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1、公开课高中英语写作课件第1页，此课件共30页哦What makes a good essay?Theessay第2页，此课件共30页哦A good essay is usually made up ofa topic paragraph,some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3Concluding paragraph第3页，此课件共30页哦To many stu

2、dents,school life is boring and tiring.However,I find my school life meaningful and colourful.generalstatementtopicstatementTopicparagraph(Introductionparagraph)GeneralstatementTopicstatement第4页，此课件共30页哦SupportingParagraphs(Body)ParagraphsTSSSSSSSSSFirstly,.Firstly,.Secondly,.Secondly,.Moreover,.Mor

3、eover,.Finally,Finally,.However,.However,.In addition,In addition,Furthermore,.Furthermore,.第5页，此课件共30页哦ConclusionPersonally,inconclusion,inbrief,Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthat.Insummary,itiswiser.第6页，此课件共30页哦TheparagraphWhatmakesagoodparagraph?第7页，此课件共30页哦Agoodparagraphiso

4、nethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Therearedifferentkindsofbee.Someliveinlargegroupslikethehoneybee,andmaketheirnestsintreesorholesintherocks.Otherspeciesmaketheirnestsinholesintheground.Therearealsovarietiesthatdonotliveingroupsatalltopicsentence第8页，此课件共30页哦Whereveryougoinourschoo

5、l,youseegreenlawnsandtreesandbeautifulflowers.Dottedamongthesetreesandflowersaremanybuildingsofdifferentstyles.Astreamrunsthroughourschoolandyoualwaysseeeverythingreflectedinthewater.Topicsentence:_justlikeagarden.Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.Ourschoolis第9页，此课件共30页哦Agoodpara

6、graphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.IbelieveEnglishismoreimportantthanotherforeignlanguagesformanyreasons.Firstofall,Englishisspokenbyalargenumberofpeople,andthesepeoplearethemostwidelyspreadacrosstheworldinagreatmanycountries.Secondly,Englishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageontheinternet.Ithasbecome

7、anon-linelanguage.Thirdly,the2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinourcountryandEnglishwillbeveryuseful.Lastly,第10页，此课件共30页哦正确使用有关连接词时间先后：时间先后：first,then,later,intheend,eventually,sincethen,afterawhile转折关系：转折关系：but,however,onthecontrary,nevertheless因果关系：因果关系：because,since,as,thanksto,owingto,asaresultof,forth

8、ereasonthat让步关系：让步关系：though,although,evenif,eventhough,inspiteofthefactthat递进关系：递进关系：whatsmore,inaddition,furthermoreontheonehandontheotherhand,条件关系：条件关系：if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat表表列列举：举：forexample/instance,takeforexample,thatstosay,inotherwords,asfollows表表总总结：结：inshort,inbrief,inconclusion

9、,inaword,onthewhole,ashasbeenstated第11页，此课件共30页哦Agoodparagraphisonewithvariedsentencepatterns.第12页，此课件共30页哦丰富的句式：丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。e.g.Whatakindboyheis!Howdisappointedhewas!感叹句感叹句强调句强调句e.g.Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.第13页，此课件共30

10、页哦e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.There comesthepolicecar.Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhen theymettheyoungman.e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.倒装句倒装句省略句省略句with短语短语第14页，此课件共30页哦e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafes

11、shouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.Letscometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.定语从句定语从句e.g.ThatswhatIshoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoeverneedshelpatpresent.各种名词性从句各种名词性从句第15页，此课件共30页哦e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.Themomentwereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoh

12、arvesting.Solongasweworkharderatourlessons,wellcatchupsoonerorlater.各种状语从句各种状语从句第16页，此课件共30页哦1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）2.ThoughImweak,Illmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhel

13、p.(用虚拟语气）What surprises him is thatthe little girl knows so many things.Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.第17页，此课件共30页哦5

14、.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)6.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)7.Iwontbelievewhathesays.（nomatterwhat状语从句）8.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.（祈使句+and）Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing,they went back to schoo

15、l.No matter what he says,I wont believe.Study hard and youll make rapid progress.第18页，此课件共30页哦9HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使使用倒装句用倒装句)10.Weallthinkheisagreatman.(thinkhighlyof)11.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.(turnout)12.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(themorethemore)No

16、sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Weallthink highly of him.The plan turned out to be a failure.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.第19页，此课件共30页哦Summary:A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph,some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.Agoodpa

17、ragraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Agoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.Agoodparagraphisonewithadvancedvocabularyandvariedsentencepatterns.第20页，此课件共30页哦ASSESSMENTstructureIstheessaydividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?contentAreallthedetailsstated?

