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1、请你根据下表提供的信息写一篇题为请你根据下表提供的信息写一篇题为Changes in Chinese Peoples Diet的短文的短文,短文可分为三小节短文可分为三小节:1)state the changes in peoples diet in the past five years;2)give possible reasons for the changes;3)draw your own conclusions.注意注意:1.尽可能少引用数据尽可能少引用数据;2.词数词数100 左右左右19992000200120022003Grain43%42%41%41%40%Milk13%1

2、4%14.5%14.5%15%Meat25%25%26%26.5%27.5%Fruit&Vegetables19%19%18.5%18%17.5%Total100%100%100%100%100%There have been some changes in the diet of the Chinese people.Grain,the main food of the most people in China,is now playing a less important role.The amount of fruit and vegetables in the average pers

3、ons diet has also dropped by 1.5%from 1999 to 2003.The mount of milk and meat has increased.The changes in diet can be explained by several reasons.For one thing,with the development of the economy,people can afford to buy better foods.For another,people have realized the importance of a balanced di

4、et.In a word,the changes are the signs of the improvement in peoples lives.There is no doubt that therell be greater changes in peoples diet in the future.第一步：第一步：点明主题点明主题第三步：归纳总结并得出结论第三步：归纳总结并得出结论第二步：观察图表中数据的第二步：观察图表中数据的增减总趋势，分类式阐明，增减总趋势，分类式阐明，并说明原因并说明原因.There have been some changes in the diet of

5、the Chinese people.Grain,the main food of the most people in China,is now playing a less important role.The amount of fruit and vegetables in the average persons diet has also dropped by 1.5%from 1999 to 2003.The amount of milk and meat has increased.The changes in diet can be explained by several r

6、easons.For one thing,with the development of the economy,people can afford to buy better foods.For another,people have realized the importance of a balanced diet.In a word,the changes are the signs of the improvement in peoples lives.There is no doubt that therell be greater changes in peoples diet

7、in the future.The amount of be explained byFor one thingFor anothereconomyrealizedplaying a less important roleIn a word总结规律总结规律 图表式作文写作分图表式作文写作分三步三步：一、开头一、开头 Starting 二、分析二、分析 数据数据 Analyzing 三、得出结论三、得出结论 Coming to a conclusion第一第一,开门见山开门见山地点名本图表所反映的主题地点名本图表所反映的主题常用的词汇有：常用的词汇有：1.table,chart,figure,g

8、raph1.table,chart,figure,graph2.describe,tell,show,represent2.describe,tell,show,represent第二第二,分析分析数据间主要差异及趋势数据间主要差异及趋势,然后描写然后描写在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时，可采用在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时，可采用分类式分类式或或对比对比式式以支持主题，并阐明必要的理由。要注意层次清楚。以支持主题，并阐明必要的理由。要注意层次清楚。1.上升：上升：rise,increase,more than2.下降：下降：drop,reduce,decrease,fall,less than

9、3.强化论点：强化论点：First,Second,ThirdFinallyFirstly,Secondly,ThirdlyFinallyFirst of all,Then,Next,At lastFurthermore;Besides;MoreoverWhats more,;At the same time,;What is worse,4.比较：比较：compare to/with,compared to/with,in contrast to5.相同：相同：asas,the same as,similar to6.不同：不同：different from,difference betwee

10、n/among第三，第三，归纳总结归纳总结或发表评论或发表评论.(有时第三步可省略）有时第三步可省略）常用的词汇有：常用的词汇有：1.Finally;Therefore2.In a word;In short;In the end;In other words;As a result;In all;3.Generally speaking4.As I have shown;As has been stated;As you(we)all know School-age children attending school94%95%96%97%98%99%1.Describe the infor

11、mation in the bar graph.2.Compare 1985 with 2002,what was the change?3.Why you think these changes have happened?Discussion Discussion The number of school-age children attending school increased between 1985 and 2002.In 1985,more than 95 percent of school-age children attended school,while in 2002

