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1、2022年中考英语记叙文之记事型书面表达记叙文是记人叙事的文章，它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即我们通常所说 的五个W ( what, who, when, where, why )和一个H ( how )。记叙文的重点在于“述说和描写， 因此一篇好的记叙文要表达条理清楚，描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。【写作考前须知】记叙文是以写人、记事为主要内容的一种文体。它包括六大要素：时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、 经过和结果(即when, where, who, why, how, what)。写记叙类文章时应该把这六大要素交代明白，同时还 应注

2、意以下三点。(1)表达方式：主要有顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种，英语记叙文主要以顺叙为主。(2)时态上：记叙文主要记述过去发生的事情，所以常用一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时等时态。(3)人称上：常用第一人称和第三人称。用第一人称表示的是由表达者亲身经历的事情。用第三人称是 通过作者和读者之外的第三者把故事的具体情节呈现在读者面前。【写作方法】第一段：开门见山，交代事件的大体情况，如时间、地点、人物、事件等；第二段：详细表达事件开展的过程、原因或结果等；第三段：评价该事件：说明自己的看法、感受等。典例赏析：(2021 湖北中考真题)1929年出生于河北4,11岁时父母去世第1页共30页没有共产党，就

3、没有新中国。七十多年前，为建立新中国，在党的领导下，中国人民浴血奋战，涌现 出许许多多的英雄人物。今天我们来用英语讲述小英雄王二小的故事吧！1942年10月25日早 M 为保护村民，被敌 人次害，年仅13岁.The greatest hero in my heartYuan LongpingYuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart.例文：The greatest hero in my heart-Yuan LongpingYuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. He was born i

4、n Beijing in 1930. In 1964, he started a special study about rice. In 1974, he developed a new kind of rice, Hybrid Rice. In 1980, he began to help people grow more rice not only in China but also in many other areas around the world In 2021, he died in Changsha.Yuan Longping made a great contributi

5、on to the agriculture of the world He solved the problem of food for millions of people. So he is called the “father of hybrid rice.I think we should save food in our daily life to remember him. Never waste any food from now on.【详解】,题干解读：题目要求以The greatest hero in my heartYuan Longping”为题，根据表格信息来介绍袁隆

6、平 院士的生平世界，要包含生平事迹、成就贡献、纪念他的方式三局部。可适当增加细节。1 .写作指导：写作时可分为三段，第一段引出主题并介绍袁隆平的生平，第二段总结袁隆平的贡献，第三段 提出为纪念袁隆平，要节约食物。介绍袁隆平的生平以一般过去时为主，写如何纪念要使用一般现在时。 要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。（四）（2021 广西百色中考真题） 做家务是学生应尽的义务。假设你是李雷，是建华中学一名九年级学生，请以“My Experience of Doing Housework为题写一篇英语小短文，介绍你平时做的家务及其感受。内容要点：1 你做家务的原因；2你平时做的家务（至少举一个例子）；3,你对

7、做家务的感受。写作要求：L包含上述三个要点，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整 洁；3.文中不能出现哮雷”和“建华中学以外的人名、校名或地名；4,词数80左右。My Experience of Doing Housework第10页共30页例文My Experience of Doing HouseworkAs a family member; its our duty to help our parents do housework.Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping to buy food for lun

8、ch, I began to clean my house. First, I swept the floor and wiped the table. Then, I collected all the books and other things and put them in place. Finally, I took all the rubbish out. When my parents came back, they were surprised and praised me. I felt so happy at that time. So I keep doing house

9、work, such as sweeping the floor or tidying the room.Sharing the housework with our parents means showing love to them. So I suggest all of us should take action from now on.【详解】.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕做家务的经历写一篇短文。1 .写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段说明自己做家务的原因；第二段 介绍自己曾经做家务的经历以及自己常做哪些家务；最后一段发表自己对做家务的看法。写作时

10、保持主谓 一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。（五）（2021 山东临沂中考真题）在你的学校生活、家庭生活、社会活动及兴趣爱好等方面，一定有让你引以为豪的事情。请以“One Thing fm Proud of 为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，记述一件令你感到自豪的事情。 要求：1 .短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否那么不予评分；.不少于60词。提示：1. What is the thing youre proud of?2. Why are you proud of it?One Thing Im Proud of第11页共30页例文:One Thing Im

11、Proud ofI still remember how I became good at English.Every English class used to be like a bad dream for me. I didnt understand my teacher most of the time. One day, the teacher talked with me and gave me some useful advice. I began to review new words from time to time, even on the way to school I

