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1、会计学1雅思大作文的结构及写作方法雅思大作文的结构及写作方法两种类型两种类型n n议论文 argument n n说明文 report 第1页/共49页议论文议论文n n议论文一般针对的是议论文一般针对的是题目中的一个话题题目中的一个话题题目中的一个话题题目中的一个话题 (some people think)(some people think)，以及部分人对这，以及部分人对这个话题的想法个话题的想法(some people think,while others believe,(some people think,while others believe,有些人认为。有些人认为。当另外当另外

2、一些人认为一些人认为)，然后，然后要求你是不是同意或者是发表你自己的看法要求你是不是同意或者是发表你自己的看法要求你是不是同意或者是发表你自己的看法要求你是不是同意或者是发表你自己的看法（I think this is I think this is correct/true;I disagree with thiscorrect/true;I disagree with this）。）。这类题目通常会在题目中这类题目通常会在题目中引述一个观引述一个观引述一个观引述一个观点，点，然后要求然后要求你针对那个观点，进行写作你针对那个观点，进行写作你针对那个观点，进行写作你针对那个观点，进行写作。议

3、论文比较基于主观事实描述议论文比较基于主观事实描述议论文比较基于主观事实描述议论文比较基于主观事实描述，一般，一般来说，文章的主体是以来说，文章的主体是以 为什么而展开，作者需要通过为什么而展开，作者需要通过解释，论证解释，论证解释，论证解释，论证从而达到从而达到一个比较合理的能够一个比较合理的能够具有说服力具有说服力具有说服力具有说服力的一个层次。的一个层次。作者要展开自己的想法，并要作者要展开自己的想法，并要通过论证，让读者认为你所写的是正确的，合理的。通过论证，让读者认为你所写的是正确的，合理的。第2页/共49页议论文议论文n n议论文通常有两种问法：n n1.To what exten

4、t do you agree or disagree?(你从多大程度上同意这个观点)n n题目中一部分人只会提出对于某个问题所提出对于某个问题所产生的一个看法产生的一个看法。作者所要进行论证就是论证就是你是否同意这么一个看法你是否同意这么一个看法第3页/共49页n nProtecting wild animals is a waste of resources.n nTo what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?n nGive reasons for your answer and include any relevant

5、examples from your own knowledge or experience.第4页/共49页 结构：四段或五段结构：四段或五段n n引言部分：提出主题（描述当前背景），改写复述题目，表明自己的观点，衔接下文。n n正文第一段：原因1n n正文第二段：原因2n n正文第三段：原因3（可省略）n n结尾：重申主题，建议措施，展望未来第5页/共49页引言部分引言部分引言部分引言部分：提出主题（描述当前背景），改写复述题目，：提出主题（描述当前背景），改写复述题目，：提出主题（描述当前背景），改写复述题目，：提出主题（描述当前背景），改写复述题目，表明自己的观点，衔接下文。表明自己的

6、观点，衔接下文。表明自己的观点，衔接下文。表明自己的观点，衔接下文。n nAs is known to all,the big contradiction between As is known to all,the big contradiction between the limitation of land and the rapidly increasing the limitation of land and the rapidly increasing demand for it causes an alarming headache of demand for it causes

7、 an alarming headache of human beings.To improve the situation,some human beings.To improve the situation,some people suggest we instantly give up protecting wild people suggest we instantly give up protecting wild animals,the reason for which,according to them,animals,the reason for which,according

8、 to them,is simply that they believe there will be no spare is simply that they believe there will be no spare places for the wild animals as their habitats in the places for the wild animals as their habitats in the 2121st st century,and thus it is nothing but a waste of century,and thus it is noth

9、ing but a waste of resources to carry out the protection.resources to carry out the protection.As far as I As far as I am concerned,the so-called am concerned,the so-called“suggestionsuggestion”is is extremely ridiculous and has no point at all.extremely ridiculous and has no point at all.第6页/共49页正文

