大学英语四六级写作强化.ppt

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1、大学英语四六级写作强化 Still waters run deep.流静水深流静水深,人静心深人静心深 Where there is life,there is hope。有生命必有希望。有生命必有希望微信号：微信号：everyday46everyday46,获取更多英语好资料！获取更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语1.Recreational Activities(2008.6)2.What Electives to Choose(2007.12)3.Welcome to Our Club(2007.6)4.Volunteers Needed(2006.6)5.Shou

2、ld the University Campus Be Open to Tourist?(2005.12)6.Teachers Day(2005.6)7.A Campaign Speech(2005.1)8.A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction(2004.6)9.A Letter in Reply to a Friend(2004.1)校园题材微信号：微信号：everyday46everyday46,获取更多英语好资料！获取更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语 关于此类题材的近五年的真题作文列举如下：关于此类题材的近五年的

3、真题作文列举如下：1.Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags(2008.12)2.Spring Festival Gala on CCTV(2006.12)-3 How Should Parents Help Children to be Independent?（2010）1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该-4 Online Shopping(2011.06)四级作文命题透析社会热点话题微信号：微信号：everyday46everyday46,获取更多英语好资料！获取更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级

4、英语健康健康:1:1身体健康身体健康-health:physical:-keep fit;wellbeing(emotional/physical/psychological)2008.12/2008.06/2007.12/98.06/93.01/91/902 2人的心理健康人的心理健康：psychologically,mentally psychologically,mentally:independent,cooperative,competitive,considerate,confident,creative,sociable,selfish,isolated,conservative

5、-2009.12(绿色校园不仅指绿色环境）/2007.12/2007.06参加社团缓解压力微信号：微信号：everyday46everyday46,获取更多英语好资料！获取更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语教育与娱乐教育与娱乐：recreation,relax,entertainment;cultivate,foster,enlighten,give inspiration to,motivate,expand ones horizon,促进学生身心发展：promotepromote the students physical,intellectual and emoti

6、onal development(well-rounded/versatile)mould ones character;team spirit2009.06(博物馆免费开放的目的）-2008.06（娱乐使人们受益）/2007.12(学生选课不同原因)/2007.06(参加社团的好处)/2006.12(看春晚)微信号：微信号：everyday46everyday46,获取更多英语好资料！获取更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语方便方便VSVS效率：效率：2008.12一次性塑料袋广泛使用/2002.06计算机普及程度/2002.01食堂服务/1994.01现代化交通工具发达

7、./1991.01-自行车在中国这样普及2006.06学生自由选择教师方便学生,提高办学的效率微信号：微信号：everyday46everyday46,获取更多英语好资料！获取更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语节省和浪费节省和浪费：save time/money/space;economical,thrift;waste time/money/space;costly2009.06博物馆作为教育资源/2008.12塑料袋使用/2004.01报考专业理由(人才浪费)2002.01-对食堂批评;2000.01 上大学费用(taking a part-time jobease/

8、alleviate family financial burden1996.01双休日可能给大学生带来的问题1998.01假冒伪劣商品对个人(浪费金钱)微信号：微信号：everyday46everyday46,获取更多英语好资料！获取更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语环境环境：environment,pollute,poisonous,dirty,contamination,detrimental to,sustainable development;2009.12/2009.06公共设施环境维护（图片）/2008.12preserve environment/2007.

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10、微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语经验经验：working experience,social experience,enter the society;practical experience;associateassociate theory with practice;（interpersonal skills)interpersonal skills)2007.12开设选修课目的/2007.06社团的好处:expand ones horizon;enlarge our knowledge;/2005.01具备胜任学生会主席的条件/2001.01-取得面试成功的因素/97.06大学生了解

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16、会类话题In China,respect for senior citizens is shown in the fact that they are entitled toare entitled to many public services free of charge.微信号：微信号：everyday46everyday46,获取更多英语好资料！获取更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语Stop,keep,prevent,prohibit太多的学业压力对学生的负面影响Too much academic pressure deprivesdeprives young s

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18、g/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.微信号：微信号：everyday46everyday46,获取更多英语好资料！获取更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语非常地exceedingly/extremely/greatly/remarkably/significantly/utterly)在当代In contemporary society,in present-day s

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24、und/SignificantDamaging Devastating Destructive disastrousInfluence Impact Effect affect微信号：微信号：everyday46everyday46,获取更多英语好资料！获取更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语 When asked about the function of media,many people agree to the first view.此外，表示“多”的词还有：vast,quite a few,an army of,an ocean of,a sea of,a gre

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27、ere be 也是如此。make make sb.do sth-英语的词化程度较高，存在大量词语，一个单词的存在使得很多词语不再被需要dismay 使震惊，convince 使信服.微信号：微信号：everyday46everyday46,获取更多英语好资料！获取更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语避免避免bebe形式表达，尽可能选择表示强有力的行行为动词为动词，写出生动生动，简简洁洁，有力，耐读和连贯的文章。微信号：微信号：everyday46everyday46,获取更多英语好资料！获取更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语There is a bea