12、 read aloud to practice pronunciation. I watched English videos, and kept a diary in English. Whenever I met new words, I looked them up in a dictionary. I kept using English every day. Practice makes perfect. About two months later; I got an A in the final exam.I am really proud of this experience,

13、 because it helps me realize that everyone can achieve their goals through hard work.【详解】.题干解读：该题目属于提纲作文写作。在写作时应根据题目和提示内容以及相关经历讲述一件令自己感 到自豪的事情，并介绍原因。1 .写作指导：本文采用第一人称进行写作，时态以一般过去时为主；讲述自己英语学习的转变过程，具体 细致；结尾介绍原因简洁有力，全文结构清晰明了。（六）（2021 湖北襄阳中考真题）“谁知盘中餐，粒粒皆辛苦。”有数据显示，中国餐饮业人均食物浪费量为每餐93克，浪费率为11.7%。 减少餐饮浪费，是践行绿

14、色开展理念的必然要求。倡导餐桌上的文明新风，需要我们共同努力。请你依据 以下三个要点提示，用英语写一篇短文。1 .要点提示：（1）你和身边的人平时就餐是否节约；（2）表达一次你经历过的与节约或者浪费有关的就餐过程；（3）简单表述你对这次就餐的看法。2 .考前须知：第12页共30页（1）用词在90个左右:（2）行文应连贯流畅；（3）文中不得出现真实姓名或校名。例文：Food waste is a big problem. There are still a lot of people who are hungry. It is also harmful to the environment. M

15、y family dont like to waste food. When we go out for dinner; we always order no more food than we need, and we will take the left food home.One day, my friend Lucy and I went out for lunch. She ordered a lot of food to celebrate passing the exam. In the end, much food was left. I told her that we sh

16、ould take it home, because wasting food is not right. She felt ashamed and promised not to waste food next time.I think when you throw away food, you are not just wasting the food itself. Resources are also wanted while growing, transporting and cooking the food These things all take energy, time an

17、d water. So lets avoid wasting food from now on.【详解】,题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“食物浪费”这一现象写一篇短文。1 .写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段描述曾经历过 的与浪费有关的就餐过程；第三段发表自己的看法。写作时保持主谓一致，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错 误。（七）（2021 山东济南中考真题）在每个人的成长过程中，都难免经历失败（failure）。只有在失败中不断反思和成长，才能取得成功。某英 语报社正在举办以Learn from Failure”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文

18、投稿，内容包括： 1.你的一次失败经历；.从中得到的收获与感悟。注意：1 .词数100左右；2,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3,不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。第13页共30页One possible version:Learn from FailureNobody likes failure, but we can always learn something valuable from it.Last term, there was an English speech contest in my school I decided to take part in it, becaus

19、e I thought I was good at speaking English and I had some experience in giving speeches. I was sure I could win the contest easily, so I spent little time practicing. Did I win? Of course not. The winner was Jim, one of my classmates, who had practiced after school every day.Practice makes perfect”,

20、 as the saying goes. No one can succeed without hard work. This is what I learned from my failure. If theres another chance, Ill take it seriously and do my best.【详解】.题干解读：阅读题干，可知要求以“Learn from Failure”为题的征文稿。写作前，可以提前列举出可能需要 用到的单词、短语和句型等；写作时注意写作手法要符合英语的表达方式；写作后注意检查。1 .写作指导：这是一篇话题类作文，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主

21、，在描述过去的经历时用一般过去 时。例文采取三段式的写作手法：第一段引出话题（没人喜欢失败，但我们可以从失败中学到有价值的东 西东西）；第二段介绍过去的经历来证明此观点；第三段总结说明，从失败中得到的收获与感悟。（A）（2021 辽宁盘锦中考真题）在初中三年的时光里，你不仅学到了知识，也具备了一定的能力。当你克服困难第一次成功地完成某件 事情时，这份与众不同的经历一定在你的脑海里留下了深刻的印象。请你以“My first time to为题， 写一篇英语作文，提供你的经历并谈谈你的感受。写作要求：（1）补全标题，词数80100；（2）语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；（3）文中不得出现真

22、实姓名、校名和地名。第14页共30页My first time to例文：My first time to swimAs we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time I learned to swim.Last summer holiday, I wanted to learn how to swim. I asked my father to teach me. I went to the swimming pool with my father. He taugh