10、第一段：原因正文第一段：原因1n nJust like human beings,wild animals are the Just like human beings,wild animals are the indispensible part of the earth.indispensible part of the earth.The coexistence of The coexistence of animals and human beings creates harmony and animals and human beings creates harmony and br

11、ings about the vividness to our planet.An brings about the vividness to our planet.An increasing number of people come to realize that increasing number of people come to realize that the disappearance of animals will result in huge the disappearance of animals will result in huge threat to the bala

12、nce of ecosystem.If one species threat to the balance of ecosystem.If one species die out,it is inevitable that other species on the die out,it is inevitable that other species on the food chain will be put in very dangerous situation,food chain will be put in very dangerous situation,which will def

13、initely cause a series of terrible which will definitely cause a series of terrible problems for the earth.problems for the earth.第7页/共49页正文第二段：原因正文第二段：原因2n nIt is hard to imagine what our world would be like without animals.Sociologists also point out that the disappearance of animals can cause soc

14、ial and economic problems.Animals trade,as a supporting sector to the world economy,would be out of control and a large number of animals would be killed for more profit.第8页/共49页结尾：重申主题，建议，结尾：重申主题，建议，展望展望n nCertainly,our diet cannot live without meat.There are living stocks,which can provide us with

15、 sufficient and nutritious produce.Therefore,we need not to resort to wild animals,especially the endangered ones.To protect animals is to protect our living environment.Every individual should join efforts to keep the diversity of animals.第9页/共49页练习：练习：n nSome people believe that students who want

16、to go to university after graduation from high school should gain some work experience or have a travel to enlarge their vision.n nTo what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?n n五段 第10页/共49页Homework:n nThe computer is widely used in education,and some people think teachers do not play

17、important roles in the classroom.To what extent do you agree or disagree?第11页/共49页practicen nTodays children are living under more pressure from society than children in the past.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?第12页/共49页Writing an outlinen n一边倒n n开头提出主题，表明观点，引出下文n n主体段1原因1n

18、n主体段2原因2n n结尾重申主题，建议措施第13页/共49页开头开头n n现在的孩子们生活条件比以前好了很多，但是也比过去的孩子承受了更多的压力。我认为，现在的孩子们的童年与过去的孩子们比起来的确不那么多姿多彩无忧无虑。第14页/共49页n nNowadays children are growing up in more favorable conditions than ever before.However,they are also faced with much greater pressure than children in the past.As for me,their c

19、hildhood is indeed less colourful and carefree than that of the children in the past.第15页/共49页主体段主体段1n n首先，学业负担尤其沉重。（扩展主题句，延长因果链，假设论证，举例论证）第16页/共49页n nFirstly,the burden with academic learning has become extremely heavy.It has become a trend for kids to take extra courses beyond their normal school

20、curriculum,for parents believe that this can ensure their children a chance to a better university.And only a better university can ensure their kids a good job in the future.This would no doubt bring huge pressure to their children,affecting their health both physically and mentally.第17页/共49页主体段主体段

21、2n n另一方面，就业的压力也越来越大。（举例论证，因果链）第18页/共49页n nSecondly,the pressure of employment is becoming greater and greater.Statistics show that in 2007 about one million college graduates failed to find jobs.Most of them held bachelors and even masters degrees.The fact that even well-educated people are confront

22、ed with unemployment problems urges children to obtain more skills and become more versatile so as to stay competitive on the job market.第19页/共49页结尾段结尾段n n重申观点，导致后果，如何解决第20页/共49页n nFrom the above discussion,we can easily come to a conclusion that children do live under more pressure than ever before

23、.Under so much work and pressure,it is difficult for them to develop good personalities and interpersonal communication skills.They may become solitary and even suffer from certain mental illnesses.Therefore,our government and society should create opportunities and reform our educational mechanism

