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1、本课件已在中国版权保护中心登记作品著作权，本课件已在中国版权保护中心登记作品著作权，未经许可，禁止商用、分享、转载！未经许可，禁止商用、分享、转载！版权提示【版本：新人教册别：选择性必修四】UNIT 1 SCIENCE FICTIONUsing Language：Write a sci-fi short story(II)Learning Objectives 语言目标：理解、记忆并运用语篇中的词/块/句，尤其是描述人物心情的语言（形容词的使用）如 draw a breath,light-headed,breathe a huge sigh of relief.等;能够分析叙事语篇中的细节描写

2、，掌握语篇在修辞和语言上的特点，学会通过修辞加强细节描写和语言感染力。能力目标：掌握科幻小说的文本特征，开发想象力，结合自身经历编写自己的时光旅行科幻小说。情感目标：能够了解“时间旅行”主题在科幻作品中的意义，理解科幻作品暗含的现实意义，以及对人类未来发展的预测和启示，由此启发对人类命运的思考。ContentsAssignmentWritingLead-inIILead-inWriting Task Suppose you are going to attend China Daily“21st Century Cup”High School English Writing Conferenc

3、e,whose theme is“Your Time Travel”.Please write a sci-fi short story.写作大赛How to write a good sci-fi short story?WritingBrainstorm What will your time machine look like?magic school busracing cardoor/portal/phone boxglass elevator with buttons to set the timeflying blanket/capsuleAPP Time Traveller T

4、ime Machine:APP-Time TravellerdownloadHow to operate the machine?type in a dateWhat period in time do you want to travel to?Near future 10/20 years Past to meet with the great poet Li Bai(to steal his inspiration/drivers/ideas)-to meet Ghengis Khan great wallBrainstorm Interesting things and people

5、you would like to see thereBrainstorm interesting things and peoplemodernised school(all shining glass instead of rocks)cars with no wheels floating on cushions of airyourself in the near futureparents and friendslife changes dreams come truehave a terrible accidentImagine what it might feel like to

6、 travel through time.Brainstorm your feelingsnervous/draw a breathexcited/thrilled/waste no timestrange and unpleasantfrightened/horrible/frustratedrelieved/breathe a huge sigh of reliefhorror/fear light-headedComfortable/light-heartedElements of a good sci-fi short storyHow to prove we have actuall

7、y time travelled?(evidence like clock or people)How to operate the machine?The problem of coming back(challenges)The difference between now and then(rhetorical devices like compare and contrasts)Encounters in the new world(people,things,adventures)The destination of the time travel(when and where)Wh

8、at are the problems caused by time travel?(any worries or dangers)How do we feel about time travel?(rhetorical devices like metaphors,smiles and overstatements)_ TitleContentBeginning DevelopingClimaxEnding Organisationfind a magic time travelling device APPtravel to the future in 20 years the thing

9、s that have changed(eg.different-looking people,different buildings)the adventuresreturn to your own timeHow to write a good sci-fi short story?A good sci-fi short storyorganisationuseful expressionselementslanguage featureFinish the draft(Students Worksheet 4)Time travel is painless and it doesnt h

10、urt a bit.Ive travelled forward in time and Im here to tell you its not the travelling but what you discover in your future that really hurts.You see I found this App on the AppleStore,Time Traveller it was called,it just said“See your future”.Sounded a little wild but I thought why not?Once 1._(下载)

11、,it was easy to use.All I had to do was 2._(输入一个日期)between 10 to 20 years in the future and it would take me there.It was pretty smooth really.3._(吸一口气),I stood outside my school and typed in the year 2042.1 The screen was shining and I felt myself being pulled inside it.2 The world began to spin,an

12、d everything moved very quickly.I felt a little 4._(头晕乎乎的)but then found myself in the future.The school was still there but it had been 5._(现代化的)and 3 instead of bricks it was all shining but hard glass.Time Dancedownloadedtype in a dateDrawing a breathlight-headedmodernisedFinish the draft(Student

13、s Worksheet 4)I 6._(抓紧时间)and rushed to where we used to live.I had to avoid the cars 7._(没有车轮，而是漂浮在气垫上前行).The traffic lights were gone but they all seemed to be well organised.People on the pavements glided past me,their feet not touching the ground.I got to our apartment,no key just a huge pad.I lo

14、oked at it,and the facial recognition opened the door.Inside I saw my parents looking well and fit.I felt happy but there were three young children I did not recognize.I also saw a middle-aged man sitting in a wheelchair.I discovered that I had had an accident while training to become a ballet dance

