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1、书面表达复习 Still waters run deep.流静水深流静水深,人静心深人静心深 Where there is life,there is hope。有生命必有希望。有生命必有希望书面表达复习n一书面表达的能力要求n二书面表达的复习策略n三书面表达的课堂指导n四书面表达的批改方法书面表达复习n一书面表达的能力要求一书面表达的能力要求n二书面表达的复习策略n三书面表达的课堂指导n四书面表达的批改方法 一书面表达的能力要求n1新课程标准7级要求n2新课程标准8级要求n3新课程标准9级要求n4英语教学大纲要求n5高考书面表达要求n6情景和开放作文的对比n7写作评分要求1新课程标准7级要求

2、n能用文字及图表提供的信息进行简单描述；n能写出常见体裁的短文，如报告或信函；n能描述人物或事件，并表达自己的见解；n能填写有关个人情况的表格，如申请表、求职表；n能做简单的书面翻译。2新课程标准8级要求n能写出连贯且结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观点和态度；n能根据课文写摘要；n能在写作中做到文体规范、语句通顺；n能根据用文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报告。3新课程标准9级要求n能用英文书写摘要、报告、通知、公务信函等；n能比较详细和生动地用英语描述情景、态度或感情；n能阐述自己的观点、评述他人的观点，文体恰当、用词准确；n能在写作中恰当地处理引用的资料及他人的原话；n能填写各种表格、写个人简

3、历和申请书，用语基本正确、得当；n能作非专业性的笔头翻译；n在以上写作过程中做到文字通顺，格式正确。4英语教学大纲要求n高中学生应“能就已学课文的内容作简单的改写。能在日常生活中，写简单的书信、便条和通知等，能填写简单的个人履历表等。书写格式，行文及常用词语等无严重错误；能根据提示，在30分钟内写80100个词的短文，意思表达清楚，无严重语言错误。”5高考书面表达要求n测试考生的英语书面表达能力。n共两小题，35分，其中第一小题20分，第二小题15分。书面表达提供必要的提示。提示包括目的、过程、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提示的形式有文字、图画、图表等。n第一小题（情景作文）要求考生根据所给的情

4、景用英语写一篇约100个单词的短文。n第二小题（开放作文）要求考生根据简略提示，写一篇不少于50个单词的短文。6情景作文和开放作文的对比n情景作文，写作内容有明确的规定，评分尺度相对统一，在一定的程度上减少主观性，对考生来说，这类作文比较容易，根据题目要求，组织好所提供的材料，用明白通顺恰当的英语表达出来，基本完成了任务。n开放作文，有一定的难度，要扣题，自主谋篇，创造性，逻辑性，交际要得体。7写作评分要求项目项目情景作文情景作文开放作文开放作文内容要求覆盖所有要点扣题，内容充实，健康，思维活跃语言要求词汇，句式丰富、多样，语法准确，较强的语言运用能力词汇，句式丰富、多样，语法准确，较强的语言

5、运用能力篇章结构有效的运用语句间的连接成分，内容连贯，结构紧凑有效的运用语句间的连接成分，内容连贯，结构紧凑清晰的思维逻辑。交际要求完全达到预期的写作目的完全达到预期的写作目的字数要求约100字左右不少于50字书面表达复习n一书面表达的能力要求n二书面表达的复习策略二书面表达的复习策略n三书面表达的课堂指导n四书面表达的批改方法二书面表达的复习策略n了解写作命题特点内容贴近生活，符合时代要求词汇句式丰富，数字有所变化n1在使用中复习词汇n2在使用中复习句型n3在使用中复习语篇1在使用中复习词汇n1-1在阅读课文中掌握重点词汇重点词汇，提示造句，连词造句，段落造句，语法造句n1-2在听力训练中掌

6、握不同表达法试题与原文的不同表达1-3在语篇中练习词汇单句填空，框词填空，词性转换，段落填空，听后填空n1-4在重复中巩固词汇及时听写，阶段测验n1-5在口述中扩展词汇说词组看图写话-举一反三n下列图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历，请据此为一家中学生英文报的故事专栏写一篇短文。练习表示时间的词组nthe other daynyesterday afternoonnon Sunday morningnseeing thatnat that momentnwhen I saw it nhearing thatnat once nbefore we could say anything 练习表示动作的词

