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1、考点30 书面表达的高考实战(二) 应用文一活动报道篇首句： 全文的中心句： what(事件), when(时间), where(地点); who(人物)1On November 1st, the Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest was held in our school lecture hall.11月1日，古诗朗诵比赛在我校演讲大厅举行。2Last weekend, some students took part in a fruitpicking activity organized by the Student Union.上周末，一些学生参加了由

2、学生会组织的水果采摘活动。篇中句：补充事件的过程和细节： why(目的和原因)和how(具体过程)等1To motivate us students，our teacher made an inspiring speech and stressed the value of labour.为了激励我们学生，我们的老师做了一次鼓舞人心的演讲，强调了劳动的价值。2In order to get us students motivated, our teacher held a class meeting to make it clear that it is an honour to create

3、 wealth by our own hands.为了调动同学们的积极性，老师开了班会，明确表示，亲手创造财富是一种荣誉。3We arrived at the farm on Saturday morning and started working immediately we got off the bus. The watermelons were just waiting for us to pick, after which we loaded them onto a truck.星期六早上到达农场，一下车我们就开始工作。西瓜好像正等着我们摘，摘完后我们把它们装上卡车。篇尾句：活动短评

4、：活动的影响、意义、感受或启发。1After getting home, I shared my experience with my parents during supper. They all approved of my hard work and positive attitude.回家后，在晚饭时我和父母分享了我的经历。他们都称赞我努力工作和积极的态度。2Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy schoolwork, but it also promoted the frien

5、dship among us.它不仅让我们接近大自然，让我们从繁重的课业中得到放松，而且还促进了我们之间的友谊。3Tired as we are, we all feel it worthwhile and rewarding.虽然我们很累，但我们都觉得这是值得的。假定你是李华，你校计划本周六举行主题为“保护环境，人人有责”的演讲比赛，请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1参赛人员；2告知对方比赛的时间、地点；3就如何准备提出建议。注意：写作词数应为80左右。_二人物描写12020全国卷书面表达The person I respect most is my physics teacher, w

6、ho is of medium height, with long and blonde hair.我最尊敬的人是我的物理老师，她中等身高，一头金色的长发。22020全国卷书面表达Its her friendliness and the sense of responsibility that make me admire her.是她的友善和责任感让我钦佩她。32020全国卷书面表达She teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.她不仅教我们如何获得知识，也教我们如何成为一个优秀的人

7、。42020全国卷书面表达Having set a great example to us students, she fully deserves my respect.为我们学生树立了一个好榜样，她值得我尊敬。5Among the outstanding figures in Chinese history, Cao Cao is my favorite, whose story fully displays his gift and strategy in military.在中国历史上的杰出人物中，曹操是我最喜欢的，他的故事充分展示了他在军事上的天赋和谋略。6Confucius liv

8、ed in the Spring and Autumn Period and he is the first as well as the most respected educator in China according to the recorded documents.孔子生活在春秋时期，据记载，他是中国第一个也是最受尊敬的教育家。7It goes without saying that Confucius has a great effect on the values of later generations.毋庸置疑，孔子对后世的价值观有很大的影响。8In addition, t

9、he 72 students that Confucius had taught also made great achievements in politics and other aspects.此外，孔子所教的72名学生也在政治等各方面取得了巨大的成就。9Old as Zhong Nanshan is, he fought bravely against COVID19, making great contributions in the field of medicine.尽管钟南山年事已高，但他勇敢抗击新冠肺炎，在医学领域做出了巨大贡献。10She has been highly r

10、espected for her wisdom as well as courage by the Chinese people.她以她的智慧和勇气受到中国人民的高度尊敬。11Her spirits inspires me and millions of other girls to live an independent life and be responsible for our own decisions.她的精神激励着我和千百万其他女孩过独立的生活，为自己的决定负责。2021烟台市高考诊断性测试假定你校英文报最近开设“我身边的英雄”栏目，请你根据此栏目要求写一位你心目中的英雄人物给此

11、栏投稿。注意：1词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_三建议信【写作架构要规范】建议信是生活中常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least 等依次陈述建议。具体写作结构为：1吸引阅卷人开头句Im writing to give you some tips/suggestions on how to spend gift money

12、.我写这封信的目的是给你一些如何花压岁钱的建议。Im pleased to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to get along well with your classmates.非常高兴收到你的来信，在信中，关于如何与同学相处好，你向我征求建议。I know you have trouble in learning English after reading your letter.在读了你的信之后，我知道你在学习英语上有困难。My suggestions are as follows.我的建议如下。2吸引阅卷人篇中句Fi

13、rst of all，youd better buy some books to enrich yourself.首先，你最好买一些书来丰富自己。Whats more，you may as well join in a summer camp, which not only broadens your horizons but also helps you develop the spirit of teamwork.此外，你不妨参加夏令营，这不但开拓你的视野而且有助于你培养团队精神。Having a facetoface talk with your parents peacefully a

