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.* 　2014高考英语满分作文(北京卷第一节) 　　题目： 　　你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括： 　　1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游; 　　2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往; 　　3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。 　　注意： 　　1.词数不少于50. 　　2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 　　3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 　　Dear Chris, 　　_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Yours, 　　Joe 　　考点：考察提纲类作文 　　写作指导： 　　本文属于应用文中的书信，要求写信给英国朋友Chris说明取消计划的原因并建议推测旅行至8月份。以第一人称为主。 　　要点： 　　1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游; 　　2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往; 　　3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。 　　这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。 　　【一句多译】 　　我可以建议把旅行推迟到8月份早些时候吗? 　　(1)Can I suggest that we put it off until early august? 　　(2)Would you mind if we we put it off until early august? 　　【参考范文】 　　Dear Chris, 　　How is everything going? 　　I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now bucause my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned. 　　I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early august? I wish you could understand. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. 　　Yours, 　　Joe 　　2014高考英语满分作文(云南卷) 　　作文题目： 　　最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。 　　60%的同学认为: 　　1.不应该收门票 　　2.公园是公众休闲的地方 　　3.如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 　　40%的同学认为: 　　1.应收 门票，但票价不要太高 　　2.支付园林工人工资 　　3.购新花木 　　注意： 　　1.信的开头已为你写好。 　　2.词数：100左右。 　　3.参考词汇：门票---entrance f ee 　　范文： 　　Dear editor, 　　I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think t hat an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either a t home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the par k and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees. 　　With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor? 　　Yours truly, 　　Li Hua 　　2014高考英语满分作文(安徽卷) 　　题目： 　　为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 　　内容要点如下： 　　1.表示理解并给予安慰; 　　2.提出建议并说明理由。 　　注意： 　　1.词数120左右; 　　2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 　　3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。 　　参考词汇： 　　temper n. 脾气，情绪 　　Hi Worried， 　　I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment. 　　Yours, 　　Jamie 　　考点：考察半开放性作文 　　写作指导： 　　本文属于半开放性作文，要为你编辑Jamie的口吻回复Worried的求助信，他的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。 　　要点： 　　1.很遗憾听说对方有此问题。并解释每个人都可能会遇见这样的问题，所以不必担心。只有的是要学会控制自己的脾气。 　　2.提出建议：与信任的人进行交流，告诉别人你的困扰，释放自己的压力。同时多参加各种户外活动，和朋友多玩球类运动。保持乐观的心态。 　　对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。 　　【一句多译】 　　每个人都会有过这样的一段时期，在这时情况都很糟糕，所以你不要太担心了。 　　(1)The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont have to worry much. 　　(2)It is true that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont have to worry much. 　　【参考范文】 　　Hi Worried, 　　Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont have to worry much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips: 　　First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your ftiends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. 　　I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. 　　Yours, 　　Jamie 　　2014高考英语满分作文(四川卷) 　　题目：(共35分) 　　假设你是李夏，你的美国笔友Sam来信关心你参加高考的情况，请根据以下要点回信告知。 　　1. 考试日期与科目; 　　2. 考试准备情况; 　　3. 考试时的状态; 　　4. 对试题的感受; 　　5. 可能的考试结果。 　　注意： 　　1. 词数120左右; 　　2. 开头语和结尾语已为你写好; 　　3. 可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯; 　　4. 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。 　　