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1、托福写作的十三个万能理由 为了帮助大家提高托福写作，告辞无话可说的尴尬境地，下面我给大家带来托福写作的十三个万能理由，来看看吧！ 托福写作的十三个万能理由 if !supportLists一. endif成就感(achievement) 关键词句: a sense ofachievement virtuouscycle良性循环 grand feat/exploit 辉煌的业绩 attainment of goals elevate our self-esteem be conductive to self-actualization 有助于自我实现 万能段落：By doing (somethi

2、ng), we can enjoy a sense of achievement.The feat of accomplishing is conductive to self-actualization, which will inevitably elevate our self-esteem. Inflated esteem will proportionally contribute to even more solid achievement. This is virtuous cycle toward a better career. For example, I have a r

3、elative who works in a big company. He was once awarded the opportunity to travel abroad that excited him for quite a long time. After that he worked even harder and gained the elevated esteem. if !supportLists二. endif被认可感(acknowledgement) 关键词句: A willing ox任劳任怨的人 selfless contribution the stat of b

4、eing recognized a sense of belonging provide satisfaction motivation for further improvement 万能段落: By acknowledgement,I mean the state of being recognized. When we are recognized by our company (school/college/group/community or society), we can experience a sense of belonging. The feeling of being

5、recognized provides satisfaction and motivation for further improvement. Hence, when a person can be identified by others, the subsequent outcome can be beyond imagination. Bill Gates, through luck, diligence, and team spirit leads Microsoft to splendor. And he distributes his wealth generously, whi

6、ch won him a name: the greatest philanthropist around the world. His success is acknowledged by our society. And his satisfaction index can be higher than that of any other peers. if !supportLists三. endif健康(health) 关键词句: ingredients to sound health健康的要素 physical health psychological health well-adju

7、sted to the society sound health as fit as a fiddle 身体好 discard health hazard robust strength体力充足Health is above wealth. 万能段落：Fresh air, clean water and nutritious food are indispensable ingredients to sound health.So if we live in good environment and enjoy healthful diet, our physical health can b

8、e guaranteed. Also if we have positive hobbies like reading and other mental pursuits, our psychological health can be elevated. Anyway, health is above wealth, we should exert our efforts to discard health hazard in order to attain a better life. if !supportLists四. endif平安(safety) 关键词句: be protecte

9、d against failure, damage a sense of securityfacilitate the harmony of society Safety is the top priority. 万能段落：Safety refers to the condition of beingprotected against failure, damage, error, accidents, harm, et cetera. Safety is usually our main concern. if !supportLists五. endif便利(convenience) 关键词

10、句: perform daily errands从事日常业务 get easy access to 简单接近 do not have to exert ourselves too much 不用太费劲气 Convenience matters.便利至关重要 万能段落：Convenience means being suitable and useful for us to carry out daily tasks.If something is convenient and easy to be made use of, we get easy access it, then the pot

11、ential can be fully exploited. We do not have to exert ourselves too much to obtain the benefit. As a result, we can devote more time and efforts to accomplishing other business that is urgent and pivotal. if !supportLists六. endif沟通(communication) 关键词句: people skill人际交往实力 disparate people各色人等 bare o

12、nes heart放开心扉 exchange of ideas transmission of messages harmony of the relationship communication can be heart-warming channels of communication are open 万能段落：Communication is about the exchange of ideas, opinions and information through written or spoken words, symbols or actions.The smooth exchan

13、ge of information and ideas between disparate people can be thrilling and heart-warming. When we bare our hearts to communicate, we can eliminate the conflict or contradiction. Thus, the distance among people will surely be shortened. Thus, we can achieve the purpose of transmission of messages. In

14、the meanwhile, the interaction arises, which definitely improves teamwork. Hence, we can harvest (garner/reap) both the success of cooperation and the harmony of the relationship. if !supportLists七. endif长久性(durability) 关键词句: lastingnessof goods deep impression eternal/everlasting impact far-reachin

15、g influence unforgettable memory garner/assimilate nutrition吸取养分 万能段落：By durability,I mean goods may have lastingness; love is eternal; friendship is everlasting. When something gives us deep impression, we surely will have an unforgettable memory. For example, paper writing and classroom discussion

