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1、英语专业八级写作专项训练（英语专业八级写作专项训练（1 1）BY：LJ在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么1.概况1.英语专业八级写作要求 考生能根据所给题目要求撰写各类体裁的文章,文章长度约400个单词,能够做到内容充实,语言通顺,用词愉当,表达得体.分值为20分,时间为45分钟.2.TEM8作文评分标准 根据考生的思想与表达,语言运用能力和写作规范分别打分.分项可以打0.5分.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么思想与表达满分为10分,按考生的表现赋分:1

2、-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10极差 较差 一般 良好 优秀语言运用能力满分为8分,按考生的表现赋分:1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8极差 较差 一般 良好 优秀写作规范满分为2分,按考生的表现赋分:0.5-1-1.5-2较差 一般 良好 优秀P.S:空白卷,仅写了一些与任务无关的字句,仅仅照抄指导语得0分.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么思想与表达ideas and arguments(10分)内容切题,内容充实,观点明确,论据支持论点,有独到见解表达清晰流畅,有说服力篇章组织结构:每段有主题句;句间衔接自然;段间过

3、渡自然;第一部分明确提出观点;最后一部分自然得出结论;段落排列自然合理在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么语言运用能力language use(8分)准确性:语法正确;句子结构正确;固定搭配正确;习语正确;用词准确丰富性:词汇丰富;句子形式多样得体性:语气恰当;语言地道流利度:完成规定词数在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么写作规范mechanics(2分)单词拼写正确标点符号正确大小写正确书写美观卷面整洁在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未

4、意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么1.审题及构思(10分钟)必须在头脑中想出或写下(outline):A.中心论点(thesis statement)B.三个分论点(three arguments)2.动笔写作(30分钟)A.在开头中一定要表明自己的观点(中心论点)B.三个分论点分别作为三个中心段落的主题句,置于段首,并由过渡词引导.C.结尾重申论点3.检查及润色(5分钟)A.检查开头,结尾及主题句有无拼写及语法错误;B.不要大涂大改!一定要保持卷面美观,整洁.2.2.写作步骤及时间分配写作步骤及时间分配在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也

5、许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么如何在如何在1010秒钟内虏获阅卷老师秒钟内虏获阅卷老师?老师们的阅卷过程是郁闷枯燥的。使自己的文章在大约1分钟的阅读时间内，迅速地在他们的脑海中形成较多的兴奋点，是至关重要的。1.卷面的设置。要想让阅卷老师对你的作文试卷有一种赏心悦目的感觉，作文的排版应该不多于2/3，不少于1/3，要留有余地.2.不要涂鸦.不要将卷面写得密密麻麻。字体不要过大或过小更不要此处一个伤,别处一个疤!能做到1.2,阅卷老师在两秒钟内已经对你有好印象了!在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么3.如何让阅卷老师爱上你的试卷

6、,毫不吝啬地下高分?构思一个前无古人,后无来者而又合情合理,天衣无缝的中心句(thesis statement).P.S:当然,英雄的出世,要有时代的渲染和衬托.在提出中心思想前,要用美仑美奂,精彩纷呈的语句为其出场营造氛围.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么3.3.审题与构思审题与构思所谓审题，就是通过阅读写作题目及相关信息或要求，正确领会题目的含义，了解题目要求，为构思合乎具体写作要求的文章框架打下基础。英语专业八级写作测试项目具有鲜明的特色：观点、情景、标题、写作要求具有内在的联系，构成一个整体。因此，审题就意味着不是

7、仅仅浏览一下标题，而是要兼顾其它部分。只有这样，才能真正明确写作目的，领会写作要求。提高审题的准确性有利于学生理解题目含义，了解写作要求，进而有针对性地构思作文内容、布局等。在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么审题步骤审题步骤1.读懂提示句(不要陷入出题陷阱)Some people claim that competition is more important than co-operation in the present-day society.How far do you agree with these people

8、?You are to write a composition of about 300 words on the following topic:Competition or co-operation 要求是:在多大程度上赞同这些人的看法,或者在多大程度上不赞同这些人的看法.因此,在提出自己论点时要加上表示程度的语句,同时最好要提及不赞同另一点的原因在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Thesis statement:I would,in support of the latter view,extremelyexceedi

9、nglywhollyentirely drum for the contention that competition bears more value than cooperation in the current situation.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么立意要健康，否则，若引起阅卷老师反感，就杯具了On student lovers living togetherYou are left with one and the only choice:Personally,I dont think it is a

10、dvisable for college student lovers to live together away from campus.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么2.有的作文给了文章标题，有的需考生自己提供。对于给出标题的，一定不能光看标题，而要将标题和提示句相结合以找到最好的切入点 Some people simply see education as going to schools or colleges,or as a means to secure good jobs;most people view

11、education as a lifelong process.In your opinion,how important is education to modern man?（2000）标题：Education as a Lifelong Process在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Thesis statement:Personally,I side with the belief that the new concept of education as a lifelong process makes greate

