大学英语四级写作.ppt

《大学英语四级写作.ppt》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《大学英语四级写作.ppt（40页珍藏版）》请在得力文库 - 分享文档赚钱的网站上搜索。

1、大学英语四级写作大学英语四级写作内容提要写作在四级考试中的地位四级考试写作评分标准写作注意事项四级作文的写作方法写作练习及范文选讲如何锻炼写作能力写作在四级考试中的地位考试第一道题目时间30分钟，字数120左右，分数106分考核思想表达，篇章组织，语言运用，写作格式间接考查语法，拼写等英语基本功熟悉的题材，一般性话题英语四六级作文四个基本考点1、切题-所谓切题是指在形式上诸如段落、字数、文体、格式等方面满足题目要求，并在内容上没有偏差。2、表达清楚、条理清晰-本要求考查学生对文章结构的掌握，要求文章主题观点明确，有头有尾，论证说明安排有主次，有轻重。3、文字通顺，连贯性较好-本要求考查学生对过

2、渡句和连接词或词组的掌握和运用，要求文章句子内部与句子之间通顺连贯，不突兀。4、基本无语言错误-本要求考查学生语言基本功的掌握，包括语法与拼写两部分。四级考试写作评分标准2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其申有一些是严重错误。11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。四级考试写作注意事项字迹一定要工整改掉你的小毛病（标点，换行，拼写）写作之前

3、要好好构思，列一个提纲三段或四段文，字数要够写完要检查（笔误）用语规范，不用口头语，尽量不缩写逻辑清晰四级写作常见误区单词越难越好单词越难越好句子越长越好句子越长越好模板是万能的模板是万能的四级常考文体分析型作文（通常是说明加议论）三段应用文（书信，讲稿等）称呼加三段文，书信加落款不论什么文体，不变的是中间的论述部分，都是议论为主体四级作文写作方法四级写作都是三部分：分三段或四段三段式：提出问题-分析问题-解决问题 分析问题是指阐释原因，方法，危害共9到12句话，每句话不少于十个单词三部分紧扣汉语提示，通常为：为什么，怎么样，怎么做第一部分为什么在此部分你应指出问题（主题）存在，或问题重要性，

4、并引出下文或提出论点常用表达：(引言）nowadays;thesedays;atpresent;withthedevelopmentof;whenitcomesto;isalwaysamajorproblem(重要性）isimportant;isvitalto;isindispensable(引出下文）however;asaresult第二部分怎么样此部分为论述的主题，你应该用三个以内的原因阐述你的观点常用表达：therearemanypossiblereasons;firstandforemost/besides/lastbutnotleast;inthefirst/second/lastp

5、lace;furthermore;tobeginwith;inadditionIthink/argue/maintain/suppose/insist;Imconvincedthat;Iholdtheviewthat;ontheonehand/ontheotherhand第三部分怎么做此部分你应进行总结，通常会联系自身情况说说应该怎么做常用表达：allinall;inconclusion;asauniversitystudent,IholdthatAsforme;atwenty-year-oldcollegestudent,;witharegardtotheabove,AsfarasIamco

6、ncerned,;frommyperspective你应该开始练习的句式Notonly,but(also)Neithernor/eitheror/bothandDespiteWhile,Nowthat/since/asEventhoughSothatInsteadof真题与模板解说（对立观点型）2005年12月Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?1)名校校园正成为旅游新热点；2)校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同；3)我认为第一段：Nowadays,thereisanincreasinginterestin（点明新热点）Theref

7、ore,thereisahotdebateover（切入话题）第二段：Somepeopleareinfavoroftheideaof（概述一方观点）Theybelievethat（详述理由一）Theyalsoarguethat（详述理由二）第三段：However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.（概述另一方观点）Theyconsider（详述理由一）Whatsmore,theyfirmlypointoutthat（详述理由二）第四段：Thereissometruthinbotharguments.（双方各有道理）ButIthinktheadvantages

