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1、英语应用文写作-书信电子邮件a letter ofsuggestionapplicationintroductionsaiinvitationa letter of application?suggestion?introduction?石景山期末：石景山期末：请你代表你班同学给校请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，并针对所食堂的几点问题，并针对所提问题提出提问题提出2条合理建议。条合理建议。suggestion海淀期末：海淀期末：你校正在招募志愿者，为中你校正在招募志愿者，为中外学生交流活动做准备。请用外学生交流活动做准备。请用英语写一封英语写

2、一封信信，向学校外事办，向学校外事办公室提出申请。公室提出申请。applicationa letter of application?suggestion?introduction?西城期末：西城期末：你的英国朋友你的英国朋友Tom要来你校任要来你校任教，教，打算在学校附近租房子。打算在学校附近租房子。发来邮件向你咨询合适的房源。发来邮件向你咨询合适的房源。请你根据回复信件，向他介绍请你根据回复信件，向他介绍找到的房子。找到的房子。introductiona letter of application?suggestion?introduction?朝阳一模朝阳一模你的美国朋友你的美国朋友Ch

3、ris目前在北京学习目前在北京学习汉语，他对中国传统文化非常感兴汉语，他对中国传统文化非常感兴趣。本周五下午你校将要举办一个趣。本周五下午你校将要举办一个文化讲座，请你根据以下提示给他文化讲座，请你根据以下提示给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他来参加。写一封电子邮件，邀请他来参加。invitationa letter of application?suggestion?introduction?Dear Tom,(address)I am writing to tell you that Ive found a house which may meet your needs.The house whi

4、ch is on the second floor covers an area of 70 square meters.It faces south so that you can enjoy enough sunshine.If you are interested in it,please call 15382.If you need any more help,just let me know.Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua(signature)Structure of a letter 主体主体(body)目的目的(p

5、urpose)交际性语句交际性语句(communicativesentence)结尾语结尾语(ending)第一档第一档(13-15分分)内容完整，条理清楚；交际得体，表达内容完整，条理清楚；交际得体，表达时充分考虑了交际的需求；体现出较强时充分考虑了交际的需求；体现出较强的语言运用能力。的语言运用能力。完全达到了预期的写作目的。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第二档第二档(9-12分分)内容、条理和交际等方面基本符合要求；内容、条理和交际等方面基本符合要求；所用语法和词汇满足了任务的要求；所用语法和词汇满足了任务的要求；语法或用词方面有一些错误，但不影响语法或用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。基本

6、达到了预期的写作目的。理解。基本达到了预期的写作目的。第三档第三档 (4-8分分)未恰当完成试题规定的任务未恰当完成试题规定的任务;内容不完整；所用词汇有限，语法或用词内容不完整；所用词汇有限，语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解。未能清楚地传达信息。方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解。未能清楚地传达信息。第四档第四档未完成试题规定的任务未完成试题规定的任务;写了少量相关信息；写了少量相关信息；语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。内容内容条理条理交际交际内容内容条理条理交际交际语言语言语言语言应用文评分标准应用文评分标准高

7、考应用文评分原则高考应用文评分原则 内容内容是否是否_ 条理条理是否是否_ 交际交际是否是否_ 语言语言是否是否_完整完整清楚清楚得体得体准确准确 假定你是红星中学高三（假定你是红星中学高三（1）班的李华，）班的李华，假期里你参加了假期里你参加了一次一次“伦敦游学伦敦游学”活动。请根据下列提示给你的同学王明写活动。请根据下列提示给你的同学王明写封信，向他介绍整个游学过程。封信，向他介绍整个游学过程。时间时间内容内容7月月20早早到到达达机机场场；受受到到接接待待家家庭庭(home-stay family)的的热热烈烈欢欢迎迎第二天第二天参参观观牛牛津津大大学学(Oxford Universit

8、y)，听听教教授介授介绍绍学校学校第三天第三天游游览览大本大本钟钟和和伦伦敦眼敦眼(Big Ben)；照相留念照相留念最后一天最后一天 与英国学生开告与英国学生开告别别晚会晚会注意：注意：1.词数不少于词数不少于50；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Tell the advantages&disadvantagesgive them marks!letter structure&evaluation standards!Passage A:Dear Wang Min,During the vac

9、ation,I took part in an interesting activity.My school organized us to went to London.In July20th morning we arrived at airport and the home-stay family welcome us heartedly.The second day,we were visited Oxford University and listened to the professor introduced their school.The third day,we visite

10、d Big Ben,which is the most famous building in London.All of took photo to record the unforgettable moments.The last day,we held a party to say goodbye with England students.This activity is very meaningful.缺少交际性语句、未写结尾语缺少交际性语句、未写结尾语二档二档Passage B：I had an unforgettable experience in winter vacation

11、and I will share this activity with you.I went to London to study this vacation.On July 20th,As soon as I arrived at the airport,my home-stay family welcome me warmly The second day,we visited Oxford University which is a famous school in the world.The professor was enthusiastic and I hoped that I c