16、s are more durable in our mind than examinations can give. When we build a library, we build a cradle of knowledge. This is a transformation of life, which can be durable and far-reachin if !supportLists八. endif愿望(desire) 关键词句: crave for/long for/yearn for/pine for creatures of desire欲望之物 meet our n

17、eeds to ones hearts content尽情享受 fulfill ones dream satisfy ones vanity 满意虚荣心 万能段落：Desire refers to our hope or inclination.We are all creatures of desires. We try our best/endeavor to satisfy our desire and vanity: the desire to relax to our hearts content; the desire to gain more knowledge; the des

18、ire to earn big money and the desire to be loved. To meet ones desire is to enjoy a happy life. Hence, we are all willing to sacrifice our time and efforts to make our hearts desire fulfilled. if !supportLists九. endif效率(efficient) 关键词句: make full use of resource not to squander efficiency-conscious

19、take a shortcut走捷径 Efficiency is gold. We use half of the effort, but we can double the result. 万能段落：Being efficiency means not to waste and not to squander.Sometimes we use half of the effort, but we can double the result. Modern people chase after efficiency that is the catchword around the globe.

20、 Our work efficiency can be enhanced if we adopt proper method; our learning efficiency can be elevated if we take a shortcut. Anyway, when we make full use of the devices at our hands, we may achieve efficiency, which can save our time and efforts. if !supportLists十. endif节约(economical) 关键词句: money

21、- conscious重金钱的 cut down the price steady development Waste not, and want not. 不奢侈，不短缺 Husband energy, and cut emission. 节能减排 To save is to earn Our society is economy-driven.节约型社会 A penny saved is a penny earned. 万能段落：Being economical means using the minimum of time or resources necessary for effec

22、tiveness.Being economical or money- saving is vital to people as an English proverb puts it that “ a penny saved is a penny earned”. When we achieve economy in expenditure, we are in fact making money work for us. When we bargain and cut down the price, we are money-conscious; when we take bus inste

23、ad of driving our own cars, we are reducing the cost for petrol. if !supportLists十一. endif环保(environmental) 关键词句: emit hazardous materials alternative energy maintain ecological balance go green多种树，讲环保 environmental awareness environment-friendly reduce, reuse, and recycle sustainable development ex

24、haust natural resources There is no boundary between human and nature. 万能段落：Being environmental is related to the natural environment, its protection and conservation.In order to maintain ecological balance, our environment awareness should be enhanced. When we are green-washed; when we become envir

25、onment-friendly, we may realize three “r”s: reduce, reuse, and recycle. These three ”r”s are vital to the preservation of a cleaner, better environment that will benefit peoples wellbeing. if !supportLists十二. endif阅历(experience) 关键词句: undergo ordeal first-hand experience accumulation of knowledge Ex

26、perience is wealth. Experience is a helmsman guiding our voyage.Other peoples experience can be of help.它山之石可以攻玉 The proof of the pudding is in the eating.事物的好坏须要经过实践检验 万能段落: Experience refers to the accumulation of knowledge or skill that result from direct participation in events or activities.Our

27、 experience is a wealth that can enrich our life. When we enjoy modern educational facilities and indulge in the prestigious academic atmosphere, we can harvest valuable educational experience. When we undergo the training of expertise experiences serve as an enlightenment brightening our career pat

28、h. if !supportLists十三. endif情感(emotion) 关键词句: bare ones heart share ups and downs facilitate communication harmonious relationship form an emotional tie/emotional attachment Harmony spurs efficiency. 万能段落：By emotion,I refer to joy, sensitivity, pleasure, anger and so on. If people can share emotions

29、, they can form an emotional tie among them, which will link their feelings. This emotional attachment is beneficial to harmonious relationship as well as to the fulfillment of a project. For example, my good friend and I are on good emotional terms. We share sorrow and happiness. As a result, our l