8、ofoverweighthedisadvantages.（但是利大于弊）Inmyopinion，（总结自己的观点）真题与模板解析（道理论证型）例例：ItPaystoBeHonest（2003年1月）1)当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象；2)诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实。模板模板第一段：Itistruethat_（指出普遍的观点）However,_（叙述不同的观点）第二段：Ithink_（提出自己的观点，即文章的论点）Thereasonscanbelistedasfollows.（开始论证）Firstly,_（论证理由一）Secondly,_（论证理由二）Forexample,_（举例）Thirdl

9、y,_（论证理由三）Acaseinpointisthat_（举例）第三段：Itgoeswithoutsayingthat（不用说）_（指出执行该观点时的注意事项）Inconclusion，_（总结全文）真题与模板解析（解释说明型）例例1:：OnStudentsSelectingLecturers（2006年6月24日）1)有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课老师；2)学生选择老师时所考虑的主要因素；3)学生自选任课老师的益处及可能产生的问题。第一段：Nowadays,thereisahotdebateabout_（提出问题）第二段：Anumberoffactorscontributeto_（

10、概述，引出对问题的分析）Ontheonehand,_（一方面）Ontheotherhand,_（另一方面）第三段：Clearly,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesastotheviewofthismatter.（概述不同观点）Foronething，_（一方面）Foranother,_（另一方面）Ingeneral,_（得出结论）真题详解2009年6月FreeAdmissionstoMuseums?1.越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放，目的是2.有人认为这样做会带来一些问题3.在我看来FreeAdmissiontoMuseums?Recently,

11、agrowingnumberofmuseumsareopentothepublic free of charge so as to attract more individuals.Thispractice offers citizens particularly the young generations asplendidopportunitytogeteasieraccesstothehistoryaswellasthetraditionalculture.Italsobenefitsthosewhoarewillingtovisitbutunabletoaffordtheadmissi

12、on.Although free admission to museums enjoys distinctadvantages,it also brings problems.To begin with,thesevaluableculturalrelicsondisplaymaybedamagedconsciouslyor unconsciously by the crowds.In addition,museums areundergreatfinancialpressuretorunasusualwithoutanyprofitsfromthevisitors.Frommypointof

13、view,freeadmissiontomuseumsplaysasignificant role in introducing the culture and broadening thehorizonofthepublic.However,howtoensureitsroleisabigconcern.Foronething,strictlawsandregulationsshouldbeputintoeffecttoprotectthesemuseums.Foranother,weshouldraisetheawarenessofourpeoplethatitpaystotreasure

14、themuseums.Recently,a growing number ofmuseums are open to the public free ofcharge so as to attract more individuals.Thispracticeofferscitizensparticularlytheyounggenerationsasplendidopportunitytogeteasieraccesstothehistoryaswellas the traditional culture.It also benefitsthosewhoarewillingtovisitbu

15、tunabletoaffordtheadmission.Althoughfreeadmissiontomuseumsenjoys distinct advantages,it also bringsproblems.To begin with,these valuableculturalrelicsondisplaymaybedamagedconsciously or unconsciously by thecrowds.In addition,museums are undergreat financial pressure to run as usualwithoutanyprofitsf

16、romthevisitors.Frommypointofview,freeadmissionto museums plays a significant role inintroducingthecultureandbroadeningthehorizon of the public.However,how toensureitsroleisabigconcern.Foronething,strictlawsandregulationsshouldbeputintoeffecttoprotectthesemuseums.Foranother,weshouldraisetheawareness

17、of our people that it pays totreasurethemuseums.例文2Nowadays,manymuseumsareopeningfreetothepublic,reaching out to more and more audiences.However,the free-admission policy has also triggeredmanyproblems.First and foremost,there is the pressure on theconservationoftheexhibits.Sincetheyareexposedtocoun

