Run-On-Sentence.ppt

《Run-On-Sentence.ppt》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《Run-On-Sentence.ppt（9页珍藏版）》请在得力文库 - 分享文档赚钱的网站上搜索。

1、What Is a Run-On Sentence? The length of a sentence has nothing to do with whether or not a sentence is a run-on. A run-on sentence is one in which two independent clauses have been connected incorrectly. Some students think they can study for an important exam by “cramming” all night, they are prob

2、ably wrong.This is an example of the dreaded comma splice!Repairing Run-On Sentence We can replace the comma with a period and start a new sentence. Some students think they can study for an important exam by “cramming” all night. They are probably wrong. We can insert a coordinating conjunction aft

3、er the comma. Some students think they can study for an important exam by “cramming” all night, but they are probably wrong.Repairing Run-On Sentence We can replace the comma with a semicolon. Some students think they can study for an important exam by “cramming” all night; however, they are probabl

4、y wrong. We can subordinate one of the independent clauses. Although some students think they can study for an important exam by “cramming” all night, they are probably wrong.Run-On Involving a ColonAfter a list following a colon, the sentence must end. Both bombs produce the same three effects: hea

5、t, blast, and radiation; however, the bombs do not produce the effects in the same proportions.Both bombs produce the same three effects: heat, blast, and radiation. However, the bombs do not produce the effects in the same proportions.Try translating this passage由有关有销钉混合段的图3可知，物料粒子充满全流道沿着螺杆转动方向向前运动

6、，混合情况明显优于无销钉混合段，在6.3s以前，物料粒子运动的速度与无销钉混合段中粒子运动速度几乎一致，从8.4s以后，有销钉混合段内物料粒子的运动速度明显小于无销钉混合段，21.0s粒子才到达混合段出口. Direct translation leads to a run-on sentenceWe know from Figure 3 that material particles fill the flow channel and move forward along the screw, the mixing efficiency in the mixing section with

7、pins is clearly better than that with no pin, the material particle velocity in the mixing section with pins is almost the same as that with no pin before 6.3 s, the velocity with pins is lower than that with no pin after 8.4 s, it takes the material particles 21.0 s to reach the exit of the mixing

8、section with pins. Better translation withrun-on sentence repairedWe know from Figure 3 that material particles fill the flow channel and move forward along the screw. The mixing efficiency in the mixing section with pins is clearly better than that with no pin. The material particle velocity in the

9、 mixing section with pins is almost the same as that with no pin before 6.3 s, but the velocity with pins is lower than that with no pin after 8.4 s. It takes the material particles 21.0 s to reach the exit of the mixing section with pins. 进入夏天，少不了一个热字当头，电扇空调陆续登场，每逢此时，总会进入夏天，少不了一个热字当头，电扇空调陆续登场，每逢此时，

10、总会想起那一把蒲扇。蒲扇，是记忆中的农村，夏季经常用的一件物品。记想起那一把蒲扇。蒲扇，是记忆中的农村，夏季经常用的一件物品。记忆中的故乡，每逢进入夏天，集市上最常见的便是蒲扇、凉席，不论男女老忆中的故乡，每逢进入夏天，集市上最常见的便是蒲扇、凉席，不论男女老少，个个手持一把，忽闪忽闪个不停，嘴里叨叨着少，个个手持一把，忽闪忽闪个不停，嘴里叨叨着“怎么这么热怎么这么热”，于是三，于是三五成群，聚在大树下，或站着，或随即坐在石头上，手持那把扇子，边唠嗑五成群，聚在大树下，或站着，或随即坐在石头上，手持那把扇子，边唠嗑边乘凉。孩子们却在周围跑跑跳跳，热得满头大汗，不时听到边乘凉。孩子们却在周围跑跑

11、跳跳，热得满头大汗，不时听到“强子，别跑强子，别跑了，快来我给你扇扇了，快来我给你扇扇”。孩子们才不听这一套，跑个没完，直到累气喘吁吁，。孩子们才不听这一套，跑个没完，直到累气喘吁吁，这才一跑一踮地围过了，这时母亲总是，好似生气的样子，边扇边训，这才一跑一踮地围过了，这时母亲总是，好似生气的样子，边扇边训，“你你看热的，跑什么？看热的，跑什么？”此时这把蒲扇，是那么凉快，那么的温馨幸福，有母亲此时这把蒲扇，是那么凉快，那么的温馨幸福，有母亲的味道！蒲扇是中国传统工艺品，在我国已有三千年多年的历史。取材的味道！蒲扇是中国传统工艺品，在我国已有三千年多年的历史。取材于棕榈树，制作简单，方便携带，且

12、蒲扇的表面光滑，因而，古人常会在上于棕榈树，制作简单，方便携带，且蒲扇的表面光滑，因而，古人常会在上面作画。古有棕扇、葵扇、蒲扇、蕉扇诸名，实即今日的蒲扇，江浙称之为面作画。古有棕扇、葵扇、蒲扇、蕉扇诸名，实即今日的蒲扇，江浙称之为芭蕉扇。六七十年代，人们最常用的就是这种，似圆非圆，轻巧又便宜的蒲芭蕉扇。六七十年代，人们最常用的就是这种，似圆非圆，轻巧又便宜的蒲扇。蒲扇流传至今，我的记忆中，它跨越了半个世纪，也走过了我们的扇。蒲扇流传至今，我的记忆中，它跨越了半个世纪，也走过了我们的半个人生的轨迹，携带着特有的念想，一年年，一天天，流向长长的时间隧半个人生的轨迹，携带着特有的念想，一年年，一天天，流向长长的时间隧道，袅道，袅