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1、获奖课件高中英语写作公开课第1页，本讲稿共28页 Shooting,originated as a means of survival,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.The sport,which first appeared in 1896,was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games.It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic.However,not until 1968 wer

2、e women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting.With the sport becoming more and more popular,it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.句子表达有何亮点？句子表达有何亮点？第2页，本讲稿共28页写作中复合句常见的错误写作中复合句常见的错误1.1.只有从句，没有主句只有从句，没有主句 The keeper who had lived in the lig

3、ht tower for a long time,so he could keep calm in the storm.The keeper,who had lived in the light tower for a long time,could keep calm in the storm.第3页，本讲稿共28页2.2.以逗号代替句号以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子把两个简单句当成一个句子 The old man thought of his son,tears came down from his face.The hall is different from all othe

4、r buildings,it is made of glass.3.3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然刻意使用从句，表达不自然 There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.The hall is different from all other buildings,

5、which is made of glass.The old man thought of his son,with tears coming down from his face.第4页，本讲稿共28页4.4.过多地使用并列句组合信息过多地使用并列句组合信息 We were driving out into the country,and we saw our English teacher riding in a bus,and the bus was crowded.It is a beautiful day,and the sun is shining and a breeze is

6、blowing.It is a beautiful day with the sun shining and a breeze blowing.As we were driving out into the country,we saw our English teacher riding in a crowded bus.第5页，本讲稿共28页 My English Learning It is six years since I began to learn English.With the help of my teachers and classmates,I have made pr

7、ogress in my English.Now Im doing well both in writing and reading in English.But I still find it hard to learn English,such as some difficult idioms.Difficult as it is,I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.请看范例 从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫“规范的英规范的英语句子语句子”。其

8、实，其实，“规范的英语句子规范的英语句子”就是就是我们经常讲的三种我们经常讲的三种句子句子：第6页，本讲稿共28页A)Simple sentence:Hearing the news,he was happy.B)Compound sentence A:He gave me a book but I forgot to bring it back home.C)Compound sentence B:What he is doing has nothing to do with me.=When he heard the news,he was happy.第7页，本讲稿共28页Here ar

9、e 3 ways to make sentences:I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：1)借助名词短语做同位语 如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生；籍贯：广东。Li Li,a boy of 19,was born in Guangdong in 1986.第8页，本讲稿共28页2)借助介词短语做定语 如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身穿白色茄克。Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and a white jacket.第9页，本讲稿共28页 如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。With the help of

10、Tom,we soon found their village.4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语 如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。They are standing under the big tree,waiting for the president.3)借助介词短语做状语第10页，本讲稿共28页II.巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：如：他给我钱，我不要。I was just walking down the street corner when I saw you.如：我刚到拐角处，就见到你啦。He gave me a lot money but I refused.第11页，本讲

11、稿共28页III.用好从句和引导词，写出规范的复合句：1)名词性从句 如：老师生气。原因：王力迟到。That Wang Li came late to school made the teacher very angry.2)定语从句第12页，本讲稿共28页 如：中国，地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。China,which lies in the east of Asia,is a great country with a large area and population as well as rich natural resources.3)状语从句 如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受

12、感动。I was deeply moved by this,because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.第13页，本讲稿共28页学学会会运运用用复复合合句句和和非非谓谓语语动动词词 Kate is a new student.She comes from a northern province.She speaks a dialect.We find it hard to understand her dialect.Kate,a new student from a northern province,speaks a dial

13、ect which we find hard to understand.用一句话表达第14页，本讲稿共28页不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。学学会会运运用用复复合合句句和和非非谓谓语语动动词词第一步：拆分成几个简单句第一步：拆分成几个简单句不是人人都能学好英语。不是人人都能学好英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。这会影响汉语学习。这会影响汉语学习。第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句 Not everyone is good at learning English.Children from primary school

14、learn English and Chinese at the same time.This will affect their Chinese study.第15页，本讲稿共28页 Not everyone is good at learning English.Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time.This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子 That children from primary school start

15、 to learn English and Chinese at the same time will affect their Chinese study because not everyone is good at learning English.第16页，本讲稿共28页 Not everyone is good at learning English.Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time.This will affect their Chinese study.

