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1、雅思写作大作文结构讲解雅思写作考核要求A类小作文 主要考察数字 要学会筛选 要学会排序，分析数据 不仅仅要描述数据，还要适当比较 对一些规律进行归纳总结A类大作文 主要针对题目的要求，要分析题目，要对原因段进行必要的扩展 注重把握段落结构大作文审题的困难1 内容无法把握2 文章结构结构问题提问方式决定了文体，文体决定了这篇文章的段落结构和写作方式，段落结构和写作方式是写作四项评分标准中CC项（连贯与衔接）的体现例题：Others often influence young people in their behaviors and situations in the same age。This

2、 is called“peer group pressure”。Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages？大作文题型结构分析Report结构分析说明式例题（剑8T4）In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be

3、taken to solve them?个人例文及批改例文It has been constantly reported by mass media that（据大众传媒的持续报道）more and more people are getting overweight and their level of health is going from bad to worse（每况愈下）.In this essay,I will analyze the reasons for this problem and propose some feasible solutions.（提出一些切实可行的解决

4、办法）It is obvious that reasons for the problem are many and various（多种多样的）.In the first place,unhealthy eating habits（不健康的饮食习惯）will lead to malnutrition or obesity（营养不良或肥胖）.Some people prefer to eat fast foods high in calories and fat.In the long run（长此以往）,without enough physical exercise,the fat acc

5、umulated inside body cannot be consumed.In the second place,stressful workload（令人鸭梨山大的工作量）also contributes to this problem.Mental stress will result in sleep deprivation（导致失眠）.Inadequate sleep hours sap ones attention and cause headache.Therefore,the level of fitness goes from bad to worse.According

6、ly,we are supposed to take a wide range of measures to deal with this problem.At first,humans should cultivate a wholesome eating habit（健康的饮食习惯）with more fruits and vegetables.Scientists suggest that the supplement of vitamins and water helps to release work stress.Secondly,individuals should learn

7、how to achieve a balance between work and rest（劳逸结合）.Listening to sooth music and watching a movie are absolutely effective ways.Of course,taking physical exercise,such as jogging,is also of great help.Overall,causes of this problem are complicated.It cannot be solved in a short time,and because of

8、this,we are supposed to take various actions to cope with the problem.大作文辩论类结构对于问题的各方面进行正反的各个方面的讨论，然后比较，最终阐明自己的立场和观点。A绝对好 B绝对好 A大于B A小于B A等于B A不等于B A不能与B比较明显的倾向，能自圆其说，让别人信服，得分相对高。All education，primary,secondary and further education,should be free to all people and paid for by the government,Do you

9、agree or disagree？辩论性对称式Some people think museums should be enjoyable places to attract young people.Others think the purpose of museums is to educate,not to entertain.Discuss both views and give your opinionNowadays,the principal function of a museum has sparked a heated discussion（激发一场热烈讨论）.Some p

10、eople believe the museums should be more entertaining,but some people think otherwise（其他人不这么认为）.In this essay,I will discuss both views regarding this issue and propose my own suggestion.Personally,these two features are not mutually exclusive（并不相互排斥）.For one thing,teenagers indeed tend to be attrac

11、ted by entertaining places.For another,museums actually extend the contents in a regular school course.So,the key point is to reconcile the charm of a museum with（协调A与B的关系）its educational function.Some people think lawbreakers should be sent to prison,while other people think there are some alternat

12、ives(for example,doing work which is beneficial for local community).Discuss both views and give your own opinionPersonally,the imprisonment and community work are mutually complementary（相辅相成的）.For those who commit serious crimes,long-term imprisonment is of necessity so as to uphold an ordered soci

13、ety,while for the minors or those who commit anti-social behaviors,unpaid community service is an effective solution.Only by doing so can we prevent a further increase in social crime rate.Some people say that examinations have negative effects on students,while some others think exams have positive

14、 influences on education.Discuss both views and give your opinionPersonally,after weighing the pros and cons of the examination（衡量考试的利弊）,it is safe to say that for one thing,standardized tests are the most effective means of assessment for both students and teachers.For another,the comprehensive qua

15、lity of one person can hardly be tested only by exams.So,the examination is a double-edged sword（一把双刃剑）.Scientists believe computers will become more intelligent than human beings.Some people think the development has a positive impact;others think it is negative.Discuss both these views and give yo

16、ur own opinionPersonally,the artificial intelligence will surely improve the productivity and help people finish the task beyond humans capability.On the other hand,it also poses a threat to the humankind in many aspects.Overall,we should analyze the artificial intelligence on a case-by-case basis.（

17、具体问题具体分析）作文批改The government should not put money in building theaters and sports stadium.Instead,it should spend money on health care and education.Do you agree or disagree?Thanks to the social development,there are growing number of theaters and sports stadium which are built over the past decades.

18、Some people are of the opinion that the authority should invest public funds in health care as well as education rather than building those entertaining facilities.However,as for me,I am quite skeptical about this point of view.It is manifest that we can benefit a lot from visiting theaters.Firstly,

19、theater like the Chinese Theater in Hollywood is not just tourists stand,but carries much more educative meaning for people,especially for the young generation.The fantastic architecture represents the glorious past of its nation,which is regarded as an encouragement for the innovation for the upcom

20、ing generation.Secondly,people in common would get great chances to communicate with each other on the platform created by public museums.There is no denying that investment in sports stadiums is an active measure to improve peoples health.To begin with,if their health is improved,we need not spend

21、too much money on medical care,which saves the limited public funds at large.In addition,some important sports events are held in the stadiums like the Olympic Games,which can not only enrich individuals spiritual need,but also improve the tastes for competitive sports.Admittedly,education is the ve

22、ry foundation of the whole nation in the future.The government is the supervisor for the social stability,who has an inevitable obligation to prevent the public from suffering illness.If so,it will definitely lead to the social chaos and many unpredictable disasters.However,the investment of them ca

23、nnot block the spending on daily basis.In conclusion,it is safe to say that the government should make all efforts to gain more profits and then spend the money both effectively and efficiently.Therefore,I am still convinced that the investment of theatres and museums and sports stadiums is much more advisable.