14、nd listening patiently is a better choice.与你的父母心平气和地面谈并耐心地倾听是一个更好的选择。3吸引阅卷人结尾句I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you./I hope you will find these suggestions useful.我希望我的建议对你有益。/我希望你认为这些建议有帮助。Personally/In my opinion/As far as Im concerned，it would be wise to take the following actions.在我看来，

15、采取如下行动是明智的。假定你是李华，请给你的美国网友Mary写一封邮件，建议她报名参加今年7月为期5天的四川成都熊猫饲养员(breeder)夏令营，报名网站是内容包括：1提出建议；2活动内容；3报名方式。注意：1词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mary，_Yours，Li Hua四道歉信【写作架构要规范】道歉信通常包括以下三个部分：1.向对方表示歉意；2.说明道歉的原因，对失误或错误进行解释(一般要求考生自由发挥)；3.提出补救措施，请求原谅。其结构通常为：1吸引阅卷人开头句Im writing to apologize to you because Im unabl

16、e to go to the bookstore with you as planned/at the appointed time.我写信是为了向你道歉，因为我不能按约定/在约定时间和你一起去书店。I really want to accept your invitation and take this opportunity to introduce the traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends, but Im sorry to tell you that I cant because I am occupied in prepar

17、ing a performance for the coming National Day.我真的很想接受您的邀请，并借此机会向外国朋友介绍中国传统绘画，但我很遗憾地告诉您，我不能参加，因为我忙于为即将到来的国庆节准备表演节目。I would like to offer my apology for not being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday.非常抱歉本周六不能教你制作中国结了。2吸引阅卷人篇中句The reason why I wont be available at that time is that my

18、 grandfather fell ill suddenly yesterday and my family are taking turns to take care of him in the hospital. So I have to stay with him that day.我那时没空的原因是我爷爷昨天突然生病了，我的家人正在医院轮流照顾他。所以那天我不得不陪着他。I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not

19、 cause you too much trouble. 我刚发现那天下午我要参加一个重要的班会。我希望这次更换不会给您带来太多麻烦。3吸引阅卷人结尾句Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence.对于我的缺席给您带来的不便，我再次表示歉意。I hope you will forgive me for causing you so much trouble.我希望你能原谅我给你带来这么多麻烦。Im awfully sorry for the sudden change of the plan. And Im wondering w

20、hether it is OK if we go to the exhibition next Saturday morning. 计划突然改变，我感到非常抱歉。我想知道我们下周六上午去看展览是否可以。假定你是李华，原定今年 6 月去纽约旅游并约定探访朋友 Taylor，现因故推迟。请你给Taylor 写信，包含以下要点：1写信目的；2推迟的原因；3告知新计划。注意：1词数 80 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Taylor，_Yours，Li Hua五申请信【写作架构要规范】申请信有很多种，比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请等。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示，写作时除应注

21、意格式上的要求外，也应注意审题全面，不能遗漏要点。具体写作结构为：1吸引阅卷人开头句Im Li Hua，a student from Xinhua Middle school. I am writing to apply for the membership of the English tutorial.我是新华中学的一名学生，李华。我写信申请上英语辅导班。Im more than glad to work as a volunteer for the 2022 Beijing & Zhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games. I hold the firm belie

22、f that Im fit for the job.我非常高兴做一名2022年北京和张家口冬奥会的志愿者，我坚信我适合这项工作。2吸引阅卷人篇中句I won the first prize in the Middle School English Speaking Contest last year; besides, I once worked as a voluntary guide for foreign guests.去年我在中学生英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖。此外，我曾经担任外国游客的志愿者导游。With all these advantages，I hold the firm beli

23、ef that I will be very qualified to be a volunteer.有上面的优势条件，我坚信我将非常适合担任一名志愿者。In addition，I think I can do the job well thanks to my language skills and a good command of English.此外，由于我的语言技能和精通英语，我认为我能把这项工作做好。3吸引阅卷人结尾句I would really appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.如果

24、你能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。I would be very grateful if you could offer me a chance to be a volunteer.如果你能给我一次当志愿者的机会，我将不胜感激。I really hope to obtain this precious opportunity. Should you offer me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. 我非常希望能获得这次宝贵的机会。如果您能给我一个面谈的机会，我将不胜感激。2021杭州市第一次适应性测试假定你是李华，你校国际部打算举办

25、“教外国学生下中国象棋(Chinese chess)”的活动，现正在招募志愿者。你有意向成为志愿者，请你用英语写一封申请信，内容包括：1写信目的；2你的优势；3期待同意申请。注意：1词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir/Madam，_Yours，Li Hua六邀请信【写作架构要规范】邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信，在写作时，语气要热情真挚，不要强人所难。具体写作结构为：1吸引阅卷人开头句2019全国卷书面表达Im Li Hua，chairman of the Students Union. Knowing that you a

26、re fond of classical music, Im writing to invite you to take part in music festival to be held in our school.我是学生会主席李华。知道你喜欢古典音乐，我写信邀请你参加将在我校举办的音乐节。2019全国卷书面表达A Chinese classical music concert will be held in the music hall of our school on November 8th. Its my great honour to invite you to join in

