2014年中考英语写作专项训练.ppt

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1、Writing practice 北浦中学 九年级备课组 write a short composition 检查预习 Life Life is is like like a a journey,Everyone journey,Everyone will will meet meet his his own own problems.How problems.How to to deal deal with with them?them?When When I I was was in in Grade Grade one,one,I I get get my my report repor

2、t card,card,and and it it is is very very bad.bad.I I am am very very sad.sad.I I afraid afraid of of going going home,home,because because I I didnt didnt want want my my parents parents feel feel unhappy.unhappy.But But I I have have to to go go home.home.When When I I open open the the door,door,

3、I I saw saw my my mother mother watching watching TV TV in in the the living living room.room.Then Then she she asked asked me me about about my my grades.grades.I I told told she she about about my my grades.grades.To To my my surprise,surprise,she she smiled smiled and and told told me,“Dont me,“D

4、ont worry,worry,I I believe believe you you can can get get good good grades grades next next time.time.You You should should believebelieve inin yourself.yourself.later later on,I on,I study study hard hard and and listen listen to to the the teachers teachers carefully carefully in in class.class.

5、I I regard regard the the problems problems as as the the challenges.and challenges.and try try my my best best to to deal deal with with everything.everything.I realize if we face the problems,dont worryI realize if we face the problems,dont worry.Smile to life5分 When I was in Grade one,I get my re

6、port card,and it is very bad.I am very sad.I afraid of going home,because I didnt want my parents feel unhappy.But I have to go home.When I open the door,I saw my mother watching TV in the living room.Then she asked me about my grades.I told she about my grades.To my surprise,she smiled and told me,

7、“Dont worry,I believe you can get good grades next time.You should believe in yourself.later on,I study hard and listen to the teachers carefully in class.I regard the problems as the challenges.and try my best to deal with everything.Now,I realize if we face the problems,dont worry.再现中考作文再现中考作文Task

8、1n1.人称？n2.主要时态？n3.提示包括什么？2011年 n n提示：在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮!但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么?是关心、帮助同学?是体贴、理解父母?是感恩、回报亲朋师长?还是成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以I Am Not a Child Any More”为题记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已不再是一个小孩。I Am Not a Child Any More2012年 The Best Moment in My Memoryn提示：生活中有许多美好的瞬间：当你经过努力取得成功的时候；当你帮助别人或得到别人帮助的时候；当你看到别人做好事的时候请以The

9、Best Moment in My Memory 为题，写一件发生在你我身边的事，留下你记忆中最美的瞬间。2013年A Talk to Myself n提示：在初三的学习和生活中，你有许多快乐，也有许多遗憾。在即将毕业之际，你想对自己说点什么呢？再现历年中考作文再现历年中考作文Whats your opinion?1.人称？-2.主要时态？-3.提示包括什么？I三个一般三个一般主要围绕亲情和友情主要围绕亲情和友情,学学会关心身边的人和事。通会关心身边的人和事。通过某过某一件事一件事去感悟人生的去感悟人生的哲理哲理.要求：要求：a.80100个词个词.b.要求有一定比例的复合句要求有一定比例的复

10、合句,并且要会使用适当的过渡词并且要会使用适当的过渡词,段落层次分明段落层次分明.c.作文的表达不局限于一作文的表达不局限于一种时态种时态.写作要求写作要求Task 2 Discussion The steps of writing 1:1:认真认真审题审题，把握把握体裁；体裁；2:2:细读细读提示提示，确定确定时态时态；3:3:动笔动笔书写书写，考虑考虑词句词句；4 4.:核对核对修改修改，规范规范誊写誊写；Task3 叙事性写作模式：1（开头）2（叙事）3（结尾）开头呼应（点题）结尾Love from n n提示：在你的成长过程中，爸爸妈妈，老师，朋友给了你无限的爱，你肯定把这份深情牢记在

11、心。请记述爸爸妈妈，老师或者是朋友为你做过的一件事，表达他们对你的爱。娃娃不哭！Group worknWhat is parents love?exercisen n题目题目 The Love from.n n要求要求n n 1.eight minutesn n 2.80-100个词个词n n 3.write a short passagen n 4.report1、Mum is the greatest person in my life2、Mum always cares me well and does everything for me.3、Thanks to her(mum).I c

12、an live a happy life all day.4.Mum is not only mother,but also my teacher and my friend.5、What moves my soul and what encourages me to progress is your sincere and selfless love.永远牵动我灵魂和激励我前进的是你真执与无私永远牵动我灵魂和激励我前进的是你真执与无私的爱的爱.nd selfless love短文范例Love from Mum My mother is the greatest person in my li

13、fe.Thanks to her,I can live a happy life all day.（开头）I still remember when I was ten years old.I received my mothers gift that was a wonderful book.I read it in my spare time.From the book.I have learnt that the world was full of love and beauty.I also knew that people should help each other,underst

14、and each other and love each other.I was very thankful.Because its not only a book but also my mothers deep love.(叙事)Id like to say：“Mum,I love you,Thank you!”（结尾）Teachers words for you:（教师寄语）（教师寄语）We should believe in ourselves.Because life is always full of sunshine,there is plenty of love from ou

15、r parents,friends and teachers.We also should learn to love and understand each other.homework“The love from ”n nHelping others makes us happyn n Everyone should try our best to become a person who can always help people.Its not only others but also well feel happy.n n Last summer holiday,I with my

16、best friends went to the old peoples home.There were many old men who needed to take care of.The most important,they looked lonely.So,we decided to cheered them up by helping them do something.At first,we cleaned up rooms and yard.Later on,we washed their clothes,although it was too tired,we felt ha

17、ppy and lively.Maybe we needed to do something else,however,we talked with old men and told jokes.Of course,we also n ntook photos with them,then these old men smiled to us,”Thanks for you doing for us,we all hope to see you again because you give us happiness.”Finally,our heart were filled with lov

18、e from kind old people.It was really an educational experience for us.n n If we could help other people as far as possible,the world will be full of love and we will feel happy.n nHelping others makes me happyn n Everyone can meet many difficult things.When we cant do it alone,we need help from othe

19、r people.n n One day,my friends and i played basketball with a girl who we didnt know.She played basketball very well and she played very happily as us.Maybe she wasnt carefully,while she was shotting,other people knocked into her and she fell down.It was bad.I thought she got injured because she co

20、uldnt stand up by n nherself,although we didnt know her we understood the safe was important.So we decided to send her to hospital.We took a taxi and went to hospital with her.Luckily,the doctor said she wasnt serious.At last,the girls parents came and they said we were good girls.We were happy.n n After this thing.I knew helping others makes us happy.And i think if people can help each other,the word will ba much more beautiful and love.Im lucky to be your teacher.Thank you.Bye