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1、Lets enjoy writing.Lets enjoy writing.-A lesson on how to improve your writing.-A lesson on how to improve your writing.Styles of compositions中考常见作文体裁Dear xx,Thank you for your letter._ _ Yours,xx a letter an e-mailDear xx,We have a party tomorrow._Yours,xx Step 1 revisionStarting(topic)Body (suppor

2、ting ideas)Ending（opinions）BeginningstructurestructureBody Ending StrategyUse outline to improve your writing 提纲提纲现象陈述现象陈述对调查相关信息的介绍对调查相关信息的介绍自己的观点自己的观点,评价评价 Our school is very clean.So its necessary for us to keep our class clean.Recently,we had a discussion about the ways to keep clean.Here are th

3、e results.In my opinion/I thinksweep the floor water the plantstake out the trashclean the classroom Taking care of the environment is veryimportant.Taking care of the environment is veryimportant.World Environment DayWorld Environment DayOn June 5thOn June 5th在今年在今年6月月5日世界环境日即将到来之既日世界环境日即将到来之既,请写一篇

4、发言稿呼吁全校同学共同保请写一篇发言稿呼吁全校同学共同保护环境护环境,从我做起从我做起.开头和结尾已给出，内容包括如下开头和结尾已给出，内容包括如下:经常骑自行车或走路上学经常骑自行车或走路上学节约用水节约用水,不把污水倒入河中不把污水倒入河中,不乱扔垃圾不乱扔垃圾.不用或少用一次性筷子或餐巾纸不用或少用一次性筷子或餐巾纸.把用过的书本留给下届把用过的书本留给下届(lower grades)学生学生.请再提出请再提出1或或2条建议条建议.Step2 leading-in As we know,taking good care of environment is very important i

5、n our daily life,but do you know how to protect the environment?Taking care of the environment is very important.If we try our best,Im sure our environment can get better and better!在今年在今年6月月5日世界环境日即将到来之既日世界环境日即将到来之既,请写一篇发言稿呼吁全请写一篇发言稿呼吁全校同学共同保护环境校同学共同保护环境,从我做起从我做起.开头和结尾已给出，内容包括如开头和结尾已给出，内容包括如下下:经常骑自

6、行车或走路上学。经常骑自行车或走路上学。节约用水节约用水.不把污水倒入河中不把污水倒入河中,不乱扔垃圾。不乱扔垃圾。不用或少用一次性不用或少用一次性(one-off)筷子或餐巾纸。筷子或餐巾纸。把用过的书本留给下届把用过的书本留给下届(lower grades)学生。学生。请再提出请再提出1或或2条建议。条建议。1.审审(search)仔细读题，确定人称和时态。仔细读题，确定人称和时态。1.Tense-2.person-simple present tensefirst persong go to school on footo to school on foot r rideide a bi

7、ke to school a bike to school d dont waste wateront waste water pour waste water into the river pour waste water into the river throw/litter rubbish throw/litter rubbish h here and thereere and there try not to use one-off chopsticks or napkins try not to use one-off chopsticks or napkins leaveleave

8、 the used books to the students of lower grades the used books to the students of lower grades plant treesplant trees2.列列(list)underline key points and list经常骑自行车或走路上学。经常骑自行车或走路上学。节约用水节约用水.不把污水倒入河中不把污水倒入河中,不乱扔垃圾。不乱扔垃圾。不用或少用一次性不用或少用一次性(one-off)筷子或餐巾纸。筷子或餐巾纸。把用过的书本留给下届把用过的书本留给下届(lower grades)学生。学生。请再提

9、出请再提出1或或2条建议。条建议。discussion比较中英文的习惯差异比较中英文的习惯差异 我们参观了太空博物馆我们参观了太空博物馆，吃了中午饭吃了中午饭，看了电影看了电影，还买了还买了纪念品纪念品。3.加加(add)加首尾加首尾,打句号。打句号。(单句为主单句为主,复句慎用）复句慎用）1.我每天早上在学校打篮球。I play basketball at school every morning.造句的方法：某人做某事在某地某时间造句的方法：某人做某事在某地某时间2.昨天他在家看电视。He watched TV at home yesterday.2.We visited space mu

10、seum.We ate lunch.We watched a movie.We bought a souvenir.1.We visited space museum,ate lunch,watched a movie,bought a souvenir.we often by bike or on foot.we shouldntwe are supposed to .We should never 加加(add)go to schooldrop the litter everywhere.keep our river clean pour waste water into the rive

