刘艳Englishwritingskills.ppt

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1、By Liu Yan from No.6 Middle SchoolHow to improve our students writing?Qustion1:How to make our students have something to say?Qustion2:How to change what they want to say into a good composition?Q1:How to make our students have something to say?Maybe you can often train your Ss to practise using the

2、 following methods:Tip1.Learn to ask themselves questions;Tip2.Brainstorm to speak out as much as they can;Tip3.Give examples to support their opinions;Tip4.Use imaginations if necessary.Tip1:Learn to ask themselves questions.where WhenHowMusicWhatWhyWhoEg1:How to talk about I like music.Eg2:How to

3、talk about My vacation.whenHow longWhyVacationWhatWhereWhoweatherHow Eg3:How to talk about Protecting the environment.Q1:Why should we protect the environment?Q2:How should we Protect the environment?Eg4:How to talk about Problems.Q1:What problems do we have?Q2:How should we deal with the problems?T

4、ip2:Brainstorm:busy tiredexamsargue withlet downangrynot enough sleepfamily rulesstressed outhomeworkProblems.Eg1:What problems do you have these days?How should we solve the problems?How to solve the problems try our bestdo homework more quicklycommunicatemake a better study planlisten carefully in

5、 classask teacherfor helpEg2:What words or phrases can you think of when you see the word“Internet”?download search for latest newsfast convenientwatchgamesE-mailsendinformationInternet 1.青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the e

6、arth.For example,we can use shopping basket instead of plastic bags when we go shopping.And dont forget to turn off the taps and lights in time when we dont need them.Tip3:Give examples to support your ideas.2.在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。I often help my parents do housework,such as washing dis

7、hes,folding the clothes,taking out the trash and so on.Tip4:Use imaginations if necessary.1.在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务。在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务。I often help my parents do housework.They go to work during the day time and they must be tired after a full days work.If I do so,they can have a good rest.2.Compare A with BA:

8、Animals are our friends,so lets protect them!B:Dont you think animals are our lovely friends?So its our duty to protect them instead of hurting or killing them.Dont put it off！Lets try our best to help our friends today!Question2:How to change what they want to say into a good composition?Lets take

9、the topic Internet as an example!download search for latest newsfast convenientwatchgamesE-mailsendinformationInternet Steps towards writing a good paragraphS St tep ep 1 1 Try to say some sentences according to the words or phrases2.With the Internet，we can get the latest news.1.The Internet is fas

10、t and convenient.3.We can find and download information that we need.5.We can play games on it.4.We can send some emails to our friends.Steps towards writing a good paragraphStep 2 How to change it into a well-organized Step 2 How to change it into a well-organized paragraphparagraphThe structure of

11、 a compositionTopic sentenceSupporting detailsReason 1Reason 2 Reason 3ConclusionWrite a topic sentence for the paragraphn nThe Internet is fast and convenient.With the Internet，we can get the latest news.We can find and download information that we need.We can send emails to friends.We can play gam

12、es on it.n The Internet plays an important part in our life./The Internet is very useful in our life.Conclusion:We cant live without the Internet.How to write a good paragraphNowadays the Internet plays an important part in our life.It is fast and convenient.With the Internet，we can get the latest n

13、ews.We can find and download information that we need.We can send emails to friends.We can play games on it.We cant live without the Internet.Connect the sentences with link words to introduce supporting points:First(Firstly),First(Firstly),Second(Secondly),Second(Secondly),Third(Thirdly),Third(Thir

14、dly),First of all,First of all,Also(In addition),Also(In addition),Finally,Finally,However,However,Conclusion wordsIn my opinion,In a word,In short,Generally speaking,Add link words or phrases to make the supporting details better-organized:Nowadays the Internet plays an important part in our life.W

15、ith the Internet，we can get the latest news.It is fast and convenient.We can find and download information that we need.We can send emails to friends.We can play games on it.We cant live without the Internet.Nowadays the Internet plays an important part in our life.It is not only fast but convenient

16、 as well.We can do many things with the Internet.First of all,we can get the latest news.Secondly,We can find and download information that we need.Whats more,we can send emails to friends.We can even play games on it.In a word,we cant live without the Internet.(70words)n nBodyBody n nConclusion/Opi