23、t me how to swim. At first, I was afraid of diving in the water. And I felt uncomfortable in the water But my father always encouraged me. He said he would protect me. Then I began to swim, but I couldnt swim forward at all It made me upset. Then my father told me how to move, how to stretch out my

24、hands and legs. Slowly I could move a little. It took me about four hours to learn to swim. I felt quite happy.What an unforgettable experience it was!【详解】.题干解读：题目是半命题作文，要求以“My first time to写一篇作文，提供自己第一次做某事的经历并谈 谈自己的感受。1 .写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，记叙过去的经历用一般过去时。文章可采用三段式，第一段引出这 次经历，第二段详细表达经历，最后一段讲感受。要做到无单词拼写和

25、语法错误。（九）（2021 湖北天门中考真题） 有时候，简简单单的一句话、能产生巨大的能量，让人刻骨铭心，助人勇敢前行。仔细想一想，生活中对 你触动最深、影响最大的一句话是什么呢？请根据所给提示和要求，以“A Simple Word为题，用英语写一篇 80词左右的短文，讲述这一句话及其背后的故事。以下提示。提示：1. You can do it.2. Believe in yourself.第15页共30页3. Keep trying and youll succeed.要求：1 .说出这句话的来历及对你的影响;.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。A Simple WordOne possible

26、 version:A Simple WordSometimes, a simple word can change a person. Until today, I still remember what my mother once told meKeep trying, and you will succeed The word helped me a lot.I was learning how to ride a bicycle when I was 6 years old I tried many times, but I still fell down. I felt upset

27、and didnt want to ride any more. Knowing what happened, my mother said to me. Keep trying, and you will succeed“ My mothers word made me calm down. I tried to ride my bicycle again and again. Finally, I succeededWhenever I meet difficulties, my mothers word appears in my mind fll keep trying and nev

28、er give up. 【详解】.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据所给提示，以“A Simple Word”为题，讲述这句话及其背后的故 事。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。1 .写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话 题；第二段介绍这句话背后的故事；第三段介绍这句话对自己的影响。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错 误。（十）（2021 福建中考真题）假定你是学校英语报小记者李华，上周学校开展了“English Day”活动，请你根据下面的海报和学生参加 活动的数据写一篇报道，介绍活动情况以及同学们的感受。词数80左右。第16页共30页1 .必

29、须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数;.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；2 .请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。Our School English DayOur school English Day was a great success.参考范文Our School English DayOur school English Day was a great success. It took place in the school hall from 2: 00 p. m. to 4: 30 p. m.on June 18th.Three activities were

30、 included Half of us students took part in the singing competition. 30% of us went to第17页共30页the cooking show. And the rest of us enjoyed ourselves in the storytelling.We spoke highly of the English Day. We learnt a lot through practice. It also made us come to realize theimportance of teamwork. We

31、hope there will be more colorful activities in our school【详解】1 ,题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍上周开展的英语日的活动情况。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段介绍活动的地点和时间；第二段介绍学生参加活动的情况；最后一段介绍这个活动给同学们带来的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法 和标点错误。（十一）（2021 江苏南京中考真题）某英文网站正在举办征文活动，请根据网站征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。Beautiful school day wanted!jouf whose school day

32、it is, , Make it beautifulAGot out your rainbow colours,/ （So it will be beautiful.This new global site is a place for students to share their ideas. We are looking for your beautiful school day to inspire （鼓舞）our readers. Did you help anyone at school? Did you enjoy a beautiful song in your art les

33、son? Did you have an amazing experience in the school lab?Your school life is full of beauty. Choose a beautiful school day. Write a passage to tell us what you did that day and why you think it was beautifulSend your writing to us right now!注意:1 .内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。2 .词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。第18页共30页3 .

34、文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。My Beautiful School DayMy school life is full of beauty.例文My Beautiful School DayMy school life is full of beauty. I will never forget the day which makes me feel meaningfulMy best friend Lucy and I always ride bikes together after school One day I waited a long time but

35、didnt see her. Then I searched for her in the corner of our school She was crying at that time. She told me that she was nervous because she would have an English test. I decided to help her with English. That evening, I helped her review the key points and notes. Two days later; she told me that sh

36、e passed it. I felt that helping others who are in need was very meaningful.【详解】.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“我美丽的学校生活”写一篇短文。1 .写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。分为两段式，第一段引出主题；第二段描述自己的经历，并发表自 己的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。（十二）（2021 江苏盐城中考真题）初中三年，我们都有一些难以忘怀的经历。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“An Unforgettable Experience 的征文比赛。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。1. Wha