28、utiful park near my house.The name of the park is Tian-Tan Park,which was built several hundred years ago.It is the biggest park in Beijing.The Tian-Tan park is famous not only for its beauty but its quietness as well.Near my house stands Tian-Tan,the biggest park in Beijing,built several hundred ye

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33、更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语It-句型的广泛使用It must be pointed out that.必须指出It must be admitted that.必须承认It is imagined that.人们认为It can not be denied that.不可否认It will be seen from this that.由此可知It should be realized that.必须认识到It is(always)stressed that.人们(总是)强调It may be said without fear of exaggeration t

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35、变换非谓语从句变换Lecture 4 Lecture 4 Lecture 4 Lecture 4 比较句变换比较句变换比较句变换比较句变换Lecture 5 Lecture 5 Lecture 5 Lecture 5 松散到紧凑变换松散到紧凑变换松散到紧凑变换松散到紧凑变换微信号：微信号：everyday46everyday46,获取更多英语好资料！获取更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语变换句式优化文章短句变长句短句变长句受汉语思维习惯影响，很多考生往往会直接将脑子里的意思译成英语，而忽略句与句之间的联系，导致写出来的句子无法体现英语作为“形合语言”的特点。因此，在平时写

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37、语好资料！获取更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语【例2】【例3】【原文】Usually,a fact is defined as a truth.The truth can be tested by observation or experimentation.【优化】Usually,a fact is defined as a truth,something that can be tested by observation or experimentation.【原文】Teenagers are pressured by school work.They are al

38、so encouraged by their peers.Under such circumstances,they resort to smoking.But sometimes they feel a little guilty.【优化】Pressured by school work and encouraged by their peers,teenagers often resort to smoking,though they feel a little guilty sometimes.微信号：微信号：everyday46everyday46,获取更多英语好资料！获取更多英语好资

39、料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语【例4】【原文】When I turned right on the corner,a motorbike knocked into a small car.The motorbike was red.There were two persons on the motorbike.The car was yellow.The motorbike fell down.The two persons on the motorbike were slightly injured.The driver came out of the car at once,

40、and asked about the two persons injuries.As soon as I saw that,I made a telephone call to 110.The traffic police arrived in a short time.【优化】When I turned right on the corner,a red motorbike with two persons knocked into a small yellow car.Immediately,the motorbike fell down,and the two persons on t

41、he motorbike were slightly injured.At that time,the car driver came out of the car,and asked about the two persons injuries.Seeing this,I dialed the 110.In a short time,the traffic police arrived.微信号：微信号：everyday46everyday46,获取更多英语好资料！获取更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语2.2.长句变短句长句变短句长句固然能表达出复杂而缜密的思想，但如果片

42、面追求复杂句子，反而会显得华而不实，成为表达的累赘。写作中句子的长短应根据表达的需要而定。短句不仅指句子长度较短，也指句子内部结构精炼，简洁是写作的一个重要原则，用词累赘则是写作的大忌。【例例例例1 1 1 1】【原文】His father,who is a salesman,became a millionaire overnight.【优化】His father,a salesman,became a millionaire overnight.【例例例例2 2 2 2】【原文】Perhaps they basically distrusted our capacity to judge

43、correctly.【优化】They distrusted our judgment.微信号：微信号：everyday46everyday46,获取更多英语好资料！获取更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语一、将下面的长句和短句进行优化改写，使其更符合表达要求。一、将下面的长句和短句进行优化改写，使其更符合表达要求。【原句】【优化】The captain,a tall,thin man with a big mustache,was pacing the bridge with a look of importance.The grading system at our co

44、llege should be abolished,because neither the students nor the instructors like it.1.The captain was a tall,thin man with a big mustache.He was pacing the bridge with a look of importance.2.The grading system at our college should be abolished.The students dont like getting grades.The instructors do

45、nt enjoy giving grades.微信号：微信号：everyday46everyday46,获取更多英语好资料！获取更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语【原文原文】【优化优化】The seriousness of the problem on the reserves of raw materials shows that it is important to set up a plan to conserve and divide up fairly natural resources on a worldwide scale.Those who dont l

46、ike having roommates argue that several people living together causes some unpleasantness because every person has his or her own way.5.Natural resources are very limited.They will be exhausted in the near future.It is not true.But it becomes a major concern around the world.This is a widely accepte

47、d fact.4.Some students dont like having roommates.They think every person has his or her own way.And several people living together causes some unpleasantness.3.The problem of the reserve of raw materials is becoming more serious.It shows it is important to begin a plan.We should conserve and divide

48、 up the natural resources on a worldwide scale.It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future,though it is unlikely to be true.微信号：微信号：everyday46everyday46,获取更多英语好资料！获取更多英语好资料！微博：微博：每日四六级英语每日四六级英语二、请按照所给提

49、示对下面的作文进行句式优化二、请按照所给提示对下面的作文进行句式优化【原文原文】【优化优化】With the deepening of reform and opening up of our country,studying overseas is becoming an increasingly popular option.People who choose to further their studies abroad insist that if they go to study overseas they can get many benefits in different way

50、s.First,when they live in a foreign country,they can improve their foreign language skills.Second,if they complete part or all of their education overseas,they can gain a broader or different perspective on their field of study.Third,they can experience a different culture first-hand.【提示】将中的宾语从句改为简单