24、to let our kids enjoy their supposed happy childhood.第21页/共49页n n2.Discuss both views and give your opinion(讨论双方观点然后给出你自己的看法)n n与第一个题目不同的地方在于，这个题目相对来说，是针对了一个话题一个话题，两组人两组人，对于这个话题，产生的相反的不同的看产生的相反的不同的看法法，题目要求的就是作者针对针对这两种看法这两种看法，表达你自己的观你自己的观点点。第22页/共49页写法一：写法一：n n一边倒的写法。n n和前面agree or disagree 写法相同n n第一

25、段提出主题，两种看法，你的看法，同意A或Bn n中间段落表明你的看法的原因n n也可以在一个段落描述另一种看法的合理性n n结尾总结，提出建议措施等。第23页/共49页n nNow,air travel has become cheaper than in the past.Some people say that is a positive development,while some people disagree with this.What do you think?Give your reasons.第24页/共49页outlinen n开头：引出主题，表明观点n n主体段1-飞机旅

26、行的好处1n n主体段2 飞机旅行的好处2n n结尾 论述相反观点，重申自己立场，提出建议第25页/共49页n n开头：n n如何引出主题？对比写法n n提出观点第26页/共49页n nNowadays,people can choose to travel by bus,train,ship,and airplane.In the past,travelling by air was too expensive to be popular,but things are different now:air travel has become much cheaper.Therefore,I a

27、rgue that this is definitely a positive development.第27页/共49页主体段主体段1n n飞机旅行的好处之一：快速n n 举例论证第28页/共49页n nFirstly,airplane travels extremely fast,thus it saves us a lot of time.We know that in the past,travelling from Britain to America by ship would take at least a month,but now it only needs five to

28、eight hours.One can start out from Britain in the morning and join friends in the States for dinner.This is just the need of modern people who always want to save time to achieve more important tasks.第29页/共49页主体段主体段2n n飞机旅行的第二个好处：安全n n 对比论证第30页/共49页n nSecondly,travelling by air is safer than by any

29、other means of transport.There are car crashes happening here and there on highways,taking away thousands of lives everyday.People may think that train and ship are much safer than airplane,but statistics show that the rate of an airplane crash is far lower than these two means of transport.I have t

30、ravelled by air dozens of times and am quite confident about the safety of air traveling.第31页/共49页n nSure enough,apart from some worries about the Sure enough,apart from some worries about the safety of airplane,people are also worried that due safety of airplane,people are also worried that due to

31、cheaper prices of air tickets,there will be more to cheaper prices of air tickets,there will be more and more people choosing to travel by air,thus and more people choosing to travel by air,thus resulting in huge consumption of fuel and severe resulting in huge consumption of fuel and severe air pol

32、lution.This is indeed a problem worth our air pollution.This is indeed a problem worth our deep consideration.deep consideration.However,I firmly believe that However,I firmly believe that with the development of science and technology,with the development of science and technology,new types of fuel

33、 will definitely be found and then,new types of fuel will definitely be found and then,air travel will pose no threat at all to the air travel will pose no threat at all to the environment.environment.第32页/共49页n nFrom the foregoing discussion,we can see that air travel becoming cheaper and cheaper i

34、s absolutely not a bad thing.第33页/共49页写法二写法二n n折中写法n n写两种观点的合理性n n开头段照旧，可以省去自己观点，最后一段再提。n n中间段落两种观点的合理性n n结尾总结，你的想法，建议措施展望第34页/共49页n nSome people prefer to live in a small town.Others prefer to live in a big city.Which place would you prefer to live in?n n折中n n开头，引出主题n n大城市优点n n小城市优点n n我的观点第35页/共49页

35、n nPeople seldom agree with each other,even in such trivial issues as preference between big cities and small towns.Its a little bit hasty to say that it is better to live in a big city than to live in a small town,or vice versa.第36页/共49页n n大城市优点 （列举法，对比论证）就业 教育 生活水准第37页/共49页n nLiving in a big city