17、nion Topic sentence Supporting details Right Link wordsand sentence patternsA good compositionof “giving opinion”n ntitleSummary Strategies to improve their writingTips:1.Learn to write a topic sentence.2.Use link words to make the paragraph well-organized.3.Try to beautify the writing.4.Add a good

18、beginning and an ending.1.is usually the_sentence of a paragraph.Topic sentencefirst of a paragraph.2.Topic sentence tells_the main idea概括段落主要意思概括段落主要意思strategy1 Learn to write a topic sentence.Bridge Street is a good place to have fun.It is a very busy street.You can play guitar in the park.And if

19、youre hungry,you can buy some food in the supermarket.Find out the topic sentenceMy eating habits are pretty good.I try to eat a lot of vegetables.I eat fruit and drink milk every day.I never drink coffee.Of course,I love junk food too,and I eat it two or three times a week._ She gets up early in th

20、e morning and then reads English for half an hour.In class,Alice listens to the teachers carefully and takes notes at times.After finishing her homework,she teaches herself new lessons every night.On weekends,Alice usually goes to the city library to read books.A.Alice is a student.B.Alice is a frie

21、ndly student.C.Alice is a hard-working student.Choose the right topic sentenceWrite a topic sentence for the report.A big problemn n90%of the citys rivers are polluted.n nThe air in the city is getting dirtier.n nNoise is becoming a big headache for people.Pollution is becoming a serious problem in

22、the city.My family members have different hobbies.My father loves collecting stamps.My mother is interested in cooking.My sister likes watching TV,and my grandparents enjoy traveling.Write the topic sentence_ I am tired,I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movies,he went to the concert _.W

23、e like doing kinds of sports _ swimming,running and hiking._,he stood up.Then he got out._,he went back._,he smiled.ThoughAlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinallyAt lastStrategy2 Use link words to make the sentences well-organized.Fill in the blanks with link words2.School uniform rule has its advantages

24、._,we dont have to spend time thinking about what to wear every day._ ,we dont need to worry about competing with others based on how we look._,it has some disadvantages.Our personality cant be shown if we wear the same clothes every day_,sometimes the uniform style is old-fashioned.First of allFirs

25、t of allAlso/In additionAlso/In additionHoweverHoweverWhatWhat s mores moreStrategy3Try to beautify the writing.Skill One:Make your sentences correctGood good study,day day up.We should do sports a week once.Save the environment is our duty.There is going to have a meeting today.I hope I can come tr

26、ue my dream.once a weekSavingbeachieveStudy hard and make progress every day1.Our parents really wish us to work hard.Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study.2.The teenagers like the computers.The teenagers are fond of the computers.3.We shouldnt eat junk food.We should stay away from

27、 the junk food.4.When he spoke,he got more excited.The more he spoke,the more excited he got.5.We should learn English grammar.Its important for us to learn English grammar.Skill Two:Choose good phrases and sentences6.His dog was saved at last.He was very surprised.To his surprise,his dog was saved

28、at last.7.I think learning English is interesting.I find it really fun to learn English.8.We should protect the environment.Its our duty to protect the environment.9.They arrived early.They arrived as early as they could.10.10.她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。A She is very young.She cant carry the heavy

29、box.B She is too young to carry the heavy box.C She is so young that she cant carry the D She is not old enough to carry the 优等生平时多练习用优等生平时多练习用好句型好句型如：宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句、动名词做主语等。l宾语从句：I believe my future will be brighter and more colorful.l状语从句：If everyone does something for the environment,our hometown

30、 will become cleaner and more beautiful.l定语从句:The only thing that I can do is to study hard.l动名词做主语：Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes.lIts bad for our eyes to read books in the sun.扩写练习扩写练习I like music.I like_ music.I like_ music that_.dancedancecan make me excitedShe always_ to _ because

31、_.listens to some musicrelaxmusic is fantasticSkill Three:Make the sentence as long as possiblelThe girl likes reading.lThe pretty girl likes reading novels.lThe pretty girl likes reading novels carefully.lThe pretty girl who I talked to just now likes reading novels carefully.扩写练习扩写练习 Add proverbs