37、t was the experience?2. What have you learned from it?考前须知：（1）词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；（3）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。An Unforgettable ExperienceLooking back on the past three years, everyone had some unforgettable experiences.第19页共30页要求:1 .故事必须包含图表所提供的四个要点，可适当发挥，使行文连贯;2.80词左右。故事开

38、头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：儿童团the Childrens LeagueThe Story of Wang ErxiaoA long time ago, there was a young hero, who was Wang Erxiao. Please follow me to recall his story.【答案】The Story of Wang ErxiaoA long time ago, there was a young hero, who was Wang Erxiao. Please follow me to recall his story.（开门见山，引出所讲

39、故事是王二小的）Wang Erxiao was born in 1929. When he was eleven years old, his parents passed away. Then he became a member of the Childrens League. Wang was clever and brave. On the morning of October 25,1942, he was killed by enemies for protecting villagers. He was just thirteen years old.（用一般过去时，表达王二小的

40、事迹）We live in times of peace and maybe we dont need to sacrifice ourselves. But we should remember the heroes who once fought for their country. At the same time, we should study hard to build a better society.（介绍自己的感悟）【详解】.题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据给出信息，介绍英雄王二小的故事。并写出自己的感悟，注意 要点齐全，行文流畅。1 .写作指导：本文开头已给出，正文局

41、部可分为两段，一段介绍故事，一段介绍感悟。介绍王二小故事时， 使用一般过去时，介绍感悟，用一般现在时。注意多使用从句和短语，为文章增色。第2页共30页例文An Unforgettable ExperienceLooking back on the past three years, everyone had some unforgettable experiences. I will never forget the experience of being a volunteer for the Asian Games held in our city.Being one of the thr

42、ee volunteers selected from our school, I felt excited and proud. To make sure that I could provide the best service, I practiced in my spare time, especially my spoken English. When the day finally came, I felt a little bit nervous because I was afraid of making any mistakes. Fortunately, I perform

43、ed well and was spoken highly of by the volunteer organization.I learned that we should be confident and hard-working. It was the first time that I had been a volunteer for such an important event, which made me proud ever since.【详解】.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题，根据提示问题进行写作，注 意要点

44、齐全，可适当发挥。1 .写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第 二段介绍令自己难忘的经历；第三段介绍自己的感受和学到了什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。Writing 1 （2021辽宁连山二模）根据要求完成大作文，词数：80100词。你将告别熟悉的校园，三年的初中生活会成为你一生中的难忘回忆。请根据图表提示，以“My School Life”为题写一篇短文，定格你的初中校园生活。第20页共30页要求：1 .语言连贯，语法准确，层次清晰。2 .文章必须包括所给提示内容，并可适度发挥。3 .短文题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。My Sc

45、hool LifeI am a student in Grade Nine. I will leave my junior high school next month after I finish the exam.例文：My School LifeI am a student in Grade Nine. I will leave my junior high school next month after I finish the exam. Tm feeling a bit nervous and excitedI get on well with my classmates. We

46、always help each other We all like our teachers because they are really friendly and helpful We can ask them for help at any time. There are many subjects in our school I like English and music best. It takes us much time to study well We all work so hard Also there are many school activities in our

47、 school, such as school trip, soccer game, art festival and so on. The school trip is my favorite because its so relaxing.There are so many happy memories about my school life that Ill never forget them. I will miss my junior high school life very much.【详解】.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文。这是一篇材料作文，所给表格里面的内容是写作要点。写作时要

48、承接短文 开头；第二段详写材料要点，并适当发挥；第三段概括总结。1 .写作指导：本文应用第一人称来表达，要认真读材料，不要遗漏，根据要点，适当发挥。同时保证条理清第21页共30页晰，准确运用时态。写完后仔细检查，看看是否有拼写、语法错误。Writing2 （2021,河北路北二模）假设你是李华，上周六，你陪同来自美国结对学校的中学生Peter体验中国文化。请根据以下信息，用英语 写一篇短文向校刊English Journey投稿，介绍本次活动内容并提供感受。ActivitiesFeelingsmake zongzivisit a tea museumlearn Chinese characters要求团1 .短文必须包括表格中的所有内容，并表达感受;2 .文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；3 .卷面整洁，书写工整，词数80个左右。One possible version:Last Sa