2021年中考英语书面表达.pdf

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1、素 材 1 0 梦想每一个人,每一个国家，都拥有梦想。“中国梦”是目前最热的话题。作为中学生，你是如何理解中国梦的？你的中国梦是什么呢？为实现你的梦想，你将怎么做呢？假设你叫李红(Li Hong)，请以“MyDream”为题，写一篇不少于100词的英语短文。要求：1.条理清楚，有表明自己观点的句子。2.书写工整，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。3.短文中应尽量包括提示内容，可适当发挥，但不能出现真实的人名、地名。4.参考词?匚：China dream,come true,achieve ones dreams.,give up,hold on to,make up of【答案】My Dre

2、amEveryone has his dreams.As young students,we have many kinds of dreams.These dreams are ourChina dreams.The dreams can be very big,and they can also be small.In fact,a big dream is made up ofmany small dreams.My names Li Hong.I also have a dream.I dream of becoming a great scientist.From now on,I

3、haveto study hard to achieve my dream.I must learn as much as I can.When I meet any difficulty,I wont giveit up,I must get it over.Im sure its very important to dream,.Some dreams are more realistic,others are not.No matterwhat our dreams are,we should hold on to them,they can just come true one day

4、（二）为了解同学们的理想，我们在学校的100名学生中进行了一次调查采访。采访主要是围绕“What do youwant to be when you grow up?和“Why?”这两个问题进行的，请你根据以下调查数据写一份以“thedream jobs”为主题的报告。并谈谈你自己的理想与原因。词 数80个左右。（报告开头语已给出，不计人作文总词数。）The Dream Jobsln order to help us form good ideals（理想）,made a survey among 100 students in our school o Here are the result

5、s o【答 案】The Dream Jobsln order to know about the students4 ideals,we made a survey among 100students in our school last week。Here are the resultso Most of the students want to be businessmen，because they want to be rich and buy what they need in the future o More students are dreaming of beingdoctor

6、s,because they are proud of saving the sick people。And being good teachers is some students9dreamo They think its a pleasure to make students learn more from them。Different students have differentidealso As for me,I want to be a policeman,and make our society much safer(三)最 近，你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。请根据你

7、们小组的情况写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。组员理想职业原因Mary时装设计师(fashion designer)喜欢漂亮衣服，擅长绘画Kate园艺工(gardener)喜爱植物，想让城市更美Mike作家愿意与别人分享精彩故事Tom厨师为别人煮健康美味的食物你?注 意：1.词数80左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）;2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students ideal jobs.Heres a report about mygroup

8、members,ideas.Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.【答案】Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students*ideal jobs.Heres a reportabout my group members9 ideas.Mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing.Kat

9、ewants to be a gardener,she likes plants,and she wants to make the cities better.Mike would like to be awriter.Hed like to share his wonderful stories with others.Tom would like to be a cook.Hed like to cookdelicious food for others.I would like to be a policeman.I want to protect the people safe.Ho

10、pefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.（四）中国梦是目前较热的话题，你们班级对梦想这个话题也进行了一次讨论。请你以“My dream”为题，写一篇短文。要点如下：1、人人都有梦想，梦想可大可小。其实，大梦想就是由许多小的梦想构成的。2、作为中学生，我们有各种各样的梦想。这些梦想就是我们的中国梦。3、我们应该努力实现梦想，遇到困难时也不放弃梦想。4、我的梦想是注意：1）文章必须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。2）第 4 要点需用2 到 3 句话做适当发挥。3）词数80左右。（给出的内容不计入总词数）My drea

11、mEveryone has his dreams.【参考范文】My dreamEveryone has his dreams.The dreams can be very big,they can also be small.In fact,a big dream ismade up of many small dreams.As middle school students,we have all kinds of dreams.These dreams areour China dreams.We should try our best to make our dreams come tr

12、ue.When we meet any difficulty,wewont give up our dreams.(1 also have a dream.1 dream of becoming a great scientist.From now on,1have to study hard to achieve my dream.)【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该

