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1、专题十六书面表达,高考英语 (江苏省专用),A组自主命题江苏卷题组Writing 1(2018江苏)请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。,五年高考,写作内容1.用约30 个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象;2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。,评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。,答案写作提示1.材料给出了两个结果完全相反的利用消费排名购物的案例, 因此概括要点要含有利用消费排名购物的不同结果这个概念。2.在论述自己的

2、观点的时候,不管自己对此持什么观点,一定要注意观点明确。同时列举明确支持自己的观点的论据。3.注意语言表述的流畅性和句式的多样性。句子之间要使用合适的关联词连接,同时注意使用合适的高级句式来提升句子的质量。One possible version:As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have dif

3、ferent influences on different consumers.,I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the product,or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved back-pack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. Secondly,

4、ratings can save time to make de-cisions in shopping. For example, there are huge quantities of reference books about which I am often confused. In that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ra

5、tings in consumption. The advan-tages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective atti-tude towards ratings.精彩词句1.精美词汇consumption n.消费tend to 倾向于beloved adj.心爱的2.出彩结构I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase.(whatever引导让步状语从句),Writing

6、2(2017江苏)请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(box-office income)的柱状图及相关文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Saturday Afternoon. In a Shopping Centre.Li Jiang:Hi, Su Hua. Which movie shall we see?,Su Hua:Whatever. Weve got so many choices, Kung Fu Yoga, Journey to the West.Each sounds great!Li Jiang:Yeah!And some movie stars are fa

7、ntastic.Su Hua:And the high-tech!.Li Jiang:Perfect!Lets get some food first. We only have 20 minutes left.Su Hua:No hurry. The cinema is on the same floor.One Day in 2016. At Home.Son:Mum, shall we go and see a film tonight?Mother:Why bother?We can stay at home and watch films online. Its convenient

8、 with our new and faster network.Son:But it feels good in a cinema.Mother:And the price.We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.Son:Only 10 yuan more than last year.Mother:But still we cannot get the moneys worth. Some films are just boring.,写作内容1.用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容;2.我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些,简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考,原因不

9、少于两点);3.谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法,并简要说明理由。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。,答案写作提示1.本文以第三人称为主,时态主要是一般现在时。2.文章要点:用约30个词概述柱状图信息的主要内容;阐述我国票房收入变化的原因(不少于两点);阐述对我国电影票房收入走向的看法,并提出23个理由。Possible Version One:The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase

10、 from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.The reasons behind this are various. The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the box-office income. The application of new

11、 technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.Chinas

12、 economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its box-office income will probably enjoy a slight increase.,Possible Version Two:As is indicated in the graph, the box-

13、office income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2012 to 2015, but its growth, for one reason or another, slowed down in 2016.The increase in the box-office income can be attributed to a number of factors. The quality of life has improved and watching films is regarded as a good means of ent

14、ertainment. Besides, filming technology has advanced and more quality films are on offer. Moreover, the internet plays an im-portant part. On the internet, people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tickets at a discount as well, which is both time-saving and economical.However,

15、the film market may witness a slowdown in the near future. Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the internet and cellphones, and the ticket price is on the increase. There-fore, the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers.精彩词句1.精美词汇slowdown n.减速account for是的原因on

16、offer可买到的2.出彩结构On the internet, people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tick-ets at a discount as well, which is both time-saving and economical.(which引导非限制性定语从句),Writing 3(2016江苏)请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。In recent years, Internet voting has become increasingly popular in

17、 China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher”and the “Cutest Baby”.Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officer”competition, orga-nized by the local government to let the publi

18、c have a better understanding of police officers daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “Future Si

19、nger”competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This

20、is a question that troubles him very much.,写作内容1.用约30 个单词写出上文概要;2.用约120 个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法,并用23 个理由或论据支撑你的看法。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。,答案写作提示1.本文为读写作文,以第三人称为主,时态主要为一般现在时。2.文章要点:用约30个词概括原文,阐述对网络投票的看法,并提供23个理由或论据。Possible Version One:Online voting becomes in

21、creasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.In my opinion,online voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participat

22、e in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.To be hone

23、st, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some par-ticipation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards online voting.Possible Version Tw

24、o:,Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, and active in doing it.In my opinion, Internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. First-ly, people may feel forc

25、ed when asked to do things that they dont want to. Secondly, voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are pos-sibly taken advantage of by the or

26、ganizers for commercial purposes.In short, Internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.精彩语句1.It ma

27、kes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek sup-ports. 精彩点:灵活运用短语make no difference以及in which引导的定语从句。2.Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.精彩点:take advantage of在此句

28、中表示“利用,占便宜”。,Writing 4(2015江苏)请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。写作内容1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;2.结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;3.根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。,写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。,答案写作提示本文为图表类任务型读写作文。主体时态为一般现在时。文章可分三段来写,写作时注意句子之间和段落

29、之间衔接词的使用,以使行文流畅。写作要点1.用约30词简要概括材料要点:交通问题不仅影响人们的日常生活,还威胁人们的生命。2.导致交通问题的主要原因:大规模的道路建设;私家车不断增加;开车人、骑车人及行人不遵守交通规则。3.从社会规范和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。One possible version:The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack.It not only affects our everyday life,but may also threaten peoples lives.The three selections pr

30、esented above are typical examples.Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem.In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways,there is still much room for improvement,because of the ever increasing number of,cars these years.Whats worse,some drivers,cyclists and pedestrians d

