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1、商务英语初级写作范文 初级商务英语培训对商务英语初级写作的英语范文进展点评指导，让大家可以更加清楚自己的弱项。下面是WTT给大家整理的商务英语初级写作范文，供大家参阅!商务英语初级写作范文1Formulate a smoking policy for your office which is fair to both smokers and nonsmokers.Write a 40-50 word memo informing all staff of the policy.提示：我们需要确定，假如我是公司职员，我要在这篇memo中获得什么信息?是不是要知道：1.新的吸烟政策从什么时候开场;

2、2.吸烟区划定在什么地方?您作文一：TO: All EmployeesFROM: CEO, Willan SmithSUBJECT: NEW SMOKING POLICYFor all the employees, especially smokers,1 plz be aware that our panys new smoking policy has been formulated as follow: A main smoking areas going to be restricted before Ne_t MONDAY2, anyone is not allowed to smo

3、ker in non-smoking zone even in the washing room.3Plz target the smoking and non-smoking area and stick to the panys new policy.4Th_.名师指导：1去掉，抬头已经写过给所有的员工，所以直接从正文开场就行了，费这个事干什么?2时间不确切，最好是 from ne_t Monday.Before 这个期限是什么时候?假如不能给出确切信息，就不要说，还不如换成详细的吸烟区域更好: be restricted to the room ne_t to the toilet.3你

4、经常在洗手间吸烟吗?或者你们公司有这样的同事?把这句话去掉。4添加：to ensure that it is fair to all of you.商务英语初级写作范文2Formulate a smoking policy for your office which is fair to both smokers and nonsmokers.Write a 40-50 word memo informing all staff of the policy.提示：我们需要确定，假如我是公司职员，我要在这篇memo中获得什么信息?是不是要知道：1.新的吸烟政策从什么时候开场;2.吸烟区划定在什么

5、地方?您作文二：to: All Stafffrom: Susuan WuTo creat a nonsmoking office room, we hope that smoking is forbidden in the work office from Sep.1st.Would you please enjoy your smoking in the Launch by closing the office door.Thank you for your coperation.名师指导：整体很干脆，但是语气比拟客气，而且没有看出是公司新政策的实行啊! 您作文五：To: All staff

6、From: Sarah BuffayAs you all know, there is an increasing dispute about smoking in the office.Now wed like to formulate a policy both fair to smokers and nonsmokers: The vacant room 408 will be opened as “Smoking Room” from tomorrow.All smokers may go there within the time limitation from 9:00a.m.to

7、 4:00p.m.But smokers are not allowed to smoke outside this room.1 If you have any problems, please contact me.2名师指导：1去掉。2这是信件的结尾，不是memo的，直接用 thank you 就可以。商务英语初级写作范文3Formulate a smoking policy for your office which is fair to both smokers and nonsmokers.Write a 40-50 word memo informing all staff of

8、 the policy.提示：我们需要确定，假如我是公司职员，我要在这篇memo中获得什么信息?是不是要知道：1.新的吸烟政策从什么时候开场;2.吸烟区划定在什么地方?您作文三：memorandumto : all the stafffrom : jeremysubjuect : new somking policydo you have a feeling that our office is surrounding by smog all the day, 1so we will implemented a2 new policy for somking ,from ne_t week3

9、,we will open an area4 for the smoking ,and other area is rescricting to smoke ,also there is a punishment when we find you smoke in these area 5thank you名师指导：1去掉来2we will implement a3Ne_t Monday4在哪里啊?5关于惩罚，最好不提。商务英语初级写作范文4Formulate a smoking policy for your office which is fair to both smokers and

10、nonsmokers.Write a 40-50 word memo informing all staff of the policy.提示：我们需要确定，假如我是公司职员，我要在这篇memo中获得什么信息?是不是要知道：1.新的吸烟政策从什么时候开场;2.吸烟区划定在什么地方?您作文四：To: All staffFrom: Hope0068Everybody know that smoking is dangerous for your health.And the The studies didnt just point to the ill effects of smoking on

11、those who smoke-non-smokers, too.1 Notice is hereby given that the smoking area is located in the special corner2 of the first floor of this building.This e into force on3 September 15th.Thanks.名师指导：1Memo 的主要作用就是提醒同事们考前须知，这和吸烟有多有害不相干，去掉。改为：to assure working environment2一般的公司都应该给个room3from商务英语初级写作范文的人【end】第 7 页 共 7 页