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1、高考英语作文评分标准示范全国卷I假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华.你枚将举办一次英出演讲比我（speech8ntest，希3!附近 某大学的外籍载体Smith女士来做评委.请参照以下比安通知冷她写一封信.英出演讲比我主题：人。自世时间：6月15日下午2： 00-5： 00地点；501段室参赤选手：10名学生联系人：季华（电讯44876655）欢迎大家光临注意：词数100左右.Dear Mrs. Smith,Li Hua标准范文Dear Mrs. Smith.Im Li Hua. Chair of the Student Union ol Yucai Middle School, which is

2、 close to your univer&ty. Im writing to Invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic Man and Nature*. We hope that you will accept our i

3、nvitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishesLi Hua内容要点1自我介绍2巡询位评委3演讲主题4比爽时间5参实选F 6联系方式 高考英谱高考作文评分标准1 .本题总分为2S分,按5个档次给分.2 .评分时.先根据丈条的内容和语言初步确定其所网档次,然后以该档次的要求来勤出.陶定 成调整档次.取后给分.3 .词数少F 80和多于120的,从总分中减去2分.

4、4 .评分时.应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性. 上下文的连 密性及谱方的得体性.5 .拼写与标点符号是语有准烧性的一个方面,评分时.应视其对交际的影响和收予以专出.英. 美拼可汉词汇用法均可接受.6 .如书写较差.以至影响交际.潞分数降低一个档次.7,内容要点可用不同方式表达.对扣主期的适当发挥不予扣分.【各档次的给分范用和要求】第五档（很好卜（21-25分）1 .完全完成了试区规定的任务.2 .殴靛所有内容要点.3 .应用了较多的语法结构和词花.4 .用法结构或词汇方【用些许筋i3但为尽力使用核史朵结构或较高缓诃汇所致；具备校强的 语言运用能力.5 .有效地使

5、用了语句间的连接成分.使全文结构晚凑.6 .完全达到了忸期的可作目的.第四档（好）：（16-20分）1 .完全完成了试理烧定的任务.2 .虽漏押I、2个次重点，但履粒所为主要内容，3 .应用的语法站构和词汇能谓足任务的要求.4 .语法结构或词汇方面应用基不准确.些许借误主姿是因尝试牧攵杂语法结杓或词汇所致.5 .应用简中的i苫句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，6 .达到了预期的写作日的.第三档（适当卜-15分）1 .加本完成了试I规定的任务，2 .虽漏掉一些内容但陵施所有主要内容.3 .应用的语法结构和诃工能满足任务的要求.4 .有一些语法结构或词汇方曲的常说，但不影碗理解5 .应用徜单的语句间

6、的连接成分使仝文内容连贯.6 .骼体而吉，基本达到了预期的写作目的.第二档（较处）： （&I0分）1 .未恰当完成试题规定的任务.2 .漏掉或未描述清楚一些生要内容.写了一些无关内容.3 .谙法结构单调、词汇项目有限，1.有些语法补构或词r方面的锦误.影响了对写作内容的理解.5 .较少使用谐句间的连接成分，内容块少连员性，6 .信息未能清楚地传达给读者，第档（差）：（1-5分）1,未完应试超规定的任务.2 .明显遗漏主要内容，月r一些无关内容，原因可便是未理解试题要求“3 .语法结构玳调.诃汇项目有限.4 .较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解.5 .缺乏语句间的连接成分.内容不

7、连出.6 .信息未能传达给波好.不得分：（0分）未能传达给读者仟何信息：内容太少，无法评判：写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法 看清.卜面是学生的高考作文.按照以上要求给出了省专家的打分,请对比.把握自J的写 作档次。Im l.i Hua. chai man of the Students* Union in Yucai Middle school. Our school is going to hold an English speech contest with *Mcn ond the Nature* ns its topic. As is known to all. you ar

8、e a very faiwus foreign teacher in the university, so 1 vender if you would like to be the judge of our speech contest.The speech contest will be held in Room 501 fron 2;00 p.ai to 5:00 p.m on June 15. There vill tw in total 10 students routing in the contest. If you are interested in the contest an

9、d agree to be our judge, please get in touch vith ne. My phone nuwber is 44876655.fra looking forward to your coll. 24 2Im the president of the students* union of Yucai aiddle school. Our school is going lo hold an English speech contest, its an honour to invite you to judge our perfornance and give

10、 us advice. The topic of this contest is about hunnn and rutlurc. As wc know, the envirotwent is getting worse and worse, so we wan【 to discuss the proper relationship between nature and human . The contest vill be held fron 2:00 to 5:00 in the ofternoon on June 15 *. Ten cwipctilore arc cxpcctcl to

