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1、会计学1高考英语写作指导课高考英语写作指导课 副本副本高考英语评分原则：高考英语评分原则：1.本题总分为本题总分为25分，按分，按5个档次个档次给分。给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言内容和语言初步确初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数词数少于少于80和和多于多于120的，从总分中的，从总分中减去减去2分。分。4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点内容要点，应用词汇应用词汇和和语法结构语法结构的的丰富性丰富性和和准确性准确性及上下文的

2、及上下文的连贯性连贯性。第2页/共87页高考英语评分原则：高考英语评分原则：5.拼写与标点符号拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英，美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。英，美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如如书写较差书写较差以至影响交际，将其以至影响交际，将其分数降分数降低一个档次低一个档次。7.语言首先要求准确通顺。语言首先要求准确通顺。8.鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。第3页/共87页总结总结：什么样的作文是一篇好作文：什么样的作文是一篇好作文n n

3、无遗漏信息点，即要点全面无遗漏信息点，即要点全面无遗漏信息点，即要点全面无遗漏信息点，即要点全面n n篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词n n句式复杂多样句式复杂多样句式复杂多样句式复杂多样n n地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组接下来，我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。接下来，我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。第4页/共87页A good compositioncontent structure languagebe attractive,beautiful

4、,completed in a limited time!What is a good writing？第5页/共87页Structure:*Good beginning and ending(好的好的开头结尾开头结尾)*Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理结构合理,行文流畅行文流畅)Language:*No Chinglish(避免中文式英文避免中文式英文)*No Grammatical mistakes(没有没有语法错误语法错误)*With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence

5、 patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化化)第6页/共87页明确写作步骤 1.Cross-question(审题审题)Main idea Style Verb tense Person2.Seize the major points/key words(抓要点抓要点)figure out the outline(提纲提纲)4.Ensure the fluency(添加过渡，确保添加过渡，确保连贯）连贯）Conjunctions/conjunctive adverbspassage5.Error correcting (查错改错查错改错)3.Sentenc

6、es connection (连句成文连句成文)Words/phrases Sentencespassage第7页/共87页高考作文高分卷的特点高考作文高分卷的特点n n外在美外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清：第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。卷面整洁。n n结构美结构美：有合理的段落层次，多为：有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的主题。主题。第8页/共87页n n词汇美词汇美词汇美词汇美：词汇反映你知识贮存量的多词汇反映你知识贮存量的多词汇反映你知识贮存量的多词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡

7、量英语水平的一个重要标少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。志。志。志。likelikebe fond of,be addicted to/be fond of,be addicted to/helphelpdo sb a favordo sb a favor n n句式美句式美句式美句式美：运用得当的运用得当的运用得当的运用得当的高级句式结构高级句式结构高级句式结构高级句式结构可可可可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉因此而生辉

8、因此而生辉因此而生辉 。n n衔接美衔接美衔接美衔接美：使用恰当的使用恰当的使用恰当的使用恰当的连接词连接词连接词连接词，对写一，对写一，对写一，对写一篇有篇有篇有篇有“英语味英语味英语味英语味”的文章很重要，能使的文章很重要，能使的文章很重要，能使的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。第9页/共87页卷面篇卷面篇第10页/共87页养眼的养眼的第11页/共87页第12页/共87页第13页/共87页第14页/共87页第15页/共87页当批到下午两点看当批到下午两点看到了它们到了它们第16页/共87页太挤了

9、太挤了第17页/共87页太乱了太乱了第18页/共87页太空了太空了第19页/共87页太潦草了太潦草了第20页/共87页太没谱了太没谱了第21页/共87页老师最恨的作文老师最恨的作文第22页/共87页大锅，标点呢？段呢大锅，标点呢？段呢？第23页/共87页神，你别抄阅读理解行不神，你别抄阅读理解行不？俺们也会看试卷的！？俺们也会看试卷的！第24页/共87页老师最喜欢的作文老师最喜欢的作文第25页/共87页Great minds think alike!第26页/共87页作文五档：（作文五档：（从教师阅卷印象角度划分）从教师阅卷印象角度划分）n n漂漂亮亮（2125分）n n有模有样（1620分）

10、n n马马虎虎（1115分）n n稀里糊涂（610分）n n一塌糊涂 （05分）第27页/共87页Three Rules:n n1.You learn to write by writing.n n2.There is no good writing;only good rewriting.n n3.When in dout,refer to Rule No.1 and 2.第28页/共87页二、感知典型范例词汇层面词汇层面1n nadj.聪明的、脑筋聪明的、脑筋好的好的n nclevern n wise wisen n smart smartn n brightbrightn n intel

