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1、人教版英语中考英语书面表达经典1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1书面表达假定你是李华，最近你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，你的英国朋友Peppa向你来信询问讨论情况。请你用英语写封回信，简单介绍以下讨论结果：1节水节电 2垃圾分类 3少用纸巾，重拾手帕4步行、骑自行车或公交出行、参考词汇：low carbon低碳；tissue纸巾词数：100词左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is

2、 something about it_Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about itWe can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, wed better turn off lights if possible and spend l

3、ess time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from b

4、eing cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，向我的英国朋友Peppa写信，介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行的讨论情况。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如

5、：We can do，wed better，we suggest，which contributes to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头我要介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，接下来介绍我们为低碳生活可以做的事。此处ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。2 书面表达暑假即将来临,对于如何安排孩子初中毕业后的第一个假期,家长们和孩子自己有着各自的想法。根据下表提示,写一

6、篇英语短文,描述他们的不同看法,同时发表你自己对暑假安排的观点。Parents opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some houseworkKids opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeingYour opinion注意（1）表格中的观点仅供参考,允许适当发挥;（2）开头已给出,不计入总词数;（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息;（4）词数:不少于80。How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their

7、own opinions. _【答案】How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so its important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the ki

8、ds disagree. They think its time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. Its good for us to do some sport

9、s.【解析】【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系【点睛】这篇短文用到了一些好的句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think its time to take

10、 a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.这些给文章增色不少。3书面表达根据下列表格的提示，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown的英语短文（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给的所有信息开头已给出，不计入总词数内容要点：过去现在1旧房1高楼2河水肮脏2河水清澈（clean and clear）3步行、骑自行车上班3乘公交车、小汽车上班4道路狭窄（narrow）4街道宽阔（wide），干净整洁5居住条件（livingconditions）差5生活越来越好，环境（environm

11、ent）越来越舒适6你的感想（写两到三句）Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown 【答案】Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow

12、 and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better an

13、d better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think its still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使

14、用了非常好的短语，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。而I think its still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present life.等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维

15、，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。4假如你叫李华，最近你班里的美国交换生Lucy想要感受中国的传统文化。周末你和父母商议后，打算邀请她去老舍茶馆。你通过微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何时何地见面。提示词语：Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示问题：Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you

16、meet?【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. L

17、ets meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，我通过微信告诉Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何时何地见面。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I want to，We are going to，We can，Lets meet at等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我想要邀请你去老

18、舍茶馆，接下来介绍我们去那里做什么，最后指出我们要在何时何地见面。此处want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。5为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一个选题。请你根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。内容提示：1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口2. 通过介绍

19、这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。要求：1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didnt wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that mo

20、ment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I thin

21、k we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词的过去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或者观点。写作时，避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/ were.注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。6书面表达根据下表用英语写一

22、篇80词左右的短文，内容须包括：对下表中关于（City A和City B）的全部信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地。City ACity BFlying2 hours4 hoursTemperature3018HotelThings to doFoodIn my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday._ 【答案】例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperat

23、ure there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two

24、hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.【解析】【详解】试题分析：本题给出了两个城市的飞行时常、气温、旅馆情况。食物等相关信息，要求考生对每个信息进行比较，选择自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。虽然字数要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英语写作的基本功，需要考生对常用的英语句型熟练掌握。熟悉英语的表达方式。避免汉语式英语。句型不要都用简单句。另外，一定要注意题目要求，把每一个信息都进行比较，不要有漏掉。写作亮点：本篇作文按照题目要求选择了

25、城市A作为自己暑假旅游的目的地。对于城市A的缺点，作者用了“Although”尽管一词轻轻带过。对于优点则重点突出，因为在城市A可以做很多事情，作者在这里用了词组“a lot of ”。在比较的时候，作者用了多种方式，使句子不单调，比如在比较温度时，直接用比较级“higher”在说旅馆时用了“less comfortable ”，比较食物时，用了“asas”等。在说选择城市A的原因时，用了that引导的宾语从句。本文大部分都是复杂句，显示了作者比较熟练的英语写作水平。7目前，许多中学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。要点： 不重视课外阅读的原因1. 作