30、ives become happier and more enjoyable. 托福写作备考之语块积累篇 同学们在写作时有没有这样的困惑：为什么背了这么多年的单词但是感觉写作文的时候还是写不出好词佳句?或者写出来的作文经常带有中式思维的痕迹? 其实中国人学写诗就有一句古话叫做“熟读唐诗三百首，不会作诗也会吟”。由此晓得，背诵或者记忆的确对我们的写作提高帮助特别大。但是要提高写作，仅仅会背单词是不够的，我们肯定要从单词的积累跨越到语块的积累。 什么是语块呢?在语言学上，语块可以理解成能够一起去记忆或者处理的单词组合。从这个意义上看，单词假如是碎片，语块则可以帮助我们将碎片整理在一起。语块可以有不

31、同的表现形式：比如说常见的单词搭配、句型、谚语等等。这些东西积累得越多，我们在写作过程就会发挥的越得心应手。缘由也很简洁：因为单词是零散的、单独的，但是运用单词必需要有详细的语境，而语块恰恰给我们供应了这样一个环境。我们下面将详细介绍单词搭配、句型和谚语这三种常见的语块。 单词搭配 举例来说，我们看一个单词“abandon”。这个单词信任大家都背过，是放弃的意思。但是究竟怎么才能把这个单词用好?什么状况去用这个单词呢?假如我们去查词典，这里以朗文字典为例，我们就知道，abandon有遗弃; 放弃的意思。但这远远不够。当abandon 表示遗弃的时候，常见的搭配是abandon a baby;所

32、以弃婴是abandoned baby。同理，abandon 作为放弃是大家最常见的意思，但是什么时候用放弃这个意思呢。假如我们去看单词的搭配，我们就知道，abandon 有两个层面的意思，第一是具象的层面：如abandon a car/abandon a city。这里的意思就可以用leave 代替。而另一是抽象的层面。如abandon their attempts/ideas/hopes 等等，这次层面就相当于give up的含义。最终abandon 还可以跟to 搭配，有沉溺于;不能自拔的意思, 如abandon oneself to grief (沉醉在哀痛) 和abandon ones

33、elf to fantasies (沉溺于幻想的意思)。从上述的例子可以看出，要学会一个单词的运用，最重要的是看它能跟哪些单词搭配，有没有固定的短语可以运用。托福写作中常见的例子还有be preoccupied with (专注于), be occupied with (忙于什么)等等。 句型 语块另一层面是句型。假如我们能记住一些句型并娴熟运用，也能大大充溢我们的写作。比如说，it is universally acknowledged that , 对于这些句型，我们须要干脆记住，并通过一两个例句的练习娴熟驾驭。如It is universally acknowledged that ed

34、ucation plays an significant role in our life。这些句型的娴熟驾驭能够帮助我们在写作的时候有话能讲而且节约写作时间。这比光记住universally 和 acknowledge 这两个单词要好用的多。 谚语 最终语块是英文里面喜闻乐见的谚语。比如新概念第三册23册里的经典句 “One man meat is another mens poison”(萝卜青菜更有所爱)和 另一个谚语“great minds think alike” (英雄所见略同) 。这两则短语就可以很好地运用下面这道题目中：In order to succeed, its bett

35、er for a person to act the same as others rather than behave differently from others. 所以对于托福写作来说，要取得高分，是不能仅仅以背单词和背范文为导向，更重要的是要积累合适自己水平和娴熟驾驭的语料。我们该如何去积累这些语块呢?一方面同学们可以从好的英语杂志、英文歌曲和电影字幕甚至托福阅读中摘录，另一面也可以将范文中好的表达和老师上课讲过的短语和句型进行整理，放入自己的语块库。一旦形成自己比较稳定和擅长的语块库，就不难做到读书破万卷，下笔如有神了。 托福写作备考之满分句式汇总 句型1 原文材料： "

36、The new rules should thus expose polluters to a scissor-style pressure:from above,through the central-planning system,and from below,from the media and organisations such as Mr Ma's." 举荐句型： _x be exposed to a scissor-style pressure: from above, through, and from below, from. 举荐理由： 压力毫无疑问是一个

