高三英语读后续写微技能之无灵主语 课件.pptx

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1、读后续写微技能之无灵主语他想到一个好主意。Hehadagoodidea.Agoodideacameacrosshismind.Agoodideaoccurredto/struck/hithim.无灵主语无灵主语概念 非人称主语句采用“无灵主语”(inanimate subject)，表示抽象概念、心理感觉、事物名称或时间地点等，但谓语却常常使用“有灵动词”(animate verb)表示人或社会团体的动作和行为，这类句子往往带有拟人化(personification)的修辞色彩。例如：Night approaching,darkness ruled the forest.无灵主语有灵动词无灵主

2、语好处：1 增加主语的多样性2 可以使语言更加生动3 可以使表达更加客观无灵主语种类(Observe&Summarize)Summary1：主语是_名词常见的谓语：seize(侵袭，突然控制）,choke(使哽咽)，flood(使大受感动，充满），creep（不知不觉地产生）,grip(紧抓），give way to(被代替）,desert,tear 等词。Group1:Panicseizedher.她突然惊慌失措。Despairchokedherwords.她绝望得说不出话来。Agreatsenseofrelieffloodedoverhim.他深感宽慰。Fearslowlycreepsup

3、onher.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。情感状态的抽象袭来：来：sweep/flood/rush over击垮：defeatget the better of掠掠过：flash/cross把把.撕碎：撕碎：tear.into pieces吞噬；淹没：吞噬；淹没：swallow“有灵有灵”动词动词抓住：抓住：seizeget/take hold of使失望；使失望；有有负于：于：fail逃离：逃离：escapePractice makes perfect!I.根据汉语和提示用无灵主语或有灵动词填空，并背诵。根据汉语和提示用无灵主语或有灵动词填空，并背诵。1.她感到一阵惊慌，但是强迫自己镇静地离开了房

4、间。她感到一阵惊慌，但是强迫自己镇静地离开了房间。_(主语主语)_(动动词词)her,but she forced herself to leave the room calmly.2.她站在门口她站在门口,绝望得说不出话来。绝望得说不出话来。She stood by the door,and _(主语主语)choked her words.3.她慢慢走出屋子，内疚和担忧一阵阵涌上她的心头。她慢慢走出屋子，内疚和担忧一阵阵涌上她的心头。She slowly walked out of the room,and _(主语主语)_(动词动词)her in waves.A wave/burst/se

5、nse of panicseized/took hold of/swept overdespair/hopelessnessguilt and worryrushed over/flooded over/swept overPractice makes perfect!4.她焦虑不安，在比赛前突然失去了信心。她焦虑不安，在比赛前突然失去了信心。_(主语主语)tore her into pieces,and before the competition her _(主语主语)suddenly _(动词动词)her.5.意识到小男孩说了谎时，意识到小男孩说了谎时，她的脸上掠过失望的神情。她的脸上掠

6、过失望的神情。When she realized the little boy had lied,_(主语主语)_(动词动词)her face.Anxietyconfidenceescaped/faileda look of disappointmentcrossed/flashedPractice makes perfect!II.根据根据 I 中各句进行一对一仿效写句，并背诵。中各句进行一对一仿效写句，并背诵。1.她忽然怒从心头起，但她强迫自己镇静下来。她忽然怒从心头起，但她强迫自己镇静下来。2.我抱着礼物，兴奋得什么话也说不出来。我抱着礼物，兴奋得什么话也说不出来。3.他开车驶过那座桥时

7、，阵阵孤独与痛苦涌上心头。他开车驶过那座桥时，阵阵孤独与痛苦涌上心头。4.她压力很大。她想坚持，却鼓不起勇气。她压力很大。她想坚持，却鼓不起勇气。5.他注视着那个沉默的男孩，一脸惊讶。他注视着那个沉默的男孩，一脸惊讶。Practice makes perfect!II.根据根据 I 中各句进行一对一仿效写句，并背诵。中各句进行一对一仿效写句，并背诵。1.她忽然怒从心头起，但她强迫自己镇静下来。她忽然怒从心头起，但她强迫自己镇静下来。A sudden wave of anger seized/took hold of/swept over her,but she forced herself t