12、r sense to modern people.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么不要急于动笔，深思熟虑后方能写出拿到对得住自己的分数的作文10分钟构思在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么THESIS STATEMENTTHESIS STATEMENT立意深远，否则阅卷老师会产生“审美疲劳”从事件引申到本质，从而探讨某一领域比如：幼儿园校车事故公务员打父亲从一个范畴引申到另一范畴比如：“非诚勿扰”等相亲节目，学术做假可引申到社会，经济，文化，道德等领域。在

13、全球化的今天，要学会用全球化的视野分析问题在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Are the sentences suitable?Are the sentences suitable?Last winter I visited an old man.The highest mountain in my hometown is Mount tai.Climbing mount tai can be very interesting.I do morning exercises everyday.Im going to disc

14、uss the generation gap in our country.The“post-80s”generation has changed history.My parents helped me grow in three important ways.Nowadays cars are playing an important role in the modern life,but at the same time,they have also caused many problems,which force people to find ways to solve the pro

15、blems.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么How to state your view?How to state your view?Drum forI,personally,yield to the concept thatin accord with my view aptly illustrate my point of viewAll strength fails to challenge my support for this contentionNothing can undermine the import

16、ance of在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么本次课后，请每个同学设计一句表达自己观点的中心句。尽量不要雷同，现在准备好，以后每次考试都可以用啦别告诉别人哦在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么请给出你的立意请给出你的立意Living on campus or off campus?在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么3.按照要求，对文章结构进行规划。In the first part of

17、 your writing you should present your thesis statement.and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details.In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content,organization,grammar and appro

18、priacy.Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.Write your response on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么 以中心思想为基准,衍生三个分论点(分论点一定要凝练general;切忌分论点间的重复(或者覆盖）!主题句措词必须相当养眼,拒绝单调,绝不平凡)你觉得下一个提纲如何？to start with,competition is a pervasive neces

19、sity that grows out of the modern times.moreover,competition is the source of greater dynamic power than cooperation today.Finally,competition helps the stakeholders to raise the bar of expectation.be conducive toemerges from在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么What about this one?Wha

20、t about this one?Top on the list,competition activates potentiality.In the second place,competition fosters zeal and zest.Last but not least,competition cultivates ingenuity and creativity.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么这套推理还可应用于。这套推理还可应用于。PersistenceFailuresDiscontentDreamsRead

21、ing AdventuresP.S:all the topics are about abstractinvisible objects.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么In-class practiceIn-class practiceWhich is more beneficial to people,success or failure?在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么因此。因此。平时要善于总结优美的逻辑性强的推理并平时要善于总结优美的逻辑性强的

22、推理并进行背诵进行背诵今个这种对于抽象事物的推理方法背下来今个这种对于抽象事物的推理方法背下来了吗？了吗？在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么案例分析案例分析中心思想：Personally,I side with the belief that the new concept of education as a lifelong process makes greater sense to modern people.分论点：In the first place,the sort of formal education,or

23、schooling,is no longer adequate for our profession.Equally important,the sort of fixed schooling cannot satisfy the growing needs of our daily life,either.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么问题问题1.看分论点有没有重复?2.主题句要正式，简练。切忌拖泥带水，冗长WORDY。the sort of,or,too colloquial3.逻辑问题 A，B，二选一 A不好=B好

24、？在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么The Impact of the Internet on(2001)The Impact of the Internet on(2001)The Internet is about to take off in China.As many as 9 million people are on line,a number that is estimated to hit 20 million by the end of 2000.It is predicted that this phen

25、omenal growth will have great impact on our society and economy.Choose one aspect of our society or economy where you think the impact will be most strongly felt.Write an essay about 300 words entitled.The impact of the internet on.In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis sta

26、tement.and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details.In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content,organization,grammar and appropriacy.Failure to follow the above instructions

27、may result in a loss of marks.Write your response on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么审题与构思范例审题与构思范例标题：The impact of the Internet on our interpersonal communication中心思想：To my mind,its impact upon the interpersonal communication in our social life,among others,wil

28、l be most keenly felt.结构：To begin with,the Internet can remarkably facilitate our interpersonal communication.Secondly,the Internet can greatly speed up our interpersonal communication.Thirdly,the Internet can largely economize our interpersonal communication.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认

29、为浪费这一点点算不了什么这套推理还可以用于。这套推理还可以用于。E-booksThe top breakthroughs of the 21st century(telephone,TV,plane,etc.)Information ageComputersP.S:all the previously mentioned objects are born in the technological age and most of them are tangible benefits.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么In-cl

30、ass practiceIn-class practiceHave we been isolated by computers?在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么PracticePracticeRecently a group of college girls aroused a heated debate in the states because they wore flip-flaps when visiting the white house.while the girls think their choice wa

31、s ok,many criticized them of being too disrespectful.Herein China,a boy student sued a female classmate who sit in front of him in an important examination because she wore too little,which distracted him so much that he failed in the exam.Do you think university students now have sufficient awarene