参考词汇：college entrance examination 　　【一】 　　Dear Sam, 　　Thank you for your concern. Now, I am writing to share with you the experiences in taking the college entrance examination. 　　The exam was due to begin on the morning of the seventh, June. The required subjects in exam are Chinese, English, math, physics, chemistry and biology. In order to get high grades in all subjects, I worked very hard to achieve my goal. Therefore, I had made a full preparation for it. 　　In spite of this, I first felt a little nervous because of some knowledge I was not familiar with. But after a deep breath, I told myself that I could make it and I was able to. After a while, everything went smooth for me. Once again, I regained my confidence, and it worked out well. When I finally went out of the exam spot, I felt relieved and a sense of achievement. So I am confident that I will get my ideal grades. 　　I am glad to receive your letter and thank you again for your concern. And I am waiting for your experiences in study and exam. Wish you a happy day! 　　Yours 　　Li Xia 　　【二】 　　Dear Sam, Thank you for your concern. Well, I’m now taking the once-a-year college entrance examination. We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th, on the first day of which Chinese and math will be tested, the second day geography, history, politics and English. Over the past ten months, we have been busy in preparing for this examination. Besides listening to teachers carefully in class, we often work deep into night. Therefore, I believe I can succeed. At first, I felt a little bit nervous but soon I calmed down because Chinese and math, I came to realize, were very easy and English is my favorite subject, you know. So I suppose I can get a good mark which will enable me to enter my ideal college. Best wishes! 　　Yours, 　　Li Xia 高考英语满分作文一（附翻译） 　　假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。 　　【例文】 　　Dear David, 　　Im glad youll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. Its difficult for you because its quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. Its also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. Im sure youll learn Chinese well. 　　Hope to see you soon in Beijing. 　　Yours, 　　Wang Ming 　　【翻译】 　　亲爱的大卫， 　　我很高兴你会来北京学习中文。中国是非常有益的，许多外国人正在学习，现在。这很难为你，因为它是相当的英语不同。你要记住尽可能多的中国话。同样重要的是做一些阅读和写作。你可以看电视，听广播练习你的听力。你最好不要谈论与中国人民。你可以学习汉语，不仅从书本上，而且从你周围的人。如果您有任何问题，请问我。我敢肯定你会学好中文。 　　希望能尽快看到你在北京。 　　此致， 王明 高考英语满分作文二（附翻译） 　　请你根据下面的提纲，以“我的家乡”为题，写一篇100—120字的短文。 　　提纲： 　　(1) 家乡的地理位置; 　　(2) 解放前的情况; 　　(3) 解放后的变化; 　　(4) 对家乡的感情。 　　【例文】 　　My Home Town 　　My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. 　　But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life. 　　In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved. 　　I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful. 　　【翻译】 　　我的家乡 　　我的家乡是一个美丽的地方。它站在旁边是一个宽阔的河流和丰富的鱼和米饭。 　　但它是一个贫穷落后的小镇时光。许多人没有工作。他们过着艰苦的生活。 　　1949年我的家乡解放。自那时以来已发生很大变化那里。街道已拓宽。工厂，学校，医院，电影院和剧院便如雨后春笋，一个接一个。人民生活大大改善。 　　我爱我的家乡。更爱我的人。他们正在努力，以使其更丰富，还有更美丽。 高考英语满分作文三(附翻译) 健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。 提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车； 2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳； 3.饮食要健康； 4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。 要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑； 2.80—100词左右； 3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 【例文】 Dear Dad(Mum), You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy! Your loving son (daughter) Tom (Mary) 【翻译】 亲爱的爸爸（妈妈）， 你每天这么忙，你不重视你的健康。我对你的健康担心所有的时间。我想给你一些建议。我听到走路是最好的运动。您的公司没有远离家乡，是吗？为什么不步行到办公室吗？你最好锻炼，每周至少一次，如在健身房打网球。去游泳也是一个不错的选择了。更重要的是，它需要有健康的食物。尽量不要熬夜太晚。