建议信写作（How to write a letter of advice）课件.ppt

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1、writingHow to write a letter of adviceMy dear friends,I am depressed recently because I become fatter and fatter.Yesterday,I went to a shop to buy clothes.What made me unhappy was that I just looked like a panda when I tried a black dress on.I have made up my mind to lose weight.Can you give me some

2、 advice to keep fit?Best wishes.Yours,Lily 建议信Lilywasworried,thinkingthatshewastoo_.Therefore,sheaskedyoutogivehersome_tohelpher_andkeep_.fatsuggestions adviceloseweightfitMainIdeaTask 1What suggestions will you give to Lily?Task 21.我建议你参加一个中文学习班。I suggest you taking a Chinese class.a.我建议你做更多的运动，比如跑

3、步，游泳,打篮球等。I suggest you doing more sports,such as running,swimming,playing basketball and so on.2.看中文电视和报纸也是提高你汉语的好办法。Watching TV and reading newspapers in Chineseare also good ways to improve your Chinese.b.喝足够多的水也是帮助你减肥的好办法。Drinking enough water is also a good way to help you lose weight.3.如果我是你，我

4、会尝试学习唱中文歌.(虚拟语气虚拟语气)If I were you,I would try learning and singing Chinese songs.c.如果我是你，我会保持一个健康饮食。你不仅要按时吃饭，也要少吃肉，多吃菜。If I were you,I would keep a healthy diet.Not only should you eat on time,but also you should eat less meat and more vegetables.表列举时常用衔接词表列举时常用衔接词:First,second,third.Finally Firstly

5、,secondly，eventuallyAbove all,besides,last but not leastDearLily,Above all,I suggest you doing more sports,such as running,swimming,playing basketball and so on.Besides,drinking enough water is also a good way to help you lose weight.Finally,if I were you,I would keep a healthy diet.Not only should

6、you eat on time,but also you should eat less meat and more vegetables.incompleteimpolite Ending Beginning Body state your purpose (写信目的)give advice（提出建议）express your hope（表达祝愿）建议信基本框架：建议信基本框架：1.Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on2.Knowing that,Id like to give some suggestions.3.I

7、am sorry to hear thatA.A.开头开头 sentence patterns B.B.结尾结尾1.I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.2.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.3.Im sure if you take my advice,you will A.youcanspeakEnglishwithyourteacherandclassmatesB.Imsorrytohearthatyouarenotabletoc

8、ommunicatewithotherseffectively.C.Idohopetoheargoodnewsfromyouthatyoudowellincommunicatingwithothers.D.KnowingthatyouhavetroubleinlearningEnglishE.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Task 3 连句成文连句成文连句成文连句成文要注意：篇章的连贯性要注意：篇章的连贯性Dear Li Hua,_,I feel very sorry and would like to give some suggestions.

9、Firstly,you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class.Secondly,the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it.Thirdly,_,which can improve your listening and speaking abilities.Whats more,the most important advice is reading English books before the class a

10、nd after the class._.Best wishes.Yours,xxxDTask 3AE连句成文连句成文要注意：篇章的连贯性要注意：篇章的连贯性Dear Wang Nan,_.I will give you some useful advice.My advice are as follows.First,I notice some people around us are not good at communication.So you dont have to worry too much about it.Second,good communication is not o

11、nly helpful to our study but also good for our success.Third,be honest to those whom you talk to,so you could be understood by others easily.Whats more,youd better try to understand others when they talks so that you can exchange ideas with them freely._ Best wishes.Yours,xxxBTask 3CDearJane,Knowing

12、thatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight,Idliketogivesomesuggestions.First,itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.Inordertoloseweight,youcaneatmorevegetablesandfruits.Besides,italsohelpsifyoutakemoreexercise.Themoreexerciseyoutake,themorefatyouwillburnoff,andyouwillbethinner.Inaddition,itshouldbeagoodideatodrinken

13、oughwater,becausewatercansupportourbodyandactivities,andhelpusloseweight.Imsureifyoutakemyadvice,youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整整体体三三部部分分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；2.Body 中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending 小结；呼应主题 假如你是李华。你的美国朋友Mike最近感觉学习压力很大，写

14、信向你求助。请你用英文给他回一封信，就如何处理压力给他一些建议。1.既要努力学习也要学会放松（劳逸结合）；2.看关于如何解压的书籍；3.向朋友和父母倾诉。注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯 引出话题，表明写作意图1.劳逸结合；2.阅读如何解压的书3.向朋友和父母倾诉；提出建议：总结，表达愿望连接词(多个建议+多个理由)评分标准1 1、是否覆盖所有内容要点、是否覆盖所有内容要点2 2、是否恰当使用语法结构、是否恰当使用语法结构 3 3、是否运用多样句式和丰富的词汇、是否运用多样句式和丰富的词汇4 4、是否使用连接词、是否使用连接词5 5、全文结构是否完整合理、全文结构是否完

15、整合理Finish the writing and help each other correct and improve it.Homework1你是否用对了人称/时态？2是否合理划分段落？3有使用合适的介词吗？4句子是否出现双谓语而没有连词？5是否be动词和实义动词连用？6谓语使用了正确的语态吗？7你的语气是否得当符合建议信？8是否遗漏信息点？9写的逻辑是否合理？1.memorize the sentence patterns2.polish your writingDearMike,Iamsorrytohearthatyouaresufferingfromgreatstressofstu

16、dying.HereIwouldliketogiveyousomesuggestionsaboutdealingwithyourstress.First,yououghttolearntostudyhardaswellasrelaxifnecessary.Whentired,youcangowalkingordosomesportswithyourclassmates.Secondly,asiswellknown,stressistouswhatwateristofish,butdonotgiveyourselftoomuchstressoryoumayfeelfrustratedandtir

17、ed,whichisbadforyourhealth.Thirdly,Ithinkitwouldbebeneficialifyoucouldsharesomeofyourinneremotionswithyourfriends,parentsorteachers.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.Bestwishes,LiHua常见连接词常见连接词罗列观点罗列观点Firstly,First of all,Above all,To begin with,In the first place,For one thing,Secondly,Besides,Moreover,In addition,Whats more,Furthermore,Worse still,To make matters worse,For another thing,Finally,At last,In the end,Last but not least,