32、ss of what is proper to wear?Do you think university should make an explicit dress code for students?Write a composition of 400word.You should supply a title for your essay.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么10 minutes for you10 minutes for youTick,tickAfter thorough reflection,we w

33、ill trace the benefits of dress code from various aspects.First of all,strict dress code can avoid distractions so that students can focus better on their study.Secondly,strict dress code can show respect for teachers and classmates.More importantly,strict dress code can teach students the importanc

34、e of proper dressing in the future.Therefore,the university administrators have the duty to make and enforce dress code on campus.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么历年真题分类历年真题分类 题目通常用一句话或若干句话引出写作话题,然后对写作任务进行限定,如说明写作目的,读者对象等.由于包含对写作

35、任务的各种限制条件,如果误读就可能会导致整个任务失败.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么写作文体写作文体专八作文主要有两种写作文体:1.说明文One Major Problem in the Process of Urbanization(1998)The Impact of the Internet on(2001)The Most Important Pesonal Quality of a University Student(2002)说明文就是用语言把事物的性质,特征,成因,关系,功能,用途等解释清楚的过程.说明文

36、一般用于解释事物,事件或思想.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么说明文写作方法说明文写作方法目的:使人明白写作意图,解释说明某一对象.因此,最重要是让读者明白作者的立意.因此,要在第一部分阐述清楚写作对策:组织结构要合乎逻辑多举例说明下定义阐释对比与对照说明原因和结果说明引说说明在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么One Major Problem in the Process of Urbanization(1998)One Major Problem i

37、n the Process of Urbanization(1998)Nowadays with the development of economy,existing cities are growing bigger and new cities are appearing.What do you think is ONE of the major problems that may result from this process of urbanization?Write an essay of about 300 words on the topic given below.ONE

38、MAJOR PROBLEM IN THE PROCESS OF URBANIZATIONIn the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement.and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details.In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

39、Marks will be awarded for content,organization,grammar and appropriacy.Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.Write your response on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么如何确立主题如何确立主题?只要写一个问题看到题目,要用发散思维,在纸上多列出一些城市化的问题再一个个划去别人都能想到的,最后得出一

40、个最具新意的问题.最有新意的想法就是和自己最息息相关的想法.主题只能有一个,而且要用陈述句表达.single is simple,double is trouble!环境问题经济问题城市病农村与城市的差距越来越大留守儿童农二代确定文章中心后再从几方面进行说明,用总说-分说-总说的结构,列出文章的提纲.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么 Thesis statement:Among numerous problems brought forth by urbanization,I think,the poor second g

41、eneration is such a problem of our major concern.Outline:For one thing,the education of the poor second generation has been severely disturbed by urbanization.Whats more,the mental health of the poor second generation has been deteriorated along with urbanization.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，

42、也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么当提出一个新的名词时，一定要进行解释。“穷二代”是什么？我的定义：父母都是农民，无稳定工作，靠在城市打工维持家用。“the poor second generation”in my eyes refers to those whose parents dont have stable income and have to toil in cities to make ends meet.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么与与“人人”相关的推理。相关的推理。For one thing,the p

43、hysical condition of should by all means arouse our major concern.Moreover,the mental health of should be given the top priority by all walks of life.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么More about“people”More about“people”To begin with,should equip themselves with profound profession

44、al skills.Secondly,communication skills are in principle critical to the ultimate success of.Finally,s personal qualities is ultimately vital to future orientation.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Lets tryLets tryIts said that having only one advantage is not enough to come off fi

45、rst in this highly competitive times;therefore,more appropriate description of a talent is one characterized by his or her mastery of at least two kinds of skills,besides having a comprehensive grasp of expertise.What is your opinion on this issue?Write an essay of about 400words on the following to

46、pic:Modern concepts of Talent在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么The Most Important Pesonal QualityThe Most Important Pesonal Quality of a University Student(2002)of a University Student(2002)All of us would agree that in order to be successful in the present-day society,we universit

47、y graduates have to possess certain personal qualities that can enable us to realize our aim.What do you think is the most important quality of a university graduate?Write a composition of about 300 words on the following topic:在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么中心：Personally,I woul

48、d like to argue that adaptability outweighs the others now that todays society runs in a state of flux.大纲：To start with,a mobile society demands talents who can easily adapt to the development of the new society.Secondly,a university graduate should be able to survive in new surroundings.Moreover,as

49、 interpersonal relations play an important part in peoples career,university students also need to know how to quickly adjust themselves as so to be on good terms with whatever colleagues they may work with in the future.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么This is an ambushho.ho.This

50、 is an ambushho.ho.Have you found some problems in this outline?1分论点有重合之嫌2分论点拖沓，冗长，不简练3分论点措词不唯美在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么2.议论文Should University Students Go in for Business?(2004)Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?(2009)议论就是用逻辑推理来阐明作者立场和观点的过程.是专八写作最常见的题型.最常用的推理