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1、雅思大作文到底写几段 雅思大作文究竟写几段?最好写几段?为了帮助大家备考，下面我就给大家解答一下! 雅思大作文究竟写几段 长期以来，雅思大作文(Task2)应当“写四段还是写五段”的争辩始终不绝于耳。从早期到课堂到后来的博客，再到参考书以及今日的微博、微信，多数的人都在为自己的主见声嘶力竭地呼喊，以至于_后演化成了不同雅思老师之间相互的人身攻击。在具体探讨这个问题之前，请大家先回答一下：考官会不会看到一篇文章写了五段就条件反射地给高分，又会不会看到一篇四段式的作文坚决果断地给低分呢?假如大家都一样认为考官不会那么鲁莽草率的话，咱们接着从两个方面深化探讨四段与五段写法。 哪种写法正确? 这是一个

2、必需肃穆对待的问题，我们总不能教给学生一个错误的写法，害人家花了钱还考低分。原委四段式的写法正确还是五段式的正确，_直观的推断依据就是考官自己写的范文采纳了哪种分段方式，当然假如有人认为考官写的作文也不肯定对的话咱们就没有接着争辩的必要了。假设雅思索官自己写的范文还算有参考价值的话，我们就从官方_正规、_畅销的出版物剑桥雅思真题系列当中选取范文来细致探讨一些这些考官们写出来的作文是什么样的。 先以剑桥雅思真题9为例，看第163页Test1的考官范文 Model and sample answers for Writing tasks TEST 1, WRITING TASK 2 MODEL A

3、NSWER This model has been prepared by an examiner as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches. 这篇范文写了五段，由此我们推断五段式的写法是正确的。 再以剑桥雅思真题8为例，还是第163页Test1的考官范文 同样的位置，剑八这篇文章则写了四段，所以由此推断四段式的写法也是正确的。 大家还可以接着去剑桥雅思真题7看163页的考官范文是用了五段式的写法，

4、然而同样是在这本剑7当中的第167页考官对于job satisfaction这个话题作文则用了四段的写法。 假如大家还有爱好的话，可以接着去剑桥真题6、5、4、3等等去看考官的范文，即会发觉五段式写法也会看到四段写法。 所以_足够大的考官范文样本我们认为五段和四段的写法都是正确的。 哪种写法好用? 考场上时间比较紧，所谓“好用”就是能在规定时间内相对比较轻松地写完，具体探讨这个问题之前，咱们先来了解一下市面上流行的四段式与五段式写法详细差别在哪。 四段式详细结构 段落 内容 一段 引入 其次段 正方（23个分论点） 第三段 反方（23个分论点） 第四段 结尾 五段式详细结构 段落 内容 一段

5、引入 其次段 _个分论点 第三段 其次个分论点 第四段 第三个分论点（或者反方一个分论点） 第五段 结尾 说白了，两种写法的_重要差别在于分论点的长度： 四段式的写法一段当中可以写两个以上的论点，因此每个论点不用写太长，有一句理由支撑即可;但是五段式的写法要求一个分论点独立成段，要有很长的理由来支撑才能写够字数。 咱们以剑桥雅思真题9当中一篇8分范文为例讲解一下五段式写法的难度，翻开剑9的第165页，挑出范文其次段细看 Life skills are very important and by doing voluntary work, students can learn how to co

6、mmunicate with others and work in a team but also how to manage their time and improve their organisational skills. Nowadays, unfortunately, teenagers do not have many after-school activities. After-school clubs are no longer that popular and students mostly go home and sit in front of the TV, brows

7、e internet or play video games. 这个论点写了69个字，而且它后面两段更长。但凡教过雅思写作的一线老师都明白：绝大多数人尤其是中学生是很难一个论点写70个字的，能写40个字就算不错了。再者说了，不谈词汇、不谈句子，这么长的一段对于内部逻辑结构的掌控要求很高，很多学生写这么啰嗦_终的结果也是言多必失，反而招致扣分。退一万步讲，咱们出国读书写作这一科根本用不着考8分。 再来看一篇剑桥雅思真题8中的四段式范文，由于在一线教学当中遇到绝大多数同学写作要考到66.5分，咱们以一篇6.5分的范文来说。翻到剑8第169页，细看范文其次段_个分论点： Nowadays，peopl

8、e are getting more and more lazy. They want convenience in everything. When they come home from work，they will have microwaved dinner or fast food so that they do not have to take the trouble to prepare a meal or wash up after dinner. 这个论点写了48个字，抛开词汇、句子，逻辑方面是不是比刚才那段好驾驭许多，缘由许多简洁：单个论点不用写那么多字。 而且在现实考试当

9、中，与其在同个一论点上想方设法凑字数，还不如去写一个新的分论点。 _后我个人得出的结论是：四段式写法和五段式写法都是正确的写法，但对于绝大多数考生而言四段式写法在考试当中更好用。 雅思大作文：children are allowed to play on computers and tablets 雅思大作文题目：More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills.

