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1、PowerPoint Title主标题副标题 Im second Title主讲人 我是老师托福写作里语言的秘密Amber手把手教你托福作文（1）主讲人 晓卉老师小音托雅小音托雅主讲：托福、雅思写作MSc Language Teaching方晓卉 Amber词汇运用的五个层次Correct 正确性Appropriate 恰当性固定词组搭配Exact 精确性Idiomatic 地道性语境Interesting 趣味性用词多变c)Sentence structures are varied and complex,and the response displays good vocabulary

2、choice;these allow the writer to convey the meaning accurately.2)哪个是正确的排序？a)The writer uses a nice range of vocabulary and strives to make the essay flow by using appropriate transitions and sentence structures.Along with slightly less than full elaboration of points,errors in word choice and gramma

3、r do not interfere with meaning b)this response is marked by some errors in grammar and word choice,and some of these are very difficult to understandd)consistent and numerous errors in grammarA.acbdB.abcd C.cabdD.cadbScore 4:The writer uses a nice range of vocabulary and strives to make the essay f

4、low by using appropriate transitions and sentence structures.Along with slightly less than full elaboration of points,errors in word choice and grammar do not interfere with meaning(OG,p.452)“They can enjoy life because they do not need to care for earning,for rent and pay other utilities bills.”“Fi

5、nancial difficulties does not”Score 3:this response is marked by some errors in grammar and word choice,and some of these are very difficult to understand(OG,p.455)“so they have more envy to live their life,”“wide their mind”Score 2:consistent and numerous errors in grammar(OG,p.457)“What means exac

6、tly enjoy life?Everyone has its opinion about life.”“they must not going to supermarket after the work”“They make sports each week.”“They have not the same body.”3)托福独立写作对词汇的要求不一定需要？A.多变B.具体C.高级生僻D.合适Amber Amber 温馨总结：温馨总结：specificspecific同义转换&词性变换多积累地道的表达I am firmly convinced thatI am in favor of(th

7、e opinion that)I take the attitude thatI take the view thatbe of the opinion thatPeople in growing numbers are starting toThe number of people who regularly is on the riseare gaining in popularity nowadays.Smart phones,such as iPhone,are enjoying high popularity.很重要be of great importance/significanc

8、eplay an extremely important role and should be given priority2.必背神奇表达active/major/central/crucial/essential/integral/positive/prominent/vital/significant重视，关注pay considerable attention tolay/place emphasis on忽视了fail to take into account人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。2.必背神奇表达People seem to fail to take int

9、o account the fact that education does not end with graduation.引起、带来lead to/contribute to/give rise to/result in/bring about/result from/a contributing factor使2.必背神奇表达MAKE LET HAVE GETHowever,others think zoos should be closed,because they can makeanimals lose their natural instincts.The zoos open c

10、an also make the balance of the ecosystem,too much catch and hunt can cause wild animals are in a dying condition.The zoos can let children know more about animals and visit zoos can let them close to animals and learn how to protect them.动物园要不要被关闭2.必背神奇表达However,others think zoos should be closed,b

11、ecause they can makeanimals lose their natural instincts.Others,however,argue that zoos should be closed because they deprive the animals of their freedom.Other people,on the contrary,argue that keeping animals in cages will result in their lack of the ability to prey which is supposed to be their n

12、atural talent.动物园要不要被关闭2.必背神奇表达The zoos open can also make the balance of the ecosystem,too much catch and hunt can cause wild animals are in a dying condition.The zoos can let children know more about animals and visit zoos can let them close to animals and learn how to protect them.动物园要不要被关闭contri

13、bute toWhat is more,zoos are one of the best places for educating people how to live in a harmonious way with animals.For instance,people can gain knowledge about animals and appreciate the importance of animals when visiting the zoo.On the other hand,zoos allow the researchers and zoologists to stu

14、dy some animals and as a result,they can find better ways to protect them and help them proliferate.3.化腐朽为神奇之改作文Efficiency is what decided how much knowledge can a student learn.The nowadays technology helps a lot on that part too.Just like the electric book,it allows students to have all their book

15、s in one little electronic.It is so convenient to take,and so much faster to find the books.Just need to click on the one button,and you will get to the accurate page.Without wasting time on this,students are able to learn more.from学生：940038850Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Wi

16、th the help of technology,students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.3.化腐朽为神奇之改作文First and foremost,technology plays an essential role in improving learning efficiency.In other words,with the help of technology,a la

17、rge amount of knowledge and information can be stored in a small electronic device,such as an e-book,which allows students to have an easy access to any knowledge regardless of time and location.Another benefit of reading an electronic book is that students do not need to scan every page to find wha

18、t they need,instead,searching information can be finished simply in several seconds by means of clicking on one certain button.In this way,students learning efficiency can be largely improved.Efficiency is what decided how much knowledge can a student learn.The nowadays technology helps a lot on tha

19、t part too.Just like the electric book,it allows students to have all their books in one little electronic.It is so convenient to take,and so much faster to find the books.Just need to click on the one button,and you will get to the accurate page.Without wasting time on this,students are able to lea

20、rn more.3.化腐朽为神奇之小词大用bridge6)Which one is correct?A.shape;pool;bridgingB.shape;bridge;poolingC.bridge;shape;pooling shapepoolGovernments must improve social welfare in order to _ the gap between rich and poor.University education should _ the mind and broaden horizons.Only by _ their resources can g

21、overnments hope to overcome global warming.3.化腐朽为神奇之小词大用书本知识 VS 经验comprehensiveIt can be argued that sometimes knowledge gained from experience is much deeper and more comprehensive than that gained from books.How to deal with personal finance,how to cope with current social trends,even how to most effectively organize our own mind,and numerous other things can seldom be found thoroughly and_ discussed in books.And the sad news is that even some knowledge that contained in books usually needs further _,mainly through prehensivelycomprehension微博：http:/ 托福写作词汇句型等着你们的，Amber