8、o calm down.2.我拿着礼物，兴奋得什么话也说不出来。我拿着礼物，兴奋得什么话也说不出来。I held the present,and excitement choked my words.Practice makes perfect!3.他开车驶过那座桥时，阵阵孤独与痛苦涌上心头。他开车驶过那座桥时，阵阵孤独与痛苦涌上心头。When he drove by the bridge,loneliness and grief rushed/flooded/swept over him in waves.4.她压力很大。她想坚持，却鼓不起勇气。她压力很大。她想坚持，却鼓不起勇气。Stres

9、s tore her into pieces.She wanted to insist,but her courage failed/deserted/escaped/abandoned her.5.他注视着那个沉默的男孩，一脸惊讶。他注视着那个沉默的男孩，一脸惊讶。He stared at the silent boy and a look of surprise crossed/flashed his face.无灵主语种类Group2：Maominghaswitnessedgreatchangesinrecentyears.茂名见证了最近几年的的巨大变化。Thefollowingyear

10、saw thedeathofhismother.第二年他的妈妈去世了。Thetownboastsabeautifullake.这个镇引以为荣的是有个美丽的湖。Summary2：主语是表示_名词常见的谓语：witness(见证）,find,see,boast（有引以为荣的事物）等。地点或时间 句子翻译练习句子翻译练习1.校园里的大树见证了学生们的成长。校园里的大树见证了学生们的成长。2.上周日下午，我们在操场上见证了排球赛的决赛。上周日下午，我们在操场上见证了排球赛的决赛。3.过去的经验告诉我们某些成就是无法获得的。过去的经验告诉我们某些成就是无法获得的。The trees on campus

11、have witnessed the growth of students.Last Sunday afternoon witnessed the competitive volleyball final on the playground.Past experience has taught us that certain accomplishments are beyond attainment.无灵主语种类Group3：Thethickfogblanketedthefield.浓雾笼罩着整个大地。Anearthquakecamelikeathiefinthenight，withoutwa

12、rning.地震到来，犹如夜贼，不作预告。Therainpreventedtouristsfromenjoyingthefullmoon.雨使得游客无法欣赏到满月。Summary4：主语是表示_等名词常见谓语：blanket,come,bring,prevent,strike,hit,threaten 等词。自然现象无灵主语种类Group4：Herfacelitup/brightenedwhenIgaveherthepresent.我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑声在房间里萦绕。Whenhesawthefamiliarhandw

13、riting,tearswelledupinhiseyes.他一看到熟悉的字迹，便热泪盈眶。Summary4:主语是表示_的名词常见的谓语：light up,brighten,linger（继续存留）,well up(涌出）,fail,flash等词。身体部位和音容Practice makes perfect!I.根据汉语和提示用无灵主语或有灵动词填空，并背诵。根据汉语和提示用无灵主语或有灵动词填空，并背诵。1.他一看到熟悉的字迹，便热泪盈眶。他一看到熟悉的字迹，便热泪盈眶。The moment he saw the familiar handwriting,_(主语主语)_(动动词词)in

14、his eyes.2.激动人心的时刻到了，她的心提到了嗓子眼儿。激动人心的时刻到了，她的心提到了嗓子眼儿。Then came the exciting moment when _(主语主语)_(动词动词)her mouth.3.看到那头可怕的狼，我吓得喉咙发紧，两腿发软。看到那头可怕的狼，我吓得喉咙发紧，两腿发软。At the sight of the frightening wolf,I felt so scared that _(主语主语)_(动词动词)and _(主语主语)felt weak.tearswelled upher heartflew upmy throattightened

15、my kneesPractice makes perfect!II.根据根据 I 中各句进行一对一仿效写句，并背诵。中各句进行一对一仿效写句，并背诵。1.当老人多年后回到家乡时，激动得热泪盈眶。当老人多年后回到家乡时，激动得热泪盈眶。When the old man returned to his hometown after so many years,tears of excitement welled up in his eyes.2.接着到她表演了，她的心都快跳到嗓子眼儿了。接着到她表演了，她的心都快跳到嗓子眼儿了。Then came she to perform,and her he