26、业太多2. 没有读书习惯3. 时间花在电脑或网络上课外阅读的好处1. 更多地了解世界2. 学会如何思考3. 生活更加丰富多彩对学校或同学的建议（至少一点）注意：1. 词数: 80个左右（开头已给出的内容不记入总词数）；2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；3. 条理清楚、语句连贯；4文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. 【答案】At present only a few students do some

27、 reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others havent formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet. However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can lear

28、n more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful. Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, its a good idea to form re

29、ading clubs and learn from each other.【解析】 略8请根据表格内Zhang Ying的一些表现的提示用英语写一篇短文，把她介绍给你的外国朋友Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel（争吵） with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her

30、parents with houseworkWatch TV or play computergames for more than an hour要求：1、语言要通顺，表达要正确。2、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。3、词数不少于60个英语单词。4、文章开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。【答案】One possible versionDear Mary,Im very glad to introduce（介绍） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She ge

31、ts up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes s

32、he quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesnt go home on time and she always watches TV or plays computer games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。写作中注

33、意将张颖的情况介绍清楚。根据材料可知，本文主要用一般现在时态，第三人称进行叙述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词。【亮点说明】本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth高兴做某事；a lot of许多；get up起床等。本文中时间词如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起来逻辑清楚，条理分明。在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.考点：考查提纲类作文9近期某英文报纸就“

34、Snowplow Parents（扫雪机式父母）”这一话题展开讨论。“扫雪机式父母”的特征是不惜一切代价为孩子扫除他们生活中遇到的一切障碍，解决一切困难，以便他们可以轻松拥有成功的人生。请从下表的两种观点中选择一种观点，并结合此观点阐述自己的看法，用英文写一篇短文投稿。观点理解不理解父母出于对孩子的爱才这么做。父母控制一切，孩子没有自由。自己的看法自己的看法要求：1、词数：60-80词。2、短文应包括所选观点中的要点，可适当发挥。3、短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。_【答案】例文I really cant understand the snowplow parents.For the

35、se parents,they control everything.They clean all the obstacles in childrens lives.In this case,they think children have a successful life easily.However,Children have no freedom to do anything.It is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldnt do all the things for children.Because

36、they also need the experiences in their lives.And these experiences play an important role in a successful life.In this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.Meanwhile,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their live

37、s.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求就“Snowplow Parents（扫雪机式父母）” 这一话题展开讨论，并根据表格中所给出的提示内容选择一种观点，结合此观点阐述自己的看法。在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，然后再动笔写作。2.例文点评： 本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称，辅以第一人称。文章首先说明不理解扫雪机式父母的原因，接下来说明自己的观点，并阐述自己观点的原因。3.高分亮点：短语：in ones lives，in this case，in this way，in trouble。句

38、型：高分句型一：Inthiscase，theythinkchildrenhaveasuccessfullifeeasilyInthiscase在这样的情况下；这句话意为：在这样的情况下，他们认为孩子会更加轻松拥有成功的人生。高分句型二：they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.beintrouble陷入麻烦，这句话意为：当他们陷入麻烦时他们知道他们需要他们自己尽力去解决问题。10为了吸引外国游客，杭州旅游网希望对杭州茶文化进行宣传

39、。请你根据表格信息，用英语为其写一篇介绍，词数80左右。What is Longjing Tea famous for?Good tasteWhat is it used for?Keep healthyHow is it produced?Grow on the sides of mountains .Whats the best place to learn about it?Why?Hangzhou National Tea Museum .Longjing Tea_【答案】Tea culture is one of the most famous cultures in China. Longjing tea is one of the famous Chinese traditional teas and famous green tea. Why is Longjing Tea famous for? Because it taste good. It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking longjing tea. Longjing tea grows mainly on the sides of mountains. People