18、tlesstouchesandcameraflasheseachday,manyofthemareinpoorconditionorevendamaged.Besides,theexhibitionroomsareoftenpollutedbyvisitorswithlittleenvironmentalawareness.Lastbutnotleast,withtoo many people crowding and making noise in theexhibition hall,the museum becomes a busy streetinsteadofaquietcultur

19、alplace.Therefore,theoriginalpurposeofamuseumislost.All in all,though free museums are a sign ofcivilizationprogress,admissionmustbeconductedinacontrolledmanner.Nowadays,manymuseumsareopeningfreetothepublic,reachingouttomoreandmoreaudiences.However,thefree-admission policy has also triggeredmanyprob

20、lems.Firstandforemost,thereisthepressureontheconservationoftheexhibits.Sincetheyareexposed to countless touches and cameraflashes each day,many of them are in poorcondition or even damaged.Besides,theexhibition rooms are often polluted by visitorswithlittleenvironmentalawareness.Lastbutnotleast,with

21、 too many people crowding andmakingnoiseintheexhibitionhall,themuseumbecomesabusystreetinsteadofaquietculturalplace.Therefore,the original purpose of amuseumislost.Allinall,thoughfreemuseumsareasign of civilization progress,admissionmustbeconductedinacontrolledmanner.真题详解2008年12月LimitingtheUseofDisp

22、osablePlasticBags1.一次性塑料袋曾广为使用2.由此带来的问题3.限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义 Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags Plastic bags used to be an indispensable part of our daily life for it brought us much convenience.We were so dependent upon plastic bags that the use of them was ever increasing.Despite the convenienc

23、e it brought to people,it also caused a lot of problems,among which the environmental pollution was the biggest concern.Plastic bags not only affect the beautifulness of our environment,but also do harm to our health,because they are made of some kind of chemical material which can not be discompose

24、d.Therefore,limiting the use of disposable plastic bags is of great significance.First of all,this policy can reduce pollution and save a lot of resources at the same time;secondly,it contributes a lot to a more beautiful living environment;last but not least,it can also create a healthier environme

25、nt for people.In short,we should do our best to limit the use of plastic bags for ourselves and for the next generation.Plasticbagsusedtobeanindispensable part of our daily life for itbrought us much convenience.We wereso dependentupon plastic bags that theuseofthemwaseverincreasing.Despitetheconven

26、ienceitbroughttopeople,it also caused a lot of problems,among which the environmental pollutionwasthebiggestconcern.Plasticbagsnotonlyaffectthebeautifulnessofourenvironment,but also do harm to ourhealth,because they are made of somekindofchemicalmaterialwhichcannotbediscomposed.Therefore,limitingthe

27、useofdisposableplasticbagsisofgreatsignificance.Firstofall,this policy can reduce pollution andsavealotofresourcesatthesametime;secondly,it contributes a lot to a morebeautiful living environment;last but notleast,it can also create a healthierenvironmentforpeople.Inshort,weshoulddoourbesttolimitthe

28、useofplasticbagsforourselvesandforthenextgeneration.如何提高写作能力叫准语法和拼写，提高英语综合能力多读多写，有输入才有输出模仿和对比，迅速找到自身不足熟读好的文章，适当背诵书信作文结构第一段：告知对方你的身份（假如对方不认识你），简要叙述写信的原因；第二段：详细解释写信的意图（建议、批评、投诉、申请、邀请、感谢、道歉等）；第三段：发出请求，提供帮助，表示感谢，或期盼回信等。图表型作文StudentUseofComputers(2002年6月)1)上图所示为某校大学生平均每周使用计算机的时间：1990年(2hours)、1995年(4hours)、2002年(14hours)，请描述其变化；2)请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）；3)你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。Asisclearlyshowninthechart,thenumberofhoursstudentsspentoncomputersincreasedfromtwotofourperweekfrom1990to1995.Especially,thenumberrosetoabout14hoursperweekin2002.