16、art flew up her mouth.3.看着那头发怒的北极熊，我们吓得心脏狂跳，两腿发软。看着那头发怒的北极熊，我们吓得心脏狂跳，两腿发软。At the sight of the angry polar bear,we felt so scared that our hearts were pounding and our knees felt weak.III.微续写：根据汉语提示利用无灵主语句填写空白部分，使之构成一个完整的故事。It took 8 hours to rebuild Kellys injured face.During the long 8 hours,Rocky

17、was waiting alone outside the operation room._(他的小脸苍白，愁云满面他的小脸苍白，愁云满面).Fear,depression,anxiety,_(他心中涌现这些负面情绪他心中涌现这些负面情绪)as he waited._(因为痛苦和绝望将因为痛苦和绝望将他撕成碎片他撕成碎片),the five-year-old boy just couldnt stop crying his heart out.No sooner had the doctor told Rocky his mother was fine than he rushed into

18、the room.What first entered his eyes was his mothers face covered with bandage.His little face was pale and clouded overall these negative feelings suddenly swept over himAs suffering and helplessness tore him into piecesAs tears streamed down his cheeks _(用用with结构升级划线部分结构升级划线部分),the boy greeted his

19、 mom with a big hug and the warm words that said“I know you can!And I love you no matter how you change!”Kelly held the boy tightly in her arms,_(她的双眼涌她的双眼涌上高兴和宽慰的泪水上高兴和宽慰的泪水).With tears streaming down his cheeksand tears of happiness and relief welled up in her eyes无灵主语种类Group5：Aterriblethoughtsudd

20、enlystruckme.我突然想到一个可怕的想法。Thesightofthescenefilledmewithhorror.想到这个情景我心中充满了恐惧。Summary5:主语是表示_的名词常见的表示行为或动作的名词有如sight,thought,glance,look,idea,feeling等。常见谓语：strike,arouse(唤起），remind,delight,frighten,stun（使震惊）,overwhelm(压倒）等词。行为或动作 句子翻译练习句子翻译练习1.他从未想到做志愿者的经历会对他之后的生活产生如此深远的影响。他从未想到做志愿者的经历会对他之后的生活产生如此深远

21、的影响。2.我突然想到了一个快速系中国结的方法。我突然想到了一个快速系中国结的方法。3.这个故事使我想起了一句谚语这个故事使我想起了一句谚语“不能以貌取人不能以貌取人”。It never occurred to him that the experience of a volunteer would have such a profound effect on his later life.A quick way to tie a Chinese knot occurred to me.This story reminds me of a saying that“Never judge a p

22、erson by his appearance”.（二）句子翻译练习（二）句子翻译练习9.他们同意再也不吵架了，决心要过上最充实的生活。他们同意再也不吵架了，决心要过上最充实的生活。10.我转过身来面对她，准备好了让她看到我眼中的愤怒和失望。我转过身来面对她，准备好了让她看到我眼中的愤怒和失望。11.Lucy道歉说：道歉说：“对不起。对不起。”满脸羞愧和自责。满脸羞愧和自责。12.又绝望又疲惫，又绝望又疲惫，Jane跪了下来，眼泪顺着她的脸颊流了下来。跪了下来，眼泪顺着她的脸颊流了下来。They agreed never to quarrel again,determined to live

23、the life to the fullest.I turned over and faced her,ready to let her see the anger and disappointment in my eyes.“Sorry,”apologized Lucy,shame-faced and self-condemned.Desperate and exhausted,Jane knelt down,with tears rolling down her cheeks.无灵主语运用AnxietyhorrorAstonishment请把下列有灵主语句改为无灵主语句。1.Hefeltv

24、eryanxious._tore(撕裂)himintopieces.2.Hefelthorrible.Achillof_suddenlysweptoverhim.3.IwassoastonishedthatIcouldntsayasingleword._deprived(使丧失）meofmypowerofspeech.foundescapeddeserted4.Atdusk,hewascryinginthestreet.Dusk_himcryinginthestreet.5.Iforgothisnameatthemoment.Hisname_(被忘掉，被忽视）meatthemoment.6.Hesuddenlylosthisconfidencewhenhehadtospeak.Hisconfidencesuddenly_（背离，使失望）himwhenhehadtospeak.无灵主语运用PPT模板下载： YOU