7、组nwent to the cinema by bicycle.nwas riding with me sitting on the seat behindnwent to the cinema by bike with me on the seat behindncross roads，was riding across the road,ncame up and stopped usnwalk to us and asked us to stopnfound you at long lastnsaw you ndidnt know themndidnt know what they mea

8、ntnpointing to a policeman not far awaynpointed to a police standing there nexplained to us thatntold us ntry to findnstopped nmake us catch the next offenderncome onnstand here.ndont have to wait long 文字提示-举一反三n有些人以为某些数字，比如6，8，9等会带来好运。他们在选择车牌号，电话号码时不惜花费“择号费”要这些数字。而你本人却不相信这些。你认为成功和财富与所谓的吉祥数字无关，要靠自己艰

9、苦的劳动和努力。请你根据以上内容写一篇文章，词数100。n关键动词：believe，think,hold the view,considerchoose,decide,like,preferspend money on,cost much money,pay much for,charge for depend on,have to work hard,lie in,result from 2在使用中复习句型n2-1掌握课文中的重点句型nUnit 6n重点句型Let me remind you what we are looking for.It looks as if it isnt cle

10、an enough to bathe here.It seems that there is a big waste pipe coming down from the town.No matter how much you want to bathe,it just isnt safe.How can they get rid of waste water in this way?重点句型Other waste may be thrown into the sea,either 19 kilometers from land,or more than 40 kilometers from l

11、and,depending on the nature of the materials.It is therefore unlikely that the chemicals will be carried upwards into the water.The problem of dealing with waste has become so great that several international organizations have been set up to protect the world and to fight against pollution.They see

12、k to reduce waste,protect the earth,the oceans and all forms of life in them.European countries are now making an active effort to reuse materials more than they used to.2-2.练习课文中的句型转换nUnit 7 It may be necessary to put up a notice saying“Keep off”.To put up a notice which says“Keep off”is necessary.

13、Piles of stones lie in a corner of the courtyard,waiting to be replaced.Piles of stones lie in a corner of the courtyard,which wait to be replaced.European countries are now making an active effort to reuse materials.European countries are trying their best to reuse materials.We call this recycling.

14、This is called recycling.I happened to meet him on my way home.It happened that I met him on my way home.2-3练习作文中的句子结构nenter nYou can enter the park by the main gate.nYou can enter it by the main gate when you see the Peoples Park.nwalk straightnWalk straight until the end of the road.nWalk straight

15、 until you come to the end of the road.nWhen he saw that he ran in a hurry,inviting the old lady to share the umbrella with him.nSeeing that,he ran immediately to the old lady and shared the same umbrella.3在使用中复习语篇n3-1介绍人物Madam Curie was born in a teachers family in Poland,on November 7th,1867.Madam

16、 Curie,a daughter of a teacher,was born in Poland,on November 7th,1867.When she was young,she became interested inAs a young man.In 1903,in July 1903 After the war From then onToday she is remembered and admired as a scientist.But she is also remembered for her determination and courage,her willingn

17、ess to share her knowledge,her interest in womens rights,and her medical service during the war.3-1介绍人物nSun Shuwei,a world champion in diving,is now 28 years old from Guangdong in China.He loved swimming when he was a small boy and at the age of eight he became a member of the diving team in Guangdo

18、ng Province.He studied hard at school and trained hard for five years before he came to the national team.A year later in 1990,he won a gold medal at the 11th Asian Games and became a world champion at the 6th World Swimming Championships early this year.He is popular with the Chinese people.3-2讲述故事

19、nA person of great determinationnMany years ago I walked into a bookstore in Cincinnati in search of some books that I wanted.While I was there,a young boy of about twelve came in to ask whether they had any geography books for sale.nWe entered the fifth storenMany years later,I was sailing to Europ

20、e on a fine sailing ship across the Atlantic.nThe determination that thirty years ago got you that geography book has today saved our lives.3-3记述经历nA visit to Tokyo DisneylandnLast week we went on a visit to Tokyo Disneyland.nOn the first day we went to the Magic Castle.nOn the second day of our tri

