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1、 中中 考考 专 题 复复 习 课Writing1-检查口口语 爱好与学好与学业1.迈克克疯狂地迷恋足球，喜狂地迷恋足球，喜爱看足球比看足球比赛，当然也喜当然也喜爱踢足球；踢足球；2.放学后，他放学后，他经常花常花1个小个小时左右的左右的时间和和 同学同学们一起一起 踢足球；踢足球；3.他的父母不喜他的父母不喜欢这一点，要求他在一点，要求他在5点半点半 之前回家；他之前回家；他认为在在爱好上花些好上花些时间是重是重 要的，希望能得到父母的支持。要的，希望能得到父母的支持。2-分析分析结构构 Hobbies and studiesMike is crazy about football!He l

2、oves watching football matches.Of course,he loves playing football too.He often spends about one hour playing football with his classmates after school.His parents dont like this and have asked him to go home before 5.30.He thinks it is important for him to spend some time on his hobbies.He wishes h

3、e could have his parents support.IntroductionMain bodyConclusion3-Discussion4-抄抄组集集连抓抓审作文作文集句成段集句成段组段成篇段成篇审清清题意意连词成句成句抓住要点抓住要点抄写抄写规范范 Writing skillssix steps5-自从自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些，但有些同学不知如何利用好同学不知如何利用好这些些时间，针对这种种现象，你校广播室象，你校广播室“校校园英园英语之声之声”栏目就目就“如何更好地利用如何更好地利用课余余时间”进行征文。行征

4、文。请你你用英用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：内容要点包括：注意注意:100词左右，广播的开左右，广播的开头已已给出，不出，不计入入总词数数参考参考词汇:make good use of,interest groupssocial activities,do sports,net bar 不良不良现象和行象和行为 （至少（至少3点）点）1.花太多花太多时间在在兴趣趣爱好上好上2.迷恋网吧，上网打游迷恋网吧，上网打游戏3.看法看法我我认为 建建议（至少（至少3条）条）1.合理安排合理安排时间2.参加参加兴趣小趣小组 3.6-第一步第一步:审清清题意意认真真审题，明确写作

5、，明确写作主主题、体裁体裁、人称人称、字数字数、结构构、时态、提示、提示要点要点和和补充信息充信息具体做法：具体做法：用笔勾画用笔勾画7-自从自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些些时间，针对这种种现象，你校广播室象，你校广播室“校园英校园英语之声之声”栏目就目就“如如何更好地利用何更好地利用课余余时间”进行征文。行征文。请你用英你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：不良不良现象和行象和行为 （至少（至少3点）点）1.花太多花太多时间在在兴趣趣爱好上好上2.迷

6、恋网吧，上网打游迷恋网吧，上网打游戏3.看法看法我我认为 建建议（至少（至少3条）条）1.合理安排合理安排时间2.参加参加兴趣小趣小组 3.注意注意:100词左右，广播的开左右，广播的开头已已给出，不出，不计入入总词数数主主题体裁体裁人称人称结构构时态字数字数已知信息已知信息未知信息未知信息以一般以一般现在在时为主主8-第二步：第二步：列出写作提列出写作提纲（Outline）。）。具体做法：具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点根据段落整理写作要点不要不要遗漏漏要点！要点！9-Introduction Main body ConclusionproblemsopinionssuggestionsWri

7、te an outline1.花太多花太多时间在在兴趣趣爱好上好上2.迷恋网吧，打迷恋网吧，打电脑游游戏3.-1.合理安排合理安排时间2.参加参加兴趣小趣小组3.-10-1.List some keywords about problems.Phrases:_ _2.List some keywords about opinions.Phrases:_ _ 3.List some keywords about suggestions.Phrases:_ _ 第三步：抓住要点，列关第三步：抓住要点，列关键词not good for study and health,Spend-on,hobbie

8、s,be crazy about,-11-1.Make sentences with the keywords about problems.Sentences:_ _2.Make sentences with the keywords about opinions.Sentences:_ _3.Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions.Sentences:_ _第四步：第四步：连词成句成句Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and cant finish their