11、 ce soon. My telephone nunber is 44876655.233Im Li Hua. chairman of students* union in Yucai high school. Our school vill hold an English speech contest, which is about Hunan and Nature. It will be held at 2:00pn 5:00 Fn. on 15 * June. Ami ihc place is in the Nc. 501 clasxnxxn. There wi 11 be 10 stu

12、ilenls nllcnding the contest. I think it wi11 be a close contest .I have heard of you for o long time. And i hope you can spore your valuable time to be our judge. If you have scftclhing lo ask me , please cwl 1 nr nl 44876655. My phone is open for you anytime.r11 appreciate it if you could cone. Lo

13、oking forward to your early reply. 23 4It is a great honour for me the chairnan of the students* union of Yucai school, to give you an invitation about our schools speech contest. I sincerely hope you to be our jutee.(xxisidcring the? fact that nature is of great inpnriance in us human beings, vc? k

14、?cid(? to hold a speech contest on People and Nature. The contest will be held in the classrooa 501. Uhnls more, there will be 10 students giving us their perfect speeches from 2:00 to 5:00 p.m on 15： June. I believe firmly lluit you are lo enjoy the speech context. In addition. I,d like to Rive you

15、 ny telephone number 14876655 in case that you have any problem.Were waiting for your instruction. 235I am a student cal led U Hua.Aho cone from Yucai Middle school. Im writing to invite you to our school as a teacher when xir school holds the .The purpose of the speoch contest is Huinan and Nature

16、and vhat the aim is to make students know I he nature and rwke a difference for protecting the nature. It will be held from 2:00 p.m to 5:00 p. n on June 15,h in 501 room. What, s grc. there are ten students taking part in the speech contest.When you cone lo our school, you can cal 1 lie at 44876655

17、Im looking for*-ird to your coming ,226Hello, fm Li *-ho is president of Students Union, in Yucai Middle School. ln sorry to interrupt you when you are busy with your work.Our school is going to hold an English speech contest naned Man nnd Nature . there are ten students debating on this iheme. We a

18、re going to hold this contest frem 2:00 p.bi to 5:00 p. n *ing to your speciol skills and knowledge in English, we hope you can cone and judge us. Ve al 1 want to make progress from this contest. If you premise it. please cal 1 we 44876655 and we students cant thnnk you too nuch.Wait for your reply.

19、21me 237Im president of Yucai niddle cchool students union. And my school is going to hold an KhkI ish speech contest. The thene of the contest is Human beings and Nature*. I* d like to invite you to attend the contest to act as： the judge. The tiru- is arranged frun 2 pn to 5 pm on June 15. And the

20、 contest will take place in the 501 classroon. In addition, ten xxr(K*titor wi 11 join in the contest.What is worth mentioninK, if you can* t attend it please get in touch with me as soon as possibk. My lelephane nunber is 44876655. Im kxiking fonvard to your coaiing. 21An English speech is to be he

21、ld in our school. It,s hoped that you can coac to act as b judge.Here is some information about this contest. The topic of it is huraan beings and nature. And it is due to begin “I 2:00 p. v cxi June I5，h. 11 wi 11 last for about three hours in C】w$sn)wn 50L In addition, ten students will compete in

22、 this contest , which is believed to be vondcrful. There is no doubt thdt with your jxirticiption it musl be more interesting. Lastly, you can give ne a call after you have made a decision. My telephone number is 44876655.1 vill appreciate it very much if you can turn up. 20 9As is known to us, Engl

23、ish is more and nore inportant. therefore, it* s high time that vc should lake ncasurcs to inprovc students* English skills。 For one thing, it ciin draw students, attention, for another it can wake our life meaningful.The English speech contest to be held in our school is driving ncr. I expect yxi c

24、an cone vith us working as a judger. The topic of the English speech contest is hunan beings nnd nature, besides, you enn come here nt 2-5 oclock p. m. 15、June, what, s orc, con tec t will be held in class 501 and ten students will join the contest.As as Im concerned. It would be succcsscd if you we

25、re to come, please call g at 14876655. Im waiting for your reply. (fuhao 19) 10I,n Li Hua, chairnan of the Students，Union in Yu cai middle school. Our school is goinv to hold an English speech contest, whose theme is People ind Nature.And we have made it fron 2 to 5 on 15* June in Class 501. Besides

26、, it will be held in the nftemoon. There will be 10 students participates in it. So Im sincerely hoping that you can coax? and act the role as a judger. which wi 11 not only do good to inprove our English, but also increase our spirit.Here is my telephone number 44876655. Im looking forward to your

27、reply.Thnt* s all. thanks. 18 11Our high school will hold o speech contest on June 15*. Its theme is *Nature and People*. I invite your warn-heartedly to be our judger. Its great honour to us if you are willing to join us. The contest will start at 2:00 p.m nnd finish at 5:00 p.m . Ihe place is at c

