14叙事经过.ppt

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1、典例：典例：参观清华大学参观清华大学 总述总述Today we visited Qinghua University.过程过程 Early in the morning we arrived at the gate of Tsinghua University,where we were warmly welcomed by an old professor,who then showed us around the campus.In the library,we saw some university students reading attentively in the reading

2、rooms.After that,we came to the lab building.At the end of the visit,the old professor gave us a lecture on science in the afternoon,which interested us very much.Time passed so quickly that before we knew it,it was time that we had to say goodbye to the professor.结果结果 Since then,I have worked harde

3、r at my lessons than usual and made up my mind to be a student of Qinghua University.一、篇章结构一、篇章结构总述总述 过程过程 感受感受二、写作技巧二、写作技巧叙述活动或事件的过程叙述活动或事件的过程,包括日记和游记。包括日记和游记。写作时应注意以下几点：写作时应注意以下几点：1.一般应包括记叙文的六要素。如游记一般应包括记叙文的六要素。如游记,一般一般包括旅游的时间包括旅游的时间(when)、地点、地点(where)、参加、参加的人员的人员(who)、交通工具、交通工具(how)、所见所闻、所见所闻(wha

4、t),以及感受和体会以及感受和体会(feeling)。2.一般用过去时一般用过去时,但也要灵活使用其它时态。但也要灵活使用其它时态。如描写景色或议论时如描写景色或议论时,可能用一般现在时可能用一般现在时;表表示个人感想示个人感想,打算或决心打算或决心,可能用一般将来时。可能用一般将来时。3.以时间或地点为线索以时间或地点为线索,描述事件或活动过描述事件或活动过程。表示时间的词有程。表示时间的词有:one day,the next day,last Friday,(early)in the morning,(late)in the afternoon,at noon,upon arrival,a

5、t first,then,(shortly)after that,after a short while,after a short rest,afterwards,ten minutes later,soon,soon after,after,before,when,while,during,immediately,in the end,finally等。等。4.常用句式有：常用句式有：Today I paid a visit to.with my classmates.今天我和同学一起参观了今天我和同学一起参观了 Time passed quickly before we knew it，

6、we had to.时间不知不觉过去了时间不知不觉过去了,我们不得我们不得不不 How glad/happy/excited I feel today!今天今天我感到多么高兴啊！我感到多么高兴啊！1.(2009北京北京)假设你是红星中假设你是红星中学高三学高三 班的学生李华班的学生李华,为响为响应绿化祖国的号召应绿化祖国的号召,你班你班4月月12日去郊区植树。活动过程如下日去郊区植树。活动过程如下图所示：图所示：三、超级仿写三、超级仿写参考词汇：参考词汇：郊区郊区 suburbsApril 12 Tuesday Fine April 12 is memorable because our cl

7、ass had a meaningful experience.Seeing the lines of trees,we all had a sense of achievement.We feel its our duty to protect and beautify our environment.April 12 Tuesday Fine 总述总述Today is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience.过程过程 In the morning,we cycled to the suburbs to plant tr

8、ees,talking and laughing all the way.Upon arrival,we began to work immediately.Some were digging holes,some were carrying and planting young trees,and others were watering them.After getting the work done,we put up a sign reminding people to protect the trees.Before leaving,we took some photos to re

9、cord our green action.感受感受 Seeing the lines of trees,we all had a sense of achievement.We feel its our duty to protect and beautify our environment.2.(2008北京北京)假设上周你们班举行了春游假设上周你们班举行了春游活动活动,活动过程如下图所示：活动过程如下图所示：写作内容写作内容 请根据以上四请根据以上四幅图的先后顺序幅图的先后顺序,写一篇写一篇短文短文,叙述上周你们班从叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。整过

10、程。提示词提示词:游乐园游乐园amusement park垃圾箱垃圾箱dustbin Last Thursday,we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing.We came up with several choices such as going boating,climbing a mountain，and going to an amusement park.Finally,we decided to go mountain climbing.过程过程 The next day,we set of

11、f early in the morning.While climbing the mountain,we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.However,when we reached the top,we were shocked to see litter here and there,such as bottles and banana peels.Then we started to pick up the litter.Afterwards,we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.感受感受We were tired but happy.