37、写作和口语考试中特别常用的一个万能理由，因为它可以跟许多东西相关，比如压力的来源(生活压力，学习压力，工作压力)，压力的影响(身体差，心情不爽)，减压的方式和措施等等，上面的句型就可以用来描写某一个主体，比如工作的人或者学生，面临着双重压力，工作的人可能来自照看老人抚养孩子;学生可能来自父母老师以及同伴。 原创例句： 1. A majority of the youths today are exposed to a scissor-style pressure: from above, through looking after the ever growing aging populati

38、on, and from below, from the soaring costs of raising children. 2. A multitude of teenagers at present are exposed to a scissor-style pressure: from above, through their parents with ever-higher expectations, and from below, from their peers most of whom try their best to outdo each other. 学以致用： 1.

39、People care more about public recognition than about money. 依据上面的例句，这个题目我们可以选择不同意，那些苦逼的刚上班没几年的年轻人，怎么可能更在乎名而不是钱呢?他们压力多大啊，当然须要钱了啊; 2. Younger school children should be required to study music and art in addition to language, science, and mathematics. 同样，这个题目我们也可以选择不同意的立场，孩子们原来就压力特殊大，父母期望高，同伴都一个比一个牛逼，学

40、校里面的课程和辅导课都上不完呢，怎么可能有时间搞别的呢。这不是坑爹吗? 句型2 原文材料： While, arguably, this “finding” is as trivial as an umbrella that turns blue when its going to rain, there is nothing trivial about collecting personal data, as innocuous as that data may seem. 举荐句型(变体)： While.seems/sounds as adj. as can be, there is not

41、hing more adj. than. 举荐理由： 我们在独立写作中常常用到对比的写法。这个句型可用在具有对比意味的语境中，前半句当作让步，“尽管对比中的一个因素看起来已经很”, 后半句转折说“但是另一个因素更”. 原创例句： 1. While environmental protection seems as pressing as can be, there is nothing more pressing than feeding the growing population in disadvantaged countries where the original eco-syste

42、m is well preserved. 2. While a secure job seems as tempting as can be, there is no job more tempting than a risky and well-paid one for the new generation who are mostly avid challenge hunters. 3. While playing sports with a couple of friends sounds as relaxing as can be, there is nothing more rela

43、xing than a good book or an old movie for those manual laborers who are wearied out with strenuous physical work every day. 学以致用： 1. Feeding the worlds growing population is more important than protecting environment. 这道题中假如我们持同意的看法，就可以用到第一个例句。尽管到处都在宣扬爱护环境的重要，但是并非世界各地的环境都破坏了啊，比如漂亮的非洲大草原原始生态环境保持完好，但是

44、一些边缘小国民不聊生，人民瘦的皮包骨，你说feed population重要还是爱护环境重要呢? 2. It is better to take a secure job with a low pay than to take a risky one with a high salary. 依据其次个例句，我们这道题可以不同意。虽然铁饭碗听起来挺迷人的，但新一代的年轻人个个都很傲娇，热衷追寻挑战，高薪高风险的工作相比之下更合他们的口味。 3. To read a book or to watch a movie is a better way to relax than to do some

45、physical exercises. 第三个例句回答的就是这道题，的确约三五好友做做运好听起来不赖，但是对于那些每天做繁重体力劳动的工人来说，额外的运动会加重他们的身体负担，还是一本好书或者一部老电影更能帮他们放松。 句型3 原文材料： It takes very little imagination to foresee how the kitchen mood wall could lead to advertisements for antidepressants that follow you around the Web.It takes even less imagination

46、 to foresee how information about your comings and goings obtained from the Google Latitude Doorbell could be used in a court of law. 举荐句型： It takes very little imagination to .It takes even less imagination to . 举荐理由： 这个句型看起来很简洁，但我们一般不会想到先用little表示极少，再用less表示比little还少。两个句子排列工整，可以用在说理部分，用来描述一个不言自明、自

47、不待言的状况 原创例句： 1. It takes very little imagination to foresee how fast competition in the adulthood would turn vicious; it takes even less imagination to foresee in what way vicious competition would influence friendships. 2. It takes little imagination to visualize what people would be like if they do not have access to education. It takes even less imagination to visualize what a country would be like if