21、p,nAfter lunch,we also visited Tomorrow Land,which was very attractive.nWe stayed there for a long time.nAt eight oclock in the evening,we left the Disneyland.We had a wonderful time.3-4时间顺序nWhen we entered the roomnThree days laternEarly in the morning nIn 1982nOne sunny afternoon nAs a young man n

22、In ones spare timenSeeing that nOn hearing it nOne daynFor twenty yearsnHardly had we got there,when.nAt 7 oclocknIn July nAnd then nOn November 8th,1992nIn ones childhoodnAt the age of nOn ones arrival nDuring my years in schoolnAt this period3-5比较对比 Classroom Behavior RulesThere are some similarit

23、ies and differences in the classroom behavior rules between North America and my county.First,there is the students right to speak.In the language class in North America students can ask the teacher questions.They even ask questions when the teacher is giving a lesson.Similarly,in my country student

24、s have the right to ask questions at the end of the class.Next,students respect their teachers.In North America students look up to teachers and respect them.For example,when the teacher asks them to speak they must look into the teachers eyes to show respect.Likewise,in my country,students respect

25、teachers;however,when a teacher asks us to speak we look down to show respect.We do not look into their eyes.In conclusion,there are both similarities and differences in the way students behave their teachers in the classroom.3-6介绍国家/城市nNew YorknNew York is built on a group of islands on the east co

26、ast of the USA at a point where several rivers flow into the ocean.nBy 1820 the population of New York had grown to about 125,000,making it the largest city in the USA.nThe building of skyscrapers in New York began around the year 1900.nNew York never sleeps.3-6介绍国家/城市ndate back to,date from,be loca

27、ted in,stand,lie in nhas a population of,the population of the city ncover an entire continent,from north to south the distance is,in area it is about,has an area of nThe climate is different depending on the area.n is an extremely rich country.n is an important agricultural country with a small pop

28、ulation.nIn size it is bigger than yet has a much smaller population.3-7介绍场景n假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房情况，并告知住房面积20平米，月租550元。3-7介绍场景nDear Bob,Im so glad to learn that youre coming in September.Ive found a place for you.Its a small flat of 25 square meters,

29、with a bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.In the bedroom there is a bed,a sofa,a desk and a chair.The rent is 500 yuan per month.The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street,which is not far from Jianxinhua Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school.In fact,its only one stop.Do you th

30、ink youd like it?If not,I can try and find another place for you.Yours，Li Hua3-8 看图指路n假定你是李华，你和你的朋友约定星期天在人民公园野餐。你的英国朋友Peter 也应邀参加。请你根据下面的示意图，给他写封短信，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。3-8 看图指路nDear Peter,Were so glad youre coming to join us on Sunday.Here is how you can find us.Well have our picnic in the Peoples Park.Yo

31、u know where that is,dont you?After you enter the park by the main gate,walk straight on till you come to a small river.Cross the river and turn right.After walking for a while youll come to a hill.Walk round the hill,youll see a lake.Well have our picnic there in the small woods by the lake.Im sure

32、 youll have no trouble finding us.Do come！Lihua3-9说明程序nExperts believe that there are about 40,000 different types of jobs in the world.Choosing the right one is difficult job in itself.nFirst,it is important to recognize what kind of person you are and which special qualities make you different fro

33、m everyone else.nYou may had notice something while you were doing this task.nTo examine your skills and abilities still further,ask yourself this question:in the following three areas-skills with people,skills with information or skills with things-which are your best skills?nAfter examining your s

34、kills,the next step is research.nFinally,trust your own ideas and your own thinking!3-10举例说明n My brother is very selfish.He does not want to share things with other people.For example,when he buys a bar of chocolate,he puts it in a secret place.Then he eats it all by himself.He never helps anyone.He

35、 says he is busy.He does not care if something he does bothers other people.For instance,last night he played loud rock n roll music until 2 oclock in the morning.In conclusion,I think my brother is selfish,and will always be selfish.3-11介绍事物nAdvertisingAdvertising is a highly developed twentieth ce

36、ntury industry.What can you advertise?Advertising is now a scientific business.How are advertisements made?What makes a good advertisement?There are other dangers.3-11介绍事物nGymnasticsThe words“gymnastics”and“gym”come from the Greek language,for it was in Greece that Olympic competitions started.Dance