9、homework on time.I dont think its good for our study and health.12-第五步：集句成段，第五步：集句成段，组段成篇段成篇There are many things we can do.we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies.can set up and join different kinds of interest groups,take part in some good

10、 social activities.we can do some sports.If we have time,we should help parents do some housework.However,how can we make better use of our spare time?For exampleBesides these,And alsoweWe注意添加注意添加主主题句，句，连接接词！13-抓住要点，列关抓住要点，列关键词Problemsbe crazy about(7B4)play computer games(7A1)watch too much TV(8A1)

11、spend too much time on their hobbies(9A3)refuse to do homework(9A3)spend-on(7A2)Opinionsnot good for our health and study(7A2)focus on(9A3)Pay more attention to(9A1)Suggestionsplan time carefully(9A3)achieve a balance between study and bobbies(9A3)take part in different after school activities(7A2)j

12、oin interest groups(8A2)do some sports(7A4)do some housework(7B5)14-Lets enjoy our own compositions!15-二、二、评分档次：分档次：一档文一档文(17-20分分)写出全部内容要点，写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、次清楚、语言流言流畅，有句式，有句式变化，化，有复有复杂结构。构。二档文二档文(13-16分分)基本基本写出全部内容要点，写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、次清楚、语言流言流畅，有少量，有少量 语法法错误。三档文三档文(9-12分分)写出大部内容要点，写出大部内容要点，语言基本通言基本通顺有一些有

13、一些语法和拼写法和拼写错误。四档文四档文(5-8分分)写出一半左右有关内容要点，写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不通，影响理解。言不通，影响理解。五档文五档文(0-4分分)言不达意，不知所云。言不达意，不知所云。一、一、评分原分原则：1.短短语及句子及句子结构不构不对，人称、，人称、时态、语态误用，均用，均为大大错。一。一处大大 错扣扣1分。分。2.通篇人称通篇人称错误，统扣扣2分。分。3.拼写拼写、标点符号、冠点符号、冠词、介、介词等方面的等方面的 错误为小小错。2个小个小错相当相当 于于1个大个大错。4.相同相同错误，只扣一次。字数不足，只扣一次。字数不足90词扣扣3分。分。5.文中若出文中

14、若出现自己及老自己及老师、学校等真、学校等真实姓名扣姓名扣3分。分。6.书写潦草，卷面不清，扣写潦草，卷面不清，扣2分。分。16-范文展示范文展示Hello,everybody!Its time again for our English Broadcasting Program.Todays topic is“How to Make Better Use of Our Spare Time”.Nowadays,we students have much more free time than before.But quite a number of students dont know ho

15、w to use the time properly.They spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time.Also some of them watch too much TV,Whats worse,some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games.We dont think its good for their study and health.However,

16、how can we make better use of our spare time?There are many things we can do.For example,we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies.And also we can set up and join different kinds of interest groups,take part in some good social activities.Besi

17、des these,we can do some sports.If we have time,we should help parents do some housework.Lets make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!17-The structure of the article IntroductionMain body ConclusionSummary ProblemsSuggestions opinions 18-写作：写作：第一步就是要第一步就是要认真真审题，明确写作，明确写作

18、主主题、体裁体裁、人人称称、字数字数、结构构、时态、提示、提示要点要点和和补充信息充信息第二步就是要第二步就是要列出写作提列出写作提纲（列关（列关键词、连词成成句句、集句成集句成段段、组段成段成篇篇）写作前：写作前：确定确定人称、人称、时态写作后：写作后：查错改改错19-Homework1.复复习本本课要点要点2.背背诵精彩范文精彩范文 祝同学祝同学们在中考中取得好成在中考中取得好成绩！20-Thank You!Thank You!Your advice is welcome!21-变换句式句式并列句并列句复合句复合句结果状果状语从句从句Some students spend too much

19、 time on their hobbies.They cant finish their homework on time.Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and they cant finish their homework on timeSome students spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time22-常常见错误时态是否正确是否正确主主谓是否一致是否一致要点是否全面要点是否全面人称是否正确人称是否正确语序是否有序是否有问题语言是否符合言是否符合习惯固定短固定短语是否恰当是否恰当23-