11、r.经常骑自行车或走路上学。经常骑自行车或走路上学。节约用水节约用水,不把污水倒入河中不把污水倒入河中,不乱扔垃圾。不乱扔垃圾。不用或少用一次性筷子或餐巾纸。不用或少用一次性筷子或餐巾纸。把用过的书本留给下届把用过的书本留给下届(lower grades)学生。学生。请再提出请再提出1或或2条建议。条建议。4.连连(connect)(连接连接 整合整合)make sentences into paragraphs We should go to school by bike or on foot.We shouldnt drop the litter everywhere.We are sup

12、posed to keep our river clean and never pour waste water into the river.We try not to use one-off chopsticks or paper napkins too often.We shouldnt cut down trees.Its important to plant trees in spring.The more,the better.5.(beautify)use various vocabulary or sentence patterns(使用多使用多样化的词汇和句式样化的词汇和句式

13、,避免过多的重复避免过多的重复)(使用多样化的词汇和句式使用多样化的词汇和句式)例：提建议We should plant more trees.=We are supposed to plant more trees.Its important to plant more trees.Why not plant more trees?6 6.CheckCheck(检查检查):Person(人称)tense(时态)spelling（拼写）punctuation marks(标点符号)handwriting（书写）all information(信息完整)After writingAfter wr

14、itingExamples:Examples:We should love our earthWe should love our earth,We We a are supposed tore supposed to ride bike to school ride bike to school ,If we can,we can go to If we can,we can go to school or work on foot.school or work on foot.TheyThey should save water.should save water.We shouldnt

15、pour waste water into the river.We We shouldnt pour waste water into the river.We cant threw rubbish.We shouldnt use one-off cant threw rubbish.We shouldnt use one-off chopsticks and paper napkins.We can give away chopsticks and paper napkins.We can give away our used books to the students of lower

16、greadesour used books to the students of lower greades.Find out mistakes in this compositionFind out mistakes in this composition As we know,taking good care of environment is very important,but do you know how to protect the environment?ride a bikethroworgradesWe.If we try our best,Im sure our envi

17、ronment can get better and better!审审列列加加连连美美首首尾尾巧用关联词巧用关联词活活用用多多种种句句型型necessaryIf possibleStep3 SummaryWriting steps 查查Write your composition1.search(person tense)2.list (key points)3.add(subjects details)4.connect(conjunctions)5.beautify(sentence patterns)6.check(person tense punctuation marks spel

18、ling handwriting all information)Lets enjoy the composition As we know,As we know,t takingaking good care of good care of environment is very environment is very important in our daily life,but do you know how to protect important in our daily life,but do you know how to protect the environment?the

19、environment?First,First,we should go to school by bike or on foot.we should go to school by bike or on foot.Second,Second,we shouldnwe shouldn t drop the litter everywhere.t drop the litter everywhere.Third,Third,we should we should keep our river clean and never pour waste water into the keep our r

20、iver clean and never pour waste water into the river.river.FourthFourth,we shouldnt use one-off chopsticks or we shouldnt use one-off chopsticks or paper napkins too paper napkins too o oftenften.FinallyFinally,we shouldnt cut down we shouldnt cut down trees.we trees.we are supposed toare supposed t

21、o plant trees in spring.The more,plant trees in spring.The more,the better.the better.If we try our best,Im sure our environment can get If we try our best,Im sure our environment can get better and betterbetter and better!中考作文 据报道，我国中学生的身体素质有所下降，这一情况据报道，我国中学生的身体素质有所下降，这一情况已引起全社会的关注和和教育部门的高度重视。那么作为已

22、引起全社会的关注和和教育部门的高度重视。那么作为一名中学生，你认为我们应当如何提高自己的身体素质？一名中学生，你认为我们应当如何提高自己的身体素质？请你以请你以Ways to stay healthy为题，写一篇为题，写一篇100词左右的词左右的短文。短文。养成健康的饮食习惯，每天多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃快餐。养成健康的饮食习惯，每天多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃快餐。每天早睡早起，睡眠充足，不熬夜。每天早睡早起，睡眠充足，不熬夜。最好每天早晨锻炼半小时，如：跑步，游泳。最好每天早晨锻炼半小时，如：跑步，游泳。多与人交流，保持良好的心情。多与人交流，保持良好的心情。1-2条建议条建议 Ways to stay healthy Nothing is more important than health.So Homework1.Make extracts(摘录)of useful or beautiful words/phrases/sentences2.Rewrite your composition and hand inDont be afraid of Writing.