11、ligentintelligent第29页/共87页n n他昨天下午来的。他昨天下午来的。1.1.He came here yesterday afternoon.He came here yesterday afternoon.2.2.He He didnt didnt come here come here until until yesterday afternoon.yesterday afternoon.3.3.Not untilNot until yesterday afternoon yesterday afternoon diddid he come here.he come

12、here.4.4.It wasIt was yesterday afternoon yesterday afternoon thatthat he came here.he came here.二、感知典型范例句型层面句型层面1第30页/共87页n n令她吃惊的是，小女孩知道这令她吃惊的是，小女孩知道这么多事情。么多事情。1.He is surprised that the little girl knows so many things.2.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.3.What surprises him is

13、 that the little girl knows so many things.二、感知典型范例句型层面句型层面2第31页/共87页二、感知典型范例段落层面段落层面1This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.People here are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new look.This village is v

14、ery small，which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.However,it has changed a lot since 1978.People here are leading a richer and happier life than before.Now it is taking on a new look.第32页/共87页二、感知典型范例篇章层面篇章层面1第33页/共87页第34页/共87页第35页/共87页第36页/共87页DISCUSSION:What is a

15、 good writing？How to catch the experts eyes?第37页/共87页DISCUSSION:What is a good writing？Content:Everything which is related to your view needs to includ.(内容要完整内容要完整)（内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人（内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字提示，可以用笔在家给的是文字提示，可以用笔在试题处标出试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人家给的，如果人家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都要看看再动笔，不要看了个图都要看

16、看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）一个马上就写。）第38页/共87页1)Traffic in Shanghai is too crowded.1)Traffic in Shanghai is too crowded.2)There has a highway connected with 2)There has a highway connected with Beijing.Beijing.3)Though shes almost 403)Though shes almost 40，but she still but she still plans to compete.plans to c

17、ompete.4)I forgot my dictionary at home.4)I forgot my dictionary at home.5)It will cost us much money to buy one.5)It will cost us much money to buy one.heavy.leftistakeAvoid Chinglish!第39页/共87页改错改错1.I cant understand them when I meet new words,so I have to refer to them in the dictionary.2.The abil

18、ity to read English passages is slowly.3.There is no doubt that English Study needs lotsof time and efforts.4.Only by this way,can we keep up with otherstudents.5.Im LiHua,a new student of you.meet withlook uplowlearninginLi Huayours第40页/共87页6.My English level is common and I cant speak verywell.7.I

19、 believe we can get alone well with each other.8.Besides,I think speaking English is as important aswriting English.9.I study English for 12 years so I think I know English very well.10.There are some advice in teaching English.averageitalongspokenwrittenhave studiedis第41页/共87页Adopt a variety of sen

20、tence patterns 使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式1.They even threw rubbish into the lake.They totally ignored the noticeable sign No littering nearby.(使用使用V-ing形式形式)They even threw rubbish into the lake,_ the noticeable sign No littering nearby.totally ignoring第42页/共87页Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用较丰富的句式使用较

21、丰富的句式Not long ago I won the first prize in the English contest_in our school.(12 山东山东)held2.Not long ago I won the first prize in the English contest.It was held in our school.(使用过去分词使用过去分词)第43页/共87页3.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.(使用名词性从句使用名词性从句)4.People suggest that the conf

22、erence be put off.(改被动语态改被动语态)_ the little girl knows so many things.What surprises him is that_the conference be put off.It is suggested that第44页/共87页5.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型使用强调句型)6.I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气

23、）用虚拟语气）_he had read the news in the newspaper _ he knew what had happened._the physics exam _your help.It was not until I couldnt have passed thatbut for/without第45页/共87页7.I wont believe what he says.(使用状语使用状语 从句从句)8.The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well written.(用定语从句用定语从句)_he says,

24、I wont believe.The girl_is spoken highly of.No matter what/Whateverwhose composition was well written第46页/共87页9.If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.（用并列句）（用并列句）10.He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.(使用倒使用倒装句装句)_he come back from Beijing _he was sent abroad._ma

25、ke rapid progress.Study hard,and youllNo sooner had Hardly/scarcely.when.than第47页/共87页四、明确写作步骤抄抄改改连连扩扩抓抓审审书面书面表达表达第48页/共87页Please learn to Your compositionwhen you finish it from now.第49页/共87页n n 书面表达评价表书面表达评价表书面表达评价表书面表达评价表n n 项目项目项目项目 自评自评自评自评 他评他评他评他评n n1.1.书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划