31、o not think it vital to obey traffic rules.In fact,traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order.Without them,people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos.But rules alone dont se-cure an orderly society.It is the people who obey the rules that

32、 matter.It is everybodys duty to ob-serve them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.精彩语句1.Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem.精彩点:此句在段首,既承上启下又点明段意;运用短语give rise to“引起”。2.Without them,people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos.精彩点:此句用了虚拟语气。运用短

33、语in chaos“混乱”。,Writing 5(2014江苏)请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。When we read newspapers,we often come across such English words as “AIDS”and“PK”.When we watch TV,we frequently hear words like “NBA”or “PM2.5”.When we speak,we automatically use words like “OUT” or “Bye-bye”.English words and expressions

34、like these are getting popular.They have already become part of our daily language.And 239 English words have been included in the latest Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese.The inclusion has started a heated discussion.A group of scholars signed a letter of complaint over the inclusion of these Engl

35、ish words,which,they think,goes against Chinese language policies.They not only worry that Chinese is borrowing an increasing number of English words but are also con-cerned that the inclusion may hurt the dignity of the Chinese language.However,others are in favor of the inclusion because it is har

36、d to say whether it will threaten the Chinese language.They believe the selection is mostly a result of their function and use in daily life.,写作内容1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;2.用约120个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:(1)支持或反对汉语词典收录英语词汇;(2)用23个理由或论据支撑你的观点。写作要求1.可以支持文中任一观点,但必须提供理由或论据;2.阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句;3.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;4.不必写标题

37、。评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。,答案写作提示本文为任务型读写作文,属于议论文的范围。主体时态为一般现在时,用第三人称写。本文要特别注意思想的辩证性,看待问题要一分为二,不能绝对化。写作要点1.用约30词简要概括材料要点:很多英语单词进入中文词典。2.发表观点:支持者:随着学习英语的人越来越多,人们也能理解这些词的意思,不影响阅读。而且这是文化融合的一种表现。反对者:这是一种文化污染,会影响这些词的纯真的发音等,同时对于那些英语不好的人还是一种偏见等。,Possible versions:支持:Today,more and more English words find th

38、eir way into the Chinese language.Even the Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese includes 239 English words.Some people support it while others do not.Generally,I am in favour of the inclusion.As the number of English learners is on the rise,its not difficult for them to understand these words in Chine

39、se contexts.Besides,it is,on some occasions,more convenient to use English words.Most people nowadays use “IT” instead of its translation “xinxi jishu”.In our global village,we can see that its not uncommon for one language to bor-row words from other languages.In English,there are many words borrow

40、ed from Latin,French,or even Chinese.So,its safe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English which facilitates daily communica-tion.,反对:With English words getting popular in both media and daily life,a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them,leaving the public divided into two opposing

41、groups:“For”and“Against”.I tend to take the “Against”side for two reasons.Firstly,this inclusion has actually polluted our mother tongue.Sooner or later,many English accents will rise and fall with the four Chinese tones.And,rules dont tell us how to pronounce such English-turned Chinese words as “W

42、iFi”and“Out”in a Chinese way!Secondly,such an inclusion may give rise to prejudices of the educated against those with little knowledge of English.Just for one illustration,while college students take “Bye-bye”for granted when parting from each other,it may unconsciously hurt the feelings of someone

43、 who is used to “zaijian”.In short,not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese,it may also bring about distance between the Chinese people.精彩语句,So, its safe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English which facilitates daily communica-tion.精彩点:运用句型Its safe to conclude.;facilitate vt. 促进,帮助。

44、,B组统一命题、省(区、市)卷题组考点一图画、图表类作文Writing 1(2018北京,第二节)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述你们上周接待外国学生,带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。注意:词数不少于60。,答案写作提示1.介绍、参观;2.演示、观看;3.指导、体验;,4.合影。One possible version:Last week, a group of international students visited our school. To help them better understand our tea-drinking cul

45、ture, we took them to the tea room in our school, where I introduced the history of tea-making and different kinds of tea and so on. All the international students were quite interested in my introduction.Then I showed them how to make tea. I sat at a table, explaining every step of the process whil

46、e making tea. All of them were amazed. They couldnt wait to have a try for themselves.Soon the tea room became lively with every international student trying to make their own tea. We had a lot of fun, practicing, and enjoying the tea.In the end, we took a group photo, with cups or tea in our hands,

47、 to record this unforgettable expe-rience.,精彩词句1.精美词汇tea-drinking culture饮茶文化have a try尝试一下,试试看lively adj.生气勃勃的;活跃热情的2.出彩结构(1)To help them better understand our tea-drinking culture, we took them to the tea room in our school, where I introduced the history of tea-making and different kinds of tea a

48、nd so on.(where引导定语从句)(2)I sat at a table, explaining every step of the process while making tea.(现在分词短语作状语)(3)In the end, we took a group photo, with cups or tea in our hands, to record this unforgettable ex-perience.(with cups or tea in our hands为插入语),Writing 2(2017北京,第二节)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先

49、后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。注意:词数不少于60。提示词:视频 video,答案写作提示1.本文应以第一人称为主,时态以一般过去时为主。2.制作毕业纪念视频的全过程应该包括讨论分工、收集素材、编辑制作以及放映视频四个方面。,One possible version:Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discus-sion, we agreed on making a video to record o

50、ur experiences at school.Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pic-tures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned ou

51、t perfect. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The stu-dents and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.精彩词句1.精美词汇experience n.经历aspect n.方面2.出彩结构We debated over what to put into the video.(疑问词+不定式结构),