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1、雅思写作高分原则3篇 雅思高分写作范文下面是我收集的雅思写作高分原则3篇 雅思高分写作范文，欢迎参阅。雅思写作高分原则1真题范文： Some people think international cooperation has brought benefits to world environment protection, while some people think more benefits have been brought to international business. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.雅思写作真题：一

2、些人认为国际合作给世界环境爱护带来了好处，一些人认为国际贸易带来了更多的好处。探讨双方观点并给出你自己的观点。 Some people think international cooperation has brought benefits to world environment protection, while some people think more benefits have been brought to international business. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.雅思写作大作文参考范文It is n

3、oticeable that multinational cooperation has become increasingly common, and it makes contribution to global integration instead of international isolation. Some people claim that the primary merit of international cooperation is protecting the environment while others argue that the major strength

4、is promoting worldwide business. Before present my position, the essay aims to critically discuss both views.It is no doubt that environmental protection needs the global efforts. In order to find an effective solution to pollution, governments from all over the world have to make stricter laws and

5、regulations on the emission of polluted substances. Furthermore, international cooperation makes it possible for scientists to launch research seminars to exchange their diverse and innovative ideas, from which they may gain the inspiration to design more clean energy like wind and solar energy and

6、address environmental problems.International integration plays an indispensable role in developing prosperous business, which support the other sides opinion. On the one hand, with the help of advanced technology and professional skills offered by developed nations, developing countries become capab

7、le of harnessing adequate resources and achieving the goal of maximizing business profits as soon as possible. On the other hand, more employment opportunities are created on the products-supply sides and a better quality of life is shared by skill-receiving ends. Admittedly, without economic collab

8、oration on such a massive scale, a huge number of countries would be likely to be embroiled in starvation except for the few blessed with fertile lands and wise governmental leadership.Judging from the detailed analysis on both sides, I think both aspects are extremely significant during the process

9、 of propelling global progress. However, it is high time that multinational collaboration paid more attention to environmental issues to catch up with the pace of global business development.从双方的具体分析来看，我认为这两方面在推动全球进步的过程中都具有极其重要的意义。然而，现在是跨国公司更加关注环境问题以赶上全球商业发展步伐的时候了。雅思写作高分原则21.雅思写作中的长短句原则有些考鸭为了能拿高分，有意

10、把句子拖得很长，大段大段的长句出现在雅思作文中其实看起来是很难受的。写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且假如我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.长短句相结合的段落，错落有致，通读也特别流畅，

11、小站考雅君剧烈建议：在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短，且先长后短;在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句说明主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采纳先短后长的句群形式，文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。2.雅思写作中的主题句原则主题句很重要，缺少中心句的段落简单造成“群龙无首”之感。有意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂。不知所云。所以奉劝各位肯定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会安然无恙。特殊提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的。To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared

12、 before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.3.雅思写作中的一二三原则领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、其次点、第三点、其次部分、第一点 如此罗嗦。可终归还是条理清晰。考官们看文章也必定要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清晰，条理自然。破解方法很简洁，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清晰了。1)first, second, third, last(不举荐，缘由：俗)2)firstly,

13、secondly, thirdly, finally(不举荐，缘由： 俗)3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不举荐， 缘由：俗)4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不举荐，缘由：俗)5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(剧烈举荐)6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(剧烈举荐)7)first and foremost, besides,

14、last but not least(剧烈举荐)8)most important of all, moreover, finally9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的状况)建议：不仅仅在写作中留意，平常说话的时候也应当条理清晰。4.雅思写作中的优先原则雅思写作考试现场，假如运用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，假如老师们看到你的文章太简洁，看不到一个自己不相识的短语，必定会看你低一等。相反，假如发觉亮点精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。

15、其二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办?用短语是一个方法。比如：I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it. I want it.可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加，表达也更精确。5.雅思写作中的多实少虚原则缘由很简洁，写文章还是应当写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求肯定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应当之说nice这样空洞的词，应当运用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting,smart,

16、gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如：走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room但是小偷走出房间应当说：slip out of the room小姐走出房间应当说：sail out of the room小孩走出房间应当说：dance out of the room老人走出房间应当说：stagger out of the room所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩。6.雅思写作中的多变句型原则1)加法(串联)都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间

17、加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.假如是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短语可以用：besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover2)转折(旁敲侧击)指责某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先旁敲侧击说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可终归还比较简单让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，留意二者

18、之间用个专这次就够了。The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短语：despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding3)因果(so, so, so)昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们相识了，然后我们成为了挚友可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后依次，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这

19、个词表示的是先后或因果关系。The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短语：then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that4)失衡句(头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重)有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可假如真的是这样了，也就必定会吸引别人的留意力。文章中假如出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子别出心裁。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。举例：This is what I can

20、 do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的困难成分：When to go, Why he goes away5)附加(多此一举)假如有了老婆，总会遇到这样的状况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他;或者说，就是某某某，假如把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I dont enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our

21、oral English teacher, is easy-going.其实很简洁，同位语-要说明的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必需要紧跟在先行词之前。6)排比(移山倒海句)文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，假如非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有移山倒海之势。Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, t

22、here is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气概恢宏)要想写出如此气概恢宏的句子非用排比不行。7.

23、雅思写作中的挑战极限原则原理：同学们的文章中很少发觉诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简洁，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领悟，它就是分词的一种特别形式，分词要求主语一样，而独立主格则不然。比如：The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.以上就是雅思写作中须要遵循的7大基本原则，你看明白了吗?雅思写作在冲刺阶段

24、，想要提分的关键还是靠考鸭们自己，除了必要的素材积累，逻辑表达，词汇等等都是须要考鸭们不断地去巩固和强化的。雅思写作高分原则3真题范文： Some people think they have the right to use as much fresh water as they want, while others believe governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your opinion。(有些

25、人认为他们有权运用他们想要的淡水，而另一些人则认为政府应当严格限制淡水的运用，因为它是一个有限的资源。探讨两种观点并给出你的观点雅思写作真题：Some people think they have the right to use as much fresh water as they want, while others believe governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your opinion.雅

26、思写作大作文参考范文Fresh water is a necessity in humans daily life but how to use it varies in different societies. Some people take unlimited water consumption for granted, but others think that it is governments obligation to control fresh water as it is limited.It is true that most residents in developed

27、countries and coastal nations do not need to worry about the shortage of fresh water. Sophisticated infrastructures and sufficient precipitation can guarantee sufficient water supply. What all these occupants need to do is paying the bills. They can use as much water as they want as long as they can

28、 afford it. Thus, it is undoubted that some of them hold the opinion that they can utilize the resource freely.It may be true that many other people do not need to concern about water consumption, but it is also a fact that a large number of inhabitants in many developing countries have no access to

29、 clean water because of its scarcity. In those countries, natural environment and climate like droughts have a negative effect on water supply. What makes things worse, the poor situation makes water even more precious. If people use as much water as they want in those areas, it can almost be sure t

30、hat water supply will fail to meet some peoples daily need. Therefore, it is reasonable that local officials limit the individual water use and punish the people who waste it.In my opinion, fresh water should not be used without any restrictions. Water supply depends so heavily on natural environment that it can be regarded as limited resource in some countries. Water conservation, whether it is advocated by government or not, is what people should insist on.在我看来，淡水不应当毫无限制地运用。水资源在很大程度上依靠于自然环境，在某些国家可以被视为有限的资源。节约用水，不管是不是政府提倡的，都是人们应当坚持的。雅思写作高分原则