；3词数在词数在 80 左右。左右。提示词提示词: do

21、a survey about(做一个有关做一个有关的调查的调查)3% of the students (百分之三的学生百分之三的学生)A survey about smokers in a middle school tells that although 90% of all students never smoke, 3% of them often smoke and 7% sometimes do. In other words, 10% of the students smoke. Thats terrible.As we know, smoking is harmful to ou

22、r health. Every year, thousands of people lose their lives because of it. Smoking not only does harm to your health, but also wastes money. Because, a fire may be caused by cigarette ends. Its a pity to learn that one ends in death by smoking.In short, smoking is so dangerous that we should keep awa

23、y from it. 8. 目前，越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教。对于这一目前，越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教。对于这一现象，存在两种不同观点：现象，存在两种不同观点： 有些人认为有必要有些人认为有必要 另一些人认为没有必要另一些人认为没有必要 跟老师学比自己学好跟老师学比自己学好 可以巩固课堂所学内容可以巩固课堂所学内容 可以学到更多的东西可以学到更多的东西 容易养成依赖习惯容易养成依赖习惯 学生需要时间休息学生需要时间休息 请您根据以上提示，以请您根据以上提示，以 Is a Training Class of Family Teacher Neces

24、sary ?为题，为题， 写一篇写一篇 120 词左右的短文，反映表中内容，并简要阐述自己的观点。文章开头词左右的短文，反映表中内容，并简要阐述自己的观点。文章开头 已给出，已给出， 不计入总字数。不计入总字数。 要求：层次清晰，连贯流畅；表达灵活，不要逐字逐句翻译。要求：层次清晰，连贯流畅；表达灵活，不要逐字逐句翻译。 参考词汇：巩固参考词汇：巩固 strengthen；Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary? More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of

25、training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it._ _ _ _ 【参考范文】Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at weekend. There are two dif

26、ferent viewpoints about it.Some thinks it necessary. Firstly, its more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly, it can strengthen what we learnt in class. Besides, they can learn a lot more. Others think it unnecessary. For one thing, students can easily form the habit of depe

27、ndence. For another, students need time to relax from time to time. In my opinion, whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe its OK for you. But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, o

28、therwise it would be a waste of time and money. 9. 最近，你班同学就最近，你班同学就“父母是不是最好的老师父母是不是最好的老师”这一话题展开了讨论。有些人这一话题展开了讨论。有些人 认为父母是最好的老师，有些人认为也不尽然。请根据下表提示，写一篇短文认为父母是最好的老师，有些人认为也不尽然。请根据下表提示，写一篇短文 介绍讨论结果以及你的个人观点。介绍讨论结果以及你的个人观点。 观点观点 原因原因 同意同意 不完全同意不完全同意 1 教会如何生活教会如何生活 过分溺爱过分溺爱 2 指出缺点，指明方向指出缺点，指明方向 强加兴趣、价值观强加兴趣、

29、价值观 3 教会富有爱心教会富有爱心 希望值过高希望值过高 要求：要求：1、根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文通顺连贯；、根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文通顺连贯；2、词数、词数 110 左右；左右；3、开头已给出，不计入单词总数。、开头已给出，不计入单词总数。 【参考范文】Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers. Some students agree to the point because they think parents help to

30、point out their mistakes in their lives. They teach them a lot about how to live a meaningful life. Whats more, parents love helps to teach them how to love others. So parents are their most important teachers.However, not all of us hold the same views. Some think that their parents give them too mu

31、ch love, and they are too eager to pass on their values and interests to them. Moreover, their parents sometimes expect too much of them, which makes them feel their goals too difficult to reach.In my opinion, parents are our important teachers. But parents should also try to understand their childr

32、en more and limit the generation gap. 10. 新农村新农村-A New VillageYesterday we went to visit a village. On our way to the village, we were glad to see a lot of nice rice, vegetables and fruit in the fields. Also we saw new schools, factories and buildings.We got a warm welcome at the village. Some farme

33、rs invited us to their houses. They had moved to the new buildings. Their living room was large and bright. In it there were all kinds of new furniture. Nearly every family had color TV sets, fridges,washing machines and some of them even have bought motorbikes. Everyone had a smile on their faces.

34、It was said that some guests from a foreign country would come to visit it.We were very glad to find the farmers life had changed a lot. We hope their life will become better and better. 11. 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中为了更好地发现及解决同学们中 存在的心理压力问题存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以你们班特意开展了一次以“L

35、ess Pressure, Better Life“为主为主 题的英语演讲比赛题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分与同学分 享享,内容包括内容包括: 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么； 我的压力是什么；我的压力是什么； 我是如我是如 何成功缓解我的压力的。何成功缓解我的压力的。 注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 词数词数 80100；短文的开头已给；短文的开头已给 出出(不计入总词数不计入总词数)。Less Pressure, Better Life

36、Hello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. _ Thats all. Thank you! 参考范文: Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Som

37、e students cant get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.Im always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I wa

38、s not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.Thats all. Thank you! 12. 你心目中的好老师是什么样子的？一名受欢迎的老师应该有什么样的特点你心目中的好老师是什么样子的？一名受欢迎的老师应该有什么样的特点? 围绕这个主题，用英语写一篇围绕这个主题，用英语写一篇 80 词左右的短文。词左右的短文。

39、The Good Teacher in Your HeartFirstly, a teacher should be able to play different roles in school. He can care about us like a mother. He can give us knowledge. He can play games and discuss problems with us like a friend.Secondly, a teacher should be patient and helpful. When we are in trouble, he

40、can always help us patiently.Thirdly, a teacher should be fair. He should have the same rules for everybody.Fourthly, a teacher should be fun. He can make his class interesting and make us laugh. 13.爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李明，你们学校的爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李明，你们学校的 “English Garden”正在举办主题为正在举办主题为“付出即是收获付出即

41、是收获”的征文活动，请你联系自己的征文活动，请你联系自己 平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。要求：平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。要求：1.文中不得出现真实人名和校文中不得出现真实人名和校 名等相关信息。名等相关信息。2. 80100 词。标题和文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。词。标题和文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。Giving is Receiving I am a student from Green Middle School. My name is Li Ming. I like helping others because I think it makes me very hap

42、py. I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes I help clean up my house. I go to the old peoples home and do some cleaning for them once a month. I often visit the Childrens Hospital to cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I also help people in trouble. I

43、think giving is receiving. Helping others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me? 中考英语书面表达背诵范文中考英语书面表达背诵范文（二）（二）一、一、Great changes in my hometownMore than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didnt ha

44、ve enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life .Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The people have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive th

45、eir own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal computers. Peoples living conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to the governments efforts . My hometown is becoming more and more beautiful .二、二、Save the earthHow to protect the environment has become one of the biggest proble

46、ms in the world .Its our duty to protect our environment . No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy . We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste wa

47、ter into rivers, lakes and fields. We shouldnt leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places . We mustnt pick the flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better .三、三

48、、Improve our environmentGood environment can make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life . What should we do to improve our environment ?We should plant more trees . And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields . Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and