10、 Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 作文范文： In the ear of advanced technology, the use of computers has been expanded into many walks of life; gradually, the educational

11、 function is targeted within the group of patients who attach more expectations on creating a better studying environment for their descendants. But following is the controversial opinion which believes the significance of negative impacts. The revolution brought by computers and tablets also change

12、s the traditional concept of education especially for parents who used to believe that the schooling is the only proper way to learn, while, due to the multi-function in a variety of applicants, such electronic devices have been regarded as an efficient alternative to acquire more knowledge even dur

13、ing playing games. Besides, the vivid animation and simplified explanations attract youngsters attention easily, by which they can remember a lot of new things and the duration is considerable. However, the disadvantages are looming. The top concern for the public is that most researches have reflec

14、ted the addiction of playing rather than learning; although the apps contain something educational, the main purpose is entertaining; as a result, they could never satisfy the need of a great amount of knowledge students should have, and unless the enough supervision and guidance are provided, what

15、they do is just a waste of time. Meanwhile, the healthy problem also should be taken into consideration. There is a common knowledge that staring at the shinning screen frequently could affect the youths eyesight, which can be more seriously when using the portable Ipads on the moving vehicles or wa

16、lking. In conclusion, we cannot ignore the effectiveness of applying computer and tablets into education field, which actually would be a useful tool, but parents need to understand the drawbacks and give sufficient support for their children. 雅思大作文：research into new types of medicine and treatments

17、 are essential 雅思大作文题目：Research into new types of medicine and treatments are essential for improving health and deal with diseases. Who do you think should fund these researches: private companies, individuals or governments? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your

18、own knowledge or experience. 作文范文： Medical advancement like new drugs and therapies have been improving the average longevity of citizens and both their phyical and mental well-being, so a massive amount of funds have been and would be continously poured into this field. This essay discusses whether

19、 the fundings should originate from ordinary people, major coporations or governments. Individuals, or the general public to be precise, perform little in medical progress. This fact should be widely acknowledged although this group is the major one that enjoys the achievements on health care. That

20、is mainly because any one kind of new medicines requires time and money that is way beyond any single citizens affordability compared with the other two parities mentioned. Business markets, in comparison, play a vital role on this issue. Businessmen can better detect and meet the needs of people pa

21、tients in this context and they are able to invest greater capital in the pursuing latter higher profits. This strong incentive can bring along fresh treatments and a series of new drugs in the short term. However, the patented medical products with high prices can inflict greater pain for the lower

22、 class, which is the root of growing health disparities in the global context. Simply put, health care should not be regarded as a commercial activity but a social obligation. Governments should take over this mission and cover the most costs. Their obligations, a well-argued and decided issue, are

23、to organize social assets and to invest into fields that benefit people amid the general development. Moreover, the authority occupying greater statistical resources can better decide in which particular disease or diseases should the fundings be invested to help the majority or the immediate. Yet,

24、it is to admit that tax revenue for these scientific researches may be ended up in vain as all the progress have based on numerous failures. To sum up, I believe that major global companies and governments can both be the main investors on these projects whereas some tradeoffs can be implemented to

25、benefit virtually all citizens, like regulation on price fixing and supervision on the distribution of government fundings. 雅思大作文：public museums and art galleries will not be needed 雅思大作文题目：Nowadays，Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see his

26、torical objects and works of art by using a computer.To what extent you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 作文范文： Museums and art centres have become major tourist attractions within urban areas, a

27、nd yet some propose that these sites would be visited on websites for intensive spread, alternative preservation and cheaper visiting costs. This argument is partially true. Virtual visits mainly benefits on three parties. For culture and art, pictures of artefacts and exhibits can be immediately up

28、loaded and globally browsed, which guarantees a significantly faster and wider spread. In regard to relics and works of art, it is beneficial that their pictures uploaded and saved on servers can be easily backed up at present and their three-dimensional models will be established with the progress

29、of virtual reality technology in the future, because they face inevitable ruin out of time and disasters. Consequently in the long run, data of these items are preserved in the form of images and models, entitling descendants to have possible visits. Lastly, viewing artworks online is obviously more

30、 economical for visitors. However, museums and art galleries in reality should not be replaced. One of the main reasons of actual visit is that first-hand observations, embedding deeper impresions, provides better experiences because it is more enjoyable to have a close look at vivid striations on a

31、 body sculpture and have a gentle touch on rocks of a castle ramport in comparison with picutures. In addition, these sites are currently the favourite places of interst for tourists and, for the sake of the local tourism income, these attractions are still needed. To conclude my own view, the tende

32、ncy of virtualizing many activities seems to be natural and unavoidable and this argument can indeed gain its favour out of solid reasons. Nevertheless, the total replacement of physical existence of the sites will deprive peoples right to sense their real magnificence and marvel. 雅思大作文究竟写几段本文来源：网络收集与整理，如有侵权，请联系作者删除，谢谢！第15页 共15页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页