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1、四省联考作文202303 Fish 202303 Fish作文一：14行你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：1音乐会特点；2观看感受；3意见建议。注意：1写作词数应为80左右；2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。This online concert is absolutely fantastic.Step 1 审题文体：评论，不需要太正式话题：线上音乐会、中英文化交流对象：音乐会主办方 音乐会听众人称：第一二人称为主时态：一般过去时为主阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。My husband a

2、nd I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children.Its amazing to watch as they discover their world.While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine,our oldest daughter,Kaytlin,called me to the doorway.Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel.We watched it from a distance,not wanting

3、to disturb it or scare off its mother.But after a long wait-and looking all around our house for signs of a nest or a mother-we realized the tiny squirrel was lost.Shaking terribly,he was weak,thin,and hungry.We tried to find an expert to help,but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed tha

4、t there were no wildlife experts in our area.After some quick research,we concluded that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting chance was to care for him ourselves.So a trip to the local store for milk and supplies was in order.More research taught us how much to feed him,how to estimate his

5、age,how and when to wean（断奶）him，and that we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own.Our daughters and I took turns in feeding“Squirt.”Kaytlin took on the most responsibility.She taught him to eat from a bottle,and she woke in the night for his feeds.To our relief,Squirt soon became

6、healthy and strong.Within a few weeks he became more active.He would chatter（吱吱叫）for his next meal，playfully go around the girls，and lie down on them for sleep.It wasnt long before he was weaned onto solid food and reintroduced to the wild.His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny.Just l

7、ike a child,he would play in the grass some and then run back to Kaytlin for safety.Soon she had him climbing trees and finding nest material.注意：1续写词数应为150左右；2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。One day in the trees,Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels._One night,Squirt didnt come back to our house and it ra

8、ined hard._如何捕捉原文线索 如何设置事件观察人与自然场景下的场景积累事件观察原文冲突设置迁移与固化PPT下载 http:/husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children.Its amazing to watch as they discover their world.While we were outdoors last sum mer enjoying the sunshine,our oldest daughter,Kaytlin,called me to the doorway.Beneath

9、 the steps was a baby red squirrel.We watched it from a distance,not wanting to disturb it or scare off its mother.But after a long wait-and looking all around our house for signs of a nest or a mother-we realized the tiny squirrel was lost.我和丈夫陪伴孩子观察世界。-本篇文章视角是我和丈夫，但叙事主体倾向于our children。文章人物添加松鼠。找松鼠

10、妈妈没找到。Conflict小松鼠和家人分离了。事件观察人物在事件中的作用，确定人称视角以及人物性格。事件的过程观察起始。事件发生的具体环境，家的周边。细节的观察。PPT下载 http:/terribly,he was weak,thin,and hungry.We tried to find an expert to help,but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area.After some quick research,we conc

11、luded that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting chance was to care for him ourselves.So a trip to the local store for milk and supplies was in order.More research taught us how much to feed him,how to estimate his age,how and when to wean（断奶）him，and that we should let him go as soon as he co

12、uld survive on his own.Our daughters and I took turns in feeding“Squirt.”Kaytlin took on the most responsibility.She taught him to eat from a bottle,and she woke in the night for his feeds.To our relief,Squirt soon became healthy and strong.Within a few weeks he became more active.He would chatter（吱

13、吱叫）for his next meal，playfully go around the girls，and lie down on them for sleep.It wasnt long before he was weaned onto solid food and reintroduced to the wild.His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny.Just like a child,he would play in the grass some and then run back to Kaytlin for s

14、afety.Soon she had him climbing trees and finding nest material.时间观察：人物在实践中的作用：照顾松树 事件的过程观察：1.其实是松树需要照顾 2.目的是回归自然 3.事件的具体：家里 4.细节的观察：松树的状态变化细节描写conflict：小松鼠十分的孱弱Solution：我们自己照顾，知道他可以survive on his own。PPT下载 http:/day in the trees,Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels._One night,Squirt didnt

15、come back to our house and it rained hard._conflict：遇到其他的松鼠conflict：没回家思考：遇到松鼠能发生什么？思考：最后的结局 松鼠要不要回家？愉快的玩耍？然后？所谓的矛盾冲突要写出来不敢互动!2.每天准点回家 1.遇到灰松鼠的互动 思考：1 要不要去找松鼠要去找有没有找到松鼠？没有找到比较合理！第二天再去找！找到了PPT下载 http:/was eviedent that he was frightened by the suddeen encounter.It was evident that the sudden encounte

