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1、第一步 审题最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-class Activities”的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。 1、你校开展课外活动的情况； 2、你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处 3、为同学选择课外活动提出建议 4、为学校开展课外活动提出建议 注意： 词数120左右； 文中不得提及真实人名、校名及地名。 稿件的开头以为你写好（不计入总词数） After-class Activities Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high

2、schools. 五个五个第一人称第一人称人称人称时态时态要点要点一般现在时一般现在时我在这儿呢我在这儿呢要求要求文体文体第二步 列提纲afterschool activities in my schoolplay basketballplay the guitarvarious kinds of activitiesdraw picturesactivities Ive taken part inbuild up(增强） my body; make me energeticenrich my knowledgeplay basketballread some bookssuggestions

3、 to studentschoose the activities which interest youdevelop your hobbysuggestions to schoolsgiving us less homeworkOnly work without play makes Jack a dull boy.should organize more activities Lets take an active part in after-class activitiesmake your school life colorfulenrich your knowledgemake yo

4、urself relaxed 第三步第三步 连词成句连词成句第四步第四步 连句成篇连句成篇恰当运用连接词或过渡句，使得文章恰当运用连接词或过渡句，使得文章 层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。 In our school, there are various kinds of activities, _, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites _ do me lots of good. _ building my body

5、 and enriching my knowledge, they also free me from the heavy work of study. _. To students, youd better choose the activities which interest you and suit you; _, they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework. _, please tak

6、e an active part in after-class activities, which will _ make your school life colorful, _ improve you learning.for examplewhichBesidesHere I have some suggestionsTo schoolsDear friendsnot onlybut also第五步第五步 检检 查查 1 1、是否符合主题要求，要点是否齐全。大小、是否符合主题要求，要点是否齐全。大小 写、拼写、标点是否有错误。写、拼写、标点是否有错误。 2 2、主语形式，谓语动词的时态和语态，主谓、主语形式，谓语动词的时态和语态，主谓是否一致，词组搭配是否正确等。是否一致，词组搭配是否正确等。 3 3、切忌用中文式英语。、切忌用中文式英语。第六步 美 化 第七步第七步 誊誊 抄抄