28、lassrooii 501. My nano is Li Hua and if yxi have problems . please call 啪 at 44876655. 1,11 give you a hand without thinking.I believe that our wonderful speeches von* t let you down. Also, the 10 students wi11 leave n grent expression on you. 17 12Ima student in Yucai School. My school will host an

29、 English Speech Contest about person and nature , It? bojx? you can crxne to lay school help un.The speech contest will start at 2:005:00 pen in 15 June . And it is host in 501 class. We have 10 students take part in this English Speech Contest . 44876655 is my telephone nunix?r. If you have spare t

30、ine in that day. you can call ue.Our school students looking forward to you cone. Thank you very much. 16 13My riMfu? is l.i Hum. I n dutinnm ofscioty in YuYing nikile school. Our schoolwill hold an English speech contest. Ie are looking forward to you can cone to give us some advice.The speech cont

31、est* thwne is people arul nature. Ve* 11 hold it on 15 June frou 2:00pu to 5:00 pm. There* re 10 students attend the speech contest. I think it vi 11 be very exciting. And it be holdcd in 501 classroan. I must believe that wc can have a good tine in there and learn sanething from it. You can keep in

32、 touch with me. The telephone number is 44876655.Im iookinj? forward to your letter. We leone to you! 16MMy name is Li Hua. I cone fron Yucai niddle school. I an students* chairman. On the 51 Jun. afternoon our school will hold n English spe2atureWc Kad know your nnnc early. Wc know yxi arc grant En

33、glish leather nd you nrc n warm-hearted *xxrein. We expect you can join us and help point out our English granner mistakes. There nrc 10 students wh join in the speech contest. With you al lend our speech contest will hold succeed.This is ny phone nunher 11876655. Ihc tine is during 2:00 to 5:00 ?il

34、 501 class.We are looking forward to your attending our speech contest. 16 -15How are you ! Im the president ni .tudents in Yucai middle school. In Li Hua. Our school will hold an English speech contest. Its an honour if you can act as the judger. The speech contest will hold irxn 2:00 pm to 5:00 jx

35、n in June 15. ond it will hold in 501 class. The main topic about it is the hunmn brings and nature. There are 10 students wi 11 attend it. My telephone number is 44876655. you can tell me whether you conx* through it.I believe wc will be nblc to hold it successfully.Welcome to it! Thank you! 1516Wi

36、th the speech contest ground the corner. Ckir schl wnnt to invet yr of Yucai tneial schl. Our school wi 11 hold a speech contest, so we wish you Rive our sone advice.The then的 is people with natural, and the time is on the afternoon of June 15. frtxa 2:00 to 5:00. The place is in 501 class and there

37、 will be ten students join the contest. I believe there wi 11 be a healed cxiipetilive in Jurve 15.If you nake a decision you can get a touch with me, ray telephone number is 44876655.Ue are expecting your coming. 13181*n glad to write ihe letter to ynu.I n a chairman from De Yu middle school. Our s

38、chool are noing to hold the speech contest . in order to develop students English xpplicaiin ski 11. There is hunan and nature. So , uq wish you can attend the contect and give us so(De advice. Ten students can join in the final speech contest.About 2 pvt in the June 15. Have you ever join in the sp

39、eech contest. If you willing to coning, please call t*.1219Our school vill hold a English speech contest at 501 class, on Mny 15. at 2:00 to 5:00 in ihe afternoon. The ihrm of the speech is huit&in and nature. Ten students wi) take part inThe contest. Co hope thot you can act as our teacher to rroke

40、 marks. You can call me. the phone M8765.Welcome to our school!)120I n a student of yucai middle school. My rum? is Li Hua. In recent our school decide to held a English speech contest and holp you can cne and teaching us. The sjxrh is alxut people and hestory. The tine is 2:00 pit5:50 pn on 15 May.

41、 The speech will be held in 501 clasrnrm. It will have 10 students u join. You iaybe know, tkugh our have good space in English exam. But about speaking English is badly. So, our school decide to held the speech cnnlest. They hope ihrw it to improve our speaking. An vc know you gpaking English is ve

42、ry good. So, I hope you cone and teach us if you was free in that tine. If you agree it , please lei m knuv. My tel: 14876655.Hope you cal 1 me or response. 10 21I am very Riad to write to you.Im stuly in YucmS school. Our school will hold a English speech conlcsl. We hope you can take part in it fo

43、r a judge. The contest is about hunan and nature. Adress is in our school class 501. It have 10 students join it. Please you con go to here in 2:00 to 5:00on June 15.We need you attend it. You nust conversation to me.We wi 11 velcrxne to you to here.be interesting it. You call the number 44876655 to6