16、r frighted him,who jumped down the tree.and hid himself behind Kaytlin.【切换视角】My daughters stroked him on the back to comfort him and encouraged him to playwith the squirrel family.【切换视角到松鼠】Yet，he was apparently not ready.【加快进度 这里准备好没准备好都可以，没有必要纠结】Before long，the gray squirrels left into the forest a

17、nd Squirt restarted building his nest.【每天准点回家】For the following days,he would play and work without our company during the daytime and come home at dusk.【我们非常担心】We all were on pins and needles，especially Kaytlin.【出发找松鼠(家长提议)-记得前面筑巢】We went to the tree in which he chose to settle,but the nest Squirt

18、built was totally runined and no trace of him was to be found.【停止寻找（家长）,但是未免显得没有人性，前面把景的恶劣写清楚】The rain pouring down and the forest pitch-dark,I persuade my daughter to try tomorrow.【晚上辗转难眠】We tossed and turned in bed all night and began our search again at dawn/the moment/instantly the sun rose.Luck

19、ily,guided by the familiar chatter，it didnt take us long to spot the red creature，【第一段的灰松鼠的问题要来解决】beside whom were the gray squirrels that we met the other day.Apparently，they provided shelter for our little boy.PPT下载 http:/was eviedent that he was frightened by the suddeen encounter.It was evident

20、that the sudden encounter frighted him,who jumped down the tree.and hid himself behind Kaytlin.【切换视角】My daughters stroked him on the back to comfort him and encouraged him to playwith the squirrel family.【切换视角到松鼠】Yet，he was apparently not ready.【加快进度 这里准备好没准备好都可以，没有必要纠结】Before long，the gray squirrel

21、s left into the forest and Squirt restarted building his nest.【每天准点回家】For the following days,he would play and work without our company during the daytime and come home at dusk.PPT下载 http:/all were on pins and needles，especially Kaytlin.【出发找松鼠(家长提议)-记得前面筑巢】We went to the tree in which he chose to se

22、ttle,but the nest Squirt built was totally runined and no trace of him was to be found.【停止寻找（家长）,但是未免显得没有人性，前面把景的恶劣写清楚】The rain pouring down and the forest pitch-dark,I persuade my daughter to try tomorrow.【晚上辗转难眠】We tossed and turned in bed all night and began our search again at dawn/the moment/in

23、stantly the sun rose.Luckily,guided by the familiar chatter，it didnt take us long to spot the red creature，【第一段的灰松鼠的问题要来解决】beside whom were the gray squirrels that we met the other day.Apparently，they provided shelter for our little boy.PPT下载 http:/werer feeding him his nest meal，andgivinghim his ne

24、st home.2.We looked at each other and smiled.This time he was ready.3.”He must be hungry,we shall take him home”I suggested.To my surprise,Kaytlin shook her head,”This is his home,his new home.”ChatGPTPPT下载 http:/found a hollow in the old tree，where their nest was snug with moss and tree leaves.Star

25、tled by the unexpected stranger，The gray squireel，crouching on the tree，Chartered fiercely and trembled his furry tail.After spotting this,squirt abandoned the stick in his mouth and ran back to Kaytlin for shelter.“He seemingly couldnt survive on his own temporary.”My daughter turned to us and stro

26、ke him affectionately.The following days witnessed his active round-trip，who was busy in carrying sticks and pitching up the nest but came down to the house for food.We Immediately headed for the nest，only to find it was destroyed by the heavy rain.It depended my daughters concern after searching ev

27、erywhere around our house.kaytlin was anxious that The tiny squirrel was threatened by some other noctural creatures.we had No alternative distressed the whole night.But two hour relief.When the some rose,the squirt appeared and was waiting for his feeds.,companied by the Family of gray squirrels.It

28、 seemed That they had formed an intimate acquaintance and he could be reintroduced to the wild.The warm experience hot my children to appreciate life with respect and love in harmony With nature.PPT下载 http:/Immediately headed for the nest，only to find it was destroyed by the heavy rain.It depended m

29、y daughters concern after searching everywhere around our house.kaytlin was anxious that The tiny squirrel was threatened by some other noctural creatures.we had No alternative distressed the whole night.But two hour relief.When the some rose,the squirt appeared and was waiting for his feeds.,companied by the Family of gray squirrels.It seemed That they had formed an intimate acquaintance and he could be reintroduced to the wild.The warm experience hot my children to appreciate life with respect and love in harmony With nature.PPT下载 http:/PPT下载 http:/PPT下载 http:/单击此处编辑母版标题样式25