26、书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划?n n2.2.句子开头注意大小写了吗句子开头注意大小写了吗句子开头注意大小写了吗句子开头注意大小写了吗?n n3.3.有没有注意标点符号有没有注意标点符号有没有注意标点符号有没有注意标点符号?n n4 4将文章分段了吗将文章分段了吗将文章分段了吗将文章分段了吗?分成了几段分成了几段分成了几段分成了几段?n n5 5有单词拼写错误吗有单词拼写错误吗有单词拼写错误吗有单词拼写错误吗?几个几个几个几个?n n6.6.有时态错误吗有时态错误吗有时态错误吗有时态错误吗?误用了哪种时态误用了哪种时态误用了哪种时态误用了哪种时态?n n7.7.注意主谓一致了吗注意主谓一致了吗注意

27、主谓一致了吗注意主谓一致了吗?n n8.8.有没有语态的错误有没有语态的错误有没有语态的错误有没有语态的错误?n n9.9.有没有使用关联词有没有使用关联词有没有使用关联词有没有使用关联词?使用得当吗使用得当吗使用得当吗使用得当吗?n n10.10.有没有词性的错误有没有词性的错误有没有词性的错误有没有词性的错误?哪一种哪一种哪一种哪一种?n n11.11.简单句表达正确吗简单句表达正确吗简单句表达正确吗简单句表达正确吗?n n12.12.是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构?n n13.13.表达方式是否多样化表达方

28、式是否多样化表达方式是否多样化表达方式是否多样化?注意长短句搭配了吗注意长短句搭配了吗注意长短句搭配了吗注意长短句搭配了吗?n n14.14.有没有用好词好句有没有用好词好句有没有用好词好句有没有用好词好句?用了哪些用了哪些用了哪些用了哪些?第50页/共87页五、培养几种技能第51页/共87页A)Simple sentence(简单句简单句):Hearing the news,he was happy.B)Compound sentence A（并列句）（并列句）:He gave me a book but I forgot to bring it back home.C)Compound s

29、entence B（复合句）（复合句）:What he is doing has nothing to do with me.“规范的英语句子规范的英语句子”就是我们经常就是我们经常讲的三种句子：讲的三种句子：1.学会使用规范的英语句子第52页/共87页Here are 3 ways to make sentences:I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：1)借助名词短语做同位语借助名词短语做同位语如：如：李立，男，李立，男，19岁，岁，1991年生；籍年生；籍贯：广东。贯：广东。Li Li,a boy of 19,was born in Guangdong i

30、n 1991.2)借助介词短语做定语借助介词短语做定语 如：如：李飞李飞,男，男，10岁，棕色短发，穿白色茄克。岁，棕色短发，穿白色茄克。Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and in a white jacket.第53页/共87页如：如：有了有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。了他们的村子。With the help of Tom,we soon found their village.4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语 如：如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来

31、。他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。They were standing under the big tree,waiting for the president.Standing under the big tree,they were waiting for the President.3)借助介词短语做状语借助介词短语做状语第54页/共87页II.II.巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：如：如：他给我很多钱，我不要。他给我很多钱，我不要。I was just walking down the street corner when I saw you.如：如：我刚

32、走到拐角处，就见到你了。我刚走到拐角处，就见到你了。He gave me a lot of money but I refused.第55页/共87页III.III.用好从句和引导词写出规范的复合句：用好从句和引导词写出规范的复合句：1)名词性从句名词性从句如：如：老师生气。原因：王力迟到。老师生气。原因：王力迟到。That Wang Li came late to school made the teacher very angry.2)定语从句定语从句如：如：中国中国,地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。众多。China,which lies in t

33、he east of Asia,is a great country with a large area and population as well as rich natural resources.I was deeply moved by this,because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.3)状语从句状语从句如：如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。第56页/共87页2、灵活运用九种句式 有意识的将下列句式结构运用有意识的将下列句式结构运用到作文中去，可以迅速地让我们到作文中去，可以迅速地

34、让我们的作文靓起来。重要的是我们要的作文靓起来。重要的是我们要学会如何灵活的变通、巧妙地运学会如何灵活的变通、巧妙地运用到考试作文中去。用到考试作文中去。第57页/共87页1.1.People grow rice in the south of People grow rice in the south of China.China.Rice is grown in the south of China.Rice is grown in the south of China.2.They have printed one and a half 2.They have printed one a

35、nd a half million copies of the dictionary since million copies of the dictionary since 1986.1986.One One and and a a half half million million copies copies of of the the dictionary have been printed since 1986.dictionary have been printed since 1986.一、主动句与被动句的互换。一、主动句与被动句的互换。第58页/共87页二、将陈述句改为倒装句。二