12、more than 99 percent of school-age children attended school,rising by nearly 4 percent.I think,it is with the help of the government that more and more school-age children have the chance of attending school.According to the graph and the present situation as well,it is hoped that all the school-age

13、 children will go to school in 2010.I would like to put the bar for 2010 as high as 100%.A Writing Practice请根据下面曲线图（请根据下面曲线图（graph）“The number of car accidents in 2001”，写一篇，写一篇文章。文章。1描述描述2001年不同月份汽车事故分布年不同月份汽车事故分布（distribution）及总趋势。）及总趋势。2描述汽车事故的可能原因及对策。描述汽车事故的可能原因及对策。3词数：词数：100左右。左右。4参考词汇：高峰参考词汇：高峰

14、peak；多雨的日；多雨的日子子rainy days。Main points:Part 1:demonstrate the general situation 1.two peaks in accidents in 2001 March,number of accidents:35 August,number of accidents:422.accidents decrease from August to December3.the lowest point of the year:DecemberPart 2:Causes:rainy season,spring and summer P

15、art 3:Your own opinion or comments Possible version From the graph，we can see that there were two peaks in accidents in 2001One was in March with the number of accidents 35The other was in August with the number of accidents 42，which was the highest point on the distribution lineFrom August，the numb

16、er of car accidents decreased till it reached the lowest point of the year in December The two peaks occurred in spring and summer，the two seasons which had most of the years rainDriving tends to be more dangerous on rainy daysMaybe the weather is the most important reason for car accidentsBe carefu

17、l，when you drive a car on rainy days.As can be seen from the graph,the number of car accidents in 2001 is quite different from month to month.The first peak appears in March.Obviously with the temperature going up in spring,people become easy to get impatient and to lose their attention,thus causing

18、 the accidents.Then the number drops for a short time before a sudden increase to the top point around whole year.Actually its not hard to connect the large number of car accidents with the rainy days in August,which makes cars difficult to stop in time on the slippery road.However,the number keeps

19、falling till December.As far as I am concerned,to decrease the car accidents,we are able to do a lot.Never drive when we are too tired to concentrate our attention,keep the car speed slow after rain,try to take public transportation as often as we can.Above all,it is of great importance to develop t

20、he awareness of building a harmonious society.-Wang Sujie Seeing from the diagram,we can know the number of car accidents in 2001 reached the peak in March and August,with a sharp decrease in the following months,especially in December,with just ten car accidents.According to the result,there is a f

21、actor,which is of great importance,that is,the weather.There are more rainy days than other time in March and August,which contributes to the growing number of car accidents.From the above discussion we have enough reasons to appeal to drivers to be careful when it rains.With our common efforts,ther

22、e will be fewer accidents but more safe driving.Be careful now,for you and for your family.-Liu Xin As is shown in the graph,there were two peaks of the number of the car accidents n 2001,in March and August.After the second peak,the number of the car accidents were rapidly decreasing until the last

23、 month of the year.There is only one reason for this change behind the situation reflected in the table.It rains a lot in March and August so that car accidents often happen on rainy days.From the above,I think the way to solve the problems is easy to find.Firstly we can take public transportation d

24、uring the rainy days to prevent car accidents for happening to ourselves.Secondly we should care more about the conditions on the road and drive slowly.Perhaps the most importantly of all is to raise the awareness of the safety in car driving.In a word,please be careful when driving a car on the roa

25、d especially on rainy days.-Fei Siyu每每百百户户拥拥有有电电脑脑数数 Recently the average number of personal computers in every 100 families has been increasing rapidly in our city.In 1995 there were only two or three computers in per hundred families.In 1997,10%of families began to own computers,and 20%in 1999.Wit

26、h the wide use of computers in all kinds of fields and the increase of family income.50%of the families have their own computers at home in 2001.Searching the information easily and conveniently on internet and computer lessons taught in schools are also the reasons why so many families have computers.It is believed that in the near future more and more people will buy computers for their own.Thank you!