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1、 I like Liu Qian.He is a creative magician.I like Liu Qian because he is a creative magician.1大家好2009 CCTV Spring Festival Galasurpriseddid magic showsHe did magic shows so well that everyone was really surprised.sothat(春节联欢晚会）春节联欢晚会）He did magic shows well.Everyone was surprised.2大家好He took the rin

2、g out of an egg.People cheered for him.whenas soon asafterbecause3大家好won many prizesworked hard,Make sentences with suitable conjunctionbecause sothatbeforeafterwhen(连词）连词）4大家好not like,fish,healthyalthoughsothat butbecauseMake sentences with suitable conjunction(连词）连词）5大家好knew Liu Qian,met,2001,Beij

3、ingnotuntil whenas soon as beforeaftersinceMake sentences with suitable conjunction(连词）连词）Jay6大家好Which article do you think is better?Why?Liu Qin was 7 years old.He fell in love with magic.He graduated from the university,then he became a magician.He doesnt have a teacher to teach him,but he works v

4、ery hard.He spends all his time thinking how to design the shows.He also did shows on streets to improve himself.Everyone knows it is the biggest challenge for a magician.When Liu Qian was 7 years old,he fell in love with magic.He did not become a professional magician until he graduated from the un

5、iversity.No one knows that he learns by himself.He works so hard that he even does not have time to relax.He spends all his time thinking how to design the shows.He also did shows on streets to improve himself.As we know,it is the biggest challenge for a plex sentence(复合句）复合句）7大家好JackLiu Qian s pen

6、pal8大家好His parents died in a car accident.He likes watching Liu Qians magic shows.On weekends he is busy.He does his homework and takes lessons.He is too stressed out because of the exams.BirthdayMarch.12th,1994He was born on March.12th,1994.The boys name is Jack.9大家好大家有疑问的，可以询问和交流大家有疑问的，可以询问和交流可以互相

7、讨论下，但要小声点可以互相讨论下，但要小声点可以互相讨论下，但要小声点可以互相讨论下，但要小声点大家有疑问的，可以询问和交流大家有疑问的，可以询问和交流可以互相讨论下，但要小声点可以互相讨论下，但要小声点可以互相讨论下，但要小声点可以互相讨论下，但要小声点 Jack used to have a happy family.Unluckily,his parents died in a car accident.He was 10 years old.However,he doesnt give up himself.He works very hard.He gets good grades.

8、He likes watching Liu Qians magic shows to relax himself.He is a top student.He has a big problem these days.He is too stressed out.The important exam is coming.whenso thatAlthoughbecausebecause,although,when,sothat12大家好Dear Jack,I know you have many problems.You have much homework.You have to sleep

9、 late.Then you feel sleepy in class.You are too stressed out because of the exams.You study hard.Your English is not good.Here I have some advice for you.First,why not sleep a little earlier?You dont waste time.You can finish your homework quickly.Second,youd better relax yourself by watching my sho

10、w.Third,you must be confident.I hope you will be better soon.Yours,Liu Qian13大家好Dear Jack,I know you have many problems.You have so much homework that you have to stay up.Then you feel sleepy in class.You are too stressed out because of the exams.Although you study hard,you are not good at English.H

11、ere I have some advice for you.First,why not sleep a little earlier?If you make full use of every minute,you will finish your homework quickly.Second,youd better relax yourself by watching my show.Third,you must be confident.I hope you will be better soon.Yours,Liu Qian充分利用充分利用14大家好Writing strategy:

12、Writing strategy:proper conjunctions(适当的连词适当的连词)Other ways:good phrases（词组）（词组）How can we make the articles more fluent(流畅的）流畅的）and more beautiful?wonderful sentence patterns（句型）（句型）15大家好假如你是假如你是Jack,写信给刘谦，感谢他的建议，写信给刘谦，感谢他的建议，并告诉他你的变化以及对考试的信心。并告诉他你的变化以及对考试的信心。你的变化包括：你的变化包括：1.按时完成作业，睡眠每天按时完成作业，睡眠每天8小

13、时小时2.学习努力学习努力取得好成绩取得好成绩3.自信，不紧张自信，不紧张16大家好Dear Liu Qin,Thanks for your last letter.Your advice is really helpful.I have changed a lot.Now The exam is coming soon.Actually I am not worried at all.I believe I will do a good job after working hard.Yours,JackDont forget to show us wonderful sentences!17

14、大家好 I have changed a lot.Now,I finish my homework on time and hardly stay up late at night.Because I sleep 8 hours every day,I am energetic in class.Also,I make full use of every minute.I study so hard that I can get good grades.To tell you the truth,I am pretty confident now and dont feel nervous at all.Whats more,I often watch your shows when I feel tired.How wonderful your shows are!18大家好 Improve the letter you wrote.B.Share the letter with your friend,find and learn some better sentences.19大家好谢谢20大家好