36、、将陈述句改为倒装句。1.1.I couldI could hardly hardly understand the importance understand the importance of English at that time.of English at that time.Hardly could IHardly could I understand the importance understand the importance of English at that time.of English at that time.2.We did 2.We did not not r

37、ealize our mistakes realize our mistakes until until at at that time.that time.Not until at that time did weNot until at that time did we realize our realize our mistakes.mistakes.第59页/共87页三、将简单句改为强调句三、将简单句改为强调句1.1.SmokingSmoking did great harm to his health.did great harm to his health.It wasIt was

38、 smoking smoking thatthat did great harm to his did great harm to his health.health.2.Our money is earned2.Our money is earned through hard work through hard work by by our parents.our parents.It isIt is through hard work through hard work that that our money is our money is earned by our parents.ea

39、rned by our parents.3.He went there yesterday.3.He went there yesterday.He He did godid go there yesterday.there yesterday.第60页/共87页四、将两个简单句合并为并列句四、将两个简单句合并为并列句1.You can do it.I can do it.One of us must do 1.You can do it.I can do it.One of us must do it.it.you you I must do it.I must do it.2.I want

40、 to buy this bike.I don2.I want to buy this bike.I don t have enough t have enough money.money.I want to buy this bike,I want to buy this bike,I dont have I dont have enough money.enough money.Eitherorbut第61页/共87页五、将两个简单句合并为复合句五、将两个简单句合并为复合句五、将两个简单句合并为复合句五、将两个简单句合并为复合句1.同位语和同位语从句同位语和同位语从句1)1)Liu Xia

41、ng is an excellent athlete.He won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games._,_,won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games.2)The word is true.The president will give our school a speech._ is true _ the president will give our school a speech.Liu Xia

42、ngan excellent athleteItthat第62页/共87页2.2.定语从句定语从句定语从句定语从句 1)The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing,and 1)The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing,and its slogan is One World,One Dream,its slogan is One World,One Dream,The 2008 Olympic Games,_The 2008 Olympic Games,_ _2)In my opinion,th

43、e Great Wall and the Summer Palace 2)In my opinion,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace are well worth visiting.are well worth visiting.In my opinion,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace In my opinion,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace _ _3)Yesterday,we went to the East Gate,and we bought a 3)Yest

44、erday,we went to the East Gate,and we bought a lot of clothes.lot of clothes.Yesterday,we went to the East Gate,_ Yesterday,we went to the East Gate,_ _ _One Dream,will be held in Beijing.are the two places which are well worth visiting.where we bought aWhose slogan is One World,lot of clothes.第63页/

45、共87页3.3.主语从句主语从句主语从句主语从句1)His wonderful performance on the stage impressed 1)His wonderful performance on the stage impressed me.me.most was his wonderful most was his wonderful performance on the stage.performance on the stage.2)It satisfied me.The dining hall provides us with a 2)It satisfied me.T

46、he dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.large variety of kinds of dishes.the dining hall provides us with the dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.a large variety of kinds of dishes.3)I learned from the story that as long as we have 3)I learned f

47、rom the story that as long as we have patience,confidence and perseverance,we can patience,confidence and perseverance,we can realize our dreams.realize our dreams.as long as we have as long as we have patience,confidence and perseverance,we can patience,confidence and perseverance,we can realize ou

48、r dreams.realize our dreams.What impressed meWhat satisfied me is thatWhat I have learnt from the story is that第64页/共87页 推荐句型推荐句型n nWhat surprises astonished satisfied impressed me is thatn nWhat I would like to suggest advise put forward is thatn nWhat matters most is that n nWhat I learnconclude f

49、rom the story is that第65页/共87页4.表语从句表语从句推荐句型：推荐句型：is no longer what it used to be.1)我的家乡不再像以前那样了。我的家乡不再像以前那样了。My hometown is no longer what it used to be.2)他不再是以前那样了。他不再是以前那样了。He is no longer what he used to be.第66页/共87页5.状语从句状语从句 结果、程度结果、程度 sothat;such that 让步让步 no matter how what when where.=whate

50、ver,however,whenever,wherever 时间时间 was doingwhen,as soon as,the moment,the next time,every time第67页/共87页1)不管前面有多少困难，我们都要不管前面有多少困难，我们都要学会独立的克服他们。学会独立的克服他们。_ _,we should learn to overcome them independently.2)我正沿着马路走，突然我听到有我正沿着马路走，突然我听到有人叫我。人叫我。I _ along the road _ suddenly I heard my name called.No m