2022年高考英语写作训练-今昔对比类.docx

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1、精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 今昔对比类作文训练在“ 今昔对比 ”的对比类写作中,肯定要把握时态的运用,时态通常是一般现在时和一般过去时；写作格式： 提出主题句 对过去情形的描述 对现在情形的描述 总结句； 当然,也可以对今、昔进行逐条对比；今昔对比类作文常用句型：.Our school/hometown, as all may know, is not what it used to be. In the past, I wished that our school/hometown could be more brilliant, there would be a .

2、But now, everything has changed. My wish comes true. Moreover, In addition, what makes the school/hometown more lovely is that If you were here, you would be amazed by the beauty of our school/campus/hometown1. 开头常用句型1 Great changes have taken place. Great changes have taken place in my hometown in

3、the last five year. Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China. Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. 2 Things have begun to improve since（自从 以来,事情有了好转 /改善）Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning

4、 load. 2. 对比常用句型 : 1 used to , but now 过去常 ,但是现在 2 in the past, but now 在过去 ,但是现在 3 once , but now 曾经 . ,但是现在 4 Things are different now. 情形已大不同了5 But now, everything has changed. 但是现在全变了今昔对比类作文训练1 假定你是接待人员,请依据以下提示1.联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察；以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情形：1大小：近 100 户人家,约 500 口人；2变化：过去很穷,78 年后变化很大；

5、人们生活比以前好多了；现已旧貌换新颜；3训练：原先的学校很小,现已经过改建；新建的教学楼有 全部学龄儿童在此免费就读；留意： 1）要点齐全,前后连贯；2）词数： 100-120 之间；4 层,是村里最美的建筑物；村名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 1 页,共 6 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school. 今昔对比类作文训练 2 假设你是李明,你的美国伴侣杰克听说你校正在开展争论性学习,来信询问有关情形,请你写一封信,谈一谈开展争论性学习前后,你的学习情况的变化；留意： 1 用书信格式；

6、2 词数： 100 左右3 生词：争论性学习exploring study ,上网 surf the internet；过去 现在课堂 老师讲解学问点,同学听 老师提出问题,同学相互争论或讲,记笔记；同学自己提出问题自己争论解决；完成大量的作业；丰富多彩的课外活动,如读自己感爱好的书籍,去图书馆或上网查资料；今昔对比类作文训练 3 假设你是李华,你的澳大利亚伴侣Dick 听说中国的中学校正在减轻同学的学习负担,来信询问有关情形； 请你依据下表供应的信息,写一封回信, 谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化；周末活动（减负前）周末活动（减负后）白天：上课、做作业 白天：参观博物馆、学习电脑、绘画晚

7、上：做作业 晚上：看新闻、读书、看报就寝时间： 11：30 就寝时间： 10：00 留意： 1 、词数 100 左右； 2 、开头已为你写好；生词：减轻学习负担-reduce learning load Dear Dick, How nice to hear from you again._ _ _ 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 2 页,共 6 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - _ _ Best wishes, Li Hua今昔对比类作文训练4 Changes in Our Life ”的英文请依据下面六幅图的提示和所供应的主题句,写一篇题为“短文；词数 100

8、 左右；（2004 年北京市春季高考写作）今昔对比类作文训练 1 范文同学作品 Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school. This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look.In the past,

9、 the school here was very small . Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you. 修改为 Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school . Thi

10、s village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look In the past, the school here was ver

11、y small and most children couldn t afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt andthe newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay here /

12、May you have a pleasant time here. 今昔对比类作文训练 1 标准范文 Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school . This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live

13、 a much better life than before . 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 3 页,共 6 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt and the newly built teaching building which has 4 storey

14、s is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here. Thank you. 今昔对比类作文训练 2 Dear Jack, How nice to hear from you again. Dear Jack, How nice to hear from you aga

15、in. You want to know what is going on in our school. In short, things have been improving since the school began to carry out exploring study. In the past, the teachers always kept on explaining the points in class. We students just listened and took notes. But now we often discuss and try to solve

16、the problems raised by the teachers or ourselves.After class, we enjoyed different kinds of activities instead of doing endless homework. For example, we can read what we are interested in. We can go to the library or surf the Internet for various kinds of information. In a word, we are now masters

17、of study, and we are happy. Best wishes. Yours, Li Ming 今昔对比类作文训练3 一、评分原就 1、此题总分为 25 分,按 5 个档次给分；2、评分时,选依据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求衡量,确 定或调整档次,最终给分；3、词数少于80 和多于 120 的,从总分中减去2 分；4、评分时,应留意的主要内容：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和精确性、上下文 连贯性及语言的得体性；5、拼写与标点符号是语言精确性的一个方面,英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受；评分时, 应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑；6、如书写较差,以至影响

18、交际,将分数降低一个档次；二、内容要点：名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 4 页,共 6 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 1、过去忙于一课、做作业 2、现在有时间读课外书、参观博物馆等 3、现在有时间看新闻、读报纸 4、不必再熬夜 三、各档次的给分范畴和要求：第五档次（很好）：（21-25 分）完全完成了试题规定的任务；- 掩盖全部内容要点；- 应用较多的语法结构和词汇；- 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复结构或较高级词汇所致其；具备较强 的语言运用才能；- 有效地使用了语句音的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑；完全达到了预期的写作目的；第四档（好）（16-

19、20 分）完全完成了试题规定的任务；- 虽漏掉 1、2 个次重点,但掩盖全部主要内容；- 应用的语法结构和词汇能满意任务的要求；- 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本精确,些许错误主要是因尝试复杂语法结构或词汇所致；- 应用简洁的语句音的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑；达到了预期的写作目的；第三档（适当）：（11-15 ）基本完成了试题规定的任务；- 虽漏掉一些内容,但酸辣全部主要内容；- 应用的语法结构和词汇能满意任务的要求；- 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响懂得；- 应用简洁的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯；整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的；其次档（较差）：（6-10 分）未恰当完成试题规

20、定的任务；- 漏掉或未描述清晰一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容；- 语法结构单调,词汇项目有限；- 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的懂得；- 较少使用语句的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性；信息未能清晰地传达给读者；第一档（差）：（1-5 分）未完成试题规定的任务；- 明显遗漏主要内容,写一些无关内容,缘由可能是未懂得试题要求；- 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限；- 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的懂得；- 缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯；信息未能传达给读都；未能传达给读者任何信息；无法看清；四、说明：内容太少、 无法评判； 写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容名师归纳总结

21、 - - - - - - -第 5 页,共 6 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 1、内容要点可用不同方式表达；五、 One possible version: Dear Dick, 2 、对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分；How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in schools in China. In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce but I used to h

22、ave to work even at weekends learning load. I dont know about others, doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time. I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read ne

23、wspapers. Whats more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things. Best wishes, Li Hua 今昔对比类作文训练 4 Changes In Our Life Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. Take my family for example. My parents contacted

24、others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we call long distance at home. And once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but nowwe watch the news and other programs on TV. Another big change is in the housing conditions. When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment. In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience. 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 6 页,共 6 页