16、第三步：合并句子 If children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time,this will affect their Chinese study方法方法2 2：because not everyone is good at learning English.第17页，本讲稿共28页学学会会使使用用复复合合句句和和非非谓谓语语动动词词你来试试现象现象 学生作文中出现很多错别字学生作文中出现很多错别字原因原因1.1.上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。2.2.每天有

17、很多作业做，没有记住生字。每天有很多作业做，没有记住生字。参考词汇：错别字:wrongly-written characters网络语言：web language要求：1.用两句话表达表格内容 2.两句话要有连贯性第20页，本讲稿共28页第一句（两个信息点）：第一句（两个信息点）：1.1.学生作文中出现很多错别字学生作文中出现很多错别字 2.2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。There are many wrongly-written characters in students compositions.The reason why there ar

18、e many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line.合并句子：合并句子：They often use web languages when chatting on line.第21页，本讲稿共28页1.They have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters第二句第二句:1.1.每天有很多作业做每

19、天有很多作业做 2.2.没有记住生字。没有记住生字。They have much homework to do every day.2.With so much homework to do,they fail to memorize the new characters.3.Because they have so much homework to do,they fail to memorize the new characters.合并句子：合并句子：They fail to memorize the new characters.第22页，本讲稿共28页 连接两句话：连接两句话：The

20、 reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line.Moreover,they have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters.第23页，本讲稿共28页 Exchange and discuss your partners composition,then

21、give each other a score according to the following criteria.Criteria（标准）（标准）Mark Content（内容）（内容）（是否用（是否用5 5句话表达了全文要点）句话表达了全文要点）0 5 分分 Language（语言）（语言）（句子结构及用词是否得当）（句子结构及用词是否得当）0 8 分分 Coherence（连贯）（连贯）（是否用了恰当的词语来衔接句子）（是否用了恰当的词语来衔接句子）0 2 分分Pair work第24页，本讲稿共28页1.一个乞丐在路边讨钱一个乞丐在路边讨钱(ask for money)。李先生匆忙

22、赶路。李先生匆忙赶路上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。2.乞丐很生气，伸出乞丐很生气，伸出(stick out)拐杖，差点把李先生绊倒了拐杖，差点把李先生绊倒了(trip over)。3.李先生意识到他是个残疾人，便在口袋里找钱给他。李先生意识到他是个残疾人，便在口袋里找钱给他。4.李先生拿出了一张百元钞票李先生拿出了一张百元钞票(a 100-yuan note)。突然一。突然一阵风把钞票吹到了空中。阵风把钞票吹到了空中。5.乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票。乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票。李先生站在那里，惊得合不拢嘴。李先生站在那里，惊得合不拢嘴。实战演练实战演练实战演练实战演练：以

23、下是你根据图画内容和题目要求，经过观以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求，经过观察、整理排列成的五个信息块，请分别用一个句子表达察、整理排列成的五个信息块，请分别用一个句子表达出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。A beggar第25页，本讲稿共28页 A beggar One day,Mr.Li hurried on his way to work.A beggar on the roadside was asking for money.Mr.Li paid no attention on him.The beggar got angry and stuck out hi

24、s walking stick.It almost tripped Mr.Li over.When he realizing the beggar was a disabled person,Mr.Li began to search for some money in his pocket to give him.He took out a 100-yuan note,but it was suddenly blown into the air by the wind.Seeing this,the beggar jumped quickly to run after the note.It

25、 made Mr.Li so surprised that he stood there with his mouth open.第26页，本讲稿共28页 A beggar One day,when Mr.Li hurried on his way to work,a beggar on the roadside was asking for money,but Mr.Li paid no attention on him.As a result,the beggar got angry and stuck out his walking stick,which almost tripped

26、Mr.Li over.Realizing the beggar was a disabled person,Mr.Li began to search for some money in his pocket to give him.He took out a 100-yuan note,which was suddenly blown into the air by the wind.Seeing this,the beggar jumped quickly to run after the note,which made Mr.Li so surprised that he stood there with his mouth open.第27页，本讲稿共28页Homework Rewrite the composition and hand it in.第28页，本讲稿共28页