20-21Unit1SectionⅦ Writing——数据性调查报告.pdf

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1、-SectionSection WritingWriting数据性调查报告数据性调查报告写作技法指导文体指导一、基本结构数据性调查报告属于图表类作文的一种。图表类作文写作一般分三大步：第一步，开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题；第二步，分析数据间的主要差异及趋势，然后描写；第三步，归纳总结或发表评论。(有时第三步可省略)二、注意事项具体操作时应注意：1 1首先应仔细研究题目以及提示信息，认清图表中的数字、线条、阴影等部分的变化趋势和走向，抓住其主要特点和关键信息，然后根据图表所显示的中心信息确定内容层次以及主题句。2 2 列出各段主题句。考生可以根据所给提纲或已知信息列出每段的主题句，为全文的展

2、开做好铺垫。3 3围绕主题句完成段落的展开。尽量做到主题明确、条理清晰、文字简练。4 4图表作文一般采用的时态为一般现在时，但如果图表中给出了具体时间参照，考生则应对时态进行相应的调整。亮点句式1 1开头常用句式As is shown by the graph/in the table that.As we can see clearly from the chart above.(概述图表)The results of the survey seem to suggest that.(得出结论)2 2主体部分常用句式Compared with.There is(was)a rapid ris

3、e in.The changes.can be explained for several reasons.It is reported that 85%of.are also the reason why the number is increasing so fast.-From the increased number we can get that.3 3结尾常用句式In conclusion/To conclude/We can draw the conclusion that.In my opinion/Personally，I.It seems clear that/Its cl

4、ear from the chart that.满分佳作构建写作任务看到一位老人跌倒在身边，你扶还是不扶？如今这个问题让不少人纠结不已，某报社对此专门就“你是否会第一时间义不容辞地去扶摔倒的老人？”进行了一次调查，结果如图所示。请你写一篇文章向该报社的海外版投稿，描述这一调查结果。要求：1简单描述该图反映的问题；2分析原因；3发表自己的观点。注意：词数 100 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。An old man has fallen in the street，just several steps away，would you help himor just pass by？This sim

5、ple question has become a dilemma for many people.审题谋篇体裁主题调查报告老人跌倒，扶还是不扶时态人称一般现在时第三人称和第一人称第一部分，引入：指出现象并提出问题。结构第二部分，阐述：1.简单描述图表反映的问题。2.分析产生的原因。第三部分，观点：发表自己的观点，提出解决措施。遣词造句.对接单元词汇1 1conduct2 2participant3 3without hesitation4 4by contrast执行，进行参与者毫不犹豫地对比-5 5definite6 6be accused of7 7knock over8 8preten

6、d9 9blackmail1010insurance.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1 1根据一份报纸的调查，仅仅有百分之六的参与者愿意马上去帮助。(according to)According to a survey conducted by a newspaper，only 6%of the participants arewilling to help immediately.2 2关于原因，大多数人担心如果他们去帮助老人，有可能会被控告撞倒了他。(as for；that 宾语从句)As for the reasons，most worry that if they go to hel

7、p the old man，they may beaccused of having knocked over him.3 3有一些人也担心老人会假装摔倒。(pretend to havedone)Some are also concerned that the old man may pretend to have fallen down4 4一些老人选择去敲诈帮助他们的人是因为他们没有健康保险来支付他们的治疗。(because 引导原因状语从句)Some elderly people choose to blackmail their helpers because they dont h

8、avehealth insurance to cover their treatment5 5如果政府改善这种状况，我相信没有人会冒生命危险去假装摔倒。(if 引导条件状语从句)If the government can improve this situation，I believe no one will risk their lifeto pretend to fall(二)句式升级1 1用短语 without hesitation 改写句 1According to a survey conducted by anewspaper，only 6%of the participantsa

9、re willing to help without hesitation.-明确的，确定的被控告撞倒假装敲诈保险-2 2用 there is a possibility that.句型改写句 2As for the reasons，most worry that ifthey go to help the old man，theres apossibility that they may be accused ofhaving knocked over him.3 3用 The reason why.is that.句型改写句 4The reason why some elderly peo

10、plechoose to blackmail their helpers is thatthey dont have health insurance to cover their treatment.妙笔成篇An old man has fallen in the street，just several steps away，would you help himor just pass by？This simple question has become a dilemma for many people.【参考范文】An old man has fallen in the street，j

11、ust several steps away，would you help himor just pass by？This simple question has become a dilemma for many people.According to a survey conducted by a newspaper，only 6%of the participants arewilling to help without hesitation.By contrast，24%admit that they will not do so.Andthe rest dont have a def

12、inite answer.As for the reasons，to begin with，most worry thatif they go to help the old man，there is a possibility that they may be accused ofhaving knocked over him.Second，some are also concerned that the old man maypretend to have fallen down.So what should we do？As for me，the reason why some elderly people chooseto blackmail their helpers is that they dont have health insurance to cover theirtreatment.So if the government can improve this situation，I believe no one will risktheir life to pretend to fall.-