32、or sayings to make your opinion more convincing Skill Four:1.集中注意力于学习集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”We should concentrate on our studies.加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于可用于”beginning”和和”ending”，多用，多用后者。后者

33、。2.加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.”So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.3.3.锻炼对学生有好处锻炼对学生有好处。It is good for us students to take exerciseAs the saying goes,“All work and no play m

34、akes Jack a dull boy.”It is good for us students to take exercise.Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do.4.Do as the Romans do.三思而后行。三思而后行。熟能生巧。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。5.The early bird catches the worm.3.Where

35、there is a will,there is a way.6.Failure is the mother of success.Enjoy some proverbs7.It is no use crying over spilt milk.8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.9.All roads lead to Rome.10.Never too old to learn.覆水难收。覆水难收。一天一个苹果，一天一个苹果，医生远离我。医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。条条大路通罗马。活到老，学到老。活到老，学到老。Strategy4 Add a goo

36、d beginning and an ending.I am going to have a trip to the West Lake with my friend.I will do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it.It is necessary for me to do some housework,such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms.How glad I am!I can do many things of my own.I am go

37、ing to have a trip to the West Lake with my friend.I will also do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it.Of course it is necessary for me to do some housework,such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms.Isnt my plan nice?beginningtopic sentencelinking words连词连词ending I am

38、going to have a trip to the West Lake with my friend.I will do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it.It is necessary for me to do some housework,such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms.Strategy4 Add a good beginning and an ending.My hobbies (Beginning):_.(Topic senten

39、ce A):_.I often read in my free time.I read many kinds of books.And I like the stories that have good endings.(Topic sentence B):_.I like all kinds of music.I often listen to the music programs on radio.Although I cant sing English songs well,I like them a lot.(Topic sentence C):_.I often play ping-

40、pong after classes.When I am doing sports,I forget all my trouble and worry.Of course it is necessary for students to play sports.(Ending)_.Can you add a beginning,two other key sentences,some link words and an ending?Practice:I am a lover of readingTitle:_ totogeneral总总specific分分specific分分general总总

41、I have a lot of hobbies and enjoy doing many things in my free time.I am a lover of reading.I am also a music lover.I like sports as well.In short,I enjoy my life in school.Reading books,listening to music and doing sports are very helpful to my health and my studies.My hobbiesBeginning:Topic senten

42、ce B:Topic sentence A:Ending:Main part(正文正文):Topic sentence C:(linking words)知己知彼，学范文知己知彼，学范文 Dear Mr.Know，I m pleased to write to ask for some help.I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study.First，some of us arent interested in English.We thinkstudying English is such a boring thing.

43、And then its sodifficult for us to remember all the words in the texts.So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study.And we are always afraid to join the group discussion.Whats more,there are so many new words we havent meet before in the passage.I dont know what to do.Sometimes

44、 we cant understand the main idea,let alone(更不更不用说用说)answer the questions about them.But the most difficult thing is to write.We often use wrong words and sentences.Can you help us?How can we improve our English?Pleasegive us some useful advice.Thank you very much.Write to me soon.Lets go for it!Mar

45、y(the beginning)(the ending)the body（正（正文）文）First，some of us arent interested in English.We think studying English is such a boring thing.And then its so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts.So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study.And we are always afrai

46、d to join the group discussion.Whats more,there are so many new words we havent met before in the passage.I dont know what to do.Sometimes we cant understand the main idea,let alone(更不用说更不用说)answer the questions about them.But the most difficult thing is to write.We often use wrong words and sentenc

47、es.Lets go for it!123465 Dear Mary,I heard you didnt do well in English.Here is some advice for you.Yours _,I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._,you can join the English club to practice English.You know,“Practice makes perfect.”_

48、,it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning.It can improve your listening skill._,English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.Your turn to go for it!（试填一填）（试填一填）Dear Mary,I heard you didnt do well in English.Here is some advice for you.Y

49、ours _,I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._,you can join the English club to practice English.You know,“Practice makes perfect.”_,it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning.It can improve your listening s

50、kill._,English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.To begin withOf courseIn factThenYour turn to go for it!（check）123 The Life as a Grade 9 Student How time flies!Now Im in Grade Nine.Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be.Now Im as busy a