3叙事经过.ppt

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1、技巧点拨技巧点拨 叙述活动或事件的过程叙述活动或事件的过程, 包括日记和包括日记和游记。写作时应注意以下几点：游记。写作时应注意以下几点：1.一般应包括记叙文的六要素。如游记一般应包括记叙文的六要素。如游记, 一般包括旅游的时间一般包括旅游的时间(when)、地点、地点(where)、参加的人员、参加的人员(who)、交通工具、交通工具(how)、所见所闻、所见所闻(what), 以及感受和体会以及感受和体会(feeling)。2.一般用过去时一般用过去时, 但也要灵活使用其但也要灵活使用其它时态。如描写景色或议论时它时态。如描写景色或议论时, 可可能用一般现在时能用一般现在时; 表示个人感想

2、表示个人感想, 打打算或决心算或决心, 可能用一般将来时。可能用一般将来时。3.以时间或地点为线索以时间或地点为线索, 描述事件或活动过描述事件或活动过程。表示时间的词有程。表示时间的词有: one day, the next day, last Friday, (early) in the morning, (late) in the afternoon, at noon, upon arrival, at first, then, (shortly) after that, after a short while, after a short rest, afterwards, ten m

3、inutes later, soon, soon after, after, before, when, while, during, immediately, in the end, finally等。等。句式模板句式模板 Today I paid a visit to .with my classmates. 今天我和同学一起参观了今天我和同学一起参观了 Time passed quickly before we knew it， we had to . 时间不知不觉过去了时间不知不觉过去了, 我们不得不我们不得不 How glad/happy/excited I feel today!

4、今天我今天我感到多么高兴啊！感到多么高兴啊！总述总述 过程过程 感受感受篇章结构篇章结构典例：典例： 参观清华大学（日记或游记）参观清华大学（日记或游记） 总述总述Today we visited Qinghua University. 过程过程 Early in the morning we arrived at the gate of Tsinghua University, where we were warmly welcomed by an old professor, who then showed us around the campus. 语篇模板语篇模板 In the lib

5、rary, we saw some university students reading attentively in the reading rooms. After that, we came to the lab building. At the end of the visit, the old professor gave us a lecture on science in the afternoon, which interested us very much. Time passed so quickly that before we knew it, it was time

6、 that we had to say goodbye to the professor. 结果结果 Since then, I have worked harder at my lessons than usual and made up my mind to be a student of Qinghua University.1. 5月月1日，高二日，高二(3)班的学生志愿者班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和和 Zhang Hua 去阳光敬老院去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天送水果、打扫、聊天等等)。 写作内容写作内容

7、假如你是校英语报的记者，请用英语写一则假如你是校英语报的记者，请用英语写一则新闻报道，内容包括：新闻报道，内容包括： 1. 时间、地点、任务、活动；时间、地点、任务、活动； 2. 老人们的反应；老人们的反应； 3. 简短评论。简短评论。 超级仿写超级仿写 Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua， students from Class Three，Grade Two， went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some volunta

8、ry work. Upon their arrival，Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed， and respectfully， they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits， and then they cleaned the windows and swept the floor for the elderly. After they got everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people. W

9、hen it was time for the volunteers to leave， the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because what they did has brought joy to others. By Chen Jie， School Newspaper2.假设你是某中学新老师李红，请给你假设你是某中学新老师李红，请给你的朋友张华写一封信，告诉他你第一的朋友张华写一封信，告诉他你第一天上课的情况。天上课的情况。 写作内容写作内

10、容1. 描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情；情；2. 介绍你处理该事的方式；介绍你处理该事的方式；3. 谈谈你的感想。谈谈你的感想。Dear Zhang Hua， Its three months since I heard from you last time. Now I want to tell you an impressive story that happened on my first lesson. On hearing the bell， all the students ran into the classroom quickly except

11、Li Ming, whose father died a month ago. He was late for class and stood outside the classroom silently. Shortly after I let him in, he apologized to me for his lateness and told me in tears that his mother was ill and that he had to buy some medicine for her. Moved by his words, I praised him for his deeds and sang a song named “Mother” for the students. In a word, we should respect our parents and do our best to help them. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours truly，Li Hong