18、Iseverythingtothepoint(切切题题)?LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高（高级词汇级词汇）?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）（句式）?Letsimproveit:第21页，此课件共30页哦Goodafternoon,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”.Nowinourschoolthe

19、reisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife_._,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial._,theywanttowinothersadmirationandrespect.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool._,westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues.Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife._,itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeP

20、rojectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntoschool._,itistheinnerbeautyratherthanourappearancethatmakesusrespectable.Thankyouforlistening!A.thereasonswhytheydosoareasfollowsB.firstlyC.lastbutnotleastD.whatsmore E.asfarasIamconcernedF.SecondlyABCDEF第22页，此课件共30页哦苏州市苏州市2009届高三教学调研测试届高三教学调研测试最近，

21、国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑建议小学生每天跑1000米，初中生米，初中生1500米，高中生米，高中生2000米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以根据以下材料，写一篇以“Shouldwegivemoreattentiontostudentshealthorgrades?”为题的短为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。文，谈谈你的看法。支持方的理由 反对方的理由 你的看法及理由 1可以促进对体育的重视；2可以增强学生的体魄；3更有利于提高学习效率。1学生以学习

22、为主，考试成绩决定个人前途；2过高的要求学生难以达到；3长跑可能引起感冒或伤害。(考生自行发挥23点)注意：注意：1词数词数150左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。第23页，此课件共30页哦1.Agoodbeginningmakesagoodending.2.Yourcompositionshouldbedividedintoparagraphs.3.Youdbetterusesomelinkingwords.4.Handwritingisofgrea

23、timportance.Suggestions:第24页，此课件共30页哦第一段：第一段：1.Some people agree to NO.One,because they usually think that.In the meantime,.In addition.2.Some people think that A is right because.3.Some people suggest/say that.At the same time they point out the fact that.Whats more.4.Some people prefer NO.One.In t

24、heir opinion A.In addition.第25页，此课件共30页哦第二段：第二段：1.On the other hand,some people hold that B is right.They think.2.But many more people dont agree with them.They prefer B.They say that.The reason is that.3.On the contrary,some people hold that.4.Some people think that B is better.It is clear that.Wha

25、ts more,.Also.在在第第一一段段和和第第二二段段中中一一定定要要用用原原因因或或列列举举等等方方式式展展开开段落。段落。第26页，此课件共30页哦第三段：提出自己的见解并且加以论证第三段：提出自己的见解并且加以论证1.In my opinion B is better than A.There is no doubt that.2.I support A.The reason goes as follows.3.As far as I am concerned,I agree to the latter.First.Second.Finally.4.It is likely tha

26、t people will go on arguing over these questions.I think that everything has both its positive and negative sides.We should keep an open mind.第27页，此课件共30页哦5.People will continue to argue over the questions,I think wed better keep an open mind because everything has two sides.It all relies on.6.Of th

27、ese two ways of.I prefer.First of all,.Second,.第28页，此课件共30页哦Should we give more attention to students health or grades?The Ministry of Education of China has urged all the students to participate in the winter long-distance running activity.It is suggested that primary school students should run 1,0

28、00 meters a day,junior school students,1,500 and senior school students,2,000.Different people always offer various views.Some people say yes to this activity.They think,for one thing,it can make people pay more attention to physical education;for another,running can improve students health and help

29、 them study efficiently so they can have good grades.However,others hold opposite opinions about the activity.They believe that learning is the most important task for students and their future depends on their grades in their subjects.Meanwhile,many cant meet the high requirements.Whats worse,some

30、will suffer cold and injuries.In my opinion,its all right for schools to care about students health and carry out the activity step by step.Remember a good body helps make high efficiency.第29页，此课件共30页哦Whatdoyouthinkabouttheconcludingparagraph?Isitagoodone?Ifnot,howcanyouimproveit?Inmyopinion,itsallrightforschoolstopaymoreattentiontostudentshealthandcarryouttheactivitystepbystep.Rememberagoodbodyhelpsmakehighefficiency.第30页，此课件共30页哦