13、符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系.写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如：in fact实际上；be made upo f由.组成；all kinds o f各种；try ones best do sth尽力做某事;give up放弃等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩。有用表达：1.I think its meaningful to be a doctor because I can help the sick people and save peoples lives.2.After th

14、at I will work in the places where they need me most.3.In fact,I just want to try my best to help them.4.From now on,I will work hard to make my dream come true.5.1 know it is easier to said than done.6.1 am sure my dream will come true one day.7.it is a dream I have had for years,every time when a

15、car goes by.8.1 cannot help but think about its mechanism.9.1 like games as much as I like science,but I never let worldly things stop me from achieving my goal,that is to be a engineer for it is the jade of my life.10.1 will study hard every day and try to improve abilities to deal with future work

16、.（五）某杂志正在征集文章，主 题 为 中国梦，我的梦。每个平凡中国人的梦想汇聚成中国梦，中国梦的实现在于我们努力实现各自的梦想。你的梦想是什么?你打算怎样实现?你的梦想能为祖国的未来做出怎样的贡献，能使祖国发生怎样的变化？请你以 中国梦，我的梦为题，写写自己的梦想、计划以及将来祖国的变化（如环境、教育、科技、生活等方面）。要求：1.词数80词左右，至少使用两处比较级；2.不得出现真实的姓名或校名。Chinas Dream,My Dream【参考范文】Chinas Dream,My DreamEveryone has his dream.My dream is to be a teacher.

17、I will try my best to study hard.1 want to leievery student study happily.Now our rivers are cleaner than before.We have our own cars in almost everyfamily and our lives are better than before.It is convenient for us to go out every day.Now we also learn inmore ways,we can learn knowledge on the Int

18、ernet,videos and so on.For us,the better our country is,thebetter our life will be.I think life in our country is getting better and better.【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求包含梦想是什么?打算怎样实现?梦想能为祖国的未来做出怎样的贡献，能使祖国发生怎样的变化?等，注意要有比较级的运用，对于比较级的相关用法要熟悉。2.例文点评：例文通过对梦想是什么?打算怎样实现?梦想能为祖国的未来做出怎样的贡献，能使祖国发生怎样的变化等一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短

19、语，句型等运用灵活。3.高分亮点：词组：try my best；want to let；study happily；go out；in our country 等；句型：I will try my best to study hard./Our rivers are cleaner than before./It is convenient for us to go outevery day./For us,the better our country is,the better our life will be./I think life in our country is gettingb

20、etter and better.【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如 try my best；want to let；study hiippily：go out；in our country 等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如 however；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。（六）假如你是李华，你

21、的美国朋友T im 给你发来电子邮件，询问你有何梦想。请你给他回复电子邮件,主要内容包括：1.你的梦想是什么；2.你为这个梦想做过什么；3.为实现梦想你还需要怎样努力。要求：1.内容要全面，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；2.词数不少于8 0 词。Dear Tim,How,s it going?Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Tim,Hows it going?As we all know,its important fbr us to have dreams.My dream is to be a doctor becausea doctor can cure people

22、and even save peoples life.I still remembered what happened when I was a middle school student.I often went to the local hospital tosee what doctors were doing on weekends.Sometimes I even played games about being doctors andpatients.Not only was it interesting but also was educative.However,I will

23、try my best to be admitted bymy ideal medical university.In that case,It will be easier for me to be a doctor.Only in this way can Irealize my dream better.Look forward to hearing from you.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，你的美国朋友T im 给你发来电子邮件，询问你有何梦想。请你以李华身份给他回复电子邮件，首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写

24、作。2.例文点评：本文时态为一般过去和一般将来时，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。3.高分亮点：短语：save peopled life.；a middle school student；the local hospital；on weekends.；try one5s best to dosth.。句型：In that case,It will be easier for me to be a doctor.；Only in this way can I realize my dream better.；Look forward to hearing from you.