12、ould study there.The third day,we went to the Big Ben.The day before I left,students in London held a party with us to say goodbye.Everyone enjoyed the party.It was a meaningful experience for me.Do you think it was interesting?Looking forward to your letter.交际性语句交际性语句结尾语结尾语一档一档 你是红星中学的李华，你是红星中学的李华，

13、假期里你参加假期里你参加了一次了一次“伦敦游学伦敦游学”活动。请给你的同活动。请给你的同学王明写封信，向他介绍整个游学过程。学王明写封信，向他介绍整个游学过程。a letter-introducing an activitylI think it is a meaningful experience.Do you think it is interesting?lWhat do you think of my experience?lDo you have similar experience?I am eager to hear that!communicative sentences1.I

14、 sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions.Thank you!2.I would appreciate it if you can give me the chance.3.I think its going to be great!Are you satisfied with it?4.If you can kindly give me the opportunity,I will do my work well.application?suggestion?introduction?suggestionapplicationintroduct

15、ionapplicationcmcommunicative sentences1.On July 20th morning,we arrived at the airport.2.The home-stay family gave me a heated welcome.3.A professor took us around the university.4.I visited the Oxford University and listened to the introduce of the school.On the morning of July20warm welcomeshowed

16、 us aroundintroductiongave us acorrect mistakesSentence appreciation*The following day,we visited the well-known Oxford University.A professor introduced this college to us.I was attracted and really benefited a lot from it!*On the third day,I paid a visit to Big Ben.I was amazed at it and couldnt h

17、elp taking photos!*On the last day,we held a farewell party with England students.All of us were unwilling to say goodbye.细节补充细节补充Im writing to share an experience with you,which is about a study tour to London.This is my unforgettable experience.Do you think it is interesting?点明目的点明目的得体的交际得体的交际准确的语

18、言准确的语言On the morning of July 20th I arrived at the airport.The home-stay family picked me up and gave me a warm welcome.The third day was the most exciting day because we went to Big Ben for sightseeing.技法指导技法指导 书信、电子邮件的写作书信、电子邮件的写作:不论哪种书信、电子邮件，一般都有固定不论哪种书信、电子邮件，一般都有固定的写作模式，只要记住其特定的写作模板，并的写作模式，只要记住其

19、特定的写作模板，并能在具体的写作中加以融会贯通，一定能让你能在具体的写作中加以融会贯通，一定能让你的作文水平快速提高，从而在考场上写出档次的作文水平快速提高，从而在考场上写出档次较高的文章。下面介绍一下几种常考书信的模较高的文章。下面介绍一下几种常考书信的模板，供大家写作时借鉴。板，供大家写作时借鉴。，1投诉信投诉信 Dear _，My name is/I am _.I am writing to you for _.Firstly,_.Secondly,_.Thirdly,_.Therefore,I require that you send me a new one of the same

20、 model within a month.To be honest/Honestly speaking,_.Therefore,I do require(hope)_.Thank you for your consideration.Sincerely yours,Li Ming2建议信建议信 Dear _，I am _.Your collection of suggestion on _ is _.As is known,_.My suggestions are _：First,_.(People can _.)Second,(to make economic profits,)_.Thi

21、rd,_.(As many of them _.)I hope you will find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details(Or：Your kind consideration of my suggestions will be highly appreciated)Good luck with your _(祝愿祝愿)Yours sincerely,Li Ming3求职信求职信 Dear Sir or Madam,I write thi

22、s letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in _(报纸名称报纸名称)of _(广广告发布时间告发布时间)I am _ from _.As a/an _，I have been _.Besides,I won _ in _.If you consider me appropriate for the job,please call me at _.4邀请信邀请信Dear _，How is everything with you?I am writing to tell you that there will be a

23、 _(内容内容)at/in _(地点地点)on _(时间时间)We would be honored to have you there with us.The occasion will start at _(具体时间具体时间).This will be followed by a _(进一步的安排进一步的安排)At around _(时间时间)，_(另一个安排另一个安排)Ring me up and tell me whether you will come or not,will you?I really hope you can make it.My phone number is _

24、.Looking forward to _.Yours sincerely,Li Ming5感谢信感谢信 Dear _，I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for _(感感谢的原因谢的原因)If it had not been for your assistance in _(对方给你的对方给你的具体帮助具体帮助)，I fear that I would have been _(没有对方帮助没有对方帮助的后果的后果)Everyone agrees that it was you who _(给出细节给出细节)Again,I would lik

25、e to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely,Li Ming6道歉信道歉信 Dear _，I am truly sorry that _(道歉的原因道歉的原因)The reason is that _(介绍原因介绍原因).Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.Yours sincerely,Li Min

26、g邀请邀请信：信：1开头：说明计划并邀请某人参加开头：说明计划并邀请某人参加 我们打算本周六去爬香山并邀请你参加。我们打算本周六去爬香山并邀请你参加。We are going to climb Xiangshan this Saturday,and we sincerely invite you to join us.我们将在学校礼堂举行成人仪式并邀请你参加。我们将在学校礼堂举行成人仪式并邀请你参加。We will hold the coming-of-age ceremony in our lecture hall at 3:30 pm on March 30th and we sincer

27、ely invite you to come.欢迎你来参加欢迎你来参加 You are(more than)welcome to come to join us.2说明活动时间说明活动时间 我们早我们早8点在门口集合，下午点在门口集合，下午5点回来。点回来。We will gather at the gate at 8 am and will come back at 5 pm.活动活动8点开始下午点开始下午3点结束，将持续点结束，将持续7个小时。个小时。Our activity begins at 8 am and ends at 3 pm and it will last 7 hours.

