读后续写father'sbestflowers学习.pptx

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1、英语科考试说明读后续写：提供一篇350词以内的语言材料，原文多是情节丰富的记叙文，偶有少量的议论文，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。第1页/共23页第二节：读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。How to choose the underlined key word

2、s in your writing?How to make full use of the given sentences and the plot?How to make the story coherent and logical?第2页/共23页My Dads Best FlowersThe title:第3页/共23页Whats the writing style of the passage?A.Narration 记叙文 B.Exposition 说明文 C.Argumentation 议论文 第4页/共23页A storywhenwherewhowhathowwhyStep 1.

3、Read for basic information第5页/共23页Who:Mom,Dad,sister and I When:When living in the first homeWhere:balconyWhat:carnationsCharactersPlotsTheme?Step 1.Read for basic informationWhy/how:第6页/共23页 I remember my first home was a small apartment on the second floor with a lovely and spacious balcony.When m

4、y mom was busy in the kitchen she let me stay on the balcony watching the kids playing in the street.On that balcony I played sometimes with my elder sister,Maria.She was seven years old and when my mom was absent she was like a mother to me.The balcony was a great hobby place for my father.After hi

5、s work he used to grow carnations(康乃馨)in flower boxes.His carnations were red,pink and white,and everyone appreciated them for their beauty.Para1.My father grew carnations on the balcony and everyone appreciated their beauty.Part1 the Balcony lovely and spacious Why?Mother let me stay on the balcony

6、.watchingPlay with elder sister A great hobby place for father grow carnations第7页/共23页He took care of them with so much love and devotion.He dealt carefully with his flowers like a mother taking care of her baby.Many times I sat on the floor of the balcony for hours observing him and his lovely flow

7、ers with patience.He was always doing something on that balcony.He was watering them every day,cleaning the balcony floor,changing the potting soil and when the stems(茎)were thick,strong and high enough,he started his improvement operation like a doctor.My dad took a tiny knife and with his left han

8、d he held the stem of the carnation and measured the height.Then he made a small mark on the stem with his finger.Afterwards he made a sharp cut with the knife,just enough to fit in a grain of barley(插穗的芽).Then he bandaged the stem with a small bandage.His job was then to water the plants and to tak

9、e care of them.“No one should touch them”,he said to mom.Every day,when he came home from work he went straight to the balcony.Mom used to tell us:“Do not touch daddys flowers.”For us it was a fascinating experience to watch how the small stems were growing and making flowers.When the carnations had

10、 grown big enough,my dad enjoyed watching them every day.We the kids did too.Para2-4.My father took care of the flowers with love and devotion and he didnt let others touch them.Part2 第8页/共23页He took care of them with so much love and devotion.He dealt carefully with his flowers like a mother taking

11、 care of her baby.Many times I sat on the floor of the balcony for hours observing him and his lovely flowers with patience.He was always doing something on that balcony.He was watering them every day,cleaning the balcony floor,changing the potting soil and when the stems(茎)were thick,strong and hig

12、h enough,he started his improvement operation like a doctor._the carnations_the carnations(Paragraph2)(Paragraph2)dealing withdealing with第9页/共23页How do you know my father loved the flowers so much?dealt carefully with like a mother:was watering,cleaning,changingWriting tips:Describe sbs actions by

13、using some proper verbs and adverbs to show his or her strong feelings and emotions.第10页/共23页My dad took a tiny knife and with his left hand he held the stem of the carnation and measured the height.Then he made a small mark on the stem with his finger.Afterwards he made a sharp cut with the knife,j

14、ust enough to fit in a grain of barley(插穗的芽).Then he bandaged the stem with a small bandage.His job was then to water the plants and to take care of them.“No one should touch them”,he said to mom.Every day,when he came home from work he went straight to the balcony.Why can the writer describe everyt

15、hing father did in details?Sat for hours observing with patience Interested-understand fathers love for-?Copy/have a try _ the carnations_ the carnations(Paragraph3)(Paragraph3)improvement operation on improvement operation on第11页/共23页How do you know my father loved the flowers so much?Started impro

16、vement operations like a doctor:took,held and measuredmake small mark ,make a sharp cut,fit in,bandage,No one should touch them.Writing tips:Describe sbs actions by using some proper verbs and adverbs to show his or her strong feelings and emotions.第12页/共23页Mom used to tell us:“Do not touch daddys f

17、lowers.”For us it was a fascinating experience to watch how the small stems were growing and making flowers.When the carnations had grown big enough,my dad enjoyed watching them every day.We the kids did too.Mothers warning A fascinating experience watching _the carnations_the carnations(Paragraph4)

18、(Paragraph4)watchingwatching第13页/共23页Step 2.Read for plot development clues(情节发展线索情节发展线索)the balcony(Paragraph1)the balcony(Paragraph1)_the carnations_the carnations(Paragraph2)(Paragraph2)_ the carnations_ the carnations(Paragraph3)(Paragraph3)_the carnations_the carnations(Paragraph4)(Paragraph4)P

19、art2:(2-4)How dad took care of the carnationsMothers warningPart 1:Main introductionPart 1:Main introductionFathers warning&dealing withdealing withwatchingwatching improvement operation on improvement operation on第14页/共23页carnations第15页/共23页The given story:Two parts:Part1(para1):My father grew carn

20、ations on the balcony and everyone appreciated their beauty.Part2(para2,3,4):My father took care of the flowers with love and devotion and he didnt let others touch them.Part3?Continuous writing 第16页/共23页Step 3.Predict possible Step 3.Predict possible plot developmentplot developmentPart3(5-6)What w

21、ill happen?Mother and father s warning-anxiety第17页/共23页 1.One day,my elder sister,who loved dad very much,had a great idea.2.When my dad arrived,he went as usual,straight to the balcony and saw his flowers lying on the floor like dead animals.What is Marias great idea about?(clue)What did she do wit

22、h the lovely flowers on the balcony?make a sharp cutWhy did she do so?Because of her love for dadWhat is moms reaction to her idea/action?How did dad react to it?His feelings/words/actionsTurn back to the title“my dads best flowers”.The changes about dads feelingsThe given sentences:第18页/共23页 logict

23、he titlethe given storythe underlined wordsthe two given sentencesTip4:Write logically according to your reading and the two given sentences第19页/共23页The underlined key words:balcony,mom,street,appreciate,flowers,lovely,made a sharp cut,fascinating,Tip3:The key words that respectively stand for the m

24、ost important information,the main character and the main object should be chosen in your writing.Step 4.Draft a continuation(起草续篇)第20页/共23页Step 4.Draft a continuation(起草续篇)1.One day,my elder sister,who loved dad very much,had a great idea._ 2.When my dad arrived,he went as usual,straight to the bal

25、cony and saw his flowers lying on the floor like dead animals._1.Marias great idea.-She said/suggested2.What she did-make a sharp cut3.mothers reactionspeechless/anxious/worried/shocked His reaction:facial expression&action shocked/upset/angry/calm/burst into anger/silent/without a word/roar/smile1.What dad said:2.What dad did:3.Marias explanation 4.result 第21页/共23页Step 5.Step 5.Check and polish your version(Check and polish your version(检查检查润润色色)学生习作学生习作注意：注意：1.人称人称 时态时态 直接引语直接引语 间接引语间接引语 句子结构句子结构 单句单句 从从句句 并列句的使用并列句的使用 2.词性要准确词性要准确 第22页/共23页感谢您的观看！第23页/共23页