37、 is an important of training as it prepares you for the types of movements required in gymnastics.To become a top gymnast,it is important to start when very young.Boys develop physically later than girls and so Olympic gymnastics medals are usually won by men between the ages of nineteen and twenty-

38、five.In competitions,gymnasts have to perform on different pieces of equipment.3-12寻求帮助(书信)nDear Marty,I have got a problem and as I dont know what to do.I thought Id write to you and ask for your adviceI have been working at a meat factory for about two months now.I have recently noticed that one o

39、f my workmates is stealing.What should I do?May be I should have told that.Or possibly I should have gone to the managerI think Im in a difficult position,Please tell me how I can solve this problem.Id like to hear your advice.Best wishes,John3-13给与帮助（回信）nDear John,Thank for your letter.I agree that

40、 it is a difficult situation.I think there is a possible problem if you tell the manager about the thief.There is no need to say to the other worker.But I advise you to check your bag every evening before going home.Best regards,Marty3-13给与帮助（回信）9 Ocean Road Freetown 9th April,2003 Dear Ken,Thank yo

41、u for your letter.Im sorry that you are not happy yet in yournew school.It is wrong of the other children to make fun of you.First of all,dont worry about being short.It really doesnt matter.Lots ofpeople are short.You are fine just as you are.Have you considered looking for one special friend?I sug

42、gest you choosesomeone who you think is kind and friendly.So why dont you look forsome who might be a special friend?And dont spend too much time alone.Best wishes,Your friend,Amy 3-14推销产品（信件）No.76 Zhichun Road Haidian District Beijing 100086 3rd August,2004-9-12nDear Ms.Zhang,nI believe that you ar

43、e a teacher of computer studies at your school.I am writing to you because we have a used computer for sale and wonder if you would like to buy it.The model is ZY-2 and it is one year old.We would be happy to sell it to you for 3,500 yuan,that is 50%of the cost of a new one.nIf you are interested,pl

44、ease write to me at the above address.Could you also suggest a time when it would suit you to visit us and try out the machine?nIm looking forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,He Xiaohua3-15索要资料（书信）40964 Friendship Hotel Beijing,108314th January,2002SalesmanComputer Sales Dept.Founder Compute

45、r Corp.nDear Sir,nI am a college student studying electrical engineering.I need a micro-computer at home.Founder computers are my first choice,so I am writing to you for some information.nI would be very happy if you could send me an introduction to your products and the prices of them.Please write

46、to me at the above address.nI look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,John Jenkins3-16口头通知nAttention please!nBoys and girls.Less noise,please!Gather round and listen carefully.nLadies and gentlemen,may I have your attention please?I have something important to tell you.nThats all.Thank you.

47、3-17书面通知nAbout spoken-English Competition In order to develop students interests in learning English and improve their spoken English,a spoken-English competition will be held by Students Union and English Office on November 2nd.Good luck!Student Union Friday,December 103-18日记nMay 9th,Tuesday Sunny3

48、-19分析图表nA survey about choice of jobs has been done among 100 middle school students,which shows that3-20介绍喜好nMy Most Favorite ProgramThere are a lot of TV programs I like but the one I like best is World Report broadcast by CCTV at ten every night.This program aims at keeping audiences informed abo

49、ut the international situation.There are several factors,which may account for my preference of this program.First,.Besides,.Finally,From the examples mentioned above,it can be easily understood why I like World Report.写作的相关话题和词汇n灾害事故（火灾）n书信、日记n分析表格（就业选择）n业余爱好（喜爱的节目）n指明道路（去野餐的路）n通知布告（广播晚会的通知）n介绍人物（孙

50、淑伟，老师）n描述场景（描写学校变化）n环境保护（城市的污染）n讲述经历（参观农场）n幽默故事（井盖和修路）n好人好事（给老人让座）n度假旅游（对比旅游方式）n商店购物（退还衣物）n学校生活（减负前后）书面表达复习n一书面表达的能力要求n二书面表达的复习策略n三书面表达的课堂指导三书面表达的课堂指导n四书面表达的批改方法三书面表达的课堂指导n集中和分散相结合n口头和笔头相结合n分类和综合相结合n记忆和发挥相结合课堂指导作文n假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信。他三年前参观过你校，听说现在变化很大，希望了解有关情况。参照下图，给他写一封回信介绍你校的变化。n注意：