有足够的睡眠可以让你的大脑工作得更好。 爸爸，请接受我的意见。我真的希望你健康！ 您的爱子（女） 汤姆（玛丽） 高考英语满分作文四（附翻译） 　　【例文】 　　Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases. 　　Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now. So "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY" has been raised by the government. 　　At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running. Look!The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it.The school life has become colorful and we are energetic.As a result we study harder and better. 　　The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us. Let’s keep on doing it. 　　【翻译】 　　做运动建立了我们的身体力量，减少疾病。 　　虽然我们过上更好的生活，我们的健康越来越差了。因此，“每天要锻炼1小时，保持因病逝世”已经提出的政府。 　　在中午或放学后，我们玩球，游泳和跑步。瞧!操场似乎较小，因为很多学生都在操场上后援学校生活变得丰富多彩，我们energetic.As因此我们努力学习，更好。 　　在阳光体育运动带来了一个令人振奋的变化给我们。让我们继续这样做。 高考英语满分作文五（附翻译） 　　【例文】 　　Career or Family: which is more important? 　　When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond differently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in one’s life. 　　It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life. In the very first place, career can give us an aim to live on. Without career, much of our living time will be certainly wasted. What’s more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most of the people earn their income from a job. On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate. 　　In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other. Rather, they can enhance each other so that one’s life can become better and better. Therefore, it’s not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical. 　　【翻译】 　　职业或家庭：哪个更重要? 　　在谈到自己的事业和家庭的意见要求，人总是有不同的反应。有些人认为这更重要的是追求自己的事业，而总有那么谁认为家庭应该是一个人的生活的人数1人。 　　毫无疑问，任何事业在我们生活中起着关键作用。在第一个地方，可以给我们一个职业生涯的目标是生活。没有职业生涯中，大部分时间我们的生活一定会被浪费。更重要的是，职业生涯可以提供一种手段，对我们的生活。大多数人从工作中赚取的收入。另一方面，家庭也是生活中不可缺少的一部分，因为很多人会承认。家庭一直被认为是一个地方，我们可以摆脱生活中的麻烦。此外，我们可以得到一个属于家庭的感觉。没有它，人会感到孤独和绝望。 　　在我看来，职业和家庭是不反对对方。相反，它们可以加强彼此，使自己的生活能够越来越好。因此，它不是对与错之间的选择，但理想和现实之间的一个。 高考英语满分作文六（附翻译） 　　【例文】 　　Olympics and I 　　Dear friend, 　　I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness. 　　This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What’s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it’s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded. 　　My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an individual, I’m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008. 　　Sincerely yours, 　　【翻译】 　　奥运与我 　　亲爱的朋友， 　　我有一个好消息，告知这里。通过长期的努力，北京已获得申办2008年奥运会。作为一个在北京居住，我感到很兴奋，你想分享我的快乐。 　　这一成功意味着很多超过我的游戏。首先，本届奥运会一定会促进我们的经济发展。据一些专家最近的一项调查，这项比赛将提高约3%的国内生产总值，提供职位约1.0万。更重要的是，我们的文化将得到广泛认可和接受世界各地通过奥运会。人们会走过来从世界的每一个角落，体验中华文化在各个方面。此外，透过游戏，我们的生活环境将大大改善。例如，公共交通系统会过时。此外，据了解，将种植更多树木，草地将大大扩大。 　　我的朋友，我真的期待着这个伟大的奥运会的到来。作为个人，我都愿意提供我的任何方式我可以提供帮助。我也希望能邀请大家来到这里，观看2008年奥运会。 　　此致， 　　敬礼 高考英语满分作文七（附翻译） 　　【例文】 　　Olympics and I 　　Dear friend, 　　I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness. 　　This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What’s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it’s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded. 　　My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an individual, I’m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008. 　　Sincerely yours, 　　【翻译】 　　奥运与我 　　亲爱的朋友， 　　我有一个好消息，告知这里。通过长期的努力，北京已获得申办2008年奥运会。作为一个在北京居住，我感到很兴奋，你想分享我的快乐。 　　这一成功意味着很多超过我的游戏。首先，本届奥运会一定会促进我们的经济发展。据一些专家最近的一项调查，这项比赛将提高约3%的国内生产总值，提供职位约1.0万。更重要的是，我们的文化将得到广泛认可和接受世界各地通过奥运会。人们会走过来从世界的每一个角落，体验中华文化在各个方面。此外，透过游戏，我们的生活环境将大大改善。例如，公共交通系统会过时。此外，据了解，将种植更多树木，草地将大大扩大。 　　我的朋友，我真的期待着这个伟大的奥运会的到来。作为个人，我都愿意提供我的任何方式我可以提供帮助。我也希望能邀请大家来到这里，观看2008年奥运会。 　　此致， 　　敬礼 高考英语满分作文八（附翻译） 　　【