28、3结尾结尾:如果你能参加，我们会很高兴如果你能参加，我们会很高兴 .Well be more than happy if you can come.我保证你会玩得高兴。我保证你会玩得高兴。Im sure you will have a lot of fun./You are sure to have a lot of fun.如果你能来我们将不胜感激。如果你能来我们将不胜感激。Id appreciate it if you can come and give us a speech.建议建议信：信：1开头：得知开头：得知，现在我来给你提些实际建议，现在我来给你提些实际建议 Learning,I

29、m very happy.Now Id like to give/offer you some practical advice.2正文：正文：你可以在校园张贴海报你可以在校园张贴海报 You can/may/had better put up a poster in the school.课间听听音乐不错。课间听听音乐不错。Its a good idea to listen to some music between classes.Listening to some music between classes is a good idea.是时候调整你的学习方法了是时候调整你的学习方法了

30、Its time to adjust your learning methods.定期锻炼很有用定期锻炼很有用 Taking exercise regularly is very useful/helpful.Why not take exercise regularly?I suggest taking exercise regularly.What about taking exercise regularly?3.结尾：结尾：希望我的建议对你有帮助。希望我的建议对你有帮助。I hope my advice will help you.I hope my advice will be of

31、 some help/will be helpful to you.如果你需要更多信息，别犹豫告诉我如果你需要更多信息，别犹豫告诉我 If you need more/further information,dont hesitate to tell me/contact me.我会尽最大努力帮助你我会尽最大努力帮助你 I will try best to help you/give you a hand.Im more than willing to help you.申请申请信信：1表达意愿：表达意愿：我写信是申请英文网络编辑。我写信是申请英文网络编辑。Im writing to appl

32、y to be a web editor.我写信是申请成为寄宿家庭我写信是申请成为寄宿家庭 Im writing to apply to be a host family.我想申请做导游志愿者我想申请做导游志愿者 I want to apply to be a volunteer guide.我的理由如下。我的理由如下。My reasons are as follows.2经历：经历：我有做校刊记者的工作经历我有做校刊记者的工作经历 I once worked as a reporter for the school newspaper for a year.我曾获得我曾获得一等奖一等奖 On

33、ce I won the first prize in the competition.我曾担任班长，深受好评我曾担任班长，深受好评 As monitor of my class,I am thought highly of by my teachers and classmates./I often get thumbs up from my teachers and classmates.此外此外,我性格外向我性格外向,思想开明思想开明,这使我容易与别人合作。这使我容易与别人合作。Besides,I am outgoing and open-minded,which makes it ea

34、sy for me to cooperate with others.3.结尾：结尾：我认为我完全适合这项工作。我认为我完全适合这项工作。I think I am fully qualified for the job.我真诚希望得到这次机会我真诚希望得到这次机会 I sincerely hope I can get the opportunity.如果你能接受我，我将万分感激。如果你能接受我，我将万分感激。I will be very grateful if I could be accepted.我会成为一个合格的志愿者我会成为一个合格的志愿者 Ill be a qualified vol

35、unteer.如果我有幸被接受，我会尽最大努力，我不会让你失如果我有幸被接受，我会尽最大努力，我不会让你失望的望的.If Im lucky enough to be given/offered the chance,Ill do my best and wont let you down.假定你是红星中学高三（假定你是红星中学高三（1）班的李华，）班的李华，下周你将接下周你将接待美国的交换生待美国的交换生Mike。你为他提前安排了一系列的活动，。你为他提前安排了一系列的活动，请根据下列提示给他写封信，向他介绍整个活动计划。请根据下列提示给他写封信，向他介绍整个活动计划。时间时间活活动动安排安排

36、8月月4日下午日下午 机机场场接机；到家一起包接机；到家一起包饺饺子子8月月5日日上上午午参参观观故故宫宫；下下午午逛逛胡胡同同(Hu Tong)、体验民俗体验民俗 8月月6日日.最后一天最后一天赠赠送中国特色送中国特色纪纪念品；送他到机念品；送他到机场场提示词：纪念品：提示词：纪念品：souvenir注意：注意：1.词数不少于词数不少于50；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。此课件下载可自行编辑修改，仅供参考！此课件下载可自行编辑修改，仅供参考！感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！谢谢感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！谢谢