27、the classical music concert on behalf of our school.11月8日在我校音乐厅将举行一场中国古典音乐会。我非常荣幸代表学校邀请你参加古典音乐会。2吸引阅卷人篇中句Here are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows.这次活动的一些细节如下。The opening ceremony is scheduled to start at 9：00 am., after which the schoolmaster will de

28、liver a speech.开幕式定于上午9点开始，之后校长将发表讲话。3吸引阅卷人结尾句2019全国卷书面表达I hold the firm belief that it is a good chance to perform your favorite music.我坚信这是一个表演你最喜欢的音乐的好机会。I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration at your early convenience.如果你能尽早在你方便时考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。I would like to mee

29、t you there and please let me know your decision as soon as possible.我希望能在那里见到你，请尽快让我知道你的决定。2021青岛市高三练习诊断假定你是李华，你校近期成立了“孔子思想”网上俱乐部(Confucianism online club)。你的朋友Tom对中国文化很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件，邀请他加入该俱乐部。注意：1词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_七感谢信【写作架构要规范】感谢信是重要的礼仪文书，是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信，有感谢和表扬双重意思。其结构为：1吸引阅卷人开头句

30、I am Li Hua, a student of Senior 3. I am writing to express my gratitude for your kind help with my English all these years. 我是李华，一个高三的学生。我写这封信是为了感谢你这么多年来对我英语的帮助。I would like to convey my sincere appreciation for your timely help with my English all these years.我想对您这些年来在英语学习上给予的及时帮助表示衷心的感谢。I would l

31、ike to take this opportunity to express my thanks for your timely help and assistance.我愿借此机会对您的及时帮助表示感谢。2吸引阅卷人篇中句I made great progress with your kind help, without which I couldnt have got the prize.在你的帮助下，我取得了很大的进步；没有你的帮助，我不可能得到这个奖。Thanks to your generous help, without which I wouldnt have made suc

32、h great progress.感谢你的慷慨帮助。没有你的帮助，我不会取得这么大的进步。3吸引阅卷人结尾句It was kind and generous of you to do this for me, and I appreciate it more than I can say.您对我如此友好和慷慨，我真是感激不尽。Again, Id like to express my warm thanks to you!再次对你们表示衷心的感谢！2021山东省六地市部分学校高三联考假定你是李华，你作为交换生在美国的游学即将结束。请你给美国好友David写一封电子邮件，要点如下：1表示感谢；2分

33、享自己的游学体会；3邀请他到中国玩。注意：1词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear David，_Yours，Li Hua八推荐信【写作架构要规范】从推荐者的情况来分，可以分为自荐信和推荐信两种。具体写作结构为：1吸引阅卷人开头句Learning that you are coming to visit China, Id like to recommend several places of interest to you.得知你将来中国游玩，我向你推荐几处名胜。Having learnt that our library is planni

34、ng to buy new books, Im willing to recommend some books to you.得知我们图书馆准备买新书，我愿意向您推荐一些书。Im more than glad/pleased/delighted to learn that you are going to Beijing, and Id like to offer my recommendation.得知你要去北京我很高兴，我想向你提议。2吸引阅卷人篇中句It offers you an opportunity to do something interesting and creative.

35、 Meanwhile, it provides you a source of pleasure.它提供给你一个做有趣且富有创意的事情的机会，同时也是你快乐的源泉。I recommend that you sleep in a tent at night so that you can get close to nature.我建议你晚上在帐篷中睡觉以便你可以亲近大自然。There are all kinds of courses for you to choose from, so you can visit the website for detailed information.有许多课

36、程可供选择，你可以登录网站了解更多信息。3吸引阅卷人结尾句I do hope you can take my recommendations into account/consideration and make a final decision.我真希望你能考虑我的建议并做出最后的决定。Ill be more than happy if you can take my recommendations/ideas into consideration.如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会非常高兴。2021山东省师大附中阶段性检测假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jackson打算近期来中国实地参观，了解一

37、下中国文化，但不确定去哪个城市，所以来信征求你的建议，请你给他回信，内容包括：1你所推荐的城市；2推荐理由(至少两条)。注意：1词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_九求助信【写作架构要规范】求助信是针对自己目前遇到的困难写信请求对方给予帮助的信件类型，因此整篇文章应用一般现在时，其结构通常为：1吸引阅卷人开头句2020全国卷满分作文Im writing to ask for your guidance on a short play, which is adapted from our text.我写信是想请您指导一部改编自我们课文的短剧。The reason why I am

38、writing to you is that I quarreled with my friend Lucy and I need your help now.我给你写信的原因是我和我的朋友露西吵架了，我现在需要你的帮助。Would you please do me a favour?你能帮我一个忙吗？2吸引阅卷人篇中句I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, Im not quite sure of the language and the format Ive used. Im wondering if you could spare some precious time to go through them and make necessary changes.我刚刚完成了我的求职信和个人简历。然而，我不太确定我使用的