36、has several benefits.First,there are more job opportunities readily available in big cities than a small town.The qualities of the position are much higher as well and the pay is more decent.Second,children are supposed to be able to receive an education with a higher quality compared with their cou

37、nterparts who live in a small town.Finally,living in a big city has a superior overall living standard to that in a small town.There are more commodities and services in city markets and there are even much more cinemas in big cities.第38页/共49页n n小城市优点小城市优点 居住在小城市的人们生活更加舒服。他们没有大城市人们的沉重的居住在小城市的人们生活更加舒

38、服。他们没有大城市人们的沉重的生活压力。尽管收入少一些，但是小城市的生活开销也不像大城生活压力。尽管收入少一些，但是小城市的生活开销也不像大城市那么多。市那么多。在小城市，居民们之间融洽的关系会让孩子们更健康的成长，他们在小城市，居民们之间融洽的关系会让孩子们更健康的成长，他们也许不能去电影院放松休闲，但是可以和朋友在一起聊天玩耍。也许不能去电影院放松休闲，但是可以和朋友在一起聊天玩耍。第39页/共49页n nHowever,living in a small town also has some However,living in a small town also has some adv

39、antages.advantages.People who live in a small town often have People who live in a small town often have a much more comfortable life style.Most of them are a much more comfortable life style.Most of them are immune from the suffering of high work stress.immune from the suffering of high work stress

40、.Although the average pay is much less than that of big Although the average pay is much less than that of big cities,the price of daily necessities is usually more cities,the price of daily necessities is usually more inexpensive.inexpensive.Instead of suffering loneliness which is Instead of suffe

41、ring loneliness which is prevalent in big cities,children might grow up more prevalent in big cities,children might grow up more healthily because of harmonious relationship among healthily because of harmonious relationship among residents in small towns.They might have fewer residents in small tow

42、ns.They might have fewer cinemas to entertain themselves,but they have more cinemas to entertain themselves,but they have more friends available to chat or play with.friends available to chat or play with.第40页/共49页n nAccording to my current situation,although I am longing for the cozy atmosphere and

43、 relationship among neighbors and friends which almost only exist in small towns,I have chosen to live in one of the biggest cities in my countryBeijing,since I have found a pretty good job here and decent pay.I think I would prefer living in a small town when I retire one day.第41页/共49页n n3.讨论advant

44、ages and disadvantagesn nPlease state the advantages and disadvantages of the development of private cars.n n对称写法n n题目本身存在观点的对立性，所以可以转化为discuss both views的类型，同时给出自己的观点即可。n n开头段落照旧，形式，不同观点n n中间两段，分别讨论优缺点n n结尾段落进行总结，给出自己的观点及解决措施等。第42页/共49页4.解释型题目解释型题目n n仔细看题目要求n n以解释原因，分析结果为主，不涉及辩论n n四段或五段n n开头引出主题，主体

45、段落根据题目要求进行分析说明，结尾总结。第43页/共49页4.解释型题目解释型题目n nNowadays,it is difficult for university students to find a job.Analyze the individual and social reasons and offer some solutions.第44页/共49页4.解释型题目解释型题目n nMany young people find their first days at high school or college difficult,because they feel very lon

46、ely.What do you think are the other difficulties they face on their first days?What can schools and colleges do to make them feel more comfortable?第45页/共49页n n新生入校不仅会接触到很多新鲜的事物，同时还会遇到不少困难。据调查，大概70%以上的新生存在孤独感。在我看来，除了孤独感外，新入校的同学也会遇到其他的一些困难。第46页/共49页n n第一，来自学业的压力会让同学们忧心忡忡。Independent learning self-discipline n n第二，对新环境的种种不适应也会让同学们不舒服。Overseas student 第47页/共49页n n学校和老师在帮助新生适应环境方面起着重要的作用。n n介绍会 orientation meeting campus tour more activities 第48页/共49页