15、r and could no longer walk.The guy in the wheelchair was me.My 8._(快乐变成了恐惧),and 4 then I cried to run out the door and wanted to rush back so I could change my fate.wasted no timewhich had no wheels but just floated on cushions of airhappiness turned to horrorFinish the draft(Students Worksheet 4)I

16、ran back to school.I dialed in the year 2023.The journey back was less comfortable,I felt sick about what I had discovered.I was also 9._(沮丧的)that I had forgotten to ask who the children were.5 My head was spinning,and I was thinking of what to do I had to change the future.I arrived back in front o

17、f the main building,10._(如释重负).I didnt waste a moment.I rushed up the steep flight of 100 steps into the school office and changed my major from dance to science.I went outside and 11._(大大地松了一口气)and promptly fell down the flight of stairs and broke my back and legs.The App never worked again and it

18、disappeared from the AppStore.Do you really want to see the future if you cant change your fate!frustratedrelievedbreathed a huge sigh of reliefPractise rhetorical devices 1 The the screen was shining and I felt myself being pulled inside it.(metaphor)The shiny screen became a sea of clouds and I fe

19、ltmyself being pulled inside it.3.instead of bricks it was all shining but hard glass.(simile)2 The world began to spin,and everything moved very quickly.(simile)The world began to spin,and everything moved like a rocket!.instead of bricks it was all shining glass but as hard as a rock.Practise rhet

20、orical devices 4 then I cried to run out the door and wanted to rush back so I could change my fate.(overstatement)then I ran out the door in a flood of tears and wanted to rush back so I could change my fate.然后，我泪如泉涌，破门而出，想要冲回去，改变我的命运。*利用介词短语进行夸张，把语义推向极端，渲染气氛，启发联想，突出事物的特征，增强艺术或感染力。Practise rhetoric

21、al devices 5 My head was spinning,and I was thinking of what to do.(overstatement)My head was spinning,and I was frantically thinking of what to do.我头晕目眩，正在抓狂地思考该怎么做。*在日常生活对话中，人们常用形容词、副词去修饰微不足道的事情，目的就是来渲染一种气氛。A possible versionTime Dance Time travel is painless and it doesnt hurt a bit.Ive travelled

22、 forward in time and Im here to tell you its not the travelling but what you discover in your future that really hurts.You see I found this App on the AppleStore,Time Traveller it was called,it just said“See your future”.Sounded a little wild but I thought why not?Once downloaded,it was easy to use.

23、All I had to do was type in a date between10 to 20 years in the future and it would take me there.It was pretty smooth really.Drawing a breath,I stood outside my schooland typed in the year 2042.The shiny screen became a sea of clouds(metaphor)and I felt myself being pulled inside it.The world began

24、 to spin,and everything moved like a rocket!(simile)I felt a little light-headed but then found myself in the future.The school was still there but it had been modernised and instead of bricks it was all shining glass but as hard as a rock.(simile)I wasted no time and rushed to where we used to live

25、.I had to avoid the cars which had no wheels but just floated on cushions of air.The traffic lights were gone but they all seemed to be well organised.People on the pavements glided past me,their feet not touching the ground.A possible versionTime Dance A possible version I got to our apartment,no k

26、ey just a huge pad.I looked at it,and the facial recognition opened the door.Inside I saw my parents looking well and fit.I felt happy but there were three young children I did not recognize.I also saw a middle aged man sitting in a wheelchair.I discovered that I had had an accident while training t

27、o become a ballet dancer and could no longer walk.The guy In the wheelchair was me.My happiness turned to horror,and then I ran out the door in a flood of tears and wanted to rush back so I could change my fate.(overstatement)Time Dance I ran back to school.I dialed in the year 2022.The journey back

28、 was less comfortable,I felt sick about what I had discovered.I was also frustrated that I had forgotten to ask who the children were.My head was spinning,and I was frantically thinking of what to do.(overstatement)I had to change the future.I arrived back in front of the main building,relieved.I di

29、dnt waste a moment.I rushed up the steep flight of 100 steps into the school office and changed my major from dance to science.I went outside and breathed a huge sigh of relief and promptly fell down the flight of stairs and broke my back and legs.The App never worked again and it disappeared from t

30、he AppStore.Do you really want to see the future if you cant change your fate!A possible versionTime Dance AssignmentIIIAssignment 1.Appreciate or act out the sci-fi short story of“Time Dance”.2.Write your own sci-fi story about a time travel.(Optional)3.Project:Design a robot or an AI device and prepare your design for submission to a science fair based on the activity 4 on page 11.(Optional)THANK YOU