初中英语写作技巧指导.ppt

《初中英语写作技巧指导.ppt》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《初中英语写作技巧指导.ppt（30页珍藏版）》请在得力文库 - 分享文档赚钱的网站上搜索。

1、初中英语书面表达初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导写作技巧指导brainstormTeenagerscolorful lifeWe study .We like listening to music.We play computer games for long.We like reading books.We often playSports.We go to KFC .Sometimes we travel.Sometimes we stay up studying.Teenagershealthy lifeWe study all day.We like listening to music.

2、We play computer games for long.We like reading books.We often playSports.We go to KFC.Sometimes we travel.Sometimes we stay up studying. 认真认真审题审题，找出文章要表达的中心。找出文章要表达的中心。写作第一步健康很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图

3、是他们此次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告调查报告, ,并提倡大家并提倡大家进行假日休闲。进行假日休闲。审审travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork 用简单的句子或短语用简单的句子或短语列出列出文章要文章要点。点。列列写作第二步 根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点子列出文章的要点 如何度假如何度假 调查报告调查报告 倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲stay at homeworkvisit fri

4、ends or parentstravel A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.列列A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.How do people spend their vac

5、ation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.a nice heada nice taila nice body加加 加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。写作第三步：3 2 1 4 6 5 1. Second , we should keep quiet in the library.2. First , we have to wear our unif

6、orms to go to school, though most of us dont like them at all.3. Every school has its own rules for students. We have many school rules to follow in our daily life.4. Whats more, we ought to return books on time.5. Our school rules are good for us, I will try my best to follow them.6. Third , we mus

7、t do lots of homework. How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. The people wh

8、o relax well work well.连连 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor;2.表示选择表示选择: or, eitheror;3.表示转折表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果表示因果: because, so, therefore5.表示条件表示条件: if , unless6.表示对比表示对比: instead, notbut, on

9、 the one handon the other hand;7.表示解释表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words;8.表示顺序表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end;9.表示强调表示强调: also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论表示

10、结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, _ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled. How do people spend

11、 their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.连连 We interviewed people abou

12、t the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also mak

13、es them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.美美美美 选好词句，美化美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：Skill One Make your sentences correct Good good study, day day up. We should do sports a week once. Save the environment is our duty. There is g

14、oing to have a meeting today. I hope I can come true my dream.once a weekSavingbeachieveSkill Two Express in different waysOur parents really wish us to work hard.Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study.The teenagers like the computers.The teenagers are fond of the computers. We shoul

15、dnt eat junk food. We should stay away from the junk food. When he spoke, he got more excited. The more he spoke, the more excited he got. We should learn English grammar. Its important to learn English grammar.书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧列列加加连连美美中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准第一档（第一档（13-15分）分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。信息完整，表达流

16、畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（第二档（10-12分）分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。达。第三档（第三档（7-9分）分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（第四档（4-6分）分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（第五档（1-3分）分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只

17、有个别句子可读。 以以 “I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。标点符号不占格。 Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型以下句型供参考）供参考） My dream is to be/to do/to go I enjoy /like/prefer To make my dream come true, I If my dream comes true I have a dreamHave you ever watched a bike racing? The riders are cool!

18、 Yeah, its my dream to be a professional bike rider.I fell in love with bike rider for the first time I rode. Since that, Ive been riding for 5 years. Some people think its dangerous, I dont think so. During a bike riding, you will be in a high speed and feel the wind rushes quickly. Exciting? That

19、is!To make my dream come true, Ill practice more after middle school. Also, Ill watch more bike racing to learn from the riders. I hope my dream will come true, if so, I can enjoy the life I like best.Passage One I have a dreamAnybody has a dream. But different people have different dreams.Most peop

20、le always dream to be popular or rich. But my dream is very special, I just want to be a bird. Why I have such a dream? Just because I admire theyre free, they can do everything they want.When theyre flying in the sky, they look beautiful, even theyre the most beautiful animals. I really want to enj

21、oy the feeling of flying in the sky. However, I know it wont be achieved any more.Its just a dream, in my heart.Passage TwoPassage Three I have a dreamMy dream is to be a basketball player. I like it because I think it very interesting. It can make me become very happy and healthy. To make me dream

22、come true. I need try to do it. And I need take some time to do it. I need practice every day. If my dream come true, I will more thy to do it. 自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑1500米后，校园里课间可以看到很多米后，校园里课间可以看到很多学生跑步的身影。对于这样的倡议，你在学校做了一个调查，有些学学生跑步的身影。对于这样的倡议，你在学校做了一个调查，有些学生觉的好，有些学生觉的不好。请你把调查的结果用英语写成短文，生觉的好，有些学

23、生觉的不好。请你把调查的结果用英语写成短文，并谈谈自己的看法，发表在学校的刊物上，开头已经写好。并谈谈自己的看法，发表在学校的刊物上，开头已经写好。 I did a survey about whether middle school students should run 1500 meters every day. Here are the results. 观点观点原因原因你的观点你的观点 赞同赞同 可以放松，更健康，帮助学可以放松，更健康，帮助学习更好习更好 不赞同不赞同 太累，跑步后上课不能集中太累，跑步后上课不能集中注意力，想睡觉注意力，想睡觉All of us have holi

24、days in our daily life, but how do people spend their holiday? We did a survey and here are the results. from Cai PiaoliIts nothing better than having a rest after working ! So how do people rest themselves on vacation? According to our survey, there are several ways. from Zhang Shiyi All in all, different people have different ways to relax themselves. But I suggest that we should enjoy the holiday, then we may work better. from Liu MiaoSo this year, why not consider going outside